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MY WIFE & I

MY WIFE & I

By somkhid in 29 May 2015 | 12:53
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MY WIFE AND I.
written by Temitope Daniel.

Copyright owner- Temitope Daniel Abimbola 2014.



****episode 1********
It’s been a while I set my eyes on her.
Not even a while, what am I saying? It’s
been four solid years now! We just lost
contact when we were coming from the
city of Lagos and attacked by armed
robbers who took my vehicle away.
Unluckily for me, my love was in the car
and wasn’t allowed to come down with
me.
For that four years, I have searched
even holes of crabs if she was there. She
was the love of my life and everything I
had. As much as I love my mother,
there’s just a little difference between
my love for her and that. And, I didn’t
know her parents, siblings, none of her
family members. But we really loved each
other.
I never knew I would exist without
her, until she was taken away from me.
And to my surprise, I’m still alive today.
Honestly, I thought it was my end at the
end of the first week that she wasn’t
found. I cried my eyes out that even my
parents chided me that I would just kill
myself if I didn’t take it off my heart. But,
honestly, it wasn’t an easy thing.
A week developed into two, and into a
month, from a month to twelve and now
fourty-eight months now. When my
parents saw that I was becoming
useless, old enough to marry without a
wife, they brought Nora to me.
Honestly I never knew there was still
someone more beautiful than my Gloria.
Gloria had been lost for four years but
the unfading beauty she had never
faded off my heart. My heart gladdened
on seeing Nora. She was just the
epitome of beauty.
I was shocked when I saw her
beautiful set of teeth, hers was even
whiter than snow. She was tall, elegant
and more than rich in glamour. I never
knew I would fall in love until I started
falling the well dug for me- the love.
Even though I had started liking Nora,
I never fogot Gloria. My parents didn’t
know Gloria though, but when I
explained my issue to them, they knew I
lost a gem. One thing of great surprise
was that Gloria and Nora had the same
redolence.
I loved that.
I never told Nora about Gloria, but
even though I have started loving her
too, I couldn’t flow well with her. I can’t
place my hands on the actual reason
behind that! I don’t know if I even love
her sef. Is that love or what? Or shey
that is what they call infatuation? I no
know jare.
Maybe it her her beauty, redolence
and personality that made me like her.
But, see, I don’t even know!
Me who is telling you all these, I never
know say the same thing wey happen to
me don happen to Nora too before oh.
Honestly I never knew Nora had fallen
in love it Alex before. It was one day that
both were inside the house, gisting
when some armed robbers came and
shot Alex. The news was that Alex had
died but no one knew he never died.
Not knowing Alex’s parents who were
stinkly rich had flown him abroad for
better treatment. He wasn’t allowed to
leave America for years and so, lost
contact with Nora too.
You now see say I don enter trouble?
Real one! Nora never forgot Alex too.
She was just trying to be herself anytime
she was with me.
But Alex and I had and even have
different redolences. If not, she might
have loved me more than how she does.
You see something, I never forgot Gloria,
she never forgot Alex!
Hmmn… Okay oh. The saddest thing is
that Alex returned back from America
last year and had also fallen in love with
Gloria. My own love is now in love with
Nora’s love. Big trouble!
The big problem started suddenly
when it was a day to the wedding of
Nora and I. We haven’t gotten each
other well, but we thought we would
make it up and forget the ones we loved
before. Though, she never knew about
Gloria and I didn’t know about Alex.
I thought I should act according to my
best friend’s advice, by getting her a
golden necklace as a gift before
wedding. I decided to take her out and
parked at the front of Esmak Plaza to get
the surprise for her.
29 May 2015 | 12:53
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*******episode 2******* The car was parked and Daniel got down from the Toyota Venza. He looked at Nora and smiled as he motioned inside the plaza. He had told her to wait for him outside there, he was just wanted to get something. Still unknown to Nora, she patiently waited. She had waited for some minutes and decided to peep outside because she had been busy pinging her friends and wedding planner. Then, her peep met Alex’s stare. She couldn’t help her ecstasy but to rush to meet Alex. Both of them hugged each other firmly for seconds until Daniel came outside and met the scene. It seemed Nora’s ecstasy had made her forgotten that she would get married the next day. Daniel didn’t know Alex, but even if that was her brother, the hug shouldn’t be as firm as it was! He had thought as the package he was holding dropped down and his mouth wide open. By the time Nora would know she was doing the wrong thing, she saw Daniel’s face and froze also. Alex, looking away also saw the face of his wife-to-be that he had told to park by the entrance of Esmak Plaza and his heart skipped a beat. Daniel swooshed out a long breath as he managed hold his tears back. He walked into the car and Nora rushed into the car too. She wouldn’t leave her husband-to-be to leave angrily. Daniel, also pulling out of the Plaza indignantly now saw Gloria and marched on the brake quickly. Was he seeing a ghost? What was really happening? He parked the vehicle and rushed down. “Gloria?” He shouted as he widened his eyes and moved closer. The name made Gloria look the direction and saw him too. “Daniel!” She called as the key to her vehicle that she was holding dropped on the floor. Daniel couldn’t hold himself back, both rushed to each other also, not minding the fact that they were engaged. **** The bond of love was still there! As I saw her, I wanted to die. I thought I just saw a ghost now, if she was, I was ready to follow her! No! I still loved her so much that I couldn’t hold back myself. Maybe that was how Alex and Nora felt too. But, I still loved her. I wiped my tears continuously as I looked into her eyes. She had grown more beautiful and matured. Gloria was my life. Looking back, I saw Nora, already out of the car, looking at me. Alex had also stood akimbo, looking at Gloria and I, then I knew I was done for too. At first, I thought it was tit for tat but I felt uncomfortable. Is this how Nora is feeling presently? I asked myself as I saw Gloria also looking at Alex. Then Alex approached us and nabbed Gloria’s hand. He pushed her into the vehicle and drove away. I looked at the Hyundai car as it sped off until I was unable to see the vehicle again. I walked back to my car and looked at Nora who was probably in shock or… what should I even call this? We both entered into the vehicle and I drove off. The car just remained silent. I wasn’t pleased with what she did and she wasn’t pleased with mine. **** WEDDING DAY. …Story continues 2morrow
29 May 2015 | 12:56
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29 May 2015 | 13:05
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@Somkhid lolz even thouqh u no call me but na me 1st arrive here o........ Viz is kul.....nyc twist here bt i would suqqest Alex moves on wid his first love i.e Nora and Daniel should do same wid Gloria......well let c how it qoes...... Nwanu!
