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Episode two Patricia: you both should stop it! Daniel: Mum i hate this guy so much. Patricia: he is your brother, alright i gave birth to the both of you. Chris: i don't think he is my brother. Patricia: what do you mean? Chris: nothing. Patricia: you are the one causing all this troubles. How could you take someone that left your little brother. Chris: thats none of my business (he left the kitchen,Daniel wanted to live too but his mum called him back) Patricia: Daniel let's talk Daniel: about what? Patricia: can't you just forget about Tina. Daniel: i can't. Patricia: she's not the only girl in this world. Daniel: she's the first girl i loved,how can she just dump me just because my brother is going to own the company. Patricia: that's how life is,alright I'll bring in the maid you need as long as you don't fight with your brother over Tina. Daniel: Mum am not a kid anymore, you can't deceive me with that. Patricia: am not trying to deceive you,am trying to help you out. Daniel: how? Patricia: I'll bring someone you would like to stay with. Daniel: am not gonna Date some low life. Patricia: (hits his head with her hand) Daniel: Mum! That hurts. Patricia: of course it hurts, don't call people low lives. Daniel: so is she pretty? Patricia: i think so. Daniel: come on is she pretty or not. Patricia: i haven't seen her before. Daniel: like seriously? Patricia: but my friend suggested that i should take her in. Daniel: your friend indeed (rolls eyes) Patricia: yeah my friend. Daniel: okay then till tomorrow. Patricia: alright ( pecks him and he left the kitchen) At night Patricia: am taking someone in. Gerald: not again! Patricia: come on am tired of going to work,and coming back to do house chores. Gerald: you've been doing it Patricia: Daniel wants me to bring her in and am doing that tomorrow. Gerald: okay then...........

Episode 3 Margret: so you are the one that wants to take my daughter? Patricia: yes i am Margret: you aren't the type that treat your house helps like they aren't human beings? Patricia: am not like that, why are you asking? Margret: i just don't want her to go through the same thing that happened when she was a kid. Patricia: am not like that, i just want her to help me around the house. Margret: okay then, Annabelle!! Anna: yes mum (comes out of the room) Margret: are you ready to go with her? Anna: yes Mum. Margret: get your things. Anna: okay ( went inside and brought out her bag and took it the car and came back gave her Mum a farewell kiss and went into the car with Patricia and they drove out.) They got to the city few hours later and Patricia took her inside the house,showed her around and gave her a room and some little things to do and then left for work. She was still in her room when she heard the sound of the door and went out of the room,to the sitting room only to see Daniel sitting down on the sofa,she quietly moved close to him and asked) Anna: who are you? Daniel: what? (Stood up immediately) Anna: who are you? And what do you want? Daniel: i should be asking you that. Anna: if you don't tell.me who you are, I'll call the police. Daniel: and tell them what? Anna: that someone broke into a house. Daniel: do you have brains at all? Anna: what? Daniel: you would probably be the one to be arrested. Anna: i work here. Daniel: wow interesting, so you are the new househelp? Anna: who are you?...............

Episode 4 Daniel: if you want to know who i am,call your madam,and tell her that Daniel is here. Anna: okay (she ran to her room,came out with her phone then called Patricia) Patricia: hello! Anna: am sorry to disturb you ma but someone came into the house. Patricia: who? What's his name? Anna: Daniel. Patricia: (laughs) Daniel is my son. Anna: really? Patricia: yeah. Anna: okay then,have a nice day ma.(cuts the call) Daniel: so ? Anna: sorry sir.(bends her head) Daniel: you're quite protective, so what's your name? Anna: Annabelle. Daniel: i can just call you Ann right? Anna: no problem. Daniel: what is it? Anna: nothing. Daniel: you can just call me by my name too Ann. (Smiles) Anna: i can't Daniel: i insist. Anna: okay.(Chris comes in) Chris: did my little brother bring another girl in? Daniel: and what if he did? Chris: none of my business,she's cute though. Daniel: she's the new house help moron. Anna: good day sir. Chris: welcome then.( went upstairs while Anna kept on looking at him and smiling) Daniel: what's up with the smile? Anna: he's cute (blushes) Daniel: like seriously? Anna: yeah. Daniel: yeah i know. Anna: you're more handsome than him but.... Daniel: but what? Is this love at first sight? Anna: what do you mean? I have to work,bye. Daniel: come on let's be close friends. Anna: why? Daniel: please. Anna: I'll think about it. Daniel: till when? Anna: tomorrow. Daniel: cool then. Anna: bye (she left) Patricia came back from work as usual with her husband and Anna rushed out and welcomed them and Gerald asked. Gerald: is she the new girl? Patricia: yes. Gerald: what's your name? Anna: Annabelle sir. Gerald: nice meeting you. Anna: thank you sir (they all went inside together) Chris: welcome mum,dad. Patricia: where is Daniel? Chris: i don't know. Patricia: where is Daniel? Ann Anna: he's in his room. Patricia: okay. Gerald: Chris, you have to stop this behavior. Chris: good night Dad (stood up and left for his room) Gerald: where did he learn to be so rude? Patricia: i don't know (sits down)......

