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Story tittle: Fate....

Story tittle: Fate....

By invincible in 22 Oct 2015 | 05:51
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About the story:
David a young boy was born without a silver spoon,
His dad wanted all the best for
him, though his mum is
unusually cold
towards him..... He finally secured
admission only to be faced with
the
greatest tragedy of his life! His
father went missing.
HOW WILL HE COPE, WHAT IS THE MYSTERY BEHIND HIS MUM's ATTITUDE? WHAT
WOULD BE HIS FATE?
Pls stay follow the story and enjoy......
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You comments and views would be greatly appreciated. Thanks
22 Oct 2015 | 05:51
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22 Oct 2015 | 05:58
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@Hayanfeoluwa @wind @Jummybabe @Teesolid @others invite your friends to the ride
22 Oct 2015 | 06:09
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Tnx @holarbordah 4 d I.V,,,,@frankkay @kingson1 dem don bring w@ u knw hw to eat com oo @sofia @jummybabe @ibrams @konphido @ritagold @hbankee @pizzaro @temmyjoy
22 Oct 2015 | 06:11
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Episode 1 ***----*** "My son, what is the problem? Why are you looking so sad? Mr John asked his son, David who sat down on a woodend stool before his father's two-bedroomed house located in the middle of the village. .... "ehhh... ehhh" David said, clearing his throat to reply his father. ..."dad you know that my graduation ceremony from high school is coming up next week saturday, but the problem is that, the school authority insists that we wear black suit as the uniform for graduants. Father, i know that with our current financial status, you will not be able to buy me a suit to wear for the occasion; i was thinking of being absent that day, but dad, am the outgoing headboy of the school, i need to be present" David replied his father with worry written all over his face. "Don't worry my 'headboy' all would be fine, i will see to it that you get a brand new suit for your graduation" John said, whilst tapping the back of his son, in an attemt to cheer him up. Finally, he won as usuall, that beautifuf smile he loved to see on David's hansome face found its way in. David is now grinning ear to ear "come here" John said softly as he opened his arms wide enough for David to squeeze in. They both hugged, smiling like a happy family that had all they ever wanted. ....."Are you going to stand out there till eternity? Said a soft voice from the living room. "your food is getting cold you had better come and take it while its still warm" the voice continued. That is Mrs Anibe, she is the mother of David and a wife to Mr. John _________ The family were all in the living room already, John and Anibe sat on the two plastic chairs available in the house, to eat their meal. While Dave sat on the mat a few metres away from his parents mulching slowly his dinner of cassava pudding and okra soup which had become a daily routine, probably because John farms mainly cassava on his inherited piece of land. ..........."Dave you are still eating? When will you ever change this slow-eating attitude of yours? Anibe questioned. ..."But mum, i need to masticate the food properly to ease its digestion..." David breathed. "okay o, make sure you clear the table before going to bed" Anibe replied. ..."yes mum, i will...good night mum, good night dad" David is the only child Mr and Mrs John have, theirs is among those families that struggle hard only to make both ends meet, but yet John is keen on giving his child the best education he can offer. "i must give my only child the goose that lays the magic egg" he would always say. In his own view, education is like "a goose that lays a magic egg" if not so, what is the difference between him and a doctor, a lawyer and all the professionals? He usually question himself. ............David is always proud of his dad, though he can't provide him with all the good things of life, the love he showers is just enough, on the contrary, David find it hard to understand his mum atimes because she easily gets mad at him, she practically wants to dictate all his moves, though she do get emotional and caring occasionally. ..........."is she just being over protective? That question remains a puzzle to him. ------To be continued----
22 Oct 2015 | 06:12
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22 Oct 2015 | 06:28
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@kiwi cum Oooo!
22 Oct 2015 | 06:37
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keep the ball rolling @invincible make those wey late no block me o..
22 Oct 2015 | 07:10
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I'm here now...Thank God am not late... Nice beqinninq here @Invincible ...thumbz up man and keep it rollinq...*Headinq to the front seat* . . @Horlabordah nd @Skookum Thankz 4 the Invitez....am qrateful... :-)
22 Oct 2015 | 07:29
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Episode 2 ****************** "Why have you decided to enrol Dave in a school in the city, is'nt there a community secondary school here at Ejule village? "my dear calm down....why do you sound like you don't want the best for your one and only son, David" John asked Anibe. ....."Dave is our only child, the only person that bears our name, of course i do want the best for him...i want him to have a better education and live a good life, but the school you want to enrol him in, is a private school and very expensive, where would we get the money for his fees? Does that mean we won't eat in this house again? Moreover, the school belongs to the wards of rich and influential people in the society. How do you want Dave to feel among those kids? He'll surely feel inferior. Do you want him to join bad gangs just to be like the rich kids? I hope you do understand me" Anibe explained. ........."now i get where you are coming from woman. We gave David a good and godly upbringing, we thought him morals, i don't think he would depart from it. And about the money, don't worry, God would provide. I'll do everything possible and legal, to make sure we live a healthy life and that David goes to school" John replied. "okay if you say so.............oh! I almost forgot i put something on the fire, let me go and get it" Angela mutterd, forcing a smile on her face. ___________ John laid on the bed smiling as he remembered like a movie, the conversation between he and his darling wife before he sent David to 'salvation high school' located at Amola, a more civilised town than Ebule village where he resides with his family. "At long last my son is graduating, all the toils and pains i went through to pay for his terminal school fees were not a waste, rather an investment. I would have regret it if i had sent my precious David to the community school in this village whose curriculum is upgraded with frequent strikes of the highest order" John thought to himself. ***THE FOLLOWING MORNING*** Its a beautiful monday morning and as usual, Dave woke up earlier than anybody in the house so he can have enough time for his home chores and yet not run late for school. After all the morning chores, devotion and sharing of pleasantries, Dave was ready for school. He wore his only pair of school uniform; a sky-blue trouser, brown belt, milk coloured shirt and a pair of black sandals. He never forgets to take along with him, his 'headboy' name tag, it earns him respect from his juniors and even everybody who reads it. ......"Dad...mum..am off to school" David said softly, after he emptied the plate of rice he ate as breakfast. He picked up a book and dashed out of the room. "hang on Dave....take this..." his mum said, stretching forth her hand to give David a hundred naira note. David thanked her and left. He knew the money is for his transport fare and lunch. _____TO BE CONTINUED____
22 Oct 2015 | 08:30
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Hmmm... Plz, ryd on 2 d final destination...
22 Oct 2015 | 09:32
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@skookum nd @horlarbodah tanx 4 the iv.@pizzaro oya cum o
22 Oct 2015 | 09:46
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9ice starting nd keep it rolling ooooo
22 Oct 2015 | 09:47
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Wow ve finally landed ride on @invincible....@frankkay @ibrams @sofia @ebube @temmyjoy @steph oya mak una show face
22 Oct 2015 | 09:48
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Ride on. Thanks @Teesolid and @holarbordah
22 Oct 2015 | 10:01
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I dor show for here like James Bond . @holarbordah, thanks for the invite, I really appreciate it . @invisible, you have a great story here, hope you will be updating regularly . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
22 Oct 2015 | 10:03
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@sofia, @simzy, @mray, @ebube, @japhola, . Make una show for here o
22 Oct 2015 | 10:06
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Tanx jenifa
22 Oct 2015 | 10:32
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@skookum thumb up jor
22 Oct 2015 | 11:02
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22 Oct 2015 | 11:04
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Tanx 4 inviting me @holarbordah nice start
22 Oct 2015 | 11:51
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Thanks 4 d iv @kingson1, my love come and join me @jummybabe
22 Oct 2015 | 12:03
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I don land o eyin oga mi (my boss) @Wiseman @Kingson1 @holarbordah @Jenifa and others. I say thank u. Bro mi @Konphido n wife @Kuks wu help me c my goons @Ibrams @Tholartee @vanrafael @Nextangel oya oo tori don start
22 Oct 2015 | 12:23
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tanks to everybody....... especially does who called me....... @holarbordah.... @Sofia.... @kingson1.... @skookum.... @jenifa.... etc i can't say enough... am grateful
22 Oct 2015 | 12:53
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@JESUS-BOY JNR yeah, it would be updated daily, twice a day. By God's grace
22 Oct 2015 | 13:08
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Tanks So Plenty Plenty @Kingson1 And @All Who Mentioned Me 2 Dx Story. Wow! Ah So Much Luv Its Prologue N Start. Pls Ride On..
22 Oct 2015 | 13:18
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thanks kingson
22 Oct 2015 | 14:47
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I'm here @Temmyjoy ...Thankz dear for the I.v...Nex plx...
22 Oct 2015 | 15:15
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@holarbordah, i sight u. Tnks for d call
22 Oct 2015 | 15:43
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@holarbordah i don show oya take five dia! U too much
22 Oct 2015 | 17:55
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thanks @kingson1 et @holarbordah. nice tori. ride on!
22 Oct 2015 | 18:24
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@Sofia ma sister-in-law tanx for de iv
22 Oct 2015 | 20:51
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ride on Sammy dey your back
23 Oct 2015 | 03:05
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Episode 3 ************* ------ 7:30am At school----- Dave alighted from the commercial bus he had boarded to school, the journey was not all that stressful. He stood at the entrance to the school, admiring it as usual. His school is got it all, the outlook is tantalizing and the academic performance of the students is great. 'salvatiom high school is owned by prof. Dabot, Dabot indeed spent alot to make the school what it is today. The school takes students both in day and boarding, it is located in Ajaka estate, it has two big black iron gates opposite each other. The walls are cream coloured, its flowers and trees were perfectly placed, simply, salvation high school is the perfect place to groom students in any field of their choice, up-to date sport fascilities, laboratories that were up to international standards, well experienced teachers, etc. ....David climed the staircass as swift as he could, he headed to the top floor where his class is located. "hey Angela, whatsup" Dave greeted his best friend Angela. ..."am doing perfectly well, how was you night? Did you dream about me? She tittered "it was splendid, but i didnt dream about you" he chuckled....."the bell have been ranged, lets go and co-ordinate the students" he continued. "headboy spirit dey worry you abi? .....have you forgotten that prefectship was transferred to the ss2 students last week? Angela replied. "oh my bad, it skipped my memory....that means we have the whole time to inaugurate our rehearsals right? ..."yeah....lets make our graduation the best this school would ever experience." Angela giggled. David and Angela have been friends ever sincd their junior secondary school days, unlike David, Angela is from a rich and well to do home. Most of the time, she dupes her dad in order to assist David financially ___________ the SS3 students are done with their rehearsals for the day. They rehearsed drama presentation, march pass parade, special songs etc. Just to spice up their graduation ceremony. **** 3:30pm th same day ***** grinn...grinn...grinn. The bell wailed as its nob hits its metal case. The time keeper, Jim never fails to ring the bell especially that which marks the closing period. He is not the bookish type, he don't get enthusiasted with academics, except for extra curricula activities. Jim is i sport guy, he had represented his school in many football competitions and won medals. ----- David picked up his song booklet, he is ready to go home already. "besty, are you ready, shall we go now? David asked Angela "yeah sure, lets go" The duo walked down the road laughing and gisting untill they arrived at a T-junction, its time for them to part ways. "bye, i love my besty" Angela mutterd. Davhd was surprised as well as short of words. He never expected Angela to say that, she don't like talking about love, she claimed not to believe in teenage love. "o.....okay.,bye" David baded her. Angela had a big crush on David, she didnt want to disclose it to him, all that she does for him were out of her pure love for him. She knew she should'nt have let her guards down, this not the perfect time and way to profess her love for him. "that happened out of the blues....though i hope i give it a second thought" she muttered to herself, when she was seated in a cab, heading home. -------- On his way home. David kept pondering on the words of Angela, "love? Did she mean what she said was she only kidding? A part of him wished she loved him, but the other part is strongly against it; what would she expect from him? His nothing but a poor boy, he can never give her half the life she is living. Which girl on earth would'nt want her prince charming to be a 'big boy'. Many thoughts ran through his head. "i must mask my feelings for her, she might think am a gold digger" he said to him self. _______ "good afternoon ma" Dave greeted his mum when he entered the living room. "my son, you are back, how was school today? Anibe asked. "it was fine ma, just rehearsals and nothing else mum" "ok...go in, freshen up and eat your food". His mum was kind today, he enjoyed her caring side, he always wish and pray she remains like that, but it that is not always the case. "if only wishes were horses, i'd surely have a beautiful ride" he thought. ------- David is clad in a red sleeveless shirt and a jean trouser whose colour was gradually fading from its original black pigment. He had taken his bath and already had lunch, he felt refreshed. But something struck him....its 5pm, yet his dad is not yet home, thats quite unusual. ____TO BE CONTINUED_____ would be updated, twice a day, @10am and 5pm
23 Oct 2015 | 03:05
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whoa dat so bad were is ur dad may he us delayed or something nice story @invisible Thanks to my sweet love @Frank and all those wu call my name i really appreciate thanks
23 Oct 2015 | 03:45
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@invicible, that's good, I'm following it . Ride on . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
23 Oct 2015 | 06:02
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JESUS-BOY JNR.
23 Oct 2015 | 06:03
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Tanx 4 d update,nice story
23 Oct 2015 | 07:46
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@kingson1 and @holarbordar thanks for calling @sofia thank for remembering me ooo @others wey nefa get here come sharparly ooo
23 Oct 2015 | 08:21
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Episode 4 ********** David could'nt help but worry. He tried all his best not to entertain negetive thoughts, He took a deep breath, left his little room and headed outside.....he could hear some inaudible vioces from afar. ----ANGELA'S ROOM--- Angela arrived home about an hour ago, she looked refreshed, having taken her bath and eaten the fried rice and chicken which her nanny prepared for her. She was already used to being home alone, she is the only child her parents have got, her parents work hard like horses, they hardly have time for her. She can't even recall the number of times her parents refused to attend PTA meetings and other parent-children occasions with her. "sorry...i'll make it up to you" is what they'd always tell her. Her mum is a nurse, she practices in Kogi state where she resides with her younger brother and daughter, Angela. On the contrary, mr. Peter, Angela's dad works with a software developing company in Abuja, he visits his family occasionally. .......Angela is tired of the boredom at home, she wants somebody to talk to, she wanted to speak with David in particular, but he don't have a mobile phone yet. ..."who knows if he don't want me to get his contact or he truely don't have a phone" Angela said to herself. ___JOHN'S COMPOUND__ David left his room, heading towards the direction where the sounds were emmanating from....as he moved closer, the sound became much more clearer. Its his parents who were outside conversing, he sighed as streams of peace and relieve flooded him. He caught the sight of a suitcase being held by his dad. He quickly ran to his dad. "welcome dad... .where have you been? Why were you not home earlier? "erhm......i have a surprise for you" John replied, with a smile playing on his lips. "what could it be dad? I can't wait" Dave replied. "ok....ok lets get inside" John replied, swinging his hands like a teen, he changed the tune of his voice to suit the act. ------- Already in the sitting room. Dave is burnin with curiousity, what could be in the suitcase? A suit? Is he dreaming? David questioned himself. He looked sternly at his dad...mum...and back to his dad. John sluggishly and expertly unzipped the suitcase, revealing a black material encaged in a white company-made nylon. Finally. John let the cat out of the bag, he had bought an ARMEAN suit, with a pair of Italian black shoe. "this are for you son, for you graduation ceremony" John said. "wow wow, thanks dad, you never fail to flabbergast me, i love you" David replied, he could'nt contain his joy. ....."but dear, where did you get the money...." "don't worry, thats story for another day, whats more important is that i bought the suit" John interrupted Anibe. She hate being interupted, she, changed the mood on her face, feigning anger. "no dad, i insist. Please tell us how you raised the money for my suit and these other stuff" David muttered, softly, breaking the seconds of silence that eroded room. John only kept smiling like a sacrificial animal been rejected for sacrifice, he is now ready to spill the beans....."you know, the cassava on the farm is already due for harvest, i decided to borrow some money from Mallam umar, the garri trader, hoping that we could make some garri using the cassava, then use it to pay him back. umar being so kind, lent me the money.....from there, i went to the market, and this is the outcome" he explained, pointing to the stuffs he bought. "you went through all these for me? Thanks dad, i love very much" David muttered. "anything for you son...........i also bought something for my darling wife" John replied. He knew how to fetch his wife's attention. "is that so?.... What did you buy for me? Lets see it" Anibe muttered. John laughed out loud. "i was only kidding" he chuckled. "you can't be serious, you'll go back to the market if you did'nt buy anything for me" Anibe replied, jovially ___TO BE CONTINUED___
23 Oct 2015 | 13:55
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Nice one ....Datz wad real dad's do...They qo extra miles to make sure they provide for their family.... *Followinq* :mrgreen:
23 Oct 2015 | 14:49
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expecting more epizode ooo
23 Oct 2015 | 15:21
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.To my dearie@jenifa... Bordah@holarbordah.. @jesus-boy jnr.... Thanks 4 d mention... Real dad.... Goinq xtra miles to provide hz family.. ..
23 Oct 2015 | 20:38
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I don show!!!
24 Oct 2015 | 00:51
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What a happy family..
24 Oct 2015 | 05:06
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Episode 5 ********** ......"you can't be serious, you'll go back to the market, if you did'nt buy anything for me. Anibe giggled "if you didn't have anything for me, whats hidden in the other bag? She continued. "i got you there huh?...you know, i love teasing you....this is for you" John said, handing over an ankara wrapper to Anibe. "thanks dearie....love you" Angela muttered. "ehhhh....'l love you' won't satisfy us, you might want to prepare something for us to eat" John jittered. ------------------ John was happy, having drawn smiles on the faces of those who mattered more to him, they mean the world to him, his whole world revolves round them. He is pleased that he took his family to another realm today, a realm where they'd forget even atleast for a minute that they are peasant. ****** seconds drifted to minutes, minute strayed to hours, and hours wondered sluggishly to days. Lo and behold, its the D-day, the day he had been waiting patiently for, the day he had always prayed for. Its 25th july 2009, its his graduation day!!! Dave woke up ealier than his usual wake hour, he did all his morning activities with great ecstasy like someone who just won a lottery. Before 7am, he was already dressed in his royal blue long sleeve shirt covered with a black suit. Adorned with a black bow tie stripped with white. Down to his feet is a pair of black shiny Italian shoe that fitted him so much as if the manufacturers made it exactly for him. He have never been this dressed up in his entire life....he looked more hansome, even Mr. Nigeria can't compete with him at that moment....You need to see him. "dad, mum, i'll get going, i think its better you come at 10am, the ceremony would commence officially at that time" "ok....bye son, take care" his parents chorused, unanimously. Dave collected his transport fare, and dashed out, he didn't care to eat, he was sure his rich classmates would bring some exotic food and drinks along. ____ The graduants are all beautifully and majestically dressed. Some of them refused wearing their graduation gown properly, to display their latest suit models. ------**** The event is slowly coming to an end, the chairman of the occasion was done delivering his long and boring speech, most of the students slept during his speech delivery. Mr. and Mrs. John arrived hours ago, they were just in time, because they would have ended up staying outside the hall, like wandering spectators - the hall is full to its greates capacity. "Its now time for the presentation of gifts to deserving students" the MC announced, kicking David from his reverie, he had been admiring Angela, she looked beautiful and gorgeous. ......David is a bit anxious, he knew he would recieve prizes today, but can't figure out what were wrapped in some attractive sheets and placed in the silver basin before thd MC. The MC called on the school principal to present gifts to the deserving graduants. "best in chemistry.---- David John. "best in maths----David John. "best in physics---David John. David had gone forward to recieve the prize for each subject. His parents sitting behind became very proud of him. "best in english---Angela Omale. The principal continued. Dave is pleased that his friend also recieved a prize, but the principal wasn't done yet; "best in economics.----David John. .....David stood up like he did the previous time his name was mention, as he walked to the principal, he felt on top of the world........he felt he'd leave a legacy in his school. ..............His economics teacher, mr Ukut, a short fair man, with thick moustach stood up, whispered something to the MC and grabbed the mic, from the Mc. WHAT IS HE ABOUT TO DO OR SAY???. ****To be continued****
24 Oct 2015 | 05:56
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Short man no spoil show 4 the poor boy.
24 Oct 2015 | 06:57
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Sha Dnt Spoil D Show
24 Oct 2015 | 07:07
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David i dey gbadu ur brain ooo
24 Oct 2015 | 07:14
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wetin he wan say than to add best in Yoruba David john.best in crk David john,best in irk David john,best is commerce David john,infact best in all subject David John excluding english
24 Oct 2015 | 07:16
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Hmm... What nxt @invincible
24 Oct 2015 | 07:31
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Patiently waiting 4 d nxt update
24 Oct 2015 | 08:49
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Poor boy with rich brain. Dnt worry d sky is ur limit
24 Oct 2015 | 09:09
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don land lyk boko haram bomb ... Kboy iz nt invited bt am here nw ...interesting
24 Oct 2015 | 09:33
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.Wetin d man want talk... He want spoil show 4 david..
24 Oct 2015 | 09:59
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Lolz u 4ny oo @holarbordah
24 Oct 2015 | 11:04
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guys wetin i do una na ? no body dey invite me for any story updates why na?