29 May 2015 | 14:28
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Uhmmm.. Tnx 4 calling me... I've nt been following most of ur stories (i'm sorry)... Na wrk nd nepa.. But no matter what i'm gonna read dis 2 da end... Fire on! Emi gan gan ni first lady... *winks* na me be d first lady wey sign in
29 May 2015 | 15:03
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welcum on board @Tenniebenson my first lady @pizzaro am sorry 4 nt inviting u so many tinz dae my mind
29 May 2015 | 16:17
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Chaaaiii..... Twuale for you @Somkhid ...Thanks so much Sir... . . . Daniel went there just to surprise Nora, and to their amazement, the surprise they both saw there is enough to make a history... two-losing-heart-lover met two-losing-heart-lover and the confusion was just only on the first one..... Interesting.....
29 May 2015 | 16:43
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Thanks @sohmkid. This is really gonna be interesting
29 May 2015 | 17:03
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I still gat some list too @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994
29 May 2015 | 17:07
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thanks boss @sohmkid eleyi gidi Gan o...
29 May 2015 | 17:17
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Nyc show,continue pls
29 May 2015 | 18:02
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wow multiple calls...i'm here oh wheres my alomo and pop corn
29 May 2015 | 18:38
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Am present
29 May 2015 | 18:49
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No probz ooooo bro..........
29 May 2015 | 19:25
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Am on board sir Its gona be interesting Pls continue
29 May 2015 | 23:38
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Wot of me,u guys dn't wnt to invite me,is it becos iam new here.(sobbing,crying,weeping at thesame time)
30 May 2015 | 03:17
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Gan gan gan!web of confusion.
30 May 2015 | 03:48
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gud day friends pls vote 4 me as d coolval writer of the month pls u vote counts just follow dis link https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/coolval22-com-writer-of-the-month-of-may-2015/ i wont disappoint u guys wit action story pls am on my knee beging make me proud
30 May 2015 | 05:34
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Yes am present thanx @somkid and @T-DAK.....wedding day hope say e go beta nice one @somkid my boss.
30 May 2015 | 07:15
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Yea, I don show face. Thankz @ T.DAK
30 May 2015 | 07:50
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I don cum d second in command GCFR***na me dey here oya wey ma seat
30 May 2015 | 08:10
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Phenkz hunnn@T dak Khola don retire niii?? Dat was a short list ooo@t dak Nice
30 May 2015 | 08:40
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******episode 3******** It was a beautiful day with friends and family members at the venue to celebrate with Daniel and Nora. At first, Daniel had thought Alex would be at the solemnization ceremony to claim the ownership of Nora or Gloria would come to claim his ownership. Since the incident had happened, Daniel never called Nora to speak with her, Nora never did too. Daniel who had carried her in his car to drop her off at home didn’t speak to her at all, even when she got down from the vehicle, none of them could bid a goodbye. Daniel felt jealous that Nora could go back to hug Alex, a day to the wedding and Nora likewise, wondering if the love Daniel had for her was a true one. If it was, why would he go and New Gloria? Though none of them knew the ex of the other until that day the scene happened. Nora had felt Daniel was a bad person, why would he even if try to return back to Gloria for a hug, Daniel too never accepted the fact that he was wrong. At least, it was Nora that hugged Alex first, by the way, he couldn’t hold himself back when he sighted Gloria. None of them could put the blame on him or herself, they both thought the other counterpart was wrong. Thanks to God that the wedding was success, even though it was a very tough part when they heard you may kiss your bride. Daniel just let out a short air from his mouth as he moved his mouth closely and kissed the pretty figure before him. He also knew she was extremely beautiful that day. It was a big surprise to the two that they couldn’t interact well, even though it was their wedding day. Daniel carried Nora when it was time to take photographs, and grinned mischievously as if they were in good terms. One who could study well would know things weren’t nice between the two. None could approach the other, it was the beginning of their trouble. **** The aroma of the food from the kitchen filled his nostrills. His head went both left and right almost instantaneously as he shook off the aroma. That was jollof rice that he could smell well, he had thought as he opened his eyes at once. It really was! He affirmed. Daniel turned his head to the left side of the bed but Nora was nowhere to be found. He couldn’t remember what really happened the previous night, it seemed he just entered into the room and sprawled on the bed because he was so tired. It wasn’t easy to be a groom, especially one who was wise to play between his wife and the invited guests and family members. “Did she sleep inside this room?” Daniel had thought as he giggled. Nothing more came to his memory than he drove into the compund in his own car and Nora was driven by the driver, in her own car. That was the matrimonial room, why wouldn’t she sleep there? He took his stand slowly, walking to the other side of the Queen-Sized mattress to survey if there were shoes or jewelries on the drawer, but he was wrong, it really didn’t look as if Nora slept inside that room. He walked to the bathroom and washed his face, took up his purple brush and brushed his mouth up. He walked out and put off his clothes into casual wears, at least he had to check out the house before getting set for church service. But, it was their wedding thanksgiving, he had thought as he thudded down the bed and jacked his head down. He began to wonder why Nora never came into that room to sleep with him. Why? He continued asking himself as if there were spirits around that’d respond to him after a while. He was wrong, no spirit replied his questions. He just felt they were rhetorical questions, but, it seemed the rhetorical questions in his mind needed answers. Was she really angry because of his reactions yesterday in the wedding program? Was it because of Gloria’s issue? He couldn’t just provide an accurate answer to the puzzling questions disturbing his life that moment. He swallowed again as he whisked to his feet and pressed his lips together. He clenched his finger and walked to the front of the dressing mirror to check himself out. “Daniel, I won’t eat that food she’s preparing,” he thought as he looked at his tall and handsome self. He nodded along with his though and turned around, he had to check the compound, driver and gate keeper out before dressing up for church. He had always been warned to fast to church but had never fasted, he felt that day would mark he day of his effective change. He walked into the living room and turned his neck to view what was happening in the kitchen, she was there preparing breakfast. He cleared his throat and cloistered outside, into the compound.