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Episode 5 One month later Anna was in the kitchen washing the plates while Daniel sat down on the counter pressing his phone, Anna: Danny! Daniel: what? Anna: why don't you want to go to your room? Daniel: am bored. Anna: then visit your friends. Daniel: you are the only friend i have. Anna: what of your girlfriend? Daniel: she left me for my brother. Anna: what? Daniel: (looks at her) oh my God, she's unhappy. Anna: who? Daniel: you of course,i have told you several times to tell him how you feel about him but you won't. Anna: i don't have any feeling for him! Daniel: stop lieing and accept the fact that you do . Anna: and what if i do? Its not going to change anything. Daniel: tell him first. Anna: i can't, he has a girlfriend, i can't destroy anyone's relationship. Daniel: uhuh,i know that. Anna: don't you want your girlfriend back? Daniel: i don't want her anymore. Anna: why? Daniel: she dumped me. Anna: and so what? Daniel: she can't take me back,it's really over for good. Anna: Danny. Daniel: what? Anna: nothing i just like the name. Daniel: liar(jumps down from the counter) Anna: am through with the plates,let's go and eat. Daniel: okay mam. Anna: whatever (laughs and the both left the kitchen) Tina's apartment Tina sat down on her bed with her friend Anita, they were discussing when anita brought up something. Anita: are you planning to take Dan back? Tina: that guy has nothing so i can't. Anita: he is the one that loves you,that's what am sure of, Chris will dump you someday. Tina: he won't try it. Anita: you think you are the only girl he has? Tina: yes of course. Anita: i know that Daniel is waiting for you to take him back someday and here you are killing yourself over someone that doesn't give a fuck about you. Tina: girl why don't you go and date Daniel? Anita: i have a fiance miss. Tina: then let me be. Anita: take him back before its too late. Tina: should i date both brothers then? Anita: don't even try it girl. Tina: i heard they got a maid and Chris said that she's cute,am afraid he is going to fall for the bitch . Anita: am afraid the girl's gonna take Daniel away for good,the guy that deserves you. Tina: whatever. Anita: I've warned you,let me get going,am going out with edward today. Tina: okay then,let me see you off. Anita: thanks,

