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RENATA "The vengeful girl"

RENATA "The vengeful girl"

By Mubarak in 9 May 2016 | 08:14
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It was dark and the rain was pouring down heavily,the streets were silent except for some few cars speeding down the road,but Renata didn't even know what was happening around her,her teeth were chattering uncontrollably,her ears pounding,her cheeks powdered by her tears mixed with the rain and her hands on her tummy as she staggered down the walk path,she regretted her predicament and wished she could rewind her days back even if its just to a year back,now its her fault her twin sister is dead all at d hands of one man and his family,she sighed as she tried to look around,so she could see where she was headed,the movement proved futile as it hurt her already famished body,she knew it was just a matter of minutes before she joined her twin sister at the land of the dead.Renata fell down to the ground as she cldnt hold herself anymore,as she lay there she closed her eyes and lost track of time before a gentle voice forced her eyes open,she looked up into a pretty girls face of about her age,she tried to put into words her gratitude and plea all at once but words couldn't form,she saw the girls lips moving and knew the girl must be saying something but she couldn't also understand the girls words,Renata smiled and thought within herself,this soothing hands touching my face must be my last moment,but she knew her gods have answered her prayer and sent her her tool to destroy the family that destroyed her,she gave the girl a sign to stoop lower as if she wanted to tell her something,when the girl stooped,Renata used her last ounce of strength to push the girl down,and bit deeply into her neck,as she did that,she felt her soul leaving her body and entering the girls body, yes I did it was Renatas final thought.
9 May 2016 | 08:14
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Hmmmm
9 May 2016 | 08:18
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u did it?
9 May 2016 | 08:19
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What is she gonna do?
9 May 2016 | 08:19
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Mute
9 May 2016 | 08:24
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did what
9 May 2016 | 08:25
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is these a story
9 May 2016 | 08:43
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She did what ?
9 May 2016 | 08:43
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Nneka woke up and felt instant panic,her surroundings looked strange to her,she tried to sit up,it was then it dawned on her that she was in a hospital,a nurse backing her was at a corner,she must be busy with something,Nneka thought,the nurse faced her abruptly,guess the noise she made trying to stand up must have alerted the nurse "oh madam,thank God you are awake,I was wondering if you'd ever wake,thank God you did" "what am I doing here"Nneka asked "its okay dear" the nurse replied,"a good Samaritan brought you here and paid all your bills,he said he saw you lying on the road side,you should be discharged soon,let me get the doctor"the nurse quickly left the room,like seriously,Nneka wondered what was really happening around her, "what exactly is that nurse saying?"she asked herself,how can someone say he saw her lying on the road,what exactly would she be doing on the road or did she faint or something,last she remembered,she came back from work very late and decided to go get dinner as she was famished,she was walking on the road and then...........she couldn't remember anything else ,try as she may,and she felt so heavy,she just didn't know why.Nneka was forcefully jerked out of her musings when the door opened and a doctor and nurse walked in,Nneka watched them warily as they approached her,she didn't trust the nurse's rooster and bull story, "young lady,its time for us to discharge you,is there anyone we should call to pick you?the doctor asked? "uhmmmm,its okay"Nneka replied"I would find my way". "okay then,just be more careful and don't go out in the night,do you understand?" "yes doctor" " okay,your good Samaritan dropped some cash for you,I guess that would take you home,the nurse would give the money and your clothes to you,she would also take you to where you would get a cab to take you home,do have a nice day young lady" "Thank you doctor"Nneka said as she watched everything happening around her,she felt different, she cldnt pin point the difference,but she knew something was different about her,as she dressed up,she just had a very odd feeling not to go home ,she wanted to go see someone,she hurriedly dressed up,she had a meeting and she must not be late.
9 May 2016 | 08:52
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9 May 2016 | 08:57
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