24 Oct 2015 | 11:18
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Am finally here ... watin Mr economics wan say na
24 Oct 2015 | 12:18
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wow even if dey sell ur economics to anoda dude u ve create a legacy main subject ve b given to u nd ur lover. tnx for d IV @ Kingson1. thumbs up for @ Invincible
24 Oct 2015 | 12:21
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Very intrestin story
24 Oct 2015 | 12:52
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@GOODNESS VINCENT probably yot don't have enough friends, make friends and see the benefit. Lolx
24 Oct 2015 | 13:21
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Episode 6 *********** ...... "All protocols duely observed......you all may be wondering why i decided to interrupt the prize presentation, its because of my exceptional student, David. Since his SS1 days, he had been the best in my class, i promised to reward him for his excellence....i wish to give him more than this, but i don't have much, what i have i'd give unto him. Ladies and gentlemen, lets give a standing ovation as David, the school's most outstanding headboy comes forward to recieve the parcel i have for him. The whole hall became filled with clapping and screaming of different overtune, as if a movie star was passing by........ Angela's voice is the most heard. To say David is over the moon is an understatement. ******** The event is now over, its time for the graduants to take pics along with their parents and/or guardians. Dave and his parent took only 4-5 pics, according to their pocket size. His parents left, while he(david) opted to join his classmates for more pics and fun before he retreats. "hey dude......what do you have for us, you know, today is probably the last day we'd meet; what would you share to serve as remembrance? Kelvin, the class rep said, refering to David "errh...the snapshots would be perfect for the sake of remembrance" David muttered. He practically had nothing to give his classmates, some students were sharing soft drinks, jotters and even mobile phones. "taking snapshots at an event is a normal thing......as the headboy, we want to remember you for something else.....you get the gist? Kelvin replied. "errrh.......errrh....... David stammered, he didn't know what to say, yes kelvin is right,....but the means are scarce. ......"we have a jotter..we made it together....there it is" Angela cut in immedietly, pointing to a bag full of jotters. "thats right, kelv. ..... We agreed she'd be the first to share it; ladies first you know" David replied, he is confused about the whole situation, he know nothing about the jotter, but don't want to appear a fool befor kelven - he covered up for the main time. "i for fear nah,...how headboy no go give good example for im mates......abeg make i carry my own abi? Kelvin replied, in pidgin. "you no well.....go sit down make i share for important people before you" Davd replied also in pidgin. He wanted to unravel the mystery behind the little drama Angela displayed. ...."Angela, i....... "yeah...yeah i know i have some explanations to make; just listen up okay? Angela interrupted. "okay go on, am all ears"Dave replied softly. "you remember the photograph we took on our way home last week?.....thats what i took to the printing press in order to get this Jotter made....as simple as that, i wanted it to be a big surprise for you, and also as my graduation gift." she explained, smiling like someone whose work have been approved. "th.....thanks....but where did you get the money from? "oh...that? Never mind dear, i used my pocket money" ...."pocket money? I wonder how much she do get for allowance, it might be enough to feed my family and i for a whole month" David thought. He opened his arms as wide as the gate of Aso rock, to welcome a hug from Angela, he was. very pleased "you made my day...i appreciate," David muttered. "really? Am glad i did" Angela was ecstatic, not only because shes graduating high school today, but also because she made her crush happy...the hug disengaged and each went to meet other friends for more fun. ____About 5:30pm____ David is glad he had something to share, all thanks to Angela..... He is about to take his leave, he've gotten enough of the party. He searched for Angela but to no avail,... After about 15 minutes in the search, he sighted her from afar, she was with a guy, who held her hands as the walked. David felt jealousy creeping into his innocent heart. "she is not even my girlfriend...why am i getting jeaulous? He asked himself....he decided to go home alone, without informing her - what he had never done before. "Dave" Angela screamed from behind, David ignored her, making it seem he didn't hear he calling him. Angela ran towards him, but instead, he increased his pace. ***To be continued***
24 Oct 2015 | 13:25
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D story is interesting am happy to be here, but a little disapointed cux no 1 invited me, but am still happy to see u frnds.. Ride on bro am @ ur bk...luckystar cares
24 Oct 2015 | 14:25
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Interesting
24 Oct 2015 | 14:51
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Jelousy... Jelousy... Y nah.
24 Oct 2015 | 15:05
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Luv in d air....
24 Oct 2015 | 15:23
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Thank for inviting me @kingson1
24 Oct 2015 | 16:03
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Intrestinq...Dave why feelinq jealous now? After all u're not enqaqed in anythinq relationship with her...xo stop the display of childishness jorh....
24 Oct 2015 | 16:05
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I love dis
24 Oct 2015 | 17:18
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hmmm dave dnt b ok. she loves u. welcum @ luckystar. nxt plz
24 Oct 2015 | 17:31
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Me don show o@nextangel abeg come follow me gbadu dis tori o
25 Oct 2015 | 02:17
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next episode boss
25 Oct 2015 | 06:10
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@invisible
25 Oct 2015 | 06:11
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@jummybaby ,, @ebube .. where are u girls?
25 Oct 2015 | 06:13
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Y are u jealous na .. d guy can even be her brother
25 Oct 2015 | 12:50
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next episode oooooo. mst person beg nd check for a million tym
25 Oct 2015 | 13:00
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sorry for not posting earlier....happy sunday :) :) :) Episode 7 ********** ...Dave halted, when Angela's voice was getting louder. "are you going home? Why didn't you tell me? Moreover, the party is not yet over. "i have something to do at home.....i looked for you but could'nt find you, because you were out there with some guy" Dave replied. "are you jealous? we are'nt in a relationship, i have every right to date you know? But the guy you are talking about is my cousin, Emmanuel, its only him that came for my graduation, so don't get jealous, besty" Angela jittered ......"since you wanna go, lemme inform Emmanuel, so we can go together." she continued. ______ "how could i have been so stupid to think shes dating a...... David was pondering when he heard a car hoot, its a toyota sienna. Angela motioned to him, indicating he should enter the car. While in the car, they were gisting like old time friends who recently met after long years. Dave got to know more about her, her ambition and also that they had interest in the same university. Angela wished to study english and linguistics, whereas, Dave intends to study engineering. .....Angela urged David to open the percel Mr ukut gave him, which he obliged. Lo and behold, its a new tecno P5 andriod phone with an mtn simpack. He could'nt believe his eyes, he didn't envisage he'd have a mobile phone yet, let alone an andriod. Angela grinned ear to ear, shes happy to finally get his phone digits, nothing would stop her from getting it. ------ They arrived at the T-junction, where the duo normally part ways, Angela signalled here cousin to pull over, which he did, like an obedient driver. Dave and Angela exchanged phone numbers before he left. ___few weeks later___ Mr John called together is wife and only child......they were all seated in front of the house, under the gloomy luminousity of the moon. Its about a few minutes to 10pm, the best time to discuss important issues because the environment was quiet except for the chirping of sleepless birds and croaking sounds made by few frogs. "you remember my friend Simon, who came visiting yesterday? John asked, breaking the minutes of silence. "yes....what happened to him? Anibe asked with fear in her voice. "nothing bad happened...don't be scared.....he told me about a job vacancy at a bank opposite where he works, and asked if i was interested so he can help out" John replied. "but dad, you have no qualifications....would the bank take you? Dave asked inquisitively. "yes son, the job don't need paper qualifications, its a gatekeeping job" John answered. " hell no, i won't let my husband work as a gateman,... in a bank for that matter" Anibe cut in. "why? Whats wrong with that dear? "...have you forgotten so soon that Mrs. Sarah's son who worked as a gateman was shot by robbers, a year ago? Anibe replied. "that happens one in a million cases, don't worry nothing would happen to me....i'd be fine." "please dad, don't take the job, we can be managing what the farm has to offer....like we have been doing right? David cut in, seriously. "son, i must do this, we need alot of money now than ever, you know,when you finally secure admission to the university, it would be like catering for two households" John continued persuading them....they finally capitulated. THIS DICISION OPENED A FRESH PAGE OF THEIR LIVES.....POSITIVE? OR NEGETIVE? find out..... ____To be continued____
25 Oct 2015 | 14:26
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Cant wait 4 d nxt update
25 Oct 2015 | 14:53
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hmmm nd hia lays wia mr john got missing. God shal see u guys tru . dave chil ok
25 Oct 2015 | 19:05
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@invisible .. i know d ans .. will tell u after u post d next episode
25 Oct 2015 | 20:06
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possitive
25 Oct 2015 | 20:09
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Wow, jealousy jealousy!!! . . Nice story here @invicible . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
26 Oct 2015 | 06:36
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My Instinct Tells me Vhiz decision is qoinq to chanqe their live's neqatively....jex prayinq it should'nt be wah am thinkinq....Nex plx.
26 Oct 2015 | 06:48
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@invincible ride on I dey here positively I pray @Pizzaro boss I dey respect u o.no make me pour sand for ur eye o.why u go say negatively. #Lol angry mood activated
26 Oct 2015 | 06:55
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Episode 8 *********** John resumed work as a gateman, the follhng week..... All was going well, John used a greater percentage of his salary for the family upkeep and to save for Dave's tuition fees... The bond between Angela and David grew stronger over the months. Though they don't meet physically, they do chat via phone calls and social media platforms. -------- its been a week since Angela heared from Dave...she decided to give him a call...she missed talking with him, he has his way of taking away her boredom.luckily the line went through and Dave didn't waste time before he picked. Angela: hello, dearie. Dave:hi....how are you doing today? Angela:am not fine. Dave:why....what happened? Angela:its because i miss you....you didn't even care to call and you are not active on your social media platforms....there is god oooh. Dave:its not what it seems....just that my airtime got exhausted. Angela:hmmmmm....i just called to hail you....i have to go now....take care. Dave:thanks....okay bye, take card of yourself. Angela:i will.....bye. Some minutes after the phone conversation, David's phone bleeped;it was an sms from Angela, she sent him a five hundred naira worth of airtime. Without much ado, he loaded the logical pin sent to him...then proceeed to call hdr to thank her for it..' the chatted for more minutes before Dave ended the call. ******** ...The past few months were not really eventful. Mr John only visits occasionally because of the demands of his job. Dave and Angela both wrote utme examinations and were awaiting the admission list to be released.....the long waited list was finally out, fortunately, their names appeared on the list-they were admitted. After confirming this, Dave quickly phoned his dad, he was excited. David:hello, dad... John:hi son, how are you doing?...your mum? David:we are both fine.....guess what...... John:you know am very good at guessing......lets see.....you want to pay me a visit? David: no dad, you are wrong this time around.....the admission list was released yesterday and dad, i'm admitted!!! John:wow! Thats great news.....don't worry about your clearance and other expenses, i'd take care of it. Dave:okay...thanks dad. John:thats my duty as a father, you don't have to thank me..... I have to go now, take care of you mum. ----- The school resumed two weeks later, Dave's dad was able to raise some money for his clearance, accomodation and the likes. Dave is gradually adapting to campus life. He befriended his roommate, Joe. Who happened to be in the same department as David....Joe also did remedial science which gave him an upper edge against David and other students in some courses. He occasionally put David through in a few difficult courses. ___Angela's lodge___ "why did he decline my offer of we staying together off campus?....he might have had a girlfriend already....no matter what, i'd make him fall for me, here on campus, this is my greatest opportunity" Angela thought. She had wanted to stay off campus, together with David, b ut he didn't want that, his ego didn't allow him, he felt he would be a burden to her. He wish he was the one helping her out. _____ Days passed, weeks gone....the first semester is gradually coming to an end. Everybody especially freshers were excited to takd atleast two weeks break beford resuming. Except David, his dad won't be at home and he would be going to meet his ever scolding mum. ............ David got home only to meet his mum down, she was suffering from tuberculosis. Dave didn't want to let his dad know about it, he didn't want to add to his worries. Dave did some menial jobs to get money for his mum's treatement fortunately, his prayers and hardwork was rewarded, his mum's health began to improve. "mum, i'd be going back to school by sunday, hope you've fully recovered? "yes Dave, thank you....don't worry about me, i'd be fine, make sure you face you studies, and make us proud like you did in your secondary school days. "sure mum, i won't let you and father, down" David muttered slowly. ___ soon, the school resumed, though its activities were still at a low ebb because some students were yet to resume. "guy, school don resume again oooh....i want to start this semester on a good note" david told Joe with all seriousness. "good note ke?...you wan fast for forty days? Abi you bring juju come" Joe tittered. "mumu....you don't even know how to guess, i wanna have a girlfriend" David replied. ***To be continued***
26 Oct 2015 | 07:25
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@Ele oyah ur reply. Lolx:) :)
26 Oct 2015 | 07:54
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U dnt av 2 worry abt dat cos Angela is dere 4 u @dave. @invisible good wrk u've got here next cos i wan2 wus dave wan2 go out wif
27 Oct 2015 | 09:49
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Episode 9 ******** ......"mumu, you don't know how to guess.....i want to have a girlfriend" David replied. "oh i see....so do you have a girl you are eyeing" Joe asked. "no i want your sister"David replied, smiling "of course you would want my sis if you are ready to donate your head" "ok back to business, the girl's name is Angela....that girl that visits me often.....you know her right? David answered. "yeah i do know her.....you have to make it special, you know, rich people love surprises" Joe said. "thats why i need an advice from your wealth of experience"David tittered "good boy...you did well, lets eat and i'd tell you about my idea" Joe replied. ______ John is about to close the mighty gate before him, for the night. He fetched the huge padlock from the room provided for gatemen by the bank. As he drew closer, he heard gunshots coming from outside the premises, he silently prayed the people handling the gun were not robbers or better still they shouldn't locate him. The gunshots became louder after each shot. John heard footsteps approaching. He quickly left the gate without properly locking the it. He surely can't go outside, where would he run to? Where can he hide in the bank? His heartbeat increased, it was beating 5X the normal, he felt his heart melting away. He decided to hide in his room and hope for the best. POW! POW!! POW!!! The scary sounds of gunshots filled the air. Some of the armed men had entered the premises. John peeped through his window to see if others were outside, if not, then he would escape via the window. He was already shivering in fear, perspirations formed on his forehead. Slowly and carefully, he opened the window, not to raise any suspicion, unfortunately, he had an eye-on-eye contact with one of the men, he was the only one without mask. John quickly closed the window, he cursed the man silently, for not wearing any mask. "that stupid gateman dey see us, e fit call police .......bazooka, go delete am" one of the armed men thundered. Fear gripped John the more, could 'bazooka go delete am' mean sombody was sent to kill him? He won't let that happen, he won't turn David an orphan and his wife Angela a widow overnight no that can't happen. He pondered, while his whole body was shaking like a cold kid. He picked up his luminous torch which shines greatly, brighter than a full moon, switching it on, he threw it in a direction opposite that which he planned to escape through......his plans worked out;the torchlight drew the attention of the armed men. Swiftly, John ran to the fence surrounding the bank' the fence is way too high, higher than his height. John managed to climb up while barbed wires atop the fence tored his trouser mercilessly. 'who cares....i must escape' he assured himself. 'THUD' John fell down, on the other side of the fence, his fall alerted some of the robbers who were outside. He panicked on seeing flashes of light directed towards him. He unconsciously took to his heels in a jiffy. The three armed men chased him. 'POW POW' they kept shooting at intervals. _______ Anibe just alighted from a bike in front of her house, she is suprised to see people wailing and mourning; Confused, she tried asking Jennifer one of her neighbours, what the problem was, but the on response she got was Jennifer pointing her index finger to the sitting room as her groans increased. Without much ado, Anibe walked briskly to the sitting room only to behold the shock of her life, John's corpse laid on the floor, wrapped in white linen material. Tears flowed freely from her eyes, she became totally devastated. Anibe managed to go outside to find out the cause of her husband's death. Coming out, she met a stampede. People were screaming different incoherent words, but she could hear vividly that someone was screaming "ojo mi mi mi oh(my God my God)" another person was shouting "David David". David had an accident on his way home. "oh God, why me? Why? Why?. God how am i to bear this? Please take my life, God..... ___To be continued___
27 Oct 2015 | 10:48
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O my!hw can he jst die lik dat*sad mood activated*next pls
27 Oct 2015 | 13:50
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Episode 9 ******** ......"mumu, you don't know how to guess.....i want to have a girlfriend" David replied. "oh i see....so do you have a girl you are eyeing" Joe asked. "no i want your sister"David replied, smiling "of course you would want my sis if you are ready to donate your head" "ok back to business, the girl's name is Angela....that girl that visits me often.....you know her right? David answered. "yeah i do know her.....you have to make it special, you know, rich people love surprises" Joe said. "thats why i need an advice from your wealth of experience"David tittered "good boy...you did well, lets eat and i'd tell you about my idea" Joe replied. ______ John is about to close the mighty gate before him, for the night. He fetched the huge padlock from the room provided for gatemen by the bank. As he drew closer, he heard gunshots coming from outside the premises, he silently prayed the people handling the gun were not robbers or better still they shouldn't locate him. The gunshots became louder after each shot. John heard footsteps approaching. He quickly left the gate without properly locking the it. He surely can't go outside, where would he run to? Where can he hide in the bank? His heartbeat increased, it was beating 5X the normal, he felt his heart melting away. He decided to hide in his room and hope for the best. POW! POW!! POW!!! The scary sounds of gunshots filled the air. Some of the armed men had entered the premises. John peeped through his window to see if others were outside, if not, then he would escape via the window. He was already shivering in fear, perspirations formed on his forehead. Slowly and carefully, he opened the window, not to raise any suspicion, unfortunately, he had an eye-on-eye contact with one of the men, he was the only one without mask. John quickly closed the window, he cursed the man silently, for not wearing any mask. "that stupid gateman dey see us, e fit call police .......bazooka, go delete am" one of the armed men thundered. Fear gripped John the more, could 'bazooka go delete am' mean sombody was sent to kill him? He won't let that happen, he won't turn David an orphan and his wife Angela a widow overnight no that can't happen. He pondered, while his whole body was shaking like a cold kid. He picked up his luminous torch which shines greatly, brighter than a full moon, switching it on, he threw it in a direction opposite that which he planned to escape through......his plans worked out;the torchlight drew the attention of the armed men. Swiftly, John ran to the fence surrounding the bank' the fence is way too high, higher than his height. John managed to climb up while barbed wires atop the fence tored his trouser mercilessly. 'who cares....i must escape' he assured himself. 'THUD' John fell down, on the other side of the fence, his fall alerted some of the robbers who were outside. He panicked on seeing flashes of light directed towards him. He unconsciously took to his heels in a jiffy. The three armed men chased him. 'POW POW' they kept shooting at intervals. _______ Anibe just alighted from a bike in front of her house, she is suprised to see people wailing and mourning; Confused, she tried asking Jennifer one of her neighbours, what the problem was, but the on response she got was Jennifer pointing her index finger to the sitting room as her groans increased. Without much ado, Anibe walked briskly to the sitting room only to behold the shock of her life, John's corpse laid on the floor, wrapped in white linen material. Tears flowed freely from her eyes, she became totally devastated. Anibe managed to go outside to find out the cause of her husband's death. Coming out, she met a stampede. People were screaming different incoherent words, but she could hear vividly that someone was screaming "ojo mi mi mi oh(my God my God)" another person was shouting "David David". David had an accident on his way home. "oh God, why me? Why? Why?. God how am i to bear this? Please take my life, God..... ___To be continued___
27 Oct 2015 | 13:56
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oh death where is thy sting
27 Oct 2015 | 14:00
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*tears* ..
27 Oct 2015 | 15:42
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Episode 10. *********** ......"oh God....why me? Why? Why? Why?. God how can i bear this alone? Please take my life....G o o o o o o o od. Angela woke up echoing the 'God'. "what a terrible nightmare" she muttered, while panting furiously . She became scared to the bone. "if he dies, Dave would get it from me" she muttered. She checked the time, it was 2am already, for that, she didn't bother waking anyone with a phone call. She knelt down, said a word of prayer and went back to bed. ---Meanwhile, 10:30pm @John's location---- John kept running as fast as his leg could take him, the sounds of the gunshots he was hearing terrified him greatly. He saw a narraw path leading to a fairly thick forest, "they would back down if i take this path" he told himself and changed his course, towards the forest. The armed men were unrelented in the pursuit, like he had something they needed, to them, if he escapes, the police would trace them through him, the wanted to clear their tracks; a clean operation, so they resolved to end his life. Gradually, the gap between John and the armed men was closing, John ran into a narrow woodened bridge, he reduced his pace, so he wouldn't fall into the beck. .....,,, POW...,,,, one of the men finally succeded, he aimed John perfectly, this time. John groaned in pain and fell into the stream, it was only then that the men retreated. John said his last prayers with the few strength he had. He know he can't make it out alive, having been injured inside water......he also prayed that Anibe would become more kind and caring to Dave now that he is going to meet his ancestors. _____THE NEXT DAY_____ With Joe's help, David launched his plans; he can't wait for lectures to bd over for the day, for him to invite Angela to his lodge. At around 4pm, Dave phoned Angela, asking her to come over to his place, saying he had a surprise for her. In less than 15minutes, Angela showed up, she was clad in a royal blue gown, with silver necklace, earrings and stiletto to match. The scent of her perfume filled the air. 'knock.....knock' a smile crept on David's face....."just a moment please he said then picked up his mp3 and hid it behind the curtains. "please come in" he muttered. Angela obliged, she entered the room, only to be welcomed by the most romantic setting her eyes ever behold. The corners of the room was decorated with red and white floral curtains, red and pink roses strategically placed round the room, a table was in the middle of the room, David adorned the table with salivating dishes and red wine. The lights in the room was made dim, making the room romantically reddish. Angela's mouth flunged open....... "you can seat here" David said softly, pointing his hand to a chair opposite where he was seated. David switched on the mp3 using the remote with him........"I'll love you with every beat of my heart and I swear I'll give you every thing I can ......" David sang along with All-4-one's hit song 'i swear' playing from his mp3. David got to his knees after eating, he help Angela's hands and asked; Angela Would You Be My Girlfriend??? Angela was blushing, she had anticipated this moment for a long time, she couldn't believe her ears, she pinched herself, just to make sure she wasn't dreaming..... ....."yesss......yesss i will" she replied excitedly. "thank you" David sighed and went over to hug her. David's phone beeped, at first, he didn't want to pick the call, but seeing its his mum calling, he quickly disengaged the hug, for him to pick his call, his mum don't always call him, except when something happened. "i'm fine ma.....dad?.....wh....what happened....ok am on my way ma" David said and ended the call. What is wrong? Confused Angela asked. David couldn't utter a word, he stood spellbound like statue. "m...my...my dad" words finally escaped his vocals. "mum said the bank where dad works was entrenched last night.......and dad is no where to be found....i have to go now" he continued, his voice now tremulous. "oh no...i'm sorry for that....hope nothing bad happened to him...i'd go with you" Angela said softly. "no...never mind, i'd get back to you via phone calls" Dave replied, then reached for his smallest bag, inserted few cloths and toiletries after which he dashed out. His first date have been ruined, but that didn't matter to him, whats more important is to find his dad. ------- David got home, he tried consoling his mother, telling her the balebos was not yet declared dead. But his efforts proved abortive, instead, his mum blamed him for what happened. "don't give me that.....if not for your...youq stupid education that he is dead, if only you were not going to school, he wouldn't have decided to work as a gatekeeper. Anibe cut in fiercly. "mum calm down, i'd go to the police station to report the case, i would also inform the bank manager about it, lets just be optimistic," __T B C__
28 Oct 2015 | 02:11
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Y now @ANIBE, NEXT
28 Oct 2015 | 04:18
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Wats wrong wit anibe self....i believe daves dad is still alive nextttt
28 Oct 2015 | 04:41
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Dis anibe z not a mother at all
28 Oct 2015 | 04:45
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nawa for anibe i knw mothers re more concern on deir children welfare xpecially on deir academics. well i strongly beliv dat Dave's dad z alive bt it will take a long tym for his return.