Episode six Chris came out of his room,he noticed that his brother was not around but he heard some noise in the kitchen, so he went in to check who it was,on reaching there he saw Anna preparing lunch,he stood there looking at her, he kept on looking at her like someone who was lost in his thoughts that he didn't know when Daniel came in and touched him from behind and asked. Daniel: do you love her too? Chris: (turns immediately) what do you mean? Anna: (turns) what's going on? Daniel: i was just trying to tell him that you're crushing on him. Anna: Daniel stop it. Chris: there is nothing wrong with it if she loves me,all the girls you know loves me. Daniel: i guess so. Anna: don't mind him,he's just joking. Daniel: i don't joke with this kind of stuffs. Anna: just keep quiet please. Daniel: she doesn't want you to know cause you are dating already. Anna: its a lie,Daniel just stop it!! Daniel: stop what? Just tell him and free yourself. Chris: well seems like we have the same feelings for each other huh? Anna: what? Chris: do you want to date me? Anna: what?!! Chris: you heard me. Anna: like seriously? Chris: you heard me. Anna: i would love to. Chris: then be fast with the lunch and get ready,lets go out (left the kitchen) Daniel:see i told you. Anna: thanks. Daniel: if he tries anything stupid you call me.(Peck's her and left the kitchen) Chris arrived in one of the expensive hotel with Anna that afternoon, of course he made sure that she looked gorgeous before they left,they both came down from the car and walked in and was given a seat,after ordering and eating,Chris decided to strike up a conversation. Chris: so what's your name? Anna: Annabelle. Chris: sweet name, am Chris i guess you already know that. Anna: yeah. Chris: so how old are you? Anna: am 20 Chris: nice, am 26 though. Anna: what of Daniel? I don't know his age but he knows mine. Chris: he is 23 years old. Anna: nice,what of your girlfriend? Chris: we broke up ( he lied) Anna: why? Chris: she's she too arrogant. Anna: that's bad. Chris: i would love it if you would accept to be my girl. Anna: uhm,can i think about that? Chris: i need an answer now. Anna: uhm...... Chris: come on just tell me. Anna: yes,I'll be your girl. Chris: thanks. Anna: welcome. Chris: so tell me about your family...

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You made a mistake here oo this episod ve been posted befor naa. Check well pls sir.@ele..

Episode 7 Anna came back with Daniel in the evening that day,he dropped her at home and told her that he needs to go to the company, and Anna so blinded by love believed it,she went in and met Daniel sitting down and as usual busy with his phone,she wanted to go up to her room when Daniel asked her. Daniel: how was the date? Anna: it was okay and you won't believe this. Daniel: believe what? Anna: we're now dating. Daniel: what?! Anna: isn't that sweet? Daniel: what of Tina? Anna: yeah, they broke up. Daniel: Ann did he tell you that? Anna: yeah. Daniel: that's a lie. Anna: i don't need that now . Daniel: i know my brother alright. Anna: this is your opportunity to go back to Tina, i can't hate your brother just because you hate him. Daniel: are you taking his side now? Anna: am not taking anyone's side okay. Daniel: please just think about this Ann. Anna: he's my guy and that's final.(storms out) Daniel:( picks up his phone and calls Chris) where are you? Chris: why are you asking? Daniel: just tell me where you are,we have something to discuss. Chris: come over to Tina's place then. Daniel: okay (cuts the call and left the house) He arrived at Tina's place some minutes later,and met Tina's father while going in,he told him. Anthony: your brother is in there. Daniel: i know sir. Anthony: okay then ( Daniel walked in,and pushed Tina's door open and said to Chris . Daniel: how can you do such a thing? Chris: do what? Daniel: how can you date two girls at a time? Tina: what? Daniel: your guy is dating our house help. Tina: what the hell do you mean by that? Chris: Tina you know that he has always wanted you back? Tina: yeah. Chris: he probably made this up. Daniel: you can deceive other girls but don't do it to Ann. Chris: i don't have anything to do with the lowlife bitch. Tina: Daniel i really don't want you back. Daniel: do i look like i still love you? Tina: yes you do so live my place. Daniel: i don't have your time, Chris if you do anything stupid, i won't tolerate it this time around. Chris: live please. Daniel: okay then (storms out) He went back home and still tried to talk with Ann but she didn't listen to him. Daniel: if anything happens to you, i won't be there for you. Anna: do you have feelings for me? Daniel: and what if i do? Anna: just get rid of it,cause it can never work between us,we're just friends. Daniel: i really won't be there (he left her room).......

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sincerely this story is kinda straight make the story looks real and besides we didn't know how any of this people looks like just taking note No offense o @Ele1

I just pity you Anna

Haa!!! I'm smelling some danger

Hmmm,, Anna, a word is enough for the wise Guys like Chris are known as play boy (player).