30 May 2015 | 09:08
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******episode 4********* Nora turned the gas cooker off. She didn’t know if well or bad she was doing, but she felt she had taken the right decision. Daniel had been taciturn to her, just doing his things his way, why should she try to go on well with him too? She didn’t like how the two of them kept laughing a kind of laughter that wasn’t down to the heart on the wedding day. She felt Daniel had probably met the lady he had dated before and wouldn’t want her again, so, trying to move away from him might solve the case in a way. She rested against the solid maple cabinets. It was a big and beautiful kitchen with halogen flash mounts and track light that produced an excellent lighting in the kitchen. She walked to the microwave and stood near it. There was a Kenmore smooth surface range with oversize oven window, also an osterilizer blender stood beside the microwave and behind her was a dishwasher and a double bowl ceramic sink with disposal. It was a very beautiful kitchen Daniel ensured she had. She felt Daniel didn’t like her again, even though she hugged Alex, she didn’t expect him to retailiate too. He just tried to pay her back in her own coin, she had thought as she snorted. She had been trying to put her hopes up, thinking the relationship wouldn’t continue that way. She had no courage to speak to him because she felt he was angry, Daniel on ther hand was disappointed in her, he also felt she would feel the same to way to him. So, how would he go before her and make an utterance? ** ** ** Alex rolled on the mattress as he took a glimpse at the wall clock that was tickling softly. He felt it was moving faster than expected as he picked up his phone. He stared at his wallpaper for a moment and dropped the phone again. He had forgotten about Nora already, why did she come to cast a shadow again? His days in America had been so boring and sad because Nora was not there. Seeing Gloria’s image as his wallpaper made him remember the day he crossed his mind to forget Nora completely. Did he even forget her completely? As he had always said, there is something spectacular about one’s first love. It had been very tough, if not, why didn’t he hold himself back at the sight of Nora? He remembered how he pulled Gloria by the hand into his vehicle so they could leave the plaza so that they wouldn’t complicate the issue even more. He was a Christian but a non- practicing one. He had never believed in the existence of a God, not even a god too. He liked being himself and that was one major thing that did cause trouble between him and Gloria. Gloria was a chorister in her church and had always encouraged him to come to church with her, but he wouldn’t listen. He had never remembered Nora ever telling him about Christ Jesus. He felt Gloria was becoming a burden when it was time to proof one’s religious life and belief. He never for once stopped by in church, he really hated it. He believed there was no God, no eternity, sins are just ways by which we make living, sins are normal things needed to be done. He left with Gloria on Friday and both never discussed till he got to the front of her house and parked. The first thing that came out of his mouth was to ask who Daniel was. Gloria never minded him, she just curved her lips into a smile. “A long lost lover.” He was indignant. That was Gloria that had always told him about Christ, in sin! “Don’t you know it’s a sin to hug a guy who’s not your lover?” Gloria who didn’t know what precisely to say so she could get herself outta Alex’s blame just cleared her throat and glanced at him. “It’s not in the Bible.” Alex just laughed. That had been baffling him. She told him no such thing was in the Bible and came down form his vehicle, walking away. Who now created God! He thought within himself with a sneer and drove away. At least, he knew no one created God, muslims who also believe in Allah, he needed to know who created Allah for him to believe Allah created him. In fact, he wished to know who created the gods so that he could believe that the gods actually exist. Scam! He would think and hiss. A knock at door made him know he had gone far in his pipe dream and raised his head. It was past eight in the morning and he hadn’t spoken with Gloria since he dropped her off. He just stared at her picture as his wallpaper and had been thinking since then. He walked to the living room to know who was there. Opening the door, he took a gaze at the fellow, it was Gloria. ** ** ** The living room was though small but was full. It was beautiful and was well decorated with vases, decoys, moose and bear figures. He had no Christian tapestries in the house, a Sony tape deck, AIWA portable stero and a pine coffe table that stood in a side of the living room. The sofas were brown, big and beautiful with mathing lamps on either side of each sofa. “Welcome in here.” Alex said as he opened the door and walked to a sofa to pick his seat. “Alex, you couldn’t call.” Gloria walked in behind her. “Why would I call? At least you told me it is not a sin to hug another guy, why are you here, then?” “I’m going on to church but just stopped by to ask you few questions.” Alex looked at her. “I hope this is not a way to preach sermons to me? I’m not ready for all that today.” He dismissed her with a wave of hand. “Absolutely no. I came to ask you who the lady you hugged is.” She said. Alex laughed. “I won’t tell you until you tell me who the guy you hugged is.” “Alright, I know you. He is a friend of mine, a long lost one.” She replied. “Exactly! She’s also a long lost friend, Gloria.” He laughed. “I knew it! You know we’re getting married in some weeks time, Alex, tell me whatever it is that you feel for me.” Alex chuckled. “What’s this princess saying all of a sudden? I’m a gentle guy, you know that.” “I don’t know that! You hugged that lady, didn’t you?” “You also hugged that guy, have you forgotten?” “Alex!” “Gloria!” ** ** **
30 May 2015 | 09:13
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@Nizzy am so sorry for that. Well have added you to my list now so I am gonna call when another pops up. Thanks and feel free to explore.