28 Oct 2015 | 06:02
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what's wrong with anibe? ..im doubting if dave is her son self .. @invinsible .. nice work,next epic pls
28 Oct 2015 | 11:30
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Madame coolu down..
28 Oct 2015 | 11:45
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Episode 11 *********** Its been a week since the incidence, yet John was yet to be found, not even his carcass, no lead to the robbers. "we are working on it" "don't worry we are on top the situation" were the response Dave keep getting from the police. ........David is still mourning his dad, he didn't care to go back to school, whats the use going back when the only person who pays his tuition fees and cares for him the most is no where to be found? ......Angela came visiting, she never told Dave she would be coming over, when she entered the compound, she sighted David outside, washing the laundry. , she tip-toed to his waist and tickled him from behind, he jerked off the blues, he don't like being tickled, he turned to see the 'devil' tickling him in this crucial moment of his life. He was surprised to see Angela. "hey.....you startled me.....how were you able to locate my residence;you never told me you would be coming" David tittered. "i followed the address you once gave me.....where is your mum?....won't you atleast take me inside? Angela chuckled. "oh my bad, lets go in please" David replied, wiping his soapy hands using the unwashed laundry. The sitting room had been a bit re-furnished, John had placed two couches and a round centre table in the room, the plastic chairs are no more. "please excuse our house" David muttered. "Ah! am comfortable, afterall you would erect a mansion for us in the future won't you? "you are not serious.....lemme inform mum you are here" David replied as he walked briskly to his parent's room. Knowing the kind of mum he had, installed fear in him, what would be his mum's reaction if she finds out he had a girlfriend? Would she scold him or get mad or worst humiliate Angela? many thoughts ran through his head, he can't afford to let his mum humiliate Angela, no he won't let that happen. He flunged open the curtain to his parent's room, his mum laid on the bed. Sniffing at intervals, she was obviously crying. "hmmm....mother, i have a visitor....my girlfriend, shes in the sitting room...." he fumbled. "okay, get going....i'd join you guys" she replied. ........In less than five minutes, Anibe came out of the bedroom;her eyes were swollen, she had been crying all day. Shes dressed in a black gown which didn't fit her, but portrayed the picture of a be-widowed Angela sympathized with Dave's family. An unusual silence flooded the room, Anibe came to the rescue by popping a BIG QUESTION "my dear, David told me you are is girlfriend right? "yes ma....it is" Angela replied. "for how long? Anibe continued questioning like a detective investigating a murder case. "I and Dave have loved each other since our high school days, but its only last week friday we became a couple officially, ma" Angela replied. "its the day his father died that this boy decided to have a girlfriend? Is this..... "ma, hope you don't have a problem with our relationship? Angela cut in, bringing back Anibe from her trip down the land of reverie. "No my daughter, am okay with your relationship,.... i was only surprised that David never told me about it until today" Anibe said, feigning innocence. They continued discussing about differs issues, ranging from life on campus to Angela's family. Anibe soon lost interest in the conversation...she had alot of problems of her own, so she decided to excuse herself. --------- "Dave, daddy wants to see you......he works at Abuja, he only came to visit us, unfortunately, he would be going back tommorrow, he wants to see you before going back" Angela muttered, when they were both left alone in the sitting room. "why does he want to see me? Did you tell him about us? David bombarded her with questions. "you ask too much questions, like a kid, dad mean no harm.....lets get going already" David only nooded like a kid who was asked if he needs some candies. would Mr. Peter welcome David with a pure heart? ,,,find out tommorrow,,, ____To be continued___
28 Oct 2015 | 13:02
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Guessinq... Dave ur helper has come.
28 Oct 2015 | 13:23
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I hope so
28 Oct 2015 | 15:24
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hmmmmm only u can tell @ invincible
28 Oct 2015 | 15:26
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i hop so for u
28 Oct 2015 | 15:56
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I think so
28 Oct 2015 | 16:31
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For sure he wld! Although with strict warning nt 2 hurt her Angel. Thats how diz rich dads flow
28 Oct 2015 | 16:35
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How i wish john is nt dead bt he's on treatment somewere o
28 Oct 2015 | 17:08
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We shall see ooooooo
28 Oct 2015 | 17:15
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I think he wil
28 Oct 2015 | 17:34
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Becareful dat man may slap u oio
28 Oct 2015 | 17:36
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so sad....anyway #lifegoeson
28 Oct 2015 | 17:40
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Hey! The rich dad's are not like the poor ones at all...they even encouraqe their children to have male friends if dat makez them happy unlike the poor niqqa's...
28 Oct 2015 | 18:28
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all of una wey they think so up and down..u forgotten that angela dad may want his daughter to marry from a rich family
28 Oct 2015 | 19:07
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@invincible ..nice job ..cant wait oo #sips kunu
29 Oct 2015 | 00:44
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I don`t think so.
29 Oct 2015 | 01:52
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Only u knows dat
29 Oct 2015 | 04:00
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I realy hopes he welcums u wit a pure heart.....next pls
29 Oct 2015 | 04:19
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He might call dav a gold digger
29 Oct 2015 | 04:25
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Next episode comes up only @5pm today....thanks for following, you would get a gift at the end. :)
29 Oct 2015 | 05:39
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@gracedkyenny @babyangie31 @pweety @mray @sandra @gambola @dabcy @uncleba426 @Orezi Jnr @Desire
29 Oct 2015 | 09:53
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@gracedkyenny @babyangie31 @pweety @mray @sandra @gambola @dabcy @uncleba426 @Orezi Jnr @Desire @Roes
29 Oct 2015 | 09:54
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@Fherahoney @Fynboy
29 Oct 2015 | 10:01
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@titimi @mumabel @temmytopluck @femight @federal @kampat @omoobaa @adura @promzy @babe4biola @besty @ennylincoln
29 Oct 2015 | 10:06
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Episode 12 *********** Dave never envisaged Angela's family could be so rich, the mighty iron gate, mini volleyball court at the corner of the house, fleet of luxurious cars, etc. all smelt luxury. The house is simply beautiful. An interstice quickly formed between David's lips as he got clearer view of the house. "you mean this is where you live? David asked with disbelief. "no, we are only passing by" Angela chuckled, smiling sheepishly. _______ Angela led David to the sitting room, words can't describe how the interior of the mansion looked, the wall are valspar's bleached wheat in colour, pale gold matched well with the colours oe the room, the cathedral ceiling is a plus for its luxurious look, the house is an achitectural masterpiece, a display of great affluence. Dave appreciate all that the house is made of, the ceremic tiles shines like diamond, he felt he had been invited to heaven. He was too engrossed in his thoughts to notice the presence of Angela's dad.....not until he heard Angela muttering some indistinct words. "dad, this is David, my boyfriend.....Dave, meet my dad, the best dad in the whole wide world....Mr. Peter Omale. "G...good day sir" "how are you son?....please sit" Mr peter breathed. "Angela....go get me my checkbook, its upstairs, where i usually keep it" Peter said. Angela excused herself reluctantly and stormed out of the living room. "David or what do you call yourself.....are you really dating my daughter? Peter roared, his countenance changed to the worst. "ye...yes...yes sir" David stammered, seeing the new look Peter wore. "young man, i know you kind, you are a gold digger, you want my daughter simply because of what shes worth!" the man fired. "you would end up killing or dumping her after sucking her dry." he continued, angrily. David on his side didn't envisage this would be the outcome of his visit, deep down, he truely love Angela unconditionally, he's not and would never be after her father's wealth, though she do help his financially sometimes. But how would he get mr. Peter to understand this? "with all due respect sir.....i love your daughter wholly, am not after your money sir, i would always love and cherish Angela" David replied tremulously. "how much do you want? Just name it and it shall be given unto you.....make sure you keep distance from my daughter" "i may not be as rich and powerful as you are sir, but i know what i want and i have my dignity to protect too,..... the feelings i developed for Angela are pure and can never be bought sir" David replied courageously, he wonder where to courage to voice out his mind came from. "you have some guts huh? Do you know who i am and what am capable of doing? If you don't want to leave my daughter, i would teach you how to do it.....konji....peter thundered "yes sir" a deep musculine voice replied almost in a jiffy. A huge man come in from nowhere, he had the physique of hercules, the short sleeve black shirt he wore revealed his bicepts and tricets, they were like that of John cena, he could defeat hulk. With just a slap, he would send a teenager straight to hell. Each step he took left the precious tiles wailing and David's heart pounding. Perspiration quickly formed on David's forehead as he swallowed hard, he can't tell his fate in the next minute, he regret coming in the first place. All he could do was say a short prayer and hope optimistically. "sir you called me? The beast asked. "yes....i need you to take this young man, to the dark room for some entertainment" peter muttered, smiling devilishly. ____To be continued___
29 Oct 2015 | 12:59
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Diz 1 na to test david fate or if the love he has for angela is real or wat,? I dont understand can some 1 help me out.
29 Oct 2015 | 15:36
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Nawa o o o,dave b carefull
29 Oct 2015 | 15:37
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Am finally here,thank u all 4 invitn me
29 Oct 2015 | 15:39
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Is dat a joke or wot? Maybe Dave is dreaming shaaa
29 Oct 2015 | 15:52
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there z trouble
29 Oct 2015 | 16:07
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there is fire on d mountain run run run
29 Oct 2015 | 16:30
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Jesus!!!! .Werin B Dis Naaa 'tear Drop' .. Angela,come And Rescue Ur Bae Ooo @invincible @invincible @invincible ..Next Epic Abeg ..I Get Hypertension Biko ..Nah Take Suspence Kil Me Oooo
29 Oct 2015 | 16:43
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@kingsbest ..I Concur With U Either Dreaming Or Imagination
29 Oct 2015 | 16:47
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It's an interesting story and vry educative.....@invisible i luv wat u ar doing nd thanks for the I.V
29 Oct 2015 | 17:14
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Dave na so trouble come find u.
29 Oct 2015 | 17:55
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hmmm God will help u
29 Oct 2015 | 17:57
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@Fynboy thanks, join us for the ride daily @5pm
29 Oct 2015 | 18:05
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Sorry for late I.V @Matthew @Temmy @Fortunate 1 @Promzy @humble
29 Oct 2015 | 18:37
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Good nyt dave rip
29 Oct 2015 | 18:39
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All dis rich man self dey dont lik der daughter or sun 2 b dating d poor son or daughter oooooo nawaooooooooooo next
29 Oct 2015 | 18:53
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Angela u beta come and save dave
29 Oct 2015 | 19:29
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@Invincible u shaa wan kil us wt suspence hmmm bt deiris God ooo @Shaggy y u go dy wish d poor boy rip na, it unfair oo
30 Oct 2015 | 06:15
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chai entertainment?? skibo wait are you kidding me?? so u mean u wan to ridi mi? huh?
30 Oct 2015 | 06:35
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So Anqela has not seen the cheque book till now...She better come out and save ya b4 itz too late oo...
30 Oct 2015 | 08:29
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Let me just sit ad watch hw dis ends......
30 Oct 2015 | 09:22
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OMG!! . What's the meaning meaning of this nah!! . When do rich people stop this,, "rich must marry rich",,,,, so because he's poor, you want to do something to him!!! . This is absolutely unfair nah . This means before you marry a rich person, you must be rich too!!!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
30 Oct 2015 | 09:57
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Were is dis angela sef- go get my cheque book u go n remain dere. Abeg come n rescue dis poor boy o
30 Oct 2015 | 12:21
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Episode 13 ********** David became greatly scared, fever quickly located him, he knew the 'entertainment' wasn't the type defined in oxford dictionary. "dark room? Oh am as good as dead, who would survive an encounter with this dude-bro? ......is this how rich people behave? They keep beasts in human form just to terrorize the weak and poor? ____UPSTAIRS_____ Angela ransacked her father's bedroom for minutes now, yet there was no iota of luck on her side, this isn't the first time shes getting her dad's checkbook for him, usually, he keeps it in the drawer, but she've checked there over and over again, no positive result. "why would dad need a checkbook? Maybe he wants to help David? She asked herself. ......oh my God, David! She almost screamed as if she've forgotten him all this while. "i shouldn't keep my David waiting, the stuff is probably not here" she continued, as she opened the door, heading downstairs. 'TAWAI' Konji slapped David, on his left cheek. "for the last time;stand up lets go" Konji commanded. David had been too engrossed in his thoughts to hear what Konji was telling him, Konji had commanded him to stand up, poor David wasn't paying attention. The effect of the slap made David fall face down on the floor, his vision became blurred, his ears echoing some strange but funny sounds, down to his nose is the free flow of a rich red liquid-he's bleeding. _______ Angela arrived at the scene, she was shocked to see David being dragged away by Konji, her dad's bodyguard on special duty. "konji!.....stop right there" Angela thundered, in her soft feminine voice. "dad, whats the meaning of this?...........i'm very disappointed in you" she yelled at her dad. "my princess, you won't understand now.......i'm only securing your future, believe me, someday you would come thanking me" peter muttered, thinking he had done a great job. "you can never decide my future....certainly you would never dictate my future" Angela replied, her father, raising her voice, what she had never done before. He dad only sat bemused like a demon possessed. Angela held David's hand and they both left the room. David's vision grew clearer with each passing second. Angela used her silk-made handkerchief to clean up his face , like he was a kid. _____ Already outside, Angela went on her knees weeping bitterly. "David, please pardon my dad.....i love you with the whole of my heart, i know you are not a gold digger and you do reciprocate my love, dad would come to realise that....please don't quit this relationship"Angela begged sincerely. "baby....i understand where your dad is coming from, but i love you unconditionally, no matter what happens, i'd fight for my love, even to the last drop of my blood......i won't leave you.....i can't last a day without you" David sighed "thank you....i was afraid i woul lose you" Angela said, opening her arms wide enough to welcome a warm embrace. David felt blessed to be loved by someone like Angela. He promised himself never to hurt or make her cry. They disengaged the hug after few minutes., for a while, David forgot all about his worries. A cab passed by, David boarded it and bade Angela fare well. ......"where are you coming from?.....your father's death doesn't matter to you....does it?....you still have the strenght to get in a fight? Anibe scolded. "its not what you think mum...David replied. "okay, why is your face like this? Anibe asked, wagging her fingers to his swollen face. ".......................thats what happened" David said, after he had explained to his mum, what he went through "you are so stupid sometimes.....why did you opt to date such a girl? From the moment i saw her, i knew she would be a pain in the neck" Anibe said, raising her voice. "mum, i explained everything to you, thinking you would be sorry for me or atleast use some kind words.....but i was wrong,.....you have been like this ever since i was a kid, you know, sometimes i wonder if you are truely my mum" David replied angrily. "don't walk out of me, you want to know if am truely your mum? ____To be continued___
30 Oct 2015 | 13:01
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Yes @anibe
30 Oct 2015 | 13:34
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Dis is way too short! By d way, Anibe u hv 2 tell us if u ar his mother or not
30 Oct 2015 | 13:47
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Following
30 Oct 2015 | 13:48
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Ya Good kweshun... She miqht not be his mother....she's damn too hostile...when she should be very carinq to her only survivinq child...but itz jex the opposite here....letz hear her answer jornu!
30 Oct 2015 | 13:54
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maybe Anibe isn't Davids true mother. You never can tell
30 Oct 2015 | 14:05
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Yea nd i don't blve dat Anibe is d real mother of david by the way she behaves sometimes it shows she isn't....wel time wl tel. nyc one
30 Oct 2015 | 14:06
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@GOODNESS VINCENT
30 Oct 2015 | 15:22
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No matter what happens, always fight for the person you love!!!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST! .!
30 Oct 2015 | 15:24
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plz anibe can u let d cat out from d bag. true love neva ends always fight fir d one u truly love.
30 Oct 2015 | 15:47
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Yes we wana know.......diz episode is too short
30 Oct 2015 | 16:43
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we wanna know...tell us who d mother was?
30 Oct 2015 | 18:03
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[b]Something is even going on here i didn't knw?? Well, not bad sha i catched up already. @Invincible well try bro[/b]
30 Oct 2015 | 18:11
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[color=red]@Vict-Vames[/color] [color=indigo]thanks man[/color]
30 Oct 2015 | 18:34
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Eyaa,am sory 4 u dav
30 Oct 2015 | 18:57
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A gud question to ask
30 Oct 2015 | 18:59
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@invincible ..i like d fact that u re a time keeper ..keep it up ... im guessing dave is the son of mr.dave first wife who might have died long ago or alternatively he was adopted
30 Oct 2015 | 21:22
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So she is not ur mother dat bad
30 Oct 2015 | 21:33
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I dnt think dat wuman owns dave . . . . . @invincible..tanks
31 Oct 2015 | 06:05
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Anibe.... All ears... Wu are u 2 dave.
31 Oct 2015 | 06:31
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@invincible, come update nah!!
31 Oct 2015 | 08:56
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nxt ooooo
31 Oct 2015 | 11:29
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Episode 14 *********** ....."Don't walk out of me.....you want to know if am truly your mum? ......ok look at it this way; if i'm not your mum, who would it be? Do you think you might have been adopted? Hell no, where would your dad and i get the money to adopt you from?....you are my son, its just that i do get over protective sometimes....i'm sorry son. 'oma mi'(my son) come hug me" Anibe said convincingly, letting out a big sigh. A smile played on David's face, his life long puzzle have been solved, he hugged his mum for the first time, in years ____________ "Aaaaaarrrrh........aaaaaarrrrrh" John groaned, he felt his whole body freakly heavy and weak, he could hardly move an inch. His vision wasn't clear but he can see blurredly a womam dressed in a white gown, with a white nurse-like cap on her head. What happened to him? Why is he here with a weak body? His memory went blank.....he just can't recall anything. "you are awake?.....thank goodness, we thought you wouldn't make it" "wu...what do you mean? What happened? John asked, in a frog voice. "you mean you don't recall anything? Okay, lets start like this......whats your name? the nurse asked. "my name?.....m...m... "its okay, just have some rest, we would discuss later" "okay" John managed to reply. _____________ Its been weeks since his dad's disappearance, David is so downcast, it seems his whole world have fallen apart. His exam would commence in few weeks time, he is far behind in terms of lectures and reading...how would he cope? He can't afford to miss the exam "half bread is better tham none....i may not know what to put down, but atleast i won't be marked absent if i seat for the exams" he shrugged. He made up his mind to ask Joe his friend for help. _______ At about 6:55PM, the nurse was done feeding John with some friuts, he felt a bit stronger, but can't remember anything. "ma'am...can you please tell me how i got here and why? John pleaded. "i would tell you the little i know" the nurse concurred. "just give me a minute, i would be right back" the nurse continued, as she reached for the door nob, to open it. Not long after she left, she returned with a fairly tall, slim and dark complexioned man. He is clad in a long ankara robe, like a muslim. "this is mr. Tim the man who saved you. Two weeks ago, he went fishing late at night, as usual, it was then he saw you inside water, with your blood afloat, he then brought you here - to the village clinic......i discovered that you were shot with a gun, very close to your thoracic vertebrae, good thing it wasn't affected, you would have been on wheels for the rest of your life" the nurse explained. "do you now remember what happened? She asked. John turned his head left to right on the pillow "no i don't.....my memory have gone blank.....i....i "don't worry, you would recover your lost memory, you need to rest now" the nurse cut in. She turned to Timothy, the fisherman who rescued John. "mr. Tim, your patient here has amnesia, retrogade amnesia to be precise, its the inability of thd brain to retrieve information that was acquired before a particular date, usually the date of an accident or operation. I think its because he had undergone some traumatic events, during which his mind chose to forget rather than deal with the stress......if only we can get him to do the things he normally does, he may begin to recover his memory, gradually" the nurse explained expertly. "but nurse.....what can we do? Tim questioned. "i really don't know ; you might wanna go fishing or hunting with him, lets only hope he has done some of those before" "okay......it would be my pleasure doing that" Tim replied, softly. _______ David laid on his small-sized, student-like bed, contemplating his education. His dad is now dead, who would pay his tuition fees henceforth? Should he drop out or continue schooling, finish this semester then look for any job to do? He asked himself over and over again. He is now the man of the house, its his responsibility to take care of his mum, but he don't have anything, if not for the little money his dad sent to him before his death. His mum surely can't help out with this, she is nothing but a petty food seller, she can even cook a day with people not buying up to half the food she prepared, couple with her strange attitude. As David pondered on the present condition of his life, hot and heavy tears pricked his eyes, he sobbed bitterly.....wetting the pillow on which he rested upon. He have never been this devastated and hopeless. _____ To be continued__
31 Oct 2015 | 13:12
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Dont worry Dave God we make a way for you.