Tel dm

Anna u will cry, cry and cry but there will be no one to console u

Ok next

You been warned

Y didn't Daniel take Anna wt him to go talk wt Chris @ Tina's place? Diz pple sef

Ann, listen to Daniel . . Don't do anything that u will regret it later ... Hmmmmmm... A word to the wise is enough

@ele1 twist and turn your story so it appears real. Your story is so straight and predictable to common sense. Though, may be your style but it appears like 'Chike and the river' to me. Pls try to edit it and check typos

Ride on bro enjoying the story.

Episode 8 Two weeks later Daniel was in the sitting room,he was sitting down on the sofa with his legs crossed,he was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't know when Tina came in, she stood there for a while and then tapped him and he immediately got himself turned and asked her. Daniel: what is it?. Tina: is your brother around? Daniel: how would i know? Tina: you're supposed to know. Daniel: why? Tina: cause he is your brother. Daniel: i don't know where he is. Tina:so stupid. Daniel:(stood up) what did you just say? Tina: you heard me. Daniel: I'll just pretend like i didn't hear that. Tina: do what you want. Daniel: you're crossing the line. Tina: and so what? Daniel: just live. Tina: no Daniel: get out or I'll be forced to push you out. Tina:(laughs) in your dreams. Daniel: okay then (he pushed her to the door and pushed her out,she just kept on cursing him before she finally left. Few minutes after she left,Anna came back home from the market and told him. Anna: i met Tina on my way in. Daniel: and so what? Anna: are you guys starting over? Daniel: start over with a girl that is dating my brother? Anna: they've broke up. Daniel: am sorry to say this but you're stupid, i never noticed it. Anna: what? Daniel: i never thought about you this way,but i think you aren't with your senses. Anna: Daniel? Daniel: think about this one more time and break up with him before its too late. Anna: why? Daniel: to be sincere, i never thought about this relationship, i only wanted you to spend a little time with the person you loved,but you over did it,i know you don't love me and never will but at least don't date my brother, break up with him. Anna: i don't want to, let's start our friendship over, i promise to make up by spending enough time with you. Daniel: stop changing the topic. Anna: let's not talk about this anymore please. Daniel: okay then,but you just made a promise and you'll keep it. Anna: do you want us to start now? Daniel: let me help you out in the kitchen. Anna: alright then. Daniel: Ann. Anna: what is it? Daniel: Tomorrow is my birthday. Anna: wow, so you're gonna celebrate it? Daniel: i don't think so. Anna: don't worry, we'll celebrate it together. Daniel: thanks( he held her hand and they went inside the kitchen together) The next day Chris came home and met Daniel and Anna having fun together, he walked close to them and asked Anna. Chris: are you dating me or my brother? Anna: what do you mean? Chris: i called you to come over to the company and you said that you're busy but you're here having fun with my brother. Anna: today is his birthday. Chris: and so what? Is his birthday more important than me? Anna: what has come over you? Is he not your brother? Chris: he is my brother, not yours. Daniel: am sorry for coming between the both of you, thanks Anna (he went into his room) Chris: if this continues,it will be either you chose me or my brother. Anna: that's so rude of you. Chris: i won't warn you again (went into his room and Anna sat down still unhappy)...

Episode 9 Daniel was in his room working out,when Anna came in unexpectedly and touched him,he stood up immediately and asked her. Daniel: what is it? Anna: let's hang out. Daniel: am sorry. Anna: why? Daniel: we can't anymore, focus on your relationship with Chris from now on,I'll be leaving the house soon anyway. Anna: Danny why are you like this now? Daniel: like what? Anna: don't tell me you want to stop our friendship. Daniel: that's exactly what i want. Anna: but i don't want that. Daniel: that's not my business. Anna: how could you? Daniel: what is it? You'll be happy with Chris, isn't that what you wanted ? Anna: but you are.......... . Daniel: i want to dress up,i would like it if you will excuse me. Anna: am not going anywhere. Daniel: okay then,I'll just go and change in the bathroom. (He took his clothes and left The room while couldn't help it so she started to cry.) Patricia was busy typing down some things with her system, she asked Anna to get her water to drink,Anna came back with the water looking sad,so Patricia decided to ask the reason for the sad face. Patricia: what is wrong with you? Anna: nothing mam. Patricia: don't tell me that. What happened?. Anna: I'll get over it. Patricia: i insist that you tell me. Anna: Daniel doesn't want to talk to me anymore (starts crying) Patricia: why? Did you do anything wrong? Anna: i think that its because am dating Chris. Patricia: then forget Daniel and continue with Chris. Anna: i can't.. Patricia: what? Anna: i can't forget Daniel . Patricia: do you.love him? Anna: no that's not it. Patricia: you love him. Anna: Chris said that he broke up with Tina. Patricia: he didn't, why did you believe that trash? Anna: i didn't know. Patricia: now do as i say, break up with Chris and continue with Daniel if he makes you happy................ To be continued.