30 May 2015 | 10:18
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wao! this is really nice. Thanks @T-Dak for the calling @somkhid keep d tape rolling
30 May 2015 | 10:37
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pls vote for me as coolval writer of the month@somkhid
30 May 2015 | 11:54
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tanks 4 inviting me@somkhid
30 May 2015 | 12:23
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Intresting continue plss
30 May 2015 | 13:42
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Lol...funny couples...all e yhu re guilty buh pride won't let yhu guys be..thanks for the multiple invite @somhkid n @T.DAK..nice story
30 May 2015 | 14:04
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@nash you are welcome okay. And have added you to the list. Feel free and explore and please don't forget to share. Thanks.
30 May 2015 | 14:09
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@Somkhid, thanks for d IV cos I for miss ooh. Dis is love in tangling.
30 May 2015 | 16:25
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9ce story, more power 2 ur elbow
30 May 2015 | 18:32
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No call from anybody hmmmmmmm
30 May 2015 | 19:33
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Dem no wan admit.... i just dey observe the four of them...
30 May 2015 | 20:11
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no one saw me worthy to be invited. but thank God am here even on time. NO PROBLEM.
30 May 2015 | 20:16
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Nice story wit so much love in the air. suspence looming around.
30 May 2015 | 20:17
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Sitting on d high table......Clears throat*
30 May 2015 | 20:30
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Tnx 4 d double invitation. Somkhid is always doing d best. As usual, I won't miss dis, ride on.
30 May 2015 | 20:30
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You guys did not invite me, well God dey, cause I will not call u guys 2 join me when I will be made SA to GMB. Nice story @Somkhid
31 May 2015 | 03:06
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let the story begin
31 May 2015 | 04:29
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Make una dey try call me naa
31 May 2015 | 05:32
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Loving da story Keep it up sooo cool :) Need frnds am new tho bin reading stories without commenting **
31 May 2015 | 07:10
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An interesting love story to read and possibly learn from. De starting shows its a departure from de Onihaxy bleeping bleeping stories
31 May 2015 | 07:30
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Welcom on board Licia
31 May 2015 | 07:33
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No body even invited me just bcos am not always commenting.....its not fair oh.@ Somkhid ride oh
31 May 2015 | 09:49
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@ somkhid tnx
31 May 2015 | 09:54
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Am sorry t bak i hear ur alert bt i hav a problem wit my phone so tankz 4 da alert.... Da story iz doing great
31 May 2015 | 11:36
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welcome @calisto @hbk @frank @davick @whistler @sirp081 @kristen @licia~cutes @whistler No be say we know wan invite its just that we don't have the name of all cool Val's readers, commenters, followers and the likes. Sorry if ur name is not mentioned but since u are here u are welcomed once again. Thanks and feel free to explore.
31 May 2015 | 16:27
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Thanks guys for inviting me
31 May 2015 | 17:40
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@T.DAK thnks 4 inviting. Roll on
1 Jun 2015 | 06:14
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@T-DAK, AM GRATEFUL
1 Jun 2015 | 09:57
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*******Episode 5******** Daniel didn’t know if he would be served breakfast once he entered into the house back, he felt he didn’t have to embarrass himself by trying to sit down and wait for the breakfast and at the end of the day, Nora wouldn’t behave as if she knew him at all. Daniel paced into the living room and sat down. He was a Christian but he didn’t take everything so serious that he had to leave for church as early as possible. He even hated Sunday School lessons, he liked getting to the church for the service by ten am than getting to church for Sunday School. He picked up the remote control of the 45 inches flat screen LG television and that of the decoder that was beside him and tuned the channel of the decoder if he could see a movie for few minutes before getting prepared for the service. He started seeing the movie when Nora got to the dining room and served the food there. She just sat down. She didn’t know Daniel’s mind and wouldn’t want a situation where she would call him for his breakfast and he wouldn’t answer her at all. I think if he’s hungry, he would come for his food here. Nora had thought as she began to eat her own food. Daniel who was hungry kept turning his head towards the dining room, wondering when Nora would stop her bad attitudes. He didn’t know what would become of him if he walked to the dining, beside her to eat. What if she packs her food? He had thought as he faced the television set again. Few minutes after Nora finished eating, she walked to the kitchen and got her plate washed. She thereafter rushed inside the house to freshen up and prepare for that Sunday Service. Daniel motioned to the dining room and beside the dining table as he peeped inside the serving plates. He opened one of them and the aroma filled his void stomach. He felt like eating the food, he didn’t know his boundary since he hugged Gloria. Abeg, I no dey eat. He muttered as he closed the plate but not exactly as Nora closed it up. He switched off the television set and walked inside the room to take his bath too. ** ** ** “When will you give your life to Christ?” Gloria suddenly introduced into the discussion of herself and Alex. Alex looked at her with leery eyes and hissed. “I think you’ve done enough here, Gloria.” He whisked to his feet. “Enough here?” She smiled broadly. “Let’s go to church, Alex.” She said. “Gloria, I said I am not ready to go to any church, na by force?” “How would I get married to a man who wouldn’t teach my children about the ways of the Lord, Alex? No!” “You have started again. Marriage is all about take me or leave me! Several ladies are out there and they want me badly.” Gloria chuckled and frowned almost immediately. “Then get those ladies, Alex! If you don’t follow me to church today, that’s the end between us.” Alex laughed. “I knew it, Gloria! I suspected from the scratch that you’ve been looking for my weak points so that you can go on with Daniel, right?” Gloria became indignant. “Hell no! Why on earth would I do such? But why on earth are you also an unbeliever? Why? Why can’t you believe in God? Why do you find it difficult to go to church?” “I told you ealier, Gloria. A man who would preach to an unbeliever, his own life must glorify your God first. It’s only if your God can show himself to me, if he can show how mighty he is, then, I’ll serve him.” He grinned. “I’m off.” Gloria said and stood up. “Alright, great!” Alex felt fulfilled as he lead the way to the door and locked it up immediately Gloria left.