31 Oct 2015 | 13:21
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dnt worri ur dad wil soon be back God wil tke absolute control
31 Oct 2015 | 13:39
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[color=green] Hmmmmmm, I knew that he won't die but something pathetic might happen to him [/color] . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . [color=pink] COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!! [/color]
31 Oct 2015 | 15:01
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Ndo oooh!.... Dnt cry;-(;-(... Mummy z dia 4 u..... As far as there z life.... There z HOPE%-)%-)
31 Oct 2015 | 16:00
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Its gonna be alryt. Kip it rolling @invincible
31 Oct 2015 | 17:22
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hmmn....ok nxt nyc one here.
31 Oct 2015 | 17:58
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wel i knw dat mr john cant die . wish u quick recovery @ mr john nd @ dave dont lose hope God wil surely see u tru.
31 Oct 2015 | 18:28
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Thank God John is still alive...i jex pray he remember's his family and qet back to them cos E no qood...E no qood...E Dey help ooo
31 Oct 2015 | 19:03
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Hmmm,things dey happen
1 Nov 2015 | 04:30
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Thank God that john is alive ..bt did ur memory loss na something o
1 Nov 2015 | 06:54
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Episode 15 *********** David woke up the following morning, weak and exhausted after rounds of weeping. He had his morning devotion like a devote christian, which he is...he did the necessary clean-ups and was ready for campus. "mum......i'd be on my way" "you still have the will to go back to school? What about your tuition fees? Feeding etc, who would take care of them? Anibe asked. "mother.....the semester is winding up, let me finish my examinations.....when i'm done, then i would think of my next course in life" David replied with a little frown on his face. "hmmmm....what money would keep you for the meantime" Anibe asked. "the little money dad sent me before his death still remains...i would manage that...please be fine mum, and don't cry again" David replied, picked his little bag and left. ___@school____ In less than an hour, David arrived campus, he headed straight to his lodge, where he met Joe reading. "hi Joe..... "hello Dave...welcome back...Angela told me what happened, i was too busy to visit you, please accept my condolences" Joe said sincerely. "Thanks my brother....its part of life...people live to die someday, and life goes on" David replied, wiping his face with an handkerchief, he was crying again. ------ "thats enough, we can continue tommorrow please, am sleepy already" David tittered. Joe had been tutoring him on the main lectures he missed when he was away. "its okay,...if you are tired you can have some rest, but i won't be here tommorrow" "why? Where would you be going? "i intend picking up some of my text books and also to get some foodstuffs you know" Joe replied, grinning and raising his eye brows jovially. "we don't have lectures tommorrow, do you mind if i go with you? Dave requested. "sure, i don't mind....we shall go tommorrow, infact, my house is only a few kilometers away" ___THE FOLLOWING DAY___ John had been discharged from the hospital, he now lives with Tim for the meantime. "hey mister, what should i call you....lets say Moses? You were gotten out of water you know" Tim tittered. "i want to go hunting, you might want to join me, trust me the house would be boring without me" Tim continued. "i don't know how to hunt" "don't worry, lets just go, you would be under the tutorship of a great hunter" Tim boasted. John obliged, the both took their hunting gears, and started for their hunting adventures. ----- At about 4pm, Joe and Dave boarded a bus, off to the town ahead, where Joe lives with his uncle. About 15minutes into their journey, Dave envisaged Angela may come visiting while he's away, he decided to phone her. ....Angela ignored the call and called back immedietly...they chatted all the way, laughing out their lungs, some of thd passengers even got irritated with Dave's endless call as they gave him killing looks. He didn't care, all his attention was transfered to Angela, not until...screeech, the car suddenly halted halted, on the high way. David became terrified seeing hefty and heavily armed men coming out from opposite sides of the forest. "Jeeesuus" a woman seating next to David screamed. "what happened, who's shouting Jesus" Angela asked inquisitively "bae, we are being attacked...i gotta go now, please pray for me" David said fearfully. _____ David woke up from a long sleep, he tried stretching his arms and legs, only to discover he had been tied down. He was 'bundled' and thrown in an obsolete large building. The building is gloomy, thanks to the light rays coming from the moon, penetrating the room via the interstice between some mud blocks atop the building. Everything played like a movie in David's head; a short long-beared man pointed his gun at the driver's head and POW the driver was shot dead...the men entered the vehicle.... Thats all he could remember. "they must have used charm on us" he thought. His dad is dead, only he and his mum are left in this big and wicked world, how would his mum accept the fact that he is misshng and might be dead? His girlfriend Angela? "noooo" he almost screamed. "i need to do something and get out of here" he told himself. He sighted Joe lying next to him.."Joe. Joe...wake up" David commanded, whist tapping Joe. Joe rolled abit, "wetin na? Person no fit sleep? Joe asked, it have not been registered in his head, where he is. "do you think you are in a 5-star hotel? My friend wake up to reality" David tittered Joe now fully awake, realised they had been abducted, not on the both of them, but the people in the room would count roughly to 20. "guy ..we are in trouble, i've recalled everything...chai, hope sey no be boko haram hand we dey ooooh! Joe lamented. "ehhh...the main thing is for us to escape now" David replied. "what! Escape? Do you think this is some hollywood heroic movie? We are talking of real guns and men here...count me out, leave me to my fate, if they kill us, we die" Joe repl
1 Nov 2015 | 12:01
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@Aarti
1 Nov 2015 | 12:05
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Joe man up
1 Nov 2015 | 13:28
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John missinq... Dave abducted... Anibe miserable...
1 Nov 2015 | 13:30
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@ebube what a demonic invasion lol :)
1 Nov 2015 | 13:34
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Oh gosh,so pathetic.God help them o,make una read psalm 23.lol
1 Nov 2015 | 14:03
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i pray God help you ooooooo
1 Nov 2015 | 14:05
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Joe dont hv faith
1 Nov 2015 | 16:01
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@invincible.... Yap z like remember d poor fam.
1 Nov 2015 | 16:18
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hmmm d Lord shal b ur strength @ dave
1 Nov 2015 | 16:45
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[b][i]Time To Think Straight Up And Act Heads Up Or Die Hands Up[/i][/b]
1 Nov 2015 | 18:24
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nna mehnn joe which level u dey naa,its better 2 try than not to try at all .. i knew john cant die easily .. @invinsible more creativity 2 ur initiative ..next pls
1 Nov 2015 | 18:32
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Hmmm...wah a pity
2 Nov 2015 | 04:14
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Every tin will be fyn very soon mr dav...just be careful
2 Nov 2015 | 07:55
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Calm ur nerves dear dave u will be okk
2 Nov 2015 | 08:22
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Oh no nothin must happen 2 dave
2 Nov 2015 | 10:24
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@hohluwaseyi here we go
2 Nov 2015 | 10:47
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Episode 16 *********** Its about 7:45pm, the forest is getting darker, fear flooded John. "Tim, don't you think we should have some rest? I'm tired, besides we have gotten some games already" John softly said. "i have a torchlight with me;we can use it to guide our path.... by the way, we have gone beyond the border between Okola, our village and Umon, the village ahead, i suggest we spend the nigh in Umon, considering the weight of our game and the distance we've covered" Tim suggested. "i agree with you, tommorrow, we shall head back to our village...but the problem now is where shall we rest? Who would take us in for the night? John asked. "common....that wouldn't be a problem, we can rest even in the market rooms, thats a lot more better than being in the evil forest at night" Tim replied. _________ "what! You want to escape? Be sure you would be doing it alone....wake up from your delusions man, this is not some hollywood herioc movie, we are talking about real gun and kidnappers here" Joe said, fearfully. "you can stay all you like.....whats the use staying anyway? They might kill us if we remain here. As for me, i would take my chances" David replied courageously, if only Joe could see the streams of fear in him, the were capable of drowning an elephant. But David wasn't ready to let fear develope deep roots in his heart, no not now. He was very determined to escape, nothing can stop him now, he might have an iota of luck on his side. But what if he escapes where would hd be heading to? How would he untie himself? This thoughts stormed David's head. "yessss" he almost screamed as an idea strucked him _____ John and Tim walked a few kilometers...it was worth it because they finally got to the village and have located the market square. Fortunately, the market had few rooms in it, they both went to a room in other to pass the night there. The room they entered was so disorganized and dirty...used nylon bags littered the floor, the smell of animal wastes filled the air. The duo tried their best to tidy it a little atleast for the night. In less than 30mins, they were both sleeping and snoring already. ___ attached to the key holder in Dave's pocket is a small but sharp knife. "how to get the knife out is the next mountain to overcome" David told himself. His both hands were tied backwards like a criminal in cuffs. David squeezed and rolled his body for the bunch of keys to fall off, but his efforts were not rewarded. "Joe can you please get me my keys from my pocket? Dave requested. Joe reluctantly obliged, yet it wasn't an easy task as Joe's hands too were tied down. After minutes of struggles, dave succeeded in freeing himself. He tip-toed to the only visible door the building had. He caught the sight of a human figure guarding the door, two thoughts confronted Dave, one told him to back off, while the other encouraged his escape plan. David took silent steps furtheq, to get a clear view of the figure, so he can know how to launch his attack. He examined the figure from behind, its a man, his muscles were terrifying, the gun that hunged freely from his neck sent shivers down David's spine. Swiftly, david launched his first move, he encircled his right arm round the man's throat, his medium sized muscles chocked the man, as he gasped. The man could barely breathe let alone call on his fellows, he tried fighting back, but David wasn't letting go. Minutes passed, the man wasn't moving anymore, David let him down to feel his pulse, the man was gone. This is the first time David ever killed, he felt guilty. "am i now a murderer? A bad guy? This is probably what someone did to my dad" he thought. David felt remorseful and sorry for his act. He can't entertain any thoughts for now, he have to get out of here somehow. He reached for the AK 98 and torchlight lying on the ground, picked them and continued his escape. "HEY....STOP RIGHT THERE" a voice roared from behind. David became scared, he wish he didn't try escaping as Joe advised. "surely my punishment is going to be worst" he thought ___To be continued__
2 Nov 2015 | 12:08
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Out of luck.... But kip runninq.... U will refuqe ahead....
2 Nov 2015 | 13:04
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May God help the both of u
2 Nov 2015 | 14:08
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Dave what the hell are u waitinq for....start shootinq the man immediately before he qetz anywhere closer.... Nex plz...
2 Nov 2015 | 14:21
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Fire d gun
2 Nov 2015 | 15:02
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Wat ar u waiting 4 cux u hav Ak98 wit u oooooooooo
2 Nov 2015 | 15:43
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God Of King David Will See You Through ... But What About Joe? Is He Goimg To Wait There To Die? .. I Also Believe Dave Will Meet His Dad In The Process Of Escaping .. How True Is All I Said ..Well Im Here To Find Out
2 Nov 2015 | 16:31
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hmmm ride on
2 Nov 2015 | 16:55
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[b]Maybe the person is an hunter, if not try again bro[/b]
2 Nov 2015 | 17:00
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stop dere ke
2 Nov 2015 | 17:26
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Here boss @invincible nyc 1 nxt plz dnt kip us watin
3 Nov 2015 | 01:13
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Lol,notin will happen to u mr dav...just shoot dat man
3 Nov 2015 | 03:41
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Omo, this is the time to fight bro
3 Nov 2015 | 04:22
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I pray u overcome
3 Nov 2015 | 04:34
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God will help u o
3 Nov 2015 | 04:44
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Episode 17 ********** ....."hey ....stop right there" a voice roared from behind. David became terrified hearing the voice, he prayed the ground should open and swallow him...or better still, rapture should take place but none of these happened. He remembered he had a gun with him, though he have never handled a gun before, he knew by pulling the trigger, some bullets would fly out with the speed of light to a designated direction. His right index finger quickly located the trigger, he swiftly turned, while pulling the trigger. PRATATAWPOWPOW. David shot the gun...he fell down in the process as a result of the pressure from the gun, it was then it dawned on him he had been shooting the sky. "so this is how the devil planned to ruin my family? First he killed my dad, am next and then my mum would die of...... "you've never handled a gun before have you" the voic interupted David's thought. "please don't kill me...please i beg of you" David pleaded, still on the ground "did you vow never to stop daydreaming? fear gripped you to the extent you don't recognize my voice? The person questioned, laughing out loud. Dav feld some relieve and strength, hearing those words.....he stood up to see the owner of the voice, alas! Its Joe. "J.....Joe? .....you spooked me man, i thought my life was about to end here today....that was a risk you took, thank your stars i wasn't experienced at shooting, i would have blown off your skull" Dave tittered, and threw a friendly punch at Joe. "by the way...why are you here? Do you also 'want to pay mr. Death a visit by escaping? David mimicked what Joe told him minutes ago. "switch off the torchlight.....shit! They've spotted us....to your right....can you see them? The gun shot surely alerted them" Joe whispered, when he saw some men who were obviously their abductors coming towards them. The duo sub consciously picked race as if they were in a marathon. The men also ran after them. Dave couldn't number the men exactly, but to say they were up to 8 would be a close guess, the men spread, running in all direction towards them, to make sure David and Joe are re-captured. The moon's light was no longer a good guide, the canopies formed by the forest trees obstructed its light rays from penetrating, also David threw the torch away so that they wouldn't be traced easily, they were now running like blind men, that made them bump into trees and roots. "get them...get them" "don't let them escape" were the words coming from the men. ____@Umon market___ John and Tim were dead asleep, probably dreaming already. John convulsed, he felt a very soft and long creature moving on his skin, at first he thought its Tim's hand, "but Tim is a man, his hand can't be this soft and smooth" he thought. The creature was slowly moving towards his chest region, thats when John envisaged it to be a snake, he quickly jumped up, on his feet. The room was dark, he searched for torchlight but didn't find it. "Timothy" he shouted, waking Tim from his sweet sleep. "what is it? Tim asked with a shallow sleepy voic, he was oblivious of the situation. "where is the torchlight? John asked. "why do you need" "common man, produce it already, if i don't need it, i won't ask for it.........i think there is a snake in here" Tim jerked on hearing 'snake' and reached for the torch immediatly. Though being one of the greatest hunters in his village, Tim had an achiles heel, he has a natural phobia for snakes... Tim Switched on the torch, with only a few minutes of search, they sighted a snake, it had swallowed one of the bush rat they caught during their adventure, so it was harmless for the meantime. Tim reached for a stick a stricked the head of the snakd, he striked the more, until the snake died. "BAD OMEN" John sighed. ___To be continued___ [color=blue]too short? Epi 18 loading....99%....:) [/color]
3 Nov 2015 | 12:02
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Episode 18 ******* The pursuit continued for over 45 minutes, some of the men were retreating. Joe saw a human figure heading towards him, 'certainly, this is not David's stature' he told himself. He positioned himself properly behind a mahogany tree. When the dude was about to pass by, Joe greeted him with a hard punch, directly on his cheek. Joe could tell the guy's jaw was shaking. He went to the guy, to draw some blood via the syringe of punches, but unluckily, the man on the ground kicked Joe in his groin region. Joe also fell, wincing in pain. The man managed to get up, he picked up his merchete and raised it up, in an attempt to strike Joe with it. Just then, David came to the rescue, from behind, he swept the man off his feet, the man fell down again. David and Joe beat him badly and stabbed him in several crucial parts of his body. The left the corpse and continued their race, but this time, nobody was aeter them. After running some distance, they got exhausted and needed to rest badly. Luckily, they found a 'clean' place under an Iroko tree, they passed the night there. __7:45 AM, NEXT DAY__ John and Tim were still asleep, they indeed needed the rest after yesterday's tiresome adventures. Four of the king's guards interrupted their sleep by bumping in unannounced , they are clad in green ankara material, with a local head warmer and a cutlass for each. "wake up...wake up" one of them thundered whilst tapping them fiercly. "the king demands to see you, intruders!!!" another guard yelled, with a frown on his face. "why do the king want us? We are not doing anything bad we...... "don't let me lose my temper...get up lets go now" the same guard interrupted Tim, with his deep voice. The two men left reluctantly, many thoughts ran through their heads, of course they had their games and hunting materials to use to prove their innocence before the king. ---- The king's magnificient compound left John starring at everything around the palace, they seemed familiar, but he wasn't able to put things together, to make a clearer picture in his mind The guards dragged both Tim and John to the king's presence. The king motioned the guards to leave. "don't kneel down, please seat" the king muttered, honestly. The men explained everything to the king. "when i got news that intruders came to our village yesterday night, i thought you were here spy on us" the king admitted. "you....(pointing to John) whats your name? The king continued. "your majesty, he lost his memory, he can't recall anything, not even his name" Tim defended. "i see....sorry about that, its just that he has a striking resemblance to one 'mr. John' who left this village some 19 years ago" the king replied. "is that so?....your highness, he may be the one well i don't know his name...don't he have relatives here whom we can ask? Timothy questioned, curiously. "he do have relatives, unfortunatly, they are scattered, his father is dead, his only sister got married to a man in the city, she no longer lives here. His mum is the only hope left, but she fell ill and is currently recieving treatment from the eyes of the gods. Shd would be back in two market days, you might want to stay here and wait for her? "your majesty, we would like to wait for her...sir, i request that one of your trusted guards should be with us during this period, so he can take us to memorable places in this village...if he is truly the one, this would help in regaining his memory" Tim pleaded. The king obliged, he gave them an apartment in his guest house, with a young man from Umon, to guide them through their tour. _____ Dave rolled left and right, he was awake. he had the roughest night ever, as insects of differs size feasted on his beautiful skin, he also had series of ugly nightmares. But it was a relieve he escaped his abductor yesterday. David's gazed left-right-front and back, he can't find Joe. "where could he be? Did the men find him? But we slept together yesterday....did a wild animal devour him? No...nooo thats not possible" david shrugged, trying not to entertain evil thoughts. "Joe...Joe...Joe, where are you? David screamed. The onlything he could hear was his voice echoing. Fear gripped him. "why are my losing the most important people in my life? Am i to leave this forest alone? Would i survive it? David asked the thin air. WHAT HAPPENED??? __To be continued__
3 Nov 2015 | 12:19
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Mr John will be found but David will go missing . THIS HAS TURNED TO NOWHERE TO BE FOUND!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
3 Nov 2015 | 12:44
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Hmmmm,whut could have happened to joe......
3 Nov 2015 | 12:44
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Joe wera u, john dat is ur village bt not wia ur wife is o, God pls help dem o John's family
3 Nov 2015 | 13:15
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joe were u dey
3 Nov 2015 | 13:23
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next oh
3 Nov 2015 | 13:31
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Huh....So much suspense in the air... Where could Joe be na..?? Prayinq he played a trick on ya sha...
3 Nov 2015 | 13:33
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@invincible dat 1 nah story 4 d godz i waz busy dat y i waz a bit late i saw ur msg
3 Nov 2015 | 14:38
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Were,are u o jeo
3 Nov 2015 | 14:39
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i'm 99.99% certain that Dave will find is father while escaping though he might not recognise Dave .. Joe will be alright @invinsible keep the momentum going u rock big time
3 Nov 2015 | 15:23
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Joe Joe Joe where are You??
3 Nov 2015 | 15:55
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Thanks for the i.v @invicible. I dey kakaraka
3 Nov 2015 | 16:10
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U know sey i be latecomer @invicible
3 Nov 2015 | 16:19
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Hmmm. Observing things.....
3 Nov 2015 | 16:20
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Next
3 Nov 2015 | 16:43
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joe wia re u. nd @ dave u re @ ur fafas land nd both of u wil see
3 Nov 2015 | 16:49
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Wia is joe? Or is he tryin 2 play fast 1 on dave?