u better wise in wot u r doing

Anna doesn't know what she wants

indecision is worrying dis girl

let me just observe

What is your decision now? Anna

Hei ya

Anna is a confuse girl

Hmmmm...following

Tel her 4me oh.

observing

girl's can be stupid eh

So the woman is also encouraging in the house relationships

Ann is confuse, she dnt know what she want

Good mother

Just tossing yourself around like coin.

U dnt knw at u wat Anna...better wise up

Episode 10 Anna: but he doesn't want to talk to me. Patricia: don't you get it,Daniel is not happy, cause you are dating Chris. Anna: but..... Patricia: (interrupts her) no buts, break up with Chris. Anna: but ma... Patricia: what? Anna: why are you so relaxed about this? Are you not angry that a poor girl like me is in a relationship with your son? Patricia: i was once like you before i met my husband, my parents tried their best to take care of me, am so grateful to them Even if they are dead now. Anna: wow. Patricia: and Gerald married me even if his parents didn't want me but now i own a hospital with his help. Anna: a hospital? Patricia: yeah but don't tell my children about it. Anna: why? Patricia: am going to hand it over to Daniel as his birthday gift,i want it to be a surprise for him. Anna: wow,that's great. Patricia: so go and have fun with Daniel, he's the one that told me to bring a house help anyway. Anna: thanks a lot ma. Patricia: welcome. Anna: I'll get going now. Patricia: alright (Anna stood up and left) The next day,after everyone left the house living Daniel and Anna at home,Anna ran into Daniel's room and saw him lying down on his bed, she woke him up and he sluggishly stood up from the bed and asked her) Daniel: what is it? Anna: come and take your breakfast. Daniel: why do you look so happy? Anna: cause we're are going out together after you've eaten. Daniel: not again,am not interested in it,infact am not hungry. Anna: young man,go and eat. Daniel: like seriously? Anna: am breaking up with Chris today. Daniel: what? Anna: yeah i decided to. Daniel: really? Hope you aren't joking. Anna: am not,i swear. Daniel: then where are we going to? Anna: now you want to know? Daniel: yeah,at least i don't have to worry about him seeing us together. Anna: okay then go and eat. Daniel: I'll be right out. Anna: be fast, (she left the room) Later in the day,they both went out together, from eating to shopping, and then swimming, after having much fun that day, they came home, immediately they came in,they saw something that surprised them.

Episode 11 They saw Tina and Chris making out on the sofa and were half naked,Chris sprang up immediately he saw them. Chris: you guys are back? Daniel: yeah. Chris: okay. Anna: you guys can continue with what you were doing. Daniel: yeah continue. Anna: Danny let's go in. Chris: Anna. Anna: and it's over between us, have fun with your Tina . Tina: what does she mean? Chris: nothing. Tina: were you dating her? Chris: no i wasn't. Anna: yeah he wasn't and never will. Tina: it better be. Daniel: let's go in Ann.(they went inside his room together) Daniel: how did you find out? Anna: find what out? Daniel: that he is still dating Tina. Anna: your mum told me. Daniel: my Mum? Anna: yeah. Daniel: wow, does she like you that much? Anna: yeah, everyone likes me you know? Daniel: who is deceiving you? Anna: huh? Daniel: who told you that everyone likes you? Anna: do you hate me then? Daniel: yeah. Anna: what? Daniel: i hate you so much. Anna: and now i feel like crying. Daniel: why don't you just cry? I wanna see how you look when you cry. Anna: am not gonna cry. Daniel: i have something to tell you. Anna: what is it? Daniel: forget it. Anna: no tell me. Daniel: its nothing serious, never mind. Anna: please! Daniel: close your eyes. Anna: why? Daniel: just close them. Anna: okay(she closed her eyes) Daniel moved close to her and kissed her,she opened her eyes and moved back immediately. Daniel: am sorry. Anna: no its okay,but why did you do that? Daniel: Ann i love you. Anna: am speechless! Daniel: please be my girl! I promise not to cheat on you and am willing to take care of you and protect you,please just give me the chance. Anna: Daniel can you give me a little time to think about this? Daniel: okay then. Anna: alright..