1 Jun 2015 | 10:15
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*********Episode 6******** **dedicated to all my fans dat voted for me** Daniel. Yes, we have said it before, haven’t we? Thank God we even talked about the dress we would put on today before everything crashed now. But wait, what’s up with this thanksgiving we are going for today? What’s in this marriage that worths thanksgiving? Now, how can I give proper thanks to God now when I’m hungry? How would someone sit in church and would listen to the Pastor with an empty stomach? Haha! Daniel, ko possible na, at aaall! I know I’m just going to church for going sake today unless I get something to eat. But wait, what’s up with Nora? Why has she been behaving this way? I have said it that I wouldn’t invite anyone to come and settle any dispute between my wife and I, but how would this just end? Why did she sleep in a different room? Why! *** Nora. Why did he hug that lady? He should have known I hugged Alex because I wasn’t in my right state of mind, it wasn’t deliberate. I know he hugged that lady because I also hugged Alex. But what else have I done now? Why’s he not talking to me? I don’t think he has eaten his meal, if I try to speak to him now and he just snubs me, what will I do? I don’t wish to tell my friends about this, but who will solve all this problems of ours? Tomorrow is February 14, should I keep hoping he will surprise me tomorrow? He didn’t even greet me a good morning, he didn’t behave like he saw me at all.. Daniel! ** ** ** Nora walked into the dining room and hastened to the food she covered. I didn’t leave it this way.. She muttered as she took a close look at the plates and smiled as she opened it. “He didn’t eat it.” She frowned as she saw that. He had probably came to check what I cooked and snubbed my food away, she had thought as she looked sad and sighed, rushing to the living room to get her pair of wedge shoes on. She had dressed in a black suit and looked so perfect, waiting for Daniel to come out in black suit too. After she saw him come out and was sure he also had black suit on, she quickly motioned to her car and called on the driver. “Off we go.” She said. Daniel waited for a while again and kept glancing at the food. He didn’t know if he should just sat the food or just leave for the church and would get something to eat after the service. “Best option.” He muttered as he entered into his car and drove off to church. ** ** **
1 Jun 2015 | 10:18
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Chie there z God oh,bt i thought my lover my wife is a name of a philipian movie.
1 Jun 2015 | 12:40
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yes ooo it is name of a philipian movie.i just dicided to gv it tat title
1 Jun 2015 | 13:00
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See the four of them sef... Them no know Weytin to do
1 Jun 2015 | 13:09
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Who'll solve their problems?
1 Jun 2015 | 13:32
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gud one bro!!
1 Jun 2015 | 13:42
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Dis one too bad ooo
1 Jun 2015 | 14:40
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Dis people are funny......why not make the first move and stop thinkinq of how u'll be treated......
1 Jun 2015 | 14:47
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Daniel and Nora are very funny oo, they are acting like kids, as if they can read each other's mind. Hmm, how can a marriage start like this? Its only the beginning sha......
1 Jun 2015 | 15:58
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Nora I tire for you oooo. Hw cld u abandon ur husband all alone in ur matrimonial bed on ur wedding night and still expects him to be cool with u and even greet u. So its not his duty to first greet u? Daniel ur own dey do u self! U don turn urself into a God dat can read peoples mind. Its a good thing both of u dosen't want a 3rd party in ur marriage.
1 Jun 2015 | 16:21
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Wat iz diz violet all about tennie nah u and khola46 go solve diz problem oo becuz nah tennie b daniel mother and nah khola46 b alex father @khola46 @tenniebenson hlp am having da same problem wit my fiance
1 Jun 2015 | 16:44
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This is a sign of love and jealousy between Daniel and Norah...
1 Jun 2015 | 20:08
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The big question now is WHO WILL SOLVE THEIR PROBLEM?
2 Jun 2015 | 03:00
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everybodi is askin wo will solve their problem....daniel,nora,gloria,alex pls try and see me afta the church service we have to talk on dis matter....plssss
2 Jun 2015 | 06:42
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One of them should make the first move, and in that way they will be able to east the tension BTW them.
2 Jun 2015 | 07:57
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Hehehe Funny hus-b and Wifey..please oo yhu both should swallow yhur pride to live wella.Ride on jawe @smokhid
2 Jun 2015 | 09:56
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Dis peepz get crayfish 4 head o.... So becos of ordinary hug??? Dey never loved each other...nd d most pointless of dem all is Alex... I can never marry a non-christian... I dey sleep?
2 Jun 2015 | 18:01
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What a perfect family!!!