3 Nov 2015 | 17:29
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Next
3 Nov 2015 | 17:35
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Next
3 Nov 2015 | 19:10
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Next o
4 Nov 2015 | 02:05
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Hmmm,observation mood activated
4 Nov 2015 | 04:07
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Where can Joe be???? well I knw everything will be okay
4 Nov 2015 | 06:14
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@aarti....yeah i knw, sorry for late I.V :) @Ele, lets if ur hunch tells u the truth :)
4 Nov 2015 | 06:56
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@invincible ..dnt change d story line just to prove my hunch wrong ooo *feigns annoyance*
4 Nov 2015 | 10:02
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@ele, no i wnt, the story is already written, so i can't change it ooo :)
4 Nov 2015 | 11:04
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good to knw .. waiting 4 ur 5pm update @invinsible
4 Nov 2015 | 11:25
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Episode 19 ********** "Joe....Joe...Joe...." he continued screaming not minding his abductors might be somewhere around. David's eyes turned 360-degree, like that of a camelion, searching for Joe, he wasn't willing to give up, he refused to accept the fact that Joe is gone. His search continued for about 30minutes, it was then he heard someone whistling. He was glad it isn't an echoe of his voice. He peeped the direction where the sound was emanating from, he saw Joe in the middle of a shallow, obviously short-coursed stream. "wanna bath? Come join me" Joe muttered. "silly boy....you still have the will to bath? I was scared searching for you....why didn't you tell me you would leave? David asked "must i tell you all my moves? "you are really some bad a.ss, first you pretended to be my abductor, last night and now you feigned death or missing....i wonder why am stuck in here with you, hope i don't get BP" David replied smiling. "you were asleep when i left, didn't want to disturb you......moreover, i wasn't sure if i would see water nearby, my star shines brightly even in the forest you know" Joe giggled David also pulled off and joined Joe in the beck, for a refreshing bath. After taking their bath, they felt refreshed but hungry. They both wondered about hoping to find something edible to eat. "chai...see tantalizing coconut....but how can we get them? The tree is way too tall" Joe lamented. "i can use my skills....remember my late dad use to be a farmer, we do this always" David cut in. "okay....but make sure you don't fall because i gat no first aid for you" Joe chucked. "is it the witch in your village that woul cause me fall? David replied, laughing out loud. ________________________ Jana, the indigineous guard assigned to John and Tim, led them to various places within the village. That includes the village's mini-mesuem, market places, shrines and church. While they were passing by the church, John overheard the pastor preaching about salvation, the word 'salvation' sounds strangely familiar to him, he tried hard to understand why, but his memory wasn't coperating. _______________________ Dave successfully plugged four coconut fruits and shared it with Joe. They both enjoyed its sweet taste. "this forest is very rich.....i've never tasted this kind of coconut in my life, its so delicious" Joe said, whilst eating. "please close your mouth when you chew something" David said, smiling, he was obviously puked seeing the coconut in Joe's mouth. "thank you sir for the lecture......hey how are we going to get out of here? Joe replied. "i have been thinking about that too" "errrh....you too close you mouth when eating" Joe said, he had revenged. "forget about table manners when you have important issues......" david said "what would we do? He continued. "when we are done eating, we would take anypath God shows us, and hope to find humans not beasts or kidnappers" "lets get going, we can eat on the way....you see, we don't know how far we are from any settlement" David replied, reaching for his cloth, he had washed it in the beck to remove its blood stain. -------- the futile hours of wandering and running helter-skelter, finally paid off. Joe and Dave sighted a highway from afar, Joe let out a big sigh of relieve, atleast they are still on planet earth. "Joe, can you see that car parked beside the road? "i can't catch a clear view, lemme move closer" joe replied, stretching, to get a clearer view. "see jackpot!"Joe almost screamed...."God surely knows how to care for his children" he continued. "what do you mean by that? David asked wearing a little frown. "you still think like a kid....can't you see its only a lady in front of the bonnet? We go over there, beat her mercilessly, take her car and some money if she has, then ZOOOOOM we escape, you get the gist? Joe explained. "pooh! I don't buy that idea, do you want to be a murderer? God forbid" David said, seriously. "murderer ke? Hired killer ni....didn't you kill two people yesterday? You almost killed me too, killing is not new to you anymore" Joe replied. "noo, those men's case is different, they wanted us dead, and they died.....but this lady is innocent" david replied convincingly. "i have a betteq plan, just watch my back....if anything goes funny, then you intervene, if not, it means we are lucky" David continued. "as you wish, your stubborn majesty" Joe tittered, bowing in a funny way. [color=red]WHAT NEXT???[/color] ____To be continued___
4 Nov 2015 | 12:02
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Thanks for following @Ele ....updated
4 Nov 2015 | 12:04
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Nice story u got here @Invincible buh wait oo cox u b invincible dat y u put mask 4 face :-P
4 Nov 2015 | 12:35
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beta use ur own plan dan following joe wicked plan
4 Nov 2015 | 12:37
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Nyc 1 @invincible
4 Nov 2015 | 12:43
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hope she wount be ur gf david
4 Nov 2015 | 12:50
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@sofia, correct! U sabi am, invincible begets invincible nature :) @Holuwaseyi thanks bro :)
4 Nov 2015 | 13:03
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Intrestinq....u quyz should be careful ooo cos dat lady miqht be workinq for the kidnapper's....wish u quyz best of luck...
4 Nov 2015 | 13:13
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ok...followinq
4 Nov 2015 | 13:19
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Stil no d way
4 Nov 2015 | 13:45
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So whats next...
4 Nov 2015 | 13:47
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Loving every bit of this story. Ride on @invincible
4 Nov 2015 | 13:49
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[b]My boy @Invincible keep it moving... [/b]
4 Nov 2015 | 14:00
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hehehe .,what are followers for? @invinsible so no nid 2 tnk me ...yesssss the latest episode prove of my guesses wrong *dancing shoki*
4 Nov 2015 | 14:14
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Lolx @Ele
4 Nov 2015 | 14:24
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@Victoriouschild thanks o. @vict-vames hahahaha, nagode baba na, ina'a bin aikin ka na ai
4 Nov 2015 | 14:28
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nyc one bt me dey suspect dat gal u guys shuld b kiaful or hmmmm
4 Nov 2015 | 14:34
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[b]@Invincible woni iri?[/b]
4 Nov 2015 | 15:16
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More plsss
4 Nov 2015 | 15:18
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Nice story. Following
4 Nov 2015 | 15:21
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@vict-vames, aikin ka A nyarinya mai shigaban kasa dai kai (president daughter and i). dumai baka cigaba dai shi ba? Hope u understand hausa wella....oops i forgot sokoto na hausa epitome :)
4 Nov 2015 | 15:44
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@invincible r u from sokoto state
4 Nov 2015 | 16:41
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Nice episode
4 Nov 2015 | 16:49
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@donyas no.....are you?
4 Nov 2015 | 17:07
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Intrestin next pls
4 Nov 2015 | 18:32
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OK next
4 Nov 2015 | 21:41
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Next pls
5 Nov 2015 | 01:03
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You are welcome @invincible. I hope you are going to post another episode today ?
5 Nov 2015 | 02:11
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@Victoriouschild unfailingly @5pm (by God's grace :) )
5 Nov 2015 | 02:14
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ok @invincible am waitin nd plz dnt make me wait much. kudos to u
5 Nov 2015 | 04:35
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@Henry Sanctus yes sir!!!
5 Nov 2015 | 04:55
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Hmmm
5 Nov 2015 | 10:44
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@invincible yep
5 Nov 2015 | 11:09
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@invincible yeah
5 Nov 2015 | 11:10
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@donyas kai hausawa ce?
5 Nov 2015 | 11:33
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Episode 20 ***** David walked briskly to the stranded lady, obviously, her car broke down. "good day ma'am" Dave greeted. The lady jerked, she didn't expect to hear a human voice around here...she turned abruptly, facing David. "who are you? What do you want from me? Are you among the mystry cannibals? The lady asked in a very fearful tone, her hands were alreay vibrating to the tune of fear. "calm down ma'am" David said. "if i had evil intentions, i wouldn't have wasted time in initializing it...i'd explain things to you later, but for now, lets check you car. I guess i can employ my little engineering knowledge" David continued, leaving the lady mute. She was convinced he mean no harm, but still had little doubts about his motive. "where is he from? What do he want in return? She asked herself repeatedly. While checking the car, David told her about his experience with their abductors and also his ordeal in the forest... "start the car lets see" he muttered, when he was done trying his best. Yes! He screamed He finally made it! He fixed her car, his little knowledge wasn't a waste afterall. "you must be a good student to have rectified the problem...thanks i appreciate. Am Gloria, and you are? The lady asked, stretching forth her hand for a handshake. David closed his eyes, he was enjoying the moment, he felt her hand very soft, like he shouldn't let go. "not as nice as Angela's" he tried convincing himself, so he won't entertain any stupid thoughts. "am David, ma'am" "cute name you got...where is your friend? The one you told me about? "he's answering the call of nature, ma" david lied. "thats funny...when he is done, get him, i'm heading to Abuja, i can give you a ride if you want" Gloria replied. "Thank you ma'am...we don't mind...lemme fetch Joe" David replied, walking to where Joe was hiding ______ Not up to two hours into the journey, Glory pulled over, before a duplex which seem to be her house. "its definitley an estate" David thought. The houses had similar painting paterns and colour, they were also of almost the same size. "Gloria must be rich....yet so kind, shes nothing compared to Mr. Peter" David continued thinking. They all alighted from the car, waiting for what to do next. "lets go in please" Gloria said. "ma'am, thank you for everything, you still want us to come in? No, what you've done is enough....we would find our way from here" Dave replied. "common Dave....where would you go to? Who do you know here in Abuja....by the way, am Gloria, call me that, not 'ma'am' am not that old" Gloria cut in. "okay Gloria....don't you have a husband? Kids? Joe asked curiously. "no, am still in my period of discoverture....i'm not married yet....can we go in now? Gloria said, smiling devilishly "wow! A senorita? Joe said silently. The two friends obliged, and went in together with her, of course thats their only option at the moment. __ Gloria prepared yam and egg sauce. "food is ready guys, come over here" Gloria called upon Joe and Dave when she had served the meal in the dinning room, the two friends were watching WWE hell in a cage a fight between Undertaker and Ray mysterio in the living room. ___@ DINNING TABLE__ "your food is as delicious as you look" Joe complimented, smiling sheepishly. David gave him that "don't you dare" look. He felt uneasy and shifted his gaze from David. "thanks, Joe.....David, you don't like the food? Gloria asked. "i do ma'am....sorry Gloria, your food taste great" "thanks too, by the way, whatsup with you guys? Whats your plan for the future? "we intend staying here at Abuja, hopefully find something to do before going back to school next year " Joe replied. David didn't concur with that. "Yes Joe is an orphan who has wicked relatives, practically, they don't care about him. But what of me? My mum would go nuts if she finds out am missing, Angela surely would be dead worried about me. The examinations would commence next week, i'm not prepared for it yet, Infact am totally broke, am not even worth #500. What would i do? David pondered. His dad who cater for him is gone, he is only but a shattered confused young man, should he stay or go? Yes he do want to go back to Kogi state, to his mum, Angela and his education. But where would he get the transport fare from? David continued thinking. "i can't ask Gloria for money, i'd stay here in Abuja. The year would soon run out, i'd do any legal job here in order to save up a little for the next semester". He finally concluded, in his mind. "Dave, whats your take on this..." Gloria asked. "sorry, i wasn't listening, can you come again? "what were you thinking, Dave? I was saying i can help you guys with accomodation and a job as a courier in my online mall company. For the mean time. But one one condition...[color=red] WHAT IS THE CONDITION? can you guess? DO YOU THINK DAVID SHOULD STAY?[/color] __To be continued__
5 Nov 2015 | 12:06
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Wow . One condition is that they will be good guys . . I don't know o . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
5 Nov 2015 | 12:52
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Well @invincible only u knw bt i ve sumtin in mind bt d yam nd knife dey ur hand. Infact na u hold d butterfly 4 hand nd only u can tell if it z stil alive or dead.
5 Nov 2015 | 13:36
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@Henry Sanctus ehrrh....wat do u have in mind?
5 Nov 2015 | 13:45
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I dont think David should stay
5 Nov 2015 | 14:21
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[b]The condition? They should be good guys jare, abi one of them should marry her?? Lolzz[/b]
5 Nov 2015 | 14:24
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*thinking hard* ... one codition? ..can't really think jawee ... ill login by 5pm tomorrow to find out
5 Nov 2015 | 16:14
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Weldone am following
5 Nov 2015 | 16:15
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Am Eaqer to hear the condition....I pray it should be atleast reasonable and favourable to them..... Hehehehe if Undertaker fiqht Rey Mysterio in a cell match....He 4 kill Rey i swear...
5 Nov 2015 | 16:16
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on 1 condition really datd a good oppurtunity if itz a good cond @invincible ni ba Baushe ne, am'ma mutane na suna na daular usmaniyya
5 Nov 2015 | 17:03
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on 1 condition really dats a good oppurtunity if itz a good cond @invincible ni ba Baushe ne, am'ma mutane na suna na daular usmaniyya
5 Nov 2015 | 17:04
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Hehehehehe you sure ray no go beat undertaker? @pizzaro
5 Nov 2015 | 17:15
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D condition must surly catch dave @invincible
5 Nov 2015 | 17:31
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oya no dey keep us 4 suspence make u kontinew bt i guess he will comply with whteva d condition may be
5 Nov 2015 | 18:32
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Next
6 Nov 2015 | 01:00
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@henry sanctus, ok,...find out if you are right, today...
6 Nov 2015 | 01:55
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Dave will stay oo
6 Nov 2015 | 03:10
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haha ok my nigga @invinible bt all i z dat d condition might not favour dave
6 Nov 2015 | 03:30
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@donyas, i no understand wetin u i mean o. I no sabi hausa wella, pls interprete
6 Nov 2015 | 05:08
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@invincible ok means {i am not a hausa bt resides there}
6 Nov 2015 | 05:42
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@donyas ok..nice
6 Nov 2015 | 06:06
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Update @invincible
6 Nov 2015 | 09:00
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David u need to go bk to sch n to see ur mum
6 Nov 2015 | 09:33
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Wow david is a killer
6 Nov 2015 | 10:53
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Episode 21 "but on one condition." "what is the condition? we would do it, anything" Joe cut in. "my condition is that, 50% of your supposed salary would be mine..consider it, you would have free shelter" "but ma'am.... "do we have a deal? Gloria interrupted Dave. "yes......yes we do! Davd and Joe chorused, unanimously after exchanging glances. "good, your salary is #20,000, that means i would be paying you #10,000. Your feeding won't be a problem, except if you have to buy some personal stuffs like clothing and the likes" "thanks alot Gloria, this is so much" David muttered. "no no no, don't do that, stand up....i'm only returning a favour, you helped me a great deal out there. If not for you, who knows, i may have been killed, rapped or robbed, while on the high way" Gloria tittered. They soon became friends, probably because they fell almost in the same age bracket, David was 19, Joe 20 and Gloria 23 years old. They continued discussing about many stuffs, Gloria told them the company belonged to her dad and she happened to be the first born, she also graduated university last year, so her dad made her the C.E.O of the company __ At about 10pm, Gloria led them to the higher floor, where her guest room is located. Thats where they would dwell for the meantime. The room is quite big, with a king-sized bed, its walls are painted lemon green, with milk coloured curtains. The room was tidied up. Dave loved it, he had never had such a big room to sleep in, except in his fantasies. __SATURDAY MORNING__ Dave didn't have a perfect night rest, he couldn't take his mind off his mum and Angela, the only people he had in this world. He woke up, had said a little word of prayer, before leaving for the living room. Its only this morning he got a clearer view, the room had a 42-inch LED TV resting on the wall, brown shiny terracotta tiles. Etc. They were all nice. "this is too much for a spinster" Dave mutterd, silently. Joe also joined him. "o boy, this girl nah big girl oh" Joe who stood akimbo said, in pidgin. David concurred by nodding his head. Just then, Gloria came in, she was clad in a night gown. They exchanged pleasantries, and she showed them the way round the house, toilet, kitching and bathroom. "take your bath, while i prepare breakfast, we would have to go out this morning, for you to get clothes and other necessary stuffs" she said, when she was done showing them the rooms. "thanks...but no thanks" David said, he had his own pride to protect, here is a total stranger, providing them with all they need. What is she up to? He asked rhetorically. "i understand how you feel...believe me, i have no evil intentions, i only want to help...if you want, you can pay me later" Glory said as if she read David's thoughts. Gloria drove them to the city mall for some shoppings, when they were done with the little house clean up. Unlike Joe, Dave was shy, he didn't pick what he actually wanted. She also took them to her dad's company, told them their duty to the company and the rules and regulations guiding it. Also they were to resume work the following monday. @ANGELA'S LODGE Angela dailled David's phone for the umpteenth time. "the number you are dailing is currently switched off, please try again later" she got the same response she had been getting. 'later' for goodness sake, when would later ever come? She yelled at the service provider, annoyingly, she threw her phone hard against the wall. "i totally understand how you feel Angela, but please take it easy, the best you can do now is pray for him" Jennie, her roommate consoled. "i'm confused Jennie, is he dead? The men he told me about, are they mere robbers? are they ritualists?....i can't last a day without him....please bring my David back" Angela sobbed. Jennie hates seeing her friend like this, Angela used to be a joyous and bublee type, but since the disappearance of David, she changed. "Angela, wipe your tears, go in and freshen up, so we can go to the police station and report this case." Jennie said softly. Angela obliged. @ABUJA David was restless like a dog on heat, he need to contact someone, to inform them he is fine and save. He remembered his mum's phone was stolen during the time people came to console them on account of his dad's death. Angela is the only option left; good thing he had her digits off hand. First he sent her the most romantic text his head could come up with. "Dear Angela, its me ,David, i really miss u alot, without you, my thursday was a thirstday, friday turned to frightday and this saturday is a shatterday without you, pls know am fine, tell mum that. And i would soon come to you. I LOVE U" 30 minutes passed, an hour was gone yet no reply. Thats quite unusual of her, she don't waste time in replying his text. He decided to call her but gosh! It wasn't connecting. Dave was devastated, he collapsed on the couch.
6 Nov 2015 | 12:02
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See wetin ur anger cause....@Angela
6 Nov 2015 | 12:23
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*Followinq*
6 Nov 2015 | 13:39
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Eya
6 Nov 2015 | 13:40
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It jst a mata of tym
6 Nov 2015 | 14:03
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Ha @angela don't spoil her fone
6 Nov 2015 | 14:42
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hmmmm ... i cant and would never play angela ... i knw what missing someone feels like espcially if u are aware that such a love-one is in danger ... all will be well dave ,,, i so love that text message by dave ... i cant wait 4 this story to end,wishing i had the script ... @invinsible keep it up.. following u like a stalker
6 Nov 2015 | 15:54
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thumbs up man. pls one episode to go
6 Nov 2015 | 15:57
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[b]Keep waiting, she gats reply[/b]
6 Nov 2015 | 16:01
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Wow, good tidings . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
6 Nov 2015 | 16:07
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hahahaha lvng nwa tintin
6 Nov 2015 | 18:13
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Eyah, real love
7 Nov 2015 | 06:12
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Episode 22 ****** The following week, David and Joe started their job, it wasn't all that stressful. They work eight hours a day, delivering goods to various people. That gave them the opportunity to meet different kinds of persons, the rich and poor, young and old, citizens and foreigners. Dave love his job very much, especially because some people do give him extra cash on each deliver;though some others get on his nerves, they would always bargain on a product, despite the fact that it has fixed prize. There is this woman he loves delivering goods to, she buys jewellry, electronic devices, etc. Mrs Joy is a gorgeously looking woman in her late forties, shes also stinkingly rich. On each delivery, she'd give Dave an extra of atleast #2,000. David felt some bond with her. She is also friendly and would always ignite a conversation, each time Dave comes by. Her demands became weekly, dave wondered if she do it on purpose or thats her status quo. ____ John's memory is gradually returning. He could recall he had a dad, mum and sis. He knew deep down he has a wife and a son, but don't seem to recall much about them. The woman they've been waiting for, for weeks finally arrived, shes in her early seventies, her face wrinkled, her vision too was growing blurred. John and Tim were invited to meet her. "maaaamaaa" John almost screamed on seeing her. "ah....oma mi(my child)" the pooq woman also screamed. "why did you leave the village without atleast informing us? She continued. "leave the village? He asked rhetorically. Tim stood bemused, he is happy his efforts were gradually paying off. "ma..your son here lost his memory, he hasn't fully recovered yet, please be patient with his" Tim defended, as usual. "lost his memory? How can somebody lose his memory? The woman asked. "this woman must be an illitrate" Tim thought. "ma...somebody can lose his memory, if he had an accident of some traumatic event" Tim explained, from his layman pohn of view. "okay...so when would he recover? "this woman is seriously annoying" Tim told himself. "ma....i don't know yet...i'm not a doctor, but the nurse said he would recover soon" he replied convincingly. "hia...i hope he does before i die oooh" the woman lamented. "no, he would recover when you are in the grave" Tim said, silently. "yes ma..lets pray he does" he replied, this time, loud enough. Tim left John alone with his mum, and retreated to the King's guest house. He was begining to feel like someone from a royal dynasty, because the king treated him and John as such. They wore royal robes, ate royal foods and had maid servants. Tim was happy he found himself there. ____@SCHOOL____ Angela had reported the case to the police, days ago, but just as she envisaged, the police didn't produce the only person her heart beats for - Dave. Angela would always spend the night weeping rather than sleeping or reading. She don't have time for her books any more, and didn't care to get a cell phone yet. Her examination had commenced, she didn't want to fail, her dad would scold her, if she gets a carry over, in any course. She resolved to pay one of the egg heads in her class, to write for her. She can't wait for the semester to end so she would go in search of David herself, but how? ____ @ABUJA____ On one fateful day, >Dave was sent to deliver a laptop to Mrs. Joy, Dave was glad, he even thanked his boss for sending him, leaving the boss owed. Dave got to his bike and started for Mrs. Joy's office, he was ecstatic he would have a fat pocket today. He didn't have a hard time locating Mrs. Joy's office, this isn't his first time. [color=red]IF ONLY HE KNEW WHAT AWAITS HIM!!![/color] ___To be continued___
7 Nov 2015 | 12:03
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Abi, if only he knew cus there will be a set up ahead, that's the fate we are talking about . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
7 Nov 2015 | 13:56
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mehhnn saturday is inevitably a very busy and stressful day *yawns* ..what happened to Dave? Ill find out tomorrow *yawns again*
7 Nov 2015 | 14:10
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@Ele LMAO. Why the incessant yawn?