hmmmmm

family drama

tink about wat? my froend accept

think well

wetin u wan think abt again

Hmmm.. Na lie, she likes you

Hope dis won't lead too family war

Haha just wanna be alittle bit tough

Observing

Am observing

Hehe....

Too straight forward

okay.. Just think very well

family drama

hmmmn *passing by

[color =red]I just read some of the comments on this story. Please its not my story,it was written by @vivian8 . I tagged her at the beginning of the story but after the site returned from upgrade, I didn't see her name there anymore. The story can't be changed again because it has already been written complete by the author @vivian8 . Thanks for understanding dearies.[/color] Episode 12 Tina: something's really bothering me. Anita: what's that? Tina: i think Chris is no longer interested in our relationship. Anita: that's none of my business, sort it out on your own. Tina: come on you are my friend, so you should advice me. Anita: you need an advice? Tina: yeah. Anita: alright, break up with Chris and go back to Daniel. Tina: i don't need your advice anymore. Anita: come on why? Tina: i don't want Daniel. Anita: okay then,go and beg Chris not to live you. Tina: i can't stoop so low before him. Anita: then just watch him dump you. Tina: Anita! Anita: what? Tina: never mind. Anita: okay then ********************************************* A week later,Chris went over to Anna in the kitchen,she turned to look at him when she noticed that he was there, he asked her. Chris: how are you doing? Anna: am fine Chris: that's great. Anna: any problem? Chris: you and Daniel seems so close to reach other. Anna: yeah,anything wrong with it? Chris: do you love him? Anna: why are you asking? Chris: don't pretend to love him when you don't. Anna: how is that your business? Chris: it's my business cause you still love me. Anna: that's a lie. Chris: is it? Anna: yeah. Chris: should we find out then? Anna: why and how? Chris: just don't worry. Anna: i........(before she could say anything else,he dragged her close to his body and kissed her,at first she tried to push him but later allowed him,then she heard her name and pushed him off) Daniel: Ann what's going on? Anna: nothing? Chris: alright am out,see you guys later.(he left) Anna: its not what you think. Daniel: is this the answer you were going to give me today? Anna:no Danny, i didn't know that he was gonna do that. Daniel: but you were enjoying it? Anna: no Daniel. Daniel: have fun( he left the kitchen to his room while Anna followed him)......... To be continued...............

Episode 13 She followed him into his room still begging him. Anna: Daniel am so sorry. Daniel: why are you begging me when am not the one you love? Just go back to him. Anna: i don't love him Danny. Daniel: do you love me then? Does your heart even beat for me the way mine beats for you now? Anna: you've have given me a very warm reception and treated me nicely,so there is no way i would lie to you? Daniel: (he fixed his gaze on her) then tell me,what kind of feeling do you have for me? And please don't give me a negative answer. Anna: Daniel I.......(afraid that she was going to say something stupid, grabbing her head,he sank his lips in hers and they kissed for some seconds and then he stopped and said) Daniel: I really do love you. Anna: I love you too (before she could think of anything else,his lips was already locked up with hers,she totally gave way to submission as he slowly lay her on the bed,then followed by the removal of cotton fabrics, and a frenzied movement of hands and legs,and then she simply let her body melt in his arms as she went into the world she's never been to. ********************************************* After the act,they both lay together on the bed,as Anna dropped her head on his chest,he held her hands and asked her. Daniel: are you alright? Anna: yeah am fine. Daniel: am sorry for making you do that,i didn't know that you were a virgin. Anna: it's okay,as long as its for you. Daniel: thanks a lot. Anna:why are you thanking me? Daniel: for choosing me. Anna: i love you so much. Daniel: love you too. He held her close to his body ,kissed her forehead as she drifted to sleep.