2 Jun 2015 | 18:45
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My wife or my lover
3 Jun 2015 | 02:34
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*******Episode 7*********** dedicated to all my whatsapp friends DANIEL. I don’t know what I have gotten myself into, I really don’t know why everything has turned out to be like this? Why’s Nora this way? Why’s she treating me like this? Oh God! At least, you know all things, I’m too sure that you’ve known all this would happen from the scratch, why did you take Gloria away from me! Why! At least if I had known everything would turn out this way, would hsve adopted celibacy. I would! Why did she sleep in another room? There’s no honeymoon, nothing, just nothing! I repeat, nothing! What will I do? Will this marriage continue this way, lord? Will it? NORA. Daniel, only God knows what else that I have done to him. I know I ought not to hug Alex, but, he hugged another lady too now. Daniel actually did! Why am I facing the music now? Why? I was afraid of sleeping beside him the night of our wedding, what if he woke up and sent me out of the room? Honestly, I can’t just comprehend this. Why is he not talking to me? He’s been taciturn as if we’ve been in this issue for years. This is his car following mine, I knw he didn’t eat that food, he didn’t ask me why I couldn’t sleep beside him, Daniel, why? ** ** ** “Surprise!” Tonia grinned as she sighted Nora. Nora was shocked. She took a close look before he beam turned to a sudden grin and rushed toward Tonia. “Sister Tonia.” She hugged her tight with smiles all over her face. “How are you dear?” Tonia grinned as she pulled her cheeks. “I’m doing good, ma.” She continued grinning. “I’m sure you’re good. I’m sure my brother would have given you a nice treat enough for you to forget your name?” Her grin turned to a faint smile and she nodded. “You never told me you’d come here for church service, Sis.” “Don’t mind us. I even came with Mum and Daniel’s younger brother.” She said. “Really?” Nora smiled. “Where’s Mum?” She enquired. “She’s inside the auditorium, just to surprise you, dear.” She pulled her cheeks again. “Thanks so much sister.” Nora said. “But where’s your husband? Why didn’t you two come together in the same car?” “Urgh… your brother?” Nora chuckled. “He said would come in his own car, don’t mind him.” She smiled. “Hmmn… Alright, he shouldn’t come late because the other couple that wants to have their thanksgiving are already in church and the service starts soon.” Tonia said. Nora nodded and smiled. “Alright, would call him.” She said. “Good. Come inside soon.” Tonia tapped her shoulder and walked inside the church. As soon as she walked inside, Nora looked around why is he not yet here? She wondered and sighed. ** ** ** Daniel parked his car at the front of the Church and came down. He adjusted his blazer and pressed his lips together. His eyes caught that of Nora who had been waiting for him out there for some minutes. He had gone to get something to eat. One thing he really hated was playing wih his stomach. He preffered eating to any other thing apart from his life. He would always say when there’s no food, there’s no life. Why did he take his eyes off now? He doesn’t want to see me right? Nora had thought as she motioned inside the church. She just neglected me, she’s leaving angrily. Daniel heaved a sigh before he walked inside the Church too. ** ** ** 4pm. Daniel was glad everything went well in Church. The thoughts had been a burden to him earlier, brewing if the Church wouldn’t know of the problem he had gotten himself into. He had stepped out of the room and met another served food on the dining set. He just stared at it and didn’t know if it’d be a problem once eaten. He didn’t want what would crush his marriage early, but this problem was a great factor that could ruin his marriage. As he thudded down the sofa in the living room and tuned the television set, his phone buzzed and he reached for it. “Mart man, how far now?” He said with a smile. “Really? King’s Place? On my way.” He grinned as he sprung up to his feet. Nora rushed out of the room. She just remembered that she had to see a movie by 4pm. She halted as she saw Daniel and looked as if she just saw a ghost, surprised and shocked. Daniel didn’t even look at her before he rushed to the room to make a change of clothing and rushed to meet his friend- Martins at King’s Place.
3 Jun 2015 | 13:17
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*******Episode 8******** ** ** ** Martins stroke his beard. He looked his left and saw Daniel as he walked inside the eatery. He stood up and both exchanged hands, greeting each other. “Come on, oko iyawo sit down and enjoy your moment.” Martins said Daniel chuckled. “Guy, how far now?” He took his seat. “I’ve been good, Dan. Wao! Congratulations concerning your wedding, boy.” “Who’s your boy?” Daniel laughed. Martins shrugged with a grin. “You have forgotten that you’re my boy, right? Anyways, I called you here for something important.” Martins narrowed his eyes. “Really?” Daniel adjusted his seat as he listened. “Sure, Dan. I just knew there’s no other person who can help me but you.” “What’s the issue, Martins?” He enquired. “I need you to help me talk to a lady, Dan. I don’t know, I just don’t know why she’s been taciturn to me.” Daniel laughed. “Don’t tell me you’ve called me here to help you talk to a lady, Martins.” Martins smiled. “This isn’t funny, Dan. Please, will you help me?” Daniel continued laughing. “Why will a gentle guy like me come here to greet you and ordinary water can’t be offered by you.” Martins laughed. “Abeg, Daniel. Let’s solve this problem first, please.” “Who’s this girl and why’s she not answering you?” “Maybe because I’m not handsome. You