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Tears of crime ( a short story)

Tears of crime ( a short story)

By invincible in 12 Apr 2016 | 08:53
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[b]Crime rate in the university was at its peak, seemingly out of hand, obviously beyond control of the school authority.
Security officials were in their wits trying to restore the peace and hormony the instituition once enjoyed. However cultism and confraternities had eaten deep in the fabric of students; amazingly both males and females. Could crime actually wear off the efforts of security personnels?
Of course it would when police operate on the speed of law while criminal fly in the speed of light.

Cletus wore a black jacket over a versace singlet. Adorned with a red barrette his outfit reeked trouble. Faint hearted students would definitely pave way when he passes. However it wasn't time for bragging or flaunting. He walked briskly out of the room shoting the door behind him.

Cletus' heart wrestled against his rib cage as he strode to an abandoned hall. The hall was an island surrounded with grasses. He boot kicked its wooden door the door opened noisily. The hall was void and empty, its only occupants were seven human figures and a large central desk.
Joe, a leader of ' supreme viking confraternity' sat on the desk, in the middle of the hall. A lady sat fear-striken on his lap. A knife perched gently on her neck, a little move, a little 'misbehaviour' would cost her her throat.

Cletus swallowed hard upon seeing her. His footsteps dropped to a fearful limp.
Joe grinned.

"let go of her" Cletus demanded softly. Joe and his boys exchanged glances.

"no one crosses my path and goes scott free" he replied

cletus took two steps further. "please free her. Its me you have problems with" he found himself pleading.

"wrong answer" Joe replied.

"i...i...... I swear i'd do whatever you want, just free her"

Joe shoke his head in the negative. He freed his grip on Angela then pushed her forward. She staggered to his force.
A smile of warmth graced cletus lips. He opened his arms wide for her to run into. Her pace was slow he can't wait to have her in his hand. He also walked towards her. The distance between them closed gradually. All of a sudden she yelled loudly raw pain steamed from her voice. She fell face down.
"no oooo" Cletus' lips parted company. Joe had threw the knife at her, it didn't miss its target it drilled Angela's back, he thin-fabric dressed didn't hesitate to pave way.
Joe signalled his boys, they evacuated the hall. Cletus knelt on the floor beside Angela hot tears smeared his dark cheeks.
He turned her to lay on her left hand, using his own hand to support her body.
Angela stretched her weakening hand to his face, her fingers shoke as she caressed his cheek.

"i....i....love...Cletus" she stammered.
He sniffed his running nose.
"i love you too Angela" he held her up for a hug, certainly his last hug.

"prom...promise me you would change for good" her words came in whispers. Tears flooded her eyes, fountain of blood oozed out soaking her tank top and becking the cemented floor.
Cletus was silent. "promise me" she pushdd on.

"i give you my words honey" he replied.
Angela smiled in pain.
She lifted her hand from his cheek.
Seeing the engagement ring he gave her a week ago made him wail the more. Angela followed the trails of his eyes, she stared intently at the ring. Her eyes ejected streams of tears. She groaned loudly.

"let this ring conceal your promise. I'd always love you, even in thd after...." her last word skipped off. Her head fell heavily on Cletus' hand.
"angela! Angela! Please don't do this" he cried, shaking her vehemently.
He felt an artery on her neck. She was gone!!!
He held her up his chest crying on her neck. His fingers were drenched in the red liquid flowing from her back.
Memories of the sweet days visited his heavy heart.

Cletus was a 200 level student of software engeneering. He met beautiful and intelligent angela in school. She was in the same department as he.
They'd dated for weeks in the interim, trouble shooted its ugly head. Joe sent his boys to beat him up a couple of times. It was Segun's idea that cletus join 'the red barrette' for protection.
Segun was cletus' roomate.
He'd joined the confraternity happily, he loved Angela he didn't mind swimming in hell for her.

Recently, there was a clash between supreme vikings and the red barrette. Joe had kidnapped Angela to trap Cletus. The young man was still reminiscing when he felt a tap on his shoulder. He hesitated to turn. Two police men stood behind him, with one holding a handcuff. Cletus lost the will power to fight or complain. He had been hunted for days, worst still he was soaked in blood. He was handcuffed and led to a police van.

THE END [/b]

someone just got emotional. Lol i almost cried while typing this.
How about you answer these, for the fun of it?

If you were in Cletus' shoes.