Anna u better not leave Dan and go back to Chris

Hmmm!!

Hmmmm

Issorite

Tina you are done for

Chris nd Tina wl both loose out

hmmm BT seems Anna still ve feelings for Chris...... Danny its left for u to make her love u more

next

hmmmm

Its done, the deal is sealed now

still observing

Stay with Dan oh Chris na player

Tinna na you go loose

HOLD DAT GUY O

Still watching u Ann

Well...I hope u too end up 2geda

next please

lets go there. Am in now!

Episode 14 Tina: do you love that girl? Chris: what girl? Tina: your house help! Chris: what is this all about now? Tina: you were really dating her right? Chris: yes i was!! Tina: what sort of a guy are you? Chris: am even better than you,you dumped my brother just because he isn't the heir. Tina: how is a stupid cheat like you better than me? Chris: i want us to break up,from now on,we're no longer dating. Tina: what? Chris: you heard me. Tina: that will never happen. Chris: who's gonna stop it from happening? Tina: me! Chris: uhm i was going to tell you to start over with my brother but i don't know if he wants you back. Tina: what are you talking about? Chris: figure it out yourself, bye (he left while Tina stood there still confused, when Anita came in saw her,she asked) Anita: what's going on? I saw your boyfriend outside. Tina: Chris dumped me. Anita: like seriously? Tina: do i look like am joking? Anita: no you don't (starts laughing) Tina: is this funny? Anita: to me it is,guess i came at the wrong time,bye(she left) Tina: what's happening? (She sat down and started to cry) ********************************************* A month after the drama with Daniel, Anna began to notice strange things about herself, although she seemed healthy, she noticed that most times she was always dosing off midway, her breasts seemed to grow bigger and she kept on having a feeling of fatigue and drowsiness, when she complained to Patricia about this,she asked her. Patricia: when last did you see your period? Anna: last month. Patricia: am not sure about this yet,you need to go for a checkup. Anna: sure about what ma?

Episode 15 Patricia: you might be pregnant. Anna: how is that possible? Patricia: if you had sex then its possible. Anna: i did have sex but.... Patricia: with who? Anna: Dan...........Daniel. Patricia: really? Anna: but it was only once. Patricia: thats it,half of what you did with Daniel can result to pregnancy. Anna: ma are you sure that am pregnant? If i am and my Mum finds out,she won't want to see me again. Patricia: am not sure yet,we have to go to the hospital ,go and get ready. Patricia took her to the hospital that day,where it was confirmed that she was three weeks pregnant, as they headed out of Patricia's hospital,Anna asked. Anna: what do i do? Patricia: it's up to you,abort it or tell Daniel . Anna: i can't abort it. Patricia: is that what you want? Anna: yes,even if Daniel rejects it,i still won't abort the baby. Patricia: that's what i wanted to hear from you, let's go home and tell Daniel. Anna: ma you are not angry? Patricia: if i was to be angry,then it will be because, you guys were too fast about this. Anna: i wasn't expecting this to happen ma,am sorry. Patricia: it's okay, let's go(they left and luckily when they got home,they saw Daniel and Patricia said to her.) Patricia: go and tell him(she went into her room,living the both of them) Daniel: tell me what? Anna: Daniel i...... Daniel: did anything bad happen? Anna: no just that.... Daniel: you are scaring me. Anna: am pregnant......... Daniel: i knew it. Anna: you knew? Daniel: i noticed it. Anna: how? Patricia: (came out of her room dressed up) Daniel's a gynaecologist, am off to work.(she left) Anna: is that true? Daniel: yeah,so it turned out to be true? Anna:and you didn't tell me. Daniel: i wasn't sure. Anna: i really can't believe that am pregnant, what will i tell my mother? Daniel: come on what's wrong with being pregnant? Anna: am not married. Daniel:then let's get married. Anna: really? Daniel: yeah. Anna: thanks a lot. Daniel: it's nothing (hugs her)......................