7 Nov 2015 | 14:14
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[b]Gat to know wat awaits him[/b]
7 Nov 2015 | 14:26
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stress!stress!!stress!!! .., thats why i always wake up by 1-2pm on sundays
7 Nov 2015 | 14:49
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@invinsible
7 Nov 2015 | 14:50
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Hope nothing bad ll happen 2 him oo
7 Nov 2015 | 14:59
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@ele Tihahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. So u no dey go church?
7 Nov 2015 | 15:13
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If only he knew''..... Waiting 2 find out if d Mrs Joy towed d way of the biblical Potiphar's wife
7 Nov 2015 | 16:10
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Hoping 4 gud tin 2 apun @invincible
7 Nov 2015 | 16:48
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Am suspectinq Mrz.Joy would do somethinq...i mean somethinq... Huh*Followinq sha*
7 Nov 2015 | 16:58
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hmmmm hope z not wot am tinking ooooo
7 Nov 2015 | 17:48
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Nice one
7 Nov 2015 | 18:12
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Hmmm,dav pls u ave to go bak and tell angela and ur mum dat u are staying in Abj
7 Nov 2015 | 18:17
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Only u can tell us
7 Nov 2015 | 19:22
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free gifts sometimes has some things attached to it..... Dave today u gonna pay
7 Nov 2015 | 22:27
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Hmmmmmmmmmm next
8 Nov 2015 | 01:34
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@invinsible i went to church today
8 Nov 2015 | 09:33
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but anytime i dey house dem nah born me well to slip like mumu .. after my mumsy c say i dey still slip after waking me up like 3 times na slap she go use wake me .. al ill do is look at her with red eyes and mum will be like;"come and beat me now sebi na u born me" lolz @invinsible
8 Nov 2015 | 09:46
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@Frankkay
8 Nov 2015 | 10:12
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@Frankkay, special I.V lolx @Ele
8 Nov 2015 | 10:13
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Am following as well , dsame time waiting 4 wat will happen
8 Nov 2015 | 11:20
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Episode 23. ********* Dave didn't have a hard time locating Mrs. Joy's office, this isn't his first time. As he approached, he could hear groans that tells someone is in pain. He traced the groans to Mrs. Joy's office, without knocking the door, he stormed into the office. Joy was wincing in pain. Dave walked to her and asked what the problem was, Joy couldn't reply, the only words that escaped her mouth were "my secratary....get her....my secretary....aaarh" dave felt remorsed, he quickly fetched Debby, the secretary. Debby wasn't wearing a surprised look "oh...not again" she muttered "please help....lets take her to the hospital" she continued. They both helped Mrs. Joy to the car, dave didn't know how to drive, so debby drove, while Dave was with Joy at the back seat of the toyota camry XV30. In less than 30 minutes, the car halted in the premises of a big hospital. Debby motioned some nurses to help take Mrs Joy to her 'special ward' which they did, while one of the nurses ran to call the doc. All this while, Dave was confused with the whole scenario 'special ward? Is Mrs. Joy a sickler or something? He asked himself. Debby was about walking out, when Dave held her hand. "a minute please....do you mean what you said, a couple of minutes ago? He asked, with worry written boldly on his face. "what i said? I did say many things, which of them? "when i informed you about your boss's condition, you were like 'not again....' does she always have this attack? David asked. "yeah...this isn't ma'am's first attack" "why? Whats wrong with her? He asked, curiously. "madam don't want her health issues discussed with anybody, especially an outsider...i won't tell you anything, just hold your peace" debby replied. "am not an outsider, madam is fond of me, she wouldn't even mind telling me about it, so just say it already, please? David pleaded. "okay....but make sure you keep it a secret." she warned. "my boss is suffering from leukemia" she continued. "are you sure you know what you are saying? Your boss is d.amn rich, how then, can't she pay for a leukemia treatment? David asked, with disbelief. "you got it all wrong, my boss is suffering from a very chronic case of leukemia, what can save her now is a stem cell transplant" "and.....? "and, she haven't find a suitable donor yet...you can go ask her doc. Why....am not a hospital worker....now, if you would let me go..." debby said, and left the hospital. Dave still wasn't satisfied with debby's explanations, he walked to to doctor's office, hoping to meet him and ask a few questions, for proper clarity. "good day sir" he greeted, when the doctor had ushered him in. "good day young man, please sit" dave sat one a chair, opposite the doctor. "sir, i was the one who brought Mrs. Joy, please how bad is her condition? "its not that bad" the doc. Replied. "whats actually wrong with her sir? "am sorry, our medical files are strictly confidential.... "yes, i know sir...but... "no 'buts' thats our rule here" the doctor cut in, harshly. "here me out sir, i'm not trying to dig anything...all i need is simple explanations...i know she has a chronic leukemia which requires an immediate stem cell transplant" Dave replied. The doc shrugged. David took it as a 'go ahead' gesture. "sir...can you explain why she haven't undergone thd transplant yet? "why do you want to know? The doc questioned. "sir, i'm in my 2nd year in the university, studying chemotherapy" Dave lied. "hmmmm, that means, you would soon join us in the field" the doc giggled. "we haven't gotten a suitable donor yet, because her blood type, RH-negative, is very rare. Its occurence in the whole of Africa is only 2%....you may ask, 'why is it that none of her relatives have the same blood type? Its very possible for a mother to have an RH-positive blood, and give birth to a child with negative....all the people Mrs. Joy brought for testing have Rh+ blood types" the doctor explained expertly. "sir...is it possible for a stranger's blood to match? "thats a very very rare case, it occurs, one in thousands" the doctor replied. "sir can i try? Who knows, it may be a match" Dave proposed. ___To be continued___
8 Nov 2015 | 11:33
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Hmmmm.. dave
8 Nov 2015 | 12:24
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Tnk God dat smtin bad did nt happen 2 dave
8 Nov 2015 | 12:49
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hmmmm. kip rolling @vict-vames
8 Nov 2015 | 14:15
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Hmmmm David d generous guy
8 Nov 2015 | 17:03
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@oladipupo .. exactly my mind.. im thinking what you thought.. might be his original mother ...thats y d story is titled 'fate' but wait ooo what is the bad thing they said happenened to dave? ... im guessing ill find out by 5pm tomorrow
8 Nov 2015 | 17:05
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Hmmmmmm dav
8 Nov 2015 | 18:14
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Or she is dave mother no way
8 Nov 2015 | 19:11
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wia u @invincible cum nd update oooooo
9 Nov 2015 | 05:53
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@henry,,,loading....99%.....
9 Nov 2015 | 06:20
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Episode 24 ********* ...."sir...is it possible for a stranger's blood to match her's? "thats a very rare case, it occurs one i thousands." the doctor replied. "sir....ma'am Joy had been a big help to me, ever since i met her...i would love to help her out, if i can...sir can you please take a sample of my blood to test if it'd match? Dave asked the doctor, sincerely. "young man... I understand what you feel, its not easy, seeing you helper going down, without you doing anything to help.....i would take a sample of you blood, but hey, don't keep your hopes high, the bloods may not match" the doctor replied. "okay sir...thanks" The doctor extracted some of Dave's blood for testing. "i'm taking it to the laboratory for testing, right away...you can check back tomorrow; the result would be ready by then" "okay...thanks doc" dave thanked the doctor, and left. He was pleased to help Joy, she is too good to die now, he prayed their bloods make a perfect match. ____THE NEXT DAY___ Dave took permission from Gloria, saying he wasn't feeling well. Gloria beseeched him to go home and have some rest, he thanked her and left. But instead, he went straight to the hospital, first to see Joy, and then to find out if their bloods match. Dave got to her 'special ward', he was surprised to see her all alone, in the ward -no one was with her, and she was fixed to a drip. "good day ma'am....how are you feeling now" he muttered. "i'm don't think am improving ;by the way, thanks for saving my life" Joy replied, with a sick voice. "its nothing .... Ma, may i ask you a question? "yes, go on" dave sat beside her, while she rested her head on the hospital's pillow. "ma'am, why are you here alone? Why are your Kids? Relatives or husband? Dave asked. "my husband went on a business trip to london, and...and" she paused abit, and tears flowed freely from her eyes. "i don't have children" she continued. "its okay ma'am, have you eaten? What would you like to eat? "i don't have any appetite for food" Joy replied. "no...i insist, try to eat something, even just a little." "okay, tea would do....." "alright ma, i'd be right back" Dave replied, and left the ward. He later came back with tea and some toast bread, he bought it downtown. He fed Joy with it, like a caring son. "Dave....you have a good heart, a heart as pure as gold....you are this kind, despite the fact that you know only a little about me?" Joy said, she appreciate Dave's kindness. "is this what it means to have a child? I wish that devil spared my only child" she told herself. "excuse me ma'am, i'd be back...lemme see the doctor" Dave said, after Joy had gotten enough of the bread and tea. He went to the doctor's office, knocked, and the doc ushered him in. "David.... right? "yes sir.... "please seat, i'm sure you came for the result....well, i have some news for you.... "really sir? Whats the news? Dave asked, curiously, his heart was pounding real fast. ____To be continued___
9 Nov 2015 | 06:24
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Suspence.......next pls
9 Nov 2015 | 07:11
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D blood go match jor. Abeg next episode pls. No time to check time
9 Nov 2015 | 07:54
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Dave she is ur mother
9 Nov 2015 | 07:58
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Maybe sometin connect u both,am suspecting sometin,dont be suprise if dav z madam joy son...lets wait and see
9 Nov 2015 | 08:21
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see suspense
9 Nov 2015 | 10:38
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may b joh z hz father nd den joy z hz mother...well we wil qet tu no soon
9 Nov 2015 | 10:39
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hmmm i feel madam joy z dave moda. blood match. i wish dat devil spare my child. who could b dat devil. mr john u got sumtin to xplain hia.
9 Nov 2015 | 10:58
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na suspence be diz oo
9 Nov 2015 | 11:17
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Episode 25 ********* ..."please sit, i have some news for you" "really sir? Whats the news? Dave asked curiously "its actually a good news, your BLOOD MATCHED!!! thats a very rare case, am surprised that your blood and that of mrs. Joy matched 5 out of 5. You could be related somehow you know" the doctor muttered, with a smile on his face. "wow thats a relieve sir" davd sighed. "yeah...you would have to bring a relative who would sign the agreement that you would donate a stem cell.....no 'buts' this time okay? "okay sir...i'd come along with my brother tomorrow, so the operation can commence fully" dave replied. "thats good to hear" "sir....i would take my leave now..." Dave muttered and left the doc's office. He went back to Joy as he had promised. He kept her company for hours, they both chatted and made jokes like friends. Dave left the hospital at about 7pm, not after he bought her dinner, from a canteen. ___ he came home and met Joe and Gloria glued to the tv, watching God knows what.... "ogah....where you dey come from na? Joe asked in pidgin. "ehhh....i carry excursion go heaven" dave giggled, and sat on a sofa next to him. "seriously....where went you? And why did you switch off your cell phone? Gloria asked. Dave explained everything to them and asked Joe to act play his brother before the doctor, tomorrow. "Tufia....God forbid, i won't sign your death warrant, if you want to donate your stem cell, count me out....did i enjoy her money with you? Joe replied, with big grin. "stop acting like a kid...don't you know that stem cell regenerate often? That means i won't be endangering my life by donating a stem cell" Dave explained. "okay...you win, but if she gives you cash after this....remember me in your kingdom ooh" Joe tittered. "did i tell you am doing it for money? Dave shrugged. "dave....its good to help if you can, i wish you luck in the surgery" Gloria cut in "thanks for your concern, Gloria..." dave replied. ____ The following day, Joe went together with David, to the doctor's office, he signed the necessary documents, and left. .....----....... David's stem cell was taken from his bone marrow, there wasn't any form of complications, but the doctor advised him to rest for two days, before being discharged. ________ The exams ended, Angela was glad she didn't have any failures, thanks to her money and the brain box in their class. Angela picked some of her stuffs and headed home, she decided to visit Dave's mum the next day. ____@JOHN'S HOUSE___ Angela alighted from a bike in front of Dave's family house, she saw Anibe outside, cooking. "good afternoon ma" "afternoon....how are you my daughter? Anibe replied. "am fine ma.....ma.....is David home yet? "no, have the semester ended? Anibe asked. "yes ma, but for the past few weeks, Dave haven't been in school" Angela replied, taking a small stool, to sit on. "did he tell you where he went to? Anibe continued asking. "no ma, i think he was kidnapped or something" Angela paused, to read the expression on Anibe's face....it wasn't that of surprise or remorse. "kidnap? Why would he be kidnapped? Maybe he did something wrong and is running from justice, he would soon come back" Anibe replied coldly. "what kind of mother is this? She didn't even feel sorry. She practically don't care about David" Angela thought. ____Two weeks later___ Joy's husband, mr. Steve returned from his trip, he was informed about his wife's stem cell transplant. He was really happy, he never envisaged they would find a donor. About a week after his return, Joy was discharged from the hospital, though the doctor stressed she would need some outpatient care, for the next few months. David came to the hospital, the same day Joy was discharched. Steve thanked Dave, and urged him to follow them home..... ___To be continued___
9 Nov 2015 | 12:10
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Dav u hv a gud heart keep it up
9 Nov 2015 | 12:22
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Wat's d news oooo?
9 Nov 2015 | 12:59
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Following keenly
9 Nov 2015 | 13:29
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i think master Dave as met is biological pareots! ...nice episode next pls
9 Nov 2015 | 13:53
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Good one . @invincible, ride on,,, . Two episodes per day o before them go finish me for WhatsApp o . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
9 Nov 2015 | 14:07
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Maybe Joy is Dave's biological mother
9 Nov 2015 | 14:08
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Anibe is actin weird bcoz she is nt dave mum
9 Nov 2015 | 14:52
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Mr.Steve will definitely qive Dave a handsome amount of money...u're rich dude... Anqela dnt be shocked jorh...datz the normal Anibe Dave faces reqularly...lol
9 Nov 2015 | 14:59
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Dave is their lost child
9 Nov 2015 | 15:14
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Am still following
9 Nov 2015 | 16:25
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Next pls
9 Nov 2015 | 16:34
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Next Next Next Pls
9 Nov 2015 | 16:46
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I kw your life ll be change 4 beta frm dis moment onward @Dave
9 Nov 2015 | 17:14
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eeeyah...dave z dia missinq child..y enqlish sef..dia missinq pikin joor
9 Nov 2015 | 17:19
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kip it rolling bro am followin u bomber to bomber wit my range rover sports 2015 lolz
9 Nov 2015 | 17:36
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Dave is joy child
9 Nov 2015 | 18:26
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Dave ur life don beta... Angela forget that z her normal behaviour towards dave
9 Nov 2015 | 19:41
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Dave!shez ur mum
10 Nov 2015 | 03:01
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Dav dat z ur real parents
10 Nov 2015 | 03:06
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Dave you are truly kind. Maybe you are related to Mrs Joy just like the doctor noted.
10 Nov 2015 | 03:35
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From my own view Mrs joy is Dave's mother .. she said she to herself dat she wish devil save her child... anyway let's see aw it end
10 Nov 2015 | 05:55
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Episode 26 *********** David was glad that Mr. Steve invited him to go with them, atleast to know where they live... The steves are filthy rich, they left the hospital in a convoy of three toyota land cruisers. One in the front, another at the back then steve, Dave and Joy were in the middle. Dave felt like a rich dude, for once in his life. The cars drove slowly to a very luxurious district. Everything there spelt riches....the gate to the Steves magnificient crib is an automatic gate system, it don't require a gatekeeper, it flung open, and the cars drove in. They alighted from the SUV, the house was elegantic, everything its made of was simply perfect, if Dave was to compare, he would regard is dad's house as an ant hole compared to the mansion he is in now. David tried his best not to be naive, but his countenance betrayed him. Mrs Joy ushered him in, put on the TV to make him more comfortable, while the house chef prepared something for them to eat. At about an hour later, the chef served the food on the dinning table. Dave refused to eat, first he don't know how to use the cutlery, second, he saw food courses that he have never tasted. But Joy insist he take something, so he asked to maid to give him orange juice. Steve and his wife finished eating, and joined Dave in the living room. Not long after that, the alarm ranged, indicating someone is at the door. Steve commanded one of his maids to usher the person in.... It was their family doctor, the owner of the hospital where Joy was treated. He had a brown envelope in his hand. "please take a seat" Joy muttered. "is this the test result? She asked. The doctor nod his head positively. "tell me about its content. Positive? Or negative? Joy asked anxiously. ______ 'DAVID' John screamed, as he laid on the bed, in his mum's room. His mum who was seated outside, overheard him..... "who is David? And why are you screaming like this? She asked when she came in. "its nothing ma....i just remembered something" "you scared me....i thought you were seeing ghosts" his mum tittered. "mother, i now remember everything.....i'd tell you why i left this village 19 years ago, but please don't judge me after hearing my own side of the story" John replied. "okay, go on....." his mum said, as she sat beside him, on the bed. _____ ....."content? What do you mean by that honey? Are you hiding something from me? Steve muttered. ____Days ago____ Doctor Olu came to Joy's ward, to examine her. She just woke up, after the stem cell transplant. "oh, madam, you are awake, thank goodness" the doctor muttered happily. He have had carried out another successful transplant, his carrier is really growing positively. "yes doctor, thank God i made it....but where did you get a donor from? Joy asked feebly. " David....the boy who brought you here....is your donor" the doc replied. "but how is that possible? Didn't you say my blood type is the rarest and that 99% of it occurs among relatives? But i'm not related to Dave in anyway" she muttered. "yes ma'am, that also puzzled me, it may be that Dave is somehow related to you...there is only one way to find out;via DNA test" "yes doctor, please carry out the DNA test, i can get you the specimen you need." ****THE PRESENT***** "Thats what happened dear, you know we lost our son 19 years ago, David is 19, i feel this unusual bond with him....i have a big hunch he's our lost son" Joy explained. "no dear, have you forgotten the baby was.............. "hmmmn-hmmmm" Doctor Olu cleared his throat, interupting Steve. "sorry to interupt, but don't you think with me is an evidence to prove who's hunch is right? Olu continued. He handed the envelope over to Mr. Steve, Joy moved closer to get a clearer view of the result, her heart was pounding real fast, her whole body shaking, her eyes gradually scrolled down..... Lo and behold, the result show their DNA to be a perfect match. "david is your son" the doctor muttered, with a big grin. "i have to go now...." he continued. The Steves thanked him with some cool cash. He smiled and walked away. David is confused with the whole scenario. "is it true.....have i been living a life fed with lies? Does this explain mum's attitude towards me? I wish dad is alive, to answer all my questions" Dave thought. "my son.....come and give mama a big hug" mrs Joy muttered excitedly. But Dave's countenance was the opposite of her's. "with all due respect ma'am, you are'nt my my mum....i have my parents. Though dad is dead, mum is still alive, and i'd go back to her soon" Dave replied, leaving a frown on Joy and steve's face. [color=red]¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤ What actually happened? Up next is a time travel down to the past.....stay tuned.....[/color]
10 Nov 2015 | 06:13
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Wow i knew dave was their son 9ice 1 @invincible pls wen wil u post d next episode
10 Nov 2015 | 06:31
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@Jenifa *tnks* next episode is by 5pm Nigerian time
10 Nov 2015 | 06:34
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Gettin interestin. Kudos to you @invincible
10 Nov 2015 | 07:06
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I can't wait to read next episode o,ride on bro
10 Nov 2015 | 09:47
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Wishin 2 knw wat d past iz all abt @invincible
10 Nov 2015 | 09:56
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Wow i cant wait oooo @invincible i really wan knw d past cos i ve it in mind sat anibe z not daves mum..i can feel alot abt dis story bt let me not go deep in it. Hope z not African tym @invincible let it b dat 5pm.