know you are, if she sees someone good beside me, I’m sure she’ll give in.” “You simply want me to speak with her on your behalf, right?” “Sure.” Martins nodded. “Where she dey na?” He asked with a smile. “We have to visit her, Daniel.” Martins said. Daniel swooshed out a long breath as he sprung to his feet. “May we?” Martins grinned. “Thanks so much, Daniel.” He stood up and both walked out. ** ** ** Martins and Daniel walked inside the house. Daniel took off his shoes as he held on to Martins for support. “Baba, hope we no go enter yawa here?” He asked Martins. “No issue, Dan.” Martins smiled as they knocked at the main door of the house. Some seconds after, a young lady came to get the door. “Ooh.. Good afternoon.” She smiled at Daniel as she saw him. “We came together.” Martins quickly said. The lady hissed as she gave Daniel a more welcoming atmosphere. “Come in.” She smiled. Daniel and Martins came inside and picked their seats. “We came for something important.” Daniel smiled. “Really?” The lady grinned as she left her seat and motioned near Daniel. “Please, may I know your name?” He enquired. “I’m Stephanie.” She grinned. “Martins is a very good friend and has…” “Don’t tell me you are here to talk to me about him. I have told him I don’t like him.” Daniel chuckled. “I came because of him Stephanie.” “I’m reallh serious. I have another guy, so why is he disturbing himself?” “Stephanie, that’s a lie.” Martins chimed in. “Yes. I already have and that’s your friend that’s on seat.” “Huh?” Daniel’s eyes popped more open. Just then, his phone buzzed and he reached for it. It was Nora’s call. ** ** **
3 Jun 2015 | 13:19
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*****stay tuned for d next episode but dnt forget to cast ur vote.****
3 Jun 2015 | 13:20
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next please
3 Jun 2015 | 14:26
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Oya oioiio
3 Jun 2015 | 17:51
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won't you pick the call? @Dan
3 Jun 2015 | 17:59
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Stephanie is funny....... Martin qo die cos o jealousy....... Leh me quess a little....... It was Nora's call......... Daniel: what if i pick this call now and she does'nt speak aqain and hanqs up...dat would be veri silly of me....... Nora:Shea u've seen it now he's nt pickinq my calls oo maybe he's enjoyinq wid som1 else o....lolz ride on o
3 Jun 2015 | 18:36
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Lol @Pizzaro. That seems like what's gonna play out next. Stephanie pls don't make my guy forget his new family & seek solace in you. He & Nora wld make a wonderful home just dat they r still clinging to their ego
4 Jun 2015 | 01:38
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nyc......... nxt pliz
4 Jun 2015 | 04:19
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Jealously go soon deal with the both of you
4 Jun 2015 | 08:11
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shoo... dis couples nawa o, Y dem say I Do for Alter wen dem no say them no fit face themselves talk. (orisirisi)
4 Jun 2015 | 08:14
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Steph is funny, Daniel u ar dying 4 is married
4 Jun 2015 | 08:54
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Go on plss
4 Jun 2015 | 09:16
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What's wrong with this two adults.
4 Jun 2015 | 10:36
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@Kingsbest Lolz........Datz how they couple behave ooo,,xo i won't be surprised if wad ah jex quessed comes 2 play in the next epic.......
4 Jun 2015 | 10:58
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super-b.....ur problems wit ur wife is jst funny,u need to make tins straight bfore something u dnt expects happen....cos as a prophet i can see dey future and it is dark yes it is....
4 Jun 2015 | 11:04
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both of u are childish #nora nd daniel,tnks 4 d invite @t-dak,i hvn't seen khola of recent @khola hope there is no problem
4 Jun 2015 | 12:18
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Okay sir we ar listing or mah reading we go say
4 Jun 2015 | 13:07
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@Khola follow da commander of army go maiduguri oo @jenny
4 Jun 2015 | 13:10
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No problem at all @jenny. He is just kind of busy dats all.
4 Jun 2015 | 15:25
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@Jenny Nothing deh oo...nah ontop say ah no see you since, nah it make mah body shake oo...nah so ah disappear, but as you don come...mah don appear.. . . . @Kboy Commander Of Ar-my kor Commander Of Ar-you ni...me weh be say ah deh play with Buhari bear since, you deh say Army..... Thanks Bro...But ah no follow or been followed by any Army ooo...no let those weh be real LANDLORD visit person for midnight... . . . @T-dak Oh...Thanks for covering that for me Bro......
4 Jun 2015 | 16:34
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#smiling#thank god sey nting spoil,ah hv been kind of worried,nw i cn sidon well nd read witout blinking my eye,welkum bk @khola
4 Jun 2015 | 16:44
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Sorry felas I hv been kind of very busy.but dnt worry I wil make it to u guys stay tuned for episode 9 tommorrow morning
4 Jun 2015 | 17:40
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Marriage don suffer see hw they r punishn there self without a big deal
4 Jun 2015 | 21:25
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Wic kind childish marriage be dis one..... I blame dan on dis bc he can nt talk to his wife nd he call himself man. Tanks @T-DAK 4 dy invite.