1. Would you keep your promise?

2. How would you prove your innocence?

Don't fail to reply ooo
12 Apr 2016 | 08:53
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Abeg!!!! See as d tin dey pain me sha! If i were in Cletus shoes... I will revenge o... Walahi! Joe must follow her... Den i wont mind being arrested... I will thereafter ask God 2 forgive me
12 Apr 2016 | 09:05
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But the life of a cultist sef.... They would have killed several innocent ppl...and when it happens to them... You will still be forced to pity them... See as he use him own destroy the girl life nw
12 Apr 2016 | 09:06
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@Victoriouschild abeg carry register come... Invincible will pay
12 Apr 2016 | 09:07
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Lol @invincible i got emotional tho but these ur questions hard small o well if i was in cletus shoes, i will simply keep my promise in which vengeance will be out of it. Well to think of proving my innocence.. Erhm!
12 Apr 2016 | 09:09
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@tenniebenson na you need my service so na you go pay me o
12 Apr 2016 | 09:10
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12 Apr 2016 | 09:11
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If I were to be Cletus I will still keep my promise Only God can vindicate Cletus
12 Apr 2016 | 09:23
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I must kill joe b4 i turn my self to police...so touching
12 Apr 2016 | 09:36
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wic kind keeping promise Joe will surely pay with his own life nd I believe police won't detain him for long bcos he is nt dey killer of his gf he is innocent
12 Apr 2016 | 09:40
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Promise ko, promise ni. Blood for blood must settle it even if it takes yrs.
12 Apr 2016 | 10:54
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Its painful. Revenge all d way. My promise must b kept sha. Dunno hw to prove my innocence wt 9ja police nd der matter
12 Apr 2016 | 11:11
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Very emotional
12 Apr 2016 | 11:12
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Wow
12 Apr 2016 | 11:50
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really touching! i will answer the questions when am done crying@invincible,
12 Apr 2016 | 12:15
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Don't cry....uhm okay just cry i'd give you my shoulders to cry on :) have your result been released? @promzy
12 Apr 2016 | 12:42
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If i were cletus i'll keep my promise ... As for proving innocence???? The fingerprints of d knife at angela's back shuld be checked
12 Apr 2016 | 12:45
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If it were me I wl kip my promise and wl tl the police to scan d fingerprint on d knife
12 Apr 2016 | 13:00
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if i was to be in cletus shoe i will keep to my promise and let doom fall on others.
12 Apr 2016 | 13:05
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No ooo @Victoriouschild invincible is d one to pay o
12 Apr 2016 | 13:45
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No ooo @victoriouschild get your pay from our honourable queen @tenniebenson
12 Apr 2016 | 13:54
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Bia @tenniebenson et @invincible you guys are really confusing me here. Who am I to collect my money from ?
12 Apr 2016 | 14:31
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Only th almighty knows
12 Apr 2016 | 14:31
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Sh!t happun in lyf
12 Apr 2016 | 14:32
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@victoriouschild don't be confused, ask tennie for it :)
12 Apr 2016 | 14:35
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I will just keep my promise
12 Apr 2016 | 14:58
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If i'm in cletus shoes.... The promise will come after joe qoes down six feet to join her.
12 Apr 2016 | 16:42
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If I were in hia shoe I will tell police the truth abt joe and fight for my release then revenge follow
12 Apr 2016 | 16:57
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Now that he have been arrested, how is going to revenge. Of course, if am him, i will revenge and after that then i will repent
12 Apr 2016 | 17:28
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hope you have broad shoulders...lol Nope not yet@invincible,
12 Apr 2016 | 18:09
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hmm this one is strong................
12 Apr 2016 | 18:24
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Criosly I'd kip my promise oo, buh in d aspect of proving my innocence tinkin shaa
12 Apr 2016 | 19:54
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Habah!! Invincible na me post d story?
12 Apr 2016 | 21:03
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first of all dose two police men wud join er. D nxt. Wud b a death fight. I wud fight wit my last blood n end in hell. I wud call onto my guys, if dey help gud 4 dem if dey dnt gud 4 dem. Bt i wud fight cus i av noting 2 lose. Blood gonna flow. A lot of innocent wud go down n i wud neva go down until d stupid idiot goes down also wit sum of his gang euen 4rm my gang or any other cult or conferternity i knw. Hmm. Den d next is repentant followed by suicide. Hell or heaven. I wud kwn my fate wen i get der
13 Apr 2016 | 02:01
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Wetin I fit do. Dan to live all to God
13 Apr 2016 | 03:06
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After killing Joe, I'd keep my promise to honor her.... promises I hope I never break 'em.
13 Apr 2016 | 12:18
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Hmmmm
13 Apr 2016 | 15:11
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@promzy Very broad lol
13 Apr 2016 | 18:23
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Question
15 Apr 2016 | 15:57
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I go revenge o
15 Apr 2016 | 20:21
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Those bargers must pay,I swear
16 Apr 2016 | 04:25
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Hmmm *sobbing*
24 May 2016 | 04:57
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Nice story
18 Jul 2016 | 14:19
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Nice story
19 Jul 2016 | 11:16
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Following
22 Jul 2016 | 08:40
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Nice story
22 Jul 2016 | 08:49
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she cant die for nothing joe nd the remaining four guys will die with her
3 Oct 2016 | 18:06
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