10 Nov 2015 | 10:23
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i knew it by that womans behaviour towards Dave
10 Nov 2015 | 11:25
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Z almost 5p.m @invincible so come and update as u promise us
10 Nov 2015 | 11:55
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Episode 27[color=blue] {Flash back}[/color] *********** Christabel dailed steve's phone for the umpteenth time, the phone would ring, but he wouldn't pick up. After some minutes, she gave up and laid on her sofa, hoping to sleep off. Just then, she heard a knock on her door. Reluctantly, she stood up to open the door.... Alas! It was steve. She was glad to see him, she wanted huging him, but he held her hands in the air.... "calm down christabel, i need to tell you something" "okay....please come in" "what can i offer you? She asked, when they were both seated. "never mind, am okay" hd paused a while, then continued. "christy...you an i know that this relationship isn't working.....i want to....uhm....i....." "you want to what? Quite? Hell no! I won't let that happen....you are the love of my life, i can't let you go" she interrupted. "please do understand.....and....someone is having my baby" "what!!! You have been cheating on me all this while? Who is the lady huh? Tell me, whats her name? She replied angrily, dragging the colla of his shirt fiercly. "you don't need to know her, i'm really sorry if this came to you as a shocker" " i admit i made mistakes in the past, but that don't warrant you cheating on me and finally dumping me for any b!tch....remember all we've been through....please steve, don't leave me....." christabel sobbed. Steve's mind was already made up, he felt sorry for her but there is really nothing he can do, he only stood up to leave. "if i can't have you....no body would ever do" christabel muttered, she wasn't sure if steve heard her, because he was at the door already. Christabel used to be Steve's girlfriend, ever since their campus days, but everything changed for two reasons; first, he discovered she was a cultist, back then in school, second, her arrogance was getting unbearable. Early last year, when Steve went to the village for their annual festival, he mdt a damsel, her name was Joy. He fell in love with her instantly, for the 6 weeks he spent in the village, their love for each other increased. He eventually got her pregnant and she gave birth to Mourice. He had kept Christabel in the dark all this while, but since he want to push through with the traditional wedding, then bring his bride to him here in the city, which was the right thing to do. He decided to inform christabel, to avoid any mishaps in the future ________ "John" ---- "ma" "john" ---"ma" "John" --- "maaa" how many times have i called you? Grace, John's mum asked. "three times ma" "am warning you now oooh.....i don't want you to marry Anibe" grace replied, drawing her ear to show she was really warning him. "but mother......i love her..... "love? You can love any other woman but not Anibe" "why? do you hate Anibe this much? John asked. "i don't hate her, but it would be for your good if you don't marry her" she paused, and whispered "she's under a curse" John was confused, he grew up with Anibe, they did alot of things together, went to farm, fetched water from the stream etc. She was his besty. So where did she get a curse from? Is his mum saying this just so he won't get married to Anibe? Many thoughts ran through his head. "A curse? I don't get it....whats the curse and how did she get it? How would that affect our marriage? He asked his mum curiously. "my son, you won't understand....if you get married to her, she won't concieve" Grace replied. "what!!! How did the curse come about and can't it be broken? "no my son, the witch doctor who pronounce the curse is dead already......" she let out a big sigh and continued. "it was her father who brought the curse upon himself.....this is how it happened.........." ¤¤¤¤¤ [color=red]____The time travel still continues____[/color]
10 Nov 2015 | 11:56
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@onahsunday631 updated!!!
10 Nov 2015 | 11:57
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Hmmm
10 Nov 2015 | 12:08
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Tanx bro,@invincible waow,pls next o
10 Nov 2015 | 12:45
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Hmmmn very interesting...flashback kontinues.
10 Nov 2015 | 13:25
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hmmm nxt
10 Nov 2015 | 13:33
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following
10 Nov 2015 | 13:46
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Hmm, still observing
10 Nov 2015 | 14:20
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Haba! This is lyk starting the story frm d begining though i knw itz jst in yr bid 2 link d real relationship btwn Dave, Anibe and Madam Grace
10 Nov 2015 | 14:45
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10 Nov 2015 | 14:47
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Next
10 Nov 2015 | 14:57
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Ride on
10 Nov 2015 | 15:16
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post two episodes tomorrow pls @invinsible so dave's real name is Maurice .. I prefer Dave! The attack on dave's bus,attack on d bank,dave meeting mrs Joy Is All FATE! i think john eloped with anibe from his village in defying is mum refusal of accepting the marriage
10 Nov 2015 | 15:32
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Hmm time travelz i hope we dnt miss awa wae @invincible
10 Nov 2015 | 15:33
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@Holuwaseyi no we won't miss our way, lol @Ele, you are gonna win coolval's best guesser award lolx, lets see if you guessed right *winks*
10 Nov 2015 | 15:40
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Waoo dix story is getting interesting
10 Nov 2015 | 15:51
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Following
10 Nov 2015 | 15:59
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@invinsible ..thats impossicat .. i know ppl who guess better than me, THE WRITERS themselves .. hahahahaha shakashakashakabula
10 Nov 2015 | 16:34
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm how come her father lay a curse on her?
10 Nov 2015 | 16:50
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Following
10 Nov 2015 | 17:20
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Now the story is now getting more intense unto its belly tale . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
10 Nov 2015 | 18:41
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okaay...followinq
10 Nov 2015 | 20:12
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so badh.... What hpn... y d curse....
10 Nov 2015 | 20:48
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I wonder oh, how cum d fada did dat....
11 Nov 2015 | 01:39
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Episode 28 [color=blue]{Flash back}[/color] "when Angela's mother was pregnant, her dad, Akor stole a sacrificial animal from the shrine, the priest discovered he was the theif, the priest cursed him, saying his unborned child would be barren for the rest of her life, and that unborn child is the Anibe you want to marry. My son, thats why i don't want you to marry her, you can get married to any other girl, but not her" Grace explained. "no mother, i'm not marrying her for the child she can bear, it because i love her. Mum, all i want is your blessing, please? "if thats what you want....i'd give you my blessings, but be ready to face what comes out of your union with Anibe" Grace replied, she can't just sit and watch her son being miserable, simply because she won't let him marry the woman he love. __ soon, the preparations began and John got married to Anibe, but none of his relatives supported him, it was his friend, the prince who helped him out with money and shelter. ___ After completing the traditional marriage rites, Joy now became steve's wife officially. He was glad, he couldn't wait to take her to the city, where he resides. A week after, he left for the city, together with his family (Joy & Mourice). On their way going, steve noticed, through thd rear window of his car, that someone was following them....he tried to speed up but the car was getting closer. soon, the car overtook theirs and pulled over in front of the steves, thereby blocking the way. Steve got furious, he alighted and angrily went over to the car. He was welcome by his Ex girlfriend, Christabel. She had a shortgun in her hand, and two hefty men in black, by her sides. "whats the meaning of this? Steve asked, angrily. "where is that woman, get her out here. If i can't have you, nobody would" she fired back. Joy who didn't understand what was going on, came out of the car, to find out for herself, little Mourice also tagged along, he was 18months old then. "oh! So shes the husband snatcher huh? Christabel yelled and change the direction of the gun, this time, pointing it at Joy. "please christy....don't hurt her, shoot me instead" steve muttered, as he walked up to her, hoping to grab the gun. But the two men pounced on him and gave him the beating of his life. "no, i won't kill her...if i get rid of the only thing the keeps them together - their child, steve would come back to me" Christabel thought, devilishly. She reached for Mourice, held him tightly, and pointed a gun at him, she wanted to kill him, despite the incessant pleadings from Joy. ___ John together with his three friends were coming back from their hunting adventure, today is a bad day, the didn't kill much animals. As they were coming closer the the bridge, John sighted an antelope, he aimed it perfectly and POW he shot it with his crackshot gun. ____ coincidentally, Christabel heard the gunshot, she became scared, she thought someone is out there seeing her. Luckily they were on a bridge, a stream was under them. She threw Mourice in it, heartlessly "he can't survive this" she muttered and Zoooom, she left with her accomplices. "Mouriiiceeeee" Joy wailed. ____ 'TASH' Mourice fell in the stream. John and his friends who were close by, heard the sound. "did you hear that sound? It sounded like something heavy fell into the water, lets check it out, it might be an animal" one of John's friend said. They quickly ran to the stream, alas! It was a human not an animal. Since John didn't have a child, and is not going to have one either, his friends urged him to take the kid home, he was God sent. _____ when christabel and her guys had left, steve together with Joy went down to the stream to search for Mourice, but he was nowhere to be found. "the currents must have swept him away" Steve thought. "i would never forgive you for this, christabel" Joy said, amidst sobs. Steve too was weeping, he managed to console his wife, and they left. ____ John got home, made a little fire and kept mourice beside it, so he would have some warmth. He explained everything to Anibe, and proposed they elope with the child. "but why run away? Anibe asked. "i can't bear seeing you being insulted by every Tom, dick and harry in this village, simply because you are barren....lets leave this village and start a new life with our miracle kid. We can come back in years time, that way, the people would believe he is our son, and that the curse had no power" John explained. Anibe thought of it, she would finally get her respect back, so she concurred. "what shall we name him? She asked. "lets call him Moses, he was taken from water" John replied. "no, what if he grows up and asked why we named him Moses? I suggest we name his David" Anibe said. "okay, as you wish my love". Early in the morning, at down, John took Anibe his wife and David. The eloped to another town. ¤¤ [color=red]welcome back from the past, the present continues...[/color]
11 Nov 2015 | 04:40
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something's are better left unsaid ...
11 Nov 2015 | 05:11
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Tnx. Ride on.
11 Nov 2015 | 05:46
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still folowinq
11 Nov 2015 | 07:33
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Waow,david (mourice) am happy 4 u o,now u can marry angela without any problem
11 Nov 2015 | 08:10
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No wonder y anibe didnt care abt david ooooooo
11 Nov 2015 | 08:50
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[b]I knew this would happen*[i]Winkz*[/i][/b]
11 Nov 2015 | 08:55
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Ok I now understand
11 Nov 2015 | 09:26
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Tnx,ride on
11 Nov 2015 | 09:47
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Hmmm..........following closely
11 Nov 2015 | 10:05
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And that's how David became Anibes son. Its a pity that even with the miracle associated with Dave's coming,, she still treated him bad. Ungrateful Humans
11 Nov 2015 | 10:27
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Ride on
11 Nov 2015 | 10:46
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Oh! David ain't even their son..aha d story is clear now.
11 Nov 2015 | 11:30
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Now the picture is very clear, the reason behind Anibe's attitude.
11 Nov 2015 | 11:55
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Hmmm.it's been a long way .from page one to here.well gud to join you guys.nice one and ride on.
11 Nov 2015 | 11:59
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Episode 29. * * * * CONTINUED FROM THE SCENE @THE STEVE'S RESIDENCE. "i know you are confused Dave, we also don't have a perfect explanation to this, but don't worry, spend the night here, then by tomorrow. We would travel to Kogi state, to your foster mother, She would explain better" Joy muttered. David concurred, but first, he had to see Joe and Gloria, to tell them about the latest development. One of the drivers was asked to take him there. ___ John explained his own part of the story to his mother and she forgave him for eloping without informing anyone. "so where are your wife and son? She asked. "Anibe is in Ejule, while Dave is in the university, i guess the semester has ended, so he should be at home with his mum by now" John replied. "i'd be going to see them tomorrow" he continued. John went to the king's palace, his friend the prince who helped him out years ago is now the king. He thanked the king, told him he had recovered his memory. Tim was also there, John thanked him for saving his life and standing by him... _____ Angela get news that the terrorists who abducted some people on the same the dave went missing, were busted by the army. And that the rescued hostages were at the police headquarters. She was excited, though Anibe isn't concerned with Dave's welfare, she was the only person that came to Angela's mind at that moment. Angela took a bike, heading to Anibe's place, so the both of them can go to the station, hoping to find Dave there. ___ "what have i become? My husband is dead, now the only child who brought happiness to my home is missing or dead by now, and here am i, doing nothing about it. I've indeed sinned against God and Dave, i havn't been a good mum to him. Dear lord, please give me a second chance, that David may be alive so i can shower him with the love and care of a mother" Anibe prayed within herself. She felt sorry for all her actions and was ready to correct all her wrongs, she war ready to be a good mum. "good evening ma" Angela greeted. Anibe was startled, she was too deep in her reverie, to notice the presence of Angela. "uhhh? Angela? For how long have you been here? She asked. "i'm just coming ma...i knocked but you didn't answer, so i came in, since the door wasn't locked" Angela replied. "okay....sit please....this one you are here by this time of the day, hope all is well? "no....i mean yes,... Angela explained her mission. "thank you my daughter, i see you truly love Dave...i just hope he is among the rescued persons" Anibe replied. Angela didn't expect to hear those words from Dave's mum, she had envisaged some harsh attitude. The response from Anibe, kept her heart at ease. "but we can't go today okay? If you don't mind, you can pass the night here, the by tomorrow we go to the station, because its getting late already" Anibe continued. Angela was in support of that idea, she was glad to spend the night with her to be mother-in-law, she had a strong conviction Dave is alive. Angela lent Dave's mum a hand in the kitchen and also with some domestic chores, before they went to bed. ___NEXT DAY___ John woke up early, he was glad to go back to his family. He quickly took his bath, he was having his breakfast when king Francis, his friend came together with Tim. They opted to go with him to Ejule, so he can fetch his wife and child, for Gloria to see them. _____ Angela and Dave's mum were all dressed up and ready to go, when a black Jeep drove into the compound.At first She was frightened because she didn't know of anybody who had such a car. Just then, some men came out of the car, she recognised the King and John, she thought she was seeing ghosts, she took fearful steps closer and touched him, it was then she verified he's not a ghost. She hugged him tightly.... "i missed you..... "i missed you more.....lets go in please, and where is Dave? John muttered. They went in, and Anibe told them Dave is missing, but there is hope he might be at the station right now. On hearing that, John asked the driver to take them there....while on the way, he told Anibe his ordeal with the robbers and how FATE smiled on him. When they arrived the police station, they launched their complain and a constable showed them the room where the rescued hostages were kept. Anxiously, they went in search of Dave, after about 15 minutes into the search, Dave was nowhere to be found. The reported it to the constable, but he only broke their hearts the more. "am sorry but those were the rescued hostages, according to the abductors, they sold some of the victims to nearby nations" the constable replied. On hearing this, John fainted......... ¤¤¤¤¤¤¤ [color=red]To be continued. (the end is near.....probably tomorrow)[/color]
11 Nov 2015 | 12:01
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Next, interesting
11 Nov 2015 | 12:18
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Ooh!!! Anibe itz already too late to adjust the way u treated Dave...cos he's found his real momma now....itz only John i would pity cos it won't be easy to let qo of someone u called ya own....uhmm Anqela,,Dave is urz already xo jex keep calm... Nice one Mister Invincible...
11 Nov 2015 | 12:47
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Wow cant wait 2 see hw all dis wil end nd as 4 u anibe its already late 4 u 2 correct all ur wrong doin,i wil only pity john but i kw dat even if david goes bk 2 his real parent he wil neva forget john 9ice 1 @invincible
11 Nov 2015 | 13:12
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#Sad_events_of_the_past pls go on #MASKED MAN
11 Nov 2015 | 13:22
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Thanks for the flashback @Hoelhay why did you say some things are better said left unsaid please tag me I want to know why
11 Nov 2015 | 14:02
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Ohhh so dat was how david come to diz world
11 Nov 2015 | 14:50
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gud one hapi for Dave(Maurice) @anibe z already late for u to correct ur wrong doing. John am sori after 19yrs u lose d one u called ur son. well Dave cant let u down. Angela rejoice cos Dave Maurice z all urs. u re a wife material @Angela. @Invincible plz dont fall hand via 2moro morning. thumbs up for u.
11 Nov 2015 | 15:17
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john don't worry u will soon be rich after all u took care of a millonaires son And Dave am sure ur father is even richer than Angelas father who is calling u a gold digger
11 Nov 2015 | 15:20
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@Henry Sanctus yes sir! Lol
11 Nov 2015 | 15:34
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@invinsible my guesses are the synonyms of right ..i told u oppii *tongue out* wow wow,so john was a legendary hunter? .. ill call this "tangle" the web of relationship is so complicated .. anibe papa go still sacrificial animal 4 shrine 4 dat matter,chiaa *smh* i sure say him dey always steal sacrificial food too when him hungry ... @invinsible keep up the goodwork ooo im enjoying this jolly ride
11 Nov 2015 | 16:13
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my guess is the Prince Who Was John's Friend Then Is Now The King .,, So Mr John Gets Wealth In Exchange Of His Only Son But I Think Dave Will End Up Having To Parents Who Will Together Live As One Big Happy Family ,,, That's FATE!
11 Nov 2015 | 16:19
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yea@invincible. @ele u re dia.
11 Nov 2015 | 18:10
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I can't wait 4 final episode o
11 Nov 2015 | 18:38
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wow can't wait to c how it ends now anibe is now ready to be a good mother but I think it late already
11 Nov 2015 | 19:23
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Anibe ... too late to said am sorry.... jb all d way
11 Nov 2015 | 19:24
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Oga john pls wake up o cos dave is coming wit a fat suprise. @anibe is 2 late 2 cry wen d head is cut off. @angela u av d quality of a gud wife
12 Nov 2015 | 01:03
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What a 9ce epi........
12 Nov 2015 | 02:13
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hmmmm
12 Nov 2015 | 03:40
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Anibe! Its too late 4 u, its jst lik repentance after death. John wake up, ur dave is still alive
12 Nov 2015 | 04:14
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Wow . Ride on bro,,, good work @invincible . I still dey your side!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
12 Nov 2015 | 04:34
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Ur work ll be rewarded by God grace @John
12 Nov 2015 | 04:47
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instead of anibe to b grateful she dey behave lke an ingrate
12 Nov 2015 | 05:40
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Episode 30 ******** Francis' driver brought a bottle of water, at the command of his master. After doing the normal resuscitation exercise, John was revived. That was a relieve, but not on Angela's path, does this mean she won't see David again? She asked herself. King Francis consoled John, his wife and Angela. Telling them that for the meantime, they needed to go home, but he would later make some international contacts, to make sure the case is investigated and Dave is found. They agreed, and left the station. While on the way, Francis urged his driver to speed up, for John needed to rest. There was a slow moving convoy before them, Kasim the driver knew that if he was to obey his master's command, he would have to over take this convoy, which made him to speed up. He drove roughly and overtook the first car, and then the next. Steve got furious, he need to teach this bad driver some lessons. He instructed the leading driver, via a vehicular communication system fixed to the cars, not to let Kasim go. "kai this fiful, wetin i want? Kasim muttered, when the Steve's car blocked his way. Francis and steve alighted almost at the same time, and they were exchanging words. When it got unbearable, John and the others also came down. "you guys should stop this already....we have a big problem before us, yet you are still fighting" John said, referring to Francis. But no, the men didn't stop, none of them was ready to take the blame or accept defeat. Joy and Dave also alighted, hoping to stop Steve from creating a scene. Angela couldn't believe her eyes, could this be David? Is it his twin or just a striking resemblance? She asked herself. 'DAVID! the name escaped her lips. Dave was stunned, someone know him here? He tilted to get a clearer view. He was surprised to see his family, the people he missed so much, they were all standing before him. Is that his dad's ghost or something? Isn't it said that ghosts are dressed in white? He asked himself. Dave found himself running to Angela for a tight hug, he missed her so much. Everybody was confused with the whole scenario. John aslo joined in the hug, while Anibe stood spell bound. "errh....whats going on here" steve asked. "this is my family! Dave replied, excitedly. They did a little introduction, and Steve apologised for creating a scene. But he was glad he did, the action led to something positive. They all drove to John's home, where they would discuss better. When they arrived, John proposed they talk outside, under a tree because the room can't contain the all. The obliged, some were seated on plastic chairs while others, on the car. The drivers were asked to excuse them. "so....dave, ard these the people who rescued you from your abductors? John asked. "dad, is there anything you are hiding from me? Dave replied with a question. John: no, why should i keep secrets from you? Dave: dad, are you my biological father? John:*coughs* why asking? Stevd: ehrrm.. With all due respect Mr. John, we have a DNA test result, which proves you aren't Dave's biological parents, but we..... John wasn't comfortable anymore, he felt uneasy, he was going to disclose a secret he kept for years, what would be dave's reaction if he found out he had been living a life of lie? John got hold of himself, and told them his own side of the story, how he found Dave, etc. Joy also explained their part of the story, to make everything sensible. Dave:dad!!! Why did you hide the truth from me, all this while? John: my son...it was for your good, how would you have felt if i told you we aren't your family and that i have no lead to your parents? Anibe wasn't happy, are they going to take her Dave from her? So she would go back to the barren Anibe of years ago? Hell no! She won't let that happen, she won't let Dave go" she thought silently. ___To be continued___
12 Nov 2015 | 08:06
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Nxt update nawa ooooooo @invinsible
12 Nov 2015 | 08:26
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Its quite late 2 cry ova split milk anibe
12 Nov 2015 | 10:43
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This Is Unbearable 4 John
12 Nov 2015 | 11:41
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mrs anibe u beta hold urself cos u neva for 1day act if dave z ur son. hpy for u@angela for seeing d one u love once again.
12 Nov 2015 | 12:53
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Observing
12 Nov 2015 | 12:56
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Now hu wuld he stay wit? His real parent or his foster parent? Next pls
12 Nov 2015 | 15:04
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[b]Dave got he's decision to make... ut wont be an easy one though [/b]
12 Nov 2015 | 15:13
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hmmmm . . . dz anibe sef,wen u were maltreatin im u dnt knw abi?tz nw u want to fyt bk,abeg stop crying over spilt milk jae . . anyways happy 4 d re-union,@invincible,tanks 4 d piece
12 Nov 2015 | 18:47
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Fate.... ur decision Dave.. foster parents. biological parents
12 Nov 2015 | 20:38
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So now you don't want to let David go after maltreating him . If you had been a good mother, do you think all this ones might happen. . @invincible, Oya come continue the story jare,, I liking it!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
13 Nov 2015 | 02:02
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So David has finally met his biological parents and John was not his real dad.