It's very rare to find people like Patricia

lol

Yeah

True talk

Nice one

Dan do it fast heya Tina he don drop u off

gud story nxt plz

Tina dumped, Anna married, Daniel happy, Chris living his wayward life. Tina a double loser

Wow, what a mother!

U two should get marry quick before it will be late

Patricia is a nice and cool woman

Patricia is such a wonderful person

WOW O O GOOD

Following

Nice choice . . U two should get marry soon

that's good. ride on

Wow! So easily...tank God Patricia is a good woman

lolZ

WOW

Hmmmmmmm...

Yeah @jummybabe U're damn right about this being [color =red]family drama[/color]...

i foresee danger. Chris can't take that in good fate

This story is interesting bt its too straight forward. Please add to d twist and suspense

IS THIS STORY ON STRIKE?

THIS IS ONE PROBLEM WITH COOLVAL...DUMPING STORIES HALFWAY

@priceless36 sweety next episode loading

Episode 16 Final episode Ann's wedding day was set up to be at the ending of the month,Margret came over to Patricia's house to see her daughter, they spent a lot of time together that day and even went together to pick a place,where the reception will take place,Chris himself was happy for his brother, all this while they didn't know that he knew about the hospital his mother owned, but he told them the truth that day. Chris: so the hospital will be a wedding gift now? Patricia: what? Chris: i mean your hospital. Patricia: who told you that? Chris: i found out myself. Patricia: really? Gerald: i told him! Patricia: and he can't Even keep a secret. Gerald: i can! Patricia: like seriously? Gerald: yeah. Daniel: so me and Ann are the only ones that doesn't know? Anna: i knew. Daniel: and you didn't tell me? Anna: it was meant to be a secret. Daniel: whatever. Chris: Dan. Daniel: yes Chris: am sorry for everything. Daniel: it's okay,let the past take care of itself. Chris: thanks a lot Lil bro. Daniel: welcome. ********************************************* Daniel received a phone call that day from Tina, she wanted to meet with him,Daniel decided to go and see her,they were both seating down in a restaurant ,after much talks and everything, Tina told him her reason on why she wanted to meet him. Tina: Daniel let's start over. Daniel: what? Tina: please, i promise not to repeat what happened before. Daniel: am sorry but we can't Tina: i know you can't forgive me now,just think about it please. Daniel:(stood up) Tina am getting married. Tina: what? Daniel: am getting married soon. Tina: to who? Daniel: to Ann. Tina: who's Ann? Daniel: my fiance,that used to be our house help. Tina: if this is a joke,please stop it. Daniel: am not joking and please i have to go home now,nice meeting you.(he picked his car key and left) ********************************************* The couples matched to the altar where the exchanged vows and rings,Anna couldn't help but smile through out,up till the moment they were to exchange kisses, and after the ceremony, they went over to their new house,a gift from Daniel's father. Tina couldn't help but cry,she locked herself up in her room,Anita came over and tried her best to make her come out but she refuse to,so she was just left alone to cry. * * * * * * The night after the wedding, Daniel lay on the bed with his wife Anna,he quietly asked her,almost whispering. Daniel: can we try it again? Anna: try what? Daniel: you know what am talking about? Anna: no we aren't trying anything. Daniel: come on. Anna: no,(she said as she stood up from the bed and made her way to the bathroom,while Daniel got up and followed her) Light fades.... THE END Tnks for reading, next story coming up

congrats to Daniel and Ann Tina deserve what she got. she now lost two brothers Nice story

D End

Lovely ending

wow

Nice story.. Nice ending.. Thumbs up

Nice

(in john lagend's voice) there is a happy ending

Nice story

congrats nice story

nice one bro

Nice Ending

Nice story.

Yes....I luv de ending, Tina, u can go 2 hell, gold digger

following nice story

hu? e don finish? Ahahahah! Nice one though.

nice story

U ar narratin,try makin it expository. nice piece

Nice but it's kinda too long with less details