13 Nov 2015 | 04:20
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Bravo @invincible i love dis story
13 Nov 2015 | 05:13
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Episode 31 ********* Anibe:would you be going back to Abuja with David? You know since you've found out the truth. Joy:you are his foster parents, you guys raised him, he is still part of you no matter what, but we would like to go with him...to know him better, he is no longer the little Mourice he used to be. *steve cut in* steve:speaking of that, we would be launching our new software next week. And that day happens to be Mourice' birthday anniversary, we also plan to have a family re-union party that same day. You are special guests so yot would be present then....after that, we plan what next to do. John: i missed my son so much; i wish i could stay with him for a while, but you missed him more, i can imagine what it feels like to be separated from your child for 19 good years. You can go with him, and we would surely make it to Abuja next week. John replied teary eyes. Angela only stoodby, listening to the conversation, she was glad Dave's biological parents are rich - all her dad ever wanted. Now nothing can stop them from spending the rest of their lives together. After a long dialogue, John and his wife Anibe finally agreed to let Dave go,,,,the can't wait to attend his birthday party. Dave went over to Angela, and they both hugged tightly. "i'd be back my love,,,nothing can separate us now" he whispered into her ear, with a big grin. Angela was over the moon, she too can't wait for next week. ____ In no time, the Steve's arrived Abuja and were already in the mansion. To say Steve and Joy were happy would be an understatement. They were treating Dave like an egg that would break soon. Steve sent his servant to go do some shopping for Dave, ge also called someone to fix Dave's room, to his taste. Dave too was happy, so this is what he had been missing for 19 long years? The love of a mother, the luxury of life etc. Steve couldn't sleep well the whole night, he was pondering on how he would make up for these 19 years, he was ready to give Dave the best. ------ The following morning, dave was awakened by a knock on the door, it was one of the house helps, he brought some nice clothes, shiny pair of shoes, diamond wrist watch an iphone 6, etc with a message from his dad (steve), his dad asked him to freshen up so they can go to the office together. Steve is the chairman of "DE Steve group of companies" he had all he ever wanted, but his colleagues atimes tease him because he don't have a child, he can't wait to introduce Dave to them. ¤¤ they arrived the company, it looks very nice and sophisticated. With different sections in it. Steve introduced Dave to everybody he saw, down to his secretary and security men. He asked Dave to wait in his office, while he go out to get something. Dave sat down comfortably, playing with his new phone, just then, the door flunged open, someone came in, his face looked familiar, it was Mr. Peter, Angela's dad. He was late for work, and wanted to explain things to his boss, Mr. Steve. "you jerk!!! What are you doing here? Peter roared, when he recognised Dave. Dave only stood up and was pacing around with his hands akimbo, and a devilish grin on his face. That action irritated Peter the more. "so you work here mr. Pete? Its indeed a small world" dave muttered. Peter was angry to his bone, what is this boy doing here? What is he talking about? He even has the guts to reply me? He reached for his phone and called the security number. In a flash, two security men came in, one of them turned to Dave and said "sir you called us? That action infuriated Peter the more, he left the scene angrily. "you can go....its nothing" Dave told them. ___ they days passed by real fast, and tomorrow is going to be his birthday, Dave and his parents took their private jet and were off to Kogi state, to pick their guests. [color=blue]¤¤¤¤¤ the party begins.... its strictly by invitation, but Dave invites all coolvalers. How you would get there? It have been taken care of, just go to the nearest airport in your area, and say you are a coolvaler, that is your ticket!!! you would be told what to do. Don't be late!!! One more thing, for the ladies, you are to wear pink dinner gowns and the guys.....[/color][color=red] **** the last episode comes up later.[/color]
13 Nov 2015 | 06:36
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Hope u won't miss the party? @jummybabe @henry @hohluwaseyi @emmyrexx @ele @onahsunday631 @pizzaro @vict-vames @ebube @christiana @mhizdaofot @desire @others
13 Nov 2015 | 07:50
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[b]Lolzz @Invincible kogi get airport?? Aint missing d party at all... boiz wear singlet nd boxers @Nextangel will b the bouncer[/b]
13 Nov 2015 | 09:14
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If I hear say I miss dis party 4 anytin. So mr.peter works under som1 nd he is making noise lik d president of d country. John u won't b a poor man again, Dave is really a blessing 2 ur family. Errm....whr ar diz pple, u all should prepare 4 d party pls. @Ele I won't lik 2 see ur shadow close nt 2 talk of ur real self
13 Nov 2015 | 09:25
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Lolxx @Invincible Itz a very wonderful re-union so I won't miss the party for any reason... I'm even on my way to the airport... :-)
13 Nov 2015 | 09:57
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wow calling...........ringing....... .ing................ringing........yes prepare my jet i wan reach abj for an important birthday party. wia my love@tenniebenson off we go 2geda cos nothing can separate both of us. hmmmmm oda lovers @Aarti,@Promzy dnt b dat jealous ok cos we all re goin 2geda.
13 Nov 2015 | 10:11
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Ha, @invincible, you no even give me special invitation??, don't worry, I go catch you for corner!!!!! . I can't miss it, I'm coming with my sunshine @mray . Well, old school dress go good for my body nah!!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
13 Nov 2015 | 10:42
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@wiseman, sorry johr that 'others' wey i attach cover the most important people ni. @vict-vames, kogi no get airport? @ele na true?... Haba why u 'reina' kogi lyk this? Sha the event na for Abj. So prepare ya self.
13 Nov 2015 | 11:33
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You won't miss the party would ya? @Tenniebenson @frankkay @saraya @emmyrexx @kingsbest @kingson1 @oshio @aarti @hilary @laurasteve299 @skookum @sofia @ritagold @all coolvalers!
13 Nov 2015 | 11:40
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@Wiseman any clothe you wear, if u reach dem go give u another one, the party wear :)
13 Nov 2015 | 11:41
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I'm right beside you @invincible
13 Nov 2015 | 11:43
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@vict-vames airport dey 4 kogi oo ..@invinsible ah nah go attend oo i gft meeting with buhari at asorock @delight na me go be MC 4 d party oya cum kill me
13 Nov 2015 | 11:47
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@invincible count me in,am never going to miss it 4 anytin,na jet i won enter go o.*wink*
13 Nov 2015 | 12:16
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[b]Abi? wats d name of the airport @Invincible @Ele[/b]
13 Nov 2015 | 13:18
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I wont miss dis party for any reason.
13 Nov 2015 | 14:03
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@vict-vames, ever heard of Ajaokuta airport?
13 Nov 2015 | 14:24
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You are welcome dear @laurasteve299
13 Nov 2015 | 14:31
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@invincible, Oya bring the last episode nah
13 Nov 2015 | 14:58
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Can't wait 2 knw wat will happen in d last episode.Gbogbo aye 4 dat party.hope am also invited@invicinble.
13 Nov 2015 | 15:03
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Yes, special I.V @TemmyJoy
13 Nov 2015 | 15:21
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[color=blue] hope you are enjoying the party?[/color] Episode 32 ********* The event is been held at the steves residence. The whole place is filled with those who belonged to the higher class of the society, the creme de la crèmes of both the entertainment and ICT sectors, Angela and her family were present too, though her dad came on business grounds. And of course the prestigious coolvalers. The ceremony was opened with the launching of the new software developed by "De steves group of companies" and now, its time for the event of the day! The family re-union party/Dave's birthday anniversary. Sitting on the podium are ; steve, Joy, Dave, Anibe and John. Steve stepped forwad to address the people. Steve: ladies and gentlemen, you are all welcome to this grand breaking ceremony. Its indeed a family re-union party, we are celebrating our re-union with the only heir to the Steves fortune, the only prince of the steves world, DAVID STEPHEN! For the past years, he had been living with God sent Angels, Mr. John and his lovely wife Anibe. Ladies and gentlemen, may we give them a standing ovation please? *john and anibe who were clad in sophisticated wears, courtesy of the mr steve, stood up for recognition while the people were clapping and shouting* thank you...thank you... There is really no way we can pay them back for what they've done, only God would reward them. By the way, Mr. John, the mansion over there, that one next to my house, is yours and the two range rover sports parked in there is meant for you and Mrs. Anibe, lastly, you are resuming work in my company by next week. *people were clapping* Dave, i would have sent you abroad, to complete your studies, but we want to spend time with you, we your family want you around for a while. Although when you are done schooling, the ball would be in your court, you either head the company here in Nigeria, or the one in Italy. Happy birthday Mourice. *taking his seat.* John:good evening all, you are highly welcomed, Dave have been a blessing to us, ever since he was a kid. I love and cherish him so much...i'm glad he found his real parents, and am more glad that they are capable of giving him the luxury he had been missing all his life. Dave is my source of strength, even when i was in the jaws of death, the thought of him, gave me a will to live again, and as FATE has it, i'm alive to witness this day,,,the most beautiful day in my life. Congratulations my boy and happy birthday, i wish you all the best, son. Anibe: Dave has a pure heart, a heart of gold. Even when i was illtreating him back then, he only paid me in good coins. Dave is an exceptional young man. Congrats Dave, am happy for you, one more thing; i sincerely apologise for all my bad behaviors, please forgive me son. *wipes away her tears* i love you Dave, i really do. Happy birthday dear. Just then, a woman walked briskly to the podium "a minute please" she muttered as she approached. "is this woman mad? Whats wrong with her? Pizzaro and vict-vames kept muttering. "shes gonna ruin our party, and we haven't eaten anything yet" Ele whispered to a young man with the nick 'Jesus-boy Jnr". Who could that be? ¤¤¤ typing...
13 Nov 2015 | 15:24
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@wiseman, typing.....
13 Nov 2015 | 15:25
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Make i hear say I missed d party! Am already on way 2 d airport en route Abuja. Those security guys embarrased Mr. Peter no be small oo
13 Nov 2015 | 15:45
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Lol! @Invincible so nah my guyz @vict-vames & @Pizzaro with coolvals finnest @ela you dey do diz thing. Diaris God oo!
13 Nov 2015 | 15:53
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You didn't even wait 4 d rest of us b4 d party kicked off. Now am absent... #sobbing
13 Nov 2015 | 16:00
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lol party I no go miss dat for anything on my way
13 Nov 2015 | 16:05
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so I missed d party *sobbing*
13 Nov 2015 | 16:09
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wow d party make sense joor wow dat woman looks lyk dat lady dat throw dave maurice steve inside water.vwot d hell z she doin hia. enjoyin maself wih ma coolvallers lovers @tenniebenson, @Aarti nd @promzy.
13 Nov 2015 | 16:19
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hmmmm@tennie ...come n see biko...nd @Aarti...
13 Nov 2015 | 16:25
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Hey, Wat Next
13 Nov 2015 | 16:42
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4ni guyz n d hauz......... Na una commentz dy sweet pass.......... Me self dn miss d party, but I go still show face even iv na 2 c d environment during closure.......... Well done @invinsible.........
13 Nov 2015 | 16:47
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Episode 32 ********* Steve recognised her, she's christabel his Ex-girlfriend, the architect of everything. What do she want? If not for the guests present, he would have had her thrown out. Christabel: just a minute please, i have a confession to make;i'm the architect of this whole mishap, yes, its because of my evil deeds and thoughts that this happened....please Steve, Joy, Dave have mercy on me, forgive me please? I shouldn't have let my emotions get the best of me back then.....i regret all my actions. I thought Stephen would come back to me, but no, i was wrong, you can't force someone to love you. Yes, I wasn't invited but when i heard of this occasion, i knew it would be the best place and time to apologise. Steve:you are forgiven, christabel, i guess all that happened was a part of God's plan for our lives. Christabel:thanks. Peter: sorry, just a minute....i want to use this medium to apologise to Dave too....i thought he wasn't good enough for my daughter, because he was poor, but little did i know he was even richer than i am, sorry Dave, for the harsh treatment i gave you back then....you would have my blessings for your marriage. Dave, your life thought me a great lesson, i learnt never to downgrade anyone, no matter what the condition is. Happy birthday young man. David: speaking of that, i would never forget my encounter with Konji, he gave me the most thundrous slap ever. *laughing...and so was everybody* (down there, Konji was seated with his girlfriend, he felt very ashamed and embarassed, 'i would quit this job as soon as i get out of here,,,i can't be creating scenes and making enemies for my self just like that' he thought silently). Dave continues:Before i cut the cake, please permit me to do something, it may seem funny, but i'd love to do it...please lets give a round of applause to my one and only, the only star beside my moon, the only blood in my veins, the only fuel in my engine, Ms Angela peter!!! Angela was looking elegant, so beautiful. She came forward, she wonder why Dave wanted her there. When Angela was already with him, Dave dip his hands into his pocket and brought out an engagement ring, a very shiny and precious ring. He knelt before her. Dave:Angela, would you marry me? Angela:*blushing* ye....yes....yes Dave, i would marry you. Dave:thanks Angela..... Dave carried her, off her feet, for a snapshot before letting her down. They both held the knife attached to the cake. While the coolvalers started a birthday song, and soon everybody joined in singing. The celebration went down well, and was wrapped up with thousands of snapshots. People started departing to their various houses while John, Anibe and his mum grace lived in their new mansion, their building was directly opposite the Steves' the lived like one big family. Tim was also given a job while gloria became business partners with Mr. Steve. Joe, Angela and Dave went back to school. ¤¤¤5 years later¤¤¤ Davd was done with his education, he and Angela left the country for Italy to head the branch there. They were also preparing for their wedding!. Dave's phone ranged, it was an international call from his dad, John. John:hello son, how are you faring? Dave:am fine dad, and you? John:we are all fine....guess what? *can you guess?* . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..*whats your guess?* . . . . Dave:what is it dad? John:your mum, Anibe just gave birth to a bouncing baby boy! Dave:really dad? What about the uhm.... John:the curse? Its a miracle dear, we visited a pastor, he prayed for us and his prayer worked! Dave:wow! Am so happy dad....can't wait to see my kid bro. John: yeah....by the way, don't you want to get married? You are 24 already and.... Dave:don't worry dad, Angela and i would be in Nigeria next month.....and it would be for the wedding!!! John:thats good news, okay bye, take care [color=blue] for all those who missed the party, not to worry, you are invited to the wedding! Don't miss out. Date? The date is february 31 :) [/color] [color=red] __________________________[/color] [color=green] _________________________ [/color] :roll: :roll: :roll: [color=red] THE [/color] [color=green]E[/color][color=cream]N[/color][color=green]D[/color]. :roll: :roll: :roll: hope you enjoyed the story?_______________________ [color=red] from the table of Isaiah Atabo aka Invincible.[/color] .....some of the locations used are real, but the events never happened :)
13 Nov 2015 | 17:05
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THANKS FOR FOLLOWING AND YOUR COMMENTS WERE A BIG MOTIVATION......COOLVAL AND COOLVALERS ARE THE BEST JOHR :) :roll: ..........
13 Nov 2015 | 17:08
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*clapping * well done@invincible, expecting another story from u
13 Nov 2015 | 17:21
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Wow . What a suspence, @invincible, thumbs up, one gallon of 20 litres kunu for you jare after the party!! .never underrate anybody no matter what!!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!!
13 Nov 2015 | 17:22
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I really loved your consistency, you were consistent,,, . I hope I will get to see more stories from your table @invincible . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
13 Nov 2015 | 17:25
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Thanks @wiseman and @vickyola
13 Nov 2015 | 17:37
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Huh! Am seriously waiting 4 dat wedding date (serious face) @invincible one bottle coke 4 u, u did a great job here.
13 Nov 2015 | 17:43
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@Invincible U've performed extremely well bro..infact leh me say u've beaten my imaqination... I really enjoyed vhiz ya story, and above all,it had so many lessons to be learnt... Am proud of you bro Thumbz upp too... . . As for the weddinq ceremony,u're qoinq to lead while other's will follow behind you....lol
13 Nov 2015 | 17:55
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U realy r awesome! Nice work invicible
13 Nov 2015 | 18:07
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Akara
13 Nov 2015 | 18:18
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Nice one@invincible
13 Nov 2015 | 18:32
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weldone @invicible and we expect more from u
13 Nov 2015 | 18:49
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@pizzaro thanks dude, remember ya ingredients? Dey be original johr :) thanks guys *high five* @delight @onahsunday631 @chisco @joycassie
13 Nov 2015 | 18:55
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wow really super i really enjoyed maself in d party in fact i drank nd drank nd got drunk as for d wedding me go b best man while my lovers@Aarti, @Promzy go b brides maid via@Tenniebenson as d chief brides maid. via@toni, @crooky, @Original Ann go stil dey in line wit brides maidens.
13 Nov 2015 | 19:13
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Chai.! Chineke umunwanyi... I d party... feb31 sure I dey CIA @invincible really enjoyed DX story.... take alomo 2 cool down and 1naira 2 buy ink... in fact send 4 data
13 Nov 2015 | 19:39
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Hahaha @Invincible Yea...i can remember it vividly...bt Dnt tell me datz wah u used to achieve vhiz much...lol :-)
14 Nov 2015 | 01:08
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@henry sanctus... if your lovers be your brides maid nd all that... wonder wat will happen after d wedding...just pitying your wife.....nawaoo
14 Nov 2015 | 02:10
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lemme quickly rush this [email protected] u mentioned me?just asking ooo
14 Nov 2015 | 02:12
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@pizzaro yes na, ya ingredients are straight from dubai na
14 Nov 2015 | 02:22
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@ebube dem dey sell ink N1 for una area lol :)
14 Nov 2015 | 02:24
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enjoyement continuo,tankz bro,great work done more greeze to ur elbow.
14 Nov 2015 | 02:33
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oh my! so this is wat av bin missing..... i love this! this is so breathtaking...@invincible... #kisses#for u jare.... hope your wifey isn't here shaa..@henry santus.. thanks a bunch!
14 Nov 2015 | 03:58
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9ce story;i love dis one jare @invicible
14 Nov 2015 | 04:04
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@promzy she no dey here o, she go sambisa forest :)
14 Nov 2015 | 04:33
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I promise to come and pick d whole coolvalers with my private jet 4 d wedding...hope u lyk dat idea@invincible
14 Nov 2015 | 04:43
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Wow Wow Wow
14 Nov 2015 | 04:51
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so intresting
14 Nov 2015 | 04:59
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@onahsunday631 nicd idea johr, bt check the date well o :)
14 Nov 2015 | 04:59
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@invincible... skibo wait re u kidding me?lolzz u ain't serious.... go rescue her jhoor!
14 Nov 2015 | 05:00
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@invincible u really did a great job..kudos...
14 Nov 2015 | 05:11
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[b]The party was hot!! i just woke up from hang over... Great Story From Our Own @Invincible My Boy.. Good Work! Hoping To Hear From You Soonest...[/b]
14 Nov 2015 | 05:49
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[b]@Invincible Wich Ajaokuta Airport? Iffa hear…Lolzz[/b]
14 Nov 2015 | 05:52
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Are u telling me that Kogi don't have airport?? Oyah go tell that your president pikin make she build 5 for us @vict-vames
14 Nov 2015 | 06:36
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@promzy i'm thinking of doing that too.....but i no fit go alone o, abeg come make we go
14 Nov 2015 | 06:38
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@invincible.... Yap.... It qet one aboki wey ma syd wey sell am dat price
14 Nov 2015 | 07:39
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Mehn....that ur area nice o, u sure sey na for 9ja u dey? :)
14 Nov 2015 | 08:54
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ah dey come@invincible
14 Nov 2015 | 09:35
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[b]Mah hear say i tel her... until i get house for banana island and asi rock before of any oda tin[/b]
14 Nov 2015 | 10:16
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Nice job invincible .. expecting more from u
14 Nov 2015 | 10:26
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Dat one na for sure , even for maimi beach you go get house :) @vict-vames. @promzy come prepared o, theres gonna be alot of shootings you know *winkz* @hoelhay thanks
14 Nov 2015 | 11:45
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lol@invincible... am fully armed
14 Nov 2015 | 17:58
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Nice @promzy
14 Nov 2015 | 18:55
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wow!wat an interestin story @invincibe mre urine to ya bladder
14 Nov 2015 | 21:01
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Thanks..... More urine ke? U wan kill be dat na lol :) @Mhizdaofot
15 Nov 2015 | 01:48
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lolz,@invincible,more ink to ya pen
15 Nov 2015 | 08:02
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u are welcome @invincible
15 Nov 2015 | 10:27
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Nice story sorry i got lost somewia along d way. Its a beautiful piece. More grease to ur elbow. Kip it up @invincible
16 Nov 2015 | 13:53
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@wyse-one thanks
16 Nov 2015 | 14:04
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Wow 9c story....... Shey na 4 nigeria 19 yrs old dey propose 2 a gal in front of his parent?
16 Nov 2015 | 15:16
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nice bro...keep it up..more power to ur elbow..
16 Nov 2015 | 16:19
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[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/story-tittle-fate/#post-354665][b]Episode1[/b][/url] [url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/story-tittle-fate/page2/#post-354814][b]Episode2[/b][/url] [url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/story-tittle-fate/page5/#post-#355668][b]Episode3[/b][/url] [img]https://fbcdn-sphotos-c-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xat1/v/t34.0-12/12204561_202698493395736_1212817025_n.jpg?efg=eyJpIjoiYiJ9&oh=d32bf00356c41b89bf95c0f339d77a5a&oe=56511CEC&__gda__=1448234809_40178d50dc50c958c868d746d5ce36d9[/img] '¤'¤'¤'
18 Nov 2015 | 04:54
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wow nice story @invisible,following all d way shoutout to all coolvallers in d hauz u guys ar d bomb hope am welcom.
19 Nov 2015 | 02:04
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@omosekeaderemi thanks and ua welcome to the family
19 Nov 2015 | 09:14
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@invisible can lie eeeehn.....o boy u too bad for brain oooo anyway more grease to ur elbow [b]BOSS[/b]
21 Dec 2015 | 17:26
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My bros @fb-loii abeg i no remember d particular one o , no vex.
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