5 Jun 2015 | 03:46
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****episode 9******* Daniel thought he was just dreaming when he saw the call. Would Nora really call his mobile phone? He wondered as he reached for it slowly and stared at it continuously. This is a lie! He had muttered as he stared at it, wondering if he was really seeing what was right or that as just an illusion. The call ended when he was in absolute shock and couldn’t pick it due to his doubts. He just put the phone on his laps and swooshed out a long breath from his nostrils, narrowing his eyes and wondering what was going on. Mhen! I should have picked up that call! Why am I being stupid? He hit himself suddenly, forgetting Martins and Stephanie were on seat. He just became conscious of himself again and adjusted. “I’m sorry, was just having..” and his mobile phone buzzed again. He got it quickly to check if it was Nora and she really was the one again. He smiled and stroke his beard. “Nora even loves me, why has she been pretending…” he muttered with a grin only to be shocked as Stephanie grabbed the mobile phone from him and picked up the call. “What!” He hastened to his feet in quest of getting his mobile phone quickly. What on earth would Nora think of then a lady picks up the call again? At least she had mixed with Daniel’s sisters very well and would decode the voice on the mobile phone, if it was really any of his sisters. “Are you alright? Let me have that!” He screamed. “No..” Steph rushed inside the room. “Hello.” She said to Nora. Nora who was expecting herself to hear Daniel’s voice froze as she heard the female voice. She already knew it was none of his sisters, who could the lady be? She tried to get off the feeling, thinking it might be a close friend who wished to speak to his wife. She smiled and cleared her throat as she replied. “Yeah, good evening.” She said fluently. “I don’t think anything is good about this evening, lady. Why do you keep disturbing him when he’s not ready to pick up your call? Please get off the line.” She said and ended the call. To Stephanie, she was wondering if someone was disturbing Daniel already. On setting her eyes on him as he got into her house, she had already liked him so much that she felt she wouldn’t control herself because of it. On her seat, she had been uncomfortable, thinking in herself that who would be disturbing her new crush? She probably haven’t looked at him well to see the ring in his fourth finger and probably didn’t check the caller to know the mobile number wasn’t saved with just ‘Nora’ but ‘My Life.’ She cloistered to the living room, smiling and making herself attractive again. “Daniel, the lady won’t disturb you again.” She said as she handed his phone over to him. “What? I think you’re mad already! Are you out of your mind? Have you seen this?” He raised his hand to show off his wedding ring. “Wow! Though I haven’t seen it, but, married men are really the best because they have handled courtship before.” “Steph! This is my own friend for God’s sake, why are you doing this? I never knew you were this kind of person, if I had known I wouldn’t have brought my friend here at all!” Martins hissed as he whisked to his feet and tapped Daniel. “Please, Dan. Let us go.” He said. “Are you angry already? Or wait, was it your wife that called?” Stephanie quickly asked. “No! Who else? Why do you keep asking useless questions? I’m sorry I have been disturbing you, but let me yearn you, today will be the last day I’ll visit you!” Martins exclaimed. Stephanie chuckled. “That’s exactly what I want, Martins. I have told you earlier, your friend is all I need.” She laughed. Daniel just looked at her angrily and walked out of the house as he quickly dried the tear that had filled his eyes already. He didn’t even wait for Martins before he got into his car and started driving away. ** ** ** NORA. I marched on to the room immediately after the call, crying profusely. I never thought this would happen to me, I never knew Daniel has been so desperate not to talk to me that she even gave a whore the mobile phone to speak to me. Why’s he going after a whore when I am inside the house already? Why is he after another woman when I am married to him already! Or was that the lady we saw that day? No! Daniel has gotten his way to find this lady, right? He’s spitting me with her, right? Oh no! I rolled on the mattress, crying out uncontrollably. I was already out of the universe with my thoughts. At first, it looked like a pipe dream, but it’s now developing into the reality! Don’t tell me Daniel has been looking for that woman again, so I’m the useless one, right? If this is not true, why hasn’t he called back? Why hasn’t he called to explain the situation of things to me? I definitely know he wouldn’t like me anymore, not when he met the lady already. I was only trying to summon courage to at least speak to him when I don’t know his mind. I was down, thinking that he might have been trying to talk to me too and maybe he’s been facing the same challenge I’m into, but now I really know Daniel has been avoiding me and all the dishes I have prepared because of a woman. In everything we are doing, there is God. ** ** ** Gloria was getting frustrated of Alex. Why would someone doubt God in that manner? He didn’t believe in his existence, not even to an inch! She had been thinking of what she could use to convince him but not even an idea was forthcoming. She hissed and just picked up her bag. “If Alex is an atheist, I better break up with him now. I can’t marry a person who doesn’t believe in God.” She said and walked out of the house, going to meet Alex. She had been praying to God to show himself to the great Alex as Alex as said. She knew it’s only if God proofs his existence that an unbeliever would believe him completely. She had been trying to hold herself back because he would just say that she has done that just because of Daniel. She even wished she could see Daniel again. She wished everything that happened didn’t happen to them. How sweet would it have been? She darted out.
5 Jun 2015 | 04:38
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*****episode 10****** Daniel was now without focus. He failed to pick up Martins calls already, thinking within himself that what would they be discussing when his crush just destroyed him? He was already miserable as he kept driving without knowing his destination. He didn’t know what would happen if he went home and felt driving around would waste much of the time so that he would sneak into the house by night. But, would that solve all his problem? He had wondered as his car screeched to halt at the front of King’s Bar. If his life would really be miserable, he felt he should balance the equation by drinking. He was already a frustrated man and didn’t know how he’d straighten his bent paths. He walked inside and took his seat on the barstool, smiling to the bartender. “Give me two bottles of Romeo.” He said. The bright lady turned around to get the bottles of Romeo and soon, Daniel started drinking. ** ** ** Nora had left the room for the bar. She was tired and also frustrated as she motioned closer to the oak bar and picked up a wine glass cup from the hanger and plopped down one of the barstools there, reaching for the small towel to be by her side and the wine itself. Just then, she began to drink too, till she was drunk and didn’t know what was happening again. ** ** ** Daniel had taken the two bottles demanded and paid the bartender before he took his leave, already drunk and walking like a drunk man. He wasn’t sure if he would be able to drive home safely, or if he wouldn’t kill a fellow before getting home. He just hopped inside the vehicle and started driving, maneuvering from right to left till his destiny lead him to his house safely. He parked the vehicle and dropped down from the car, leaning against it for a while. He wasn’t sure of what he would meet inside the house. Would Nora still be inside this house? He wondered as he threw his heavy body away from the vehicle and started walking inside the house. He got to the living room and wiped his face if he could still see very well, but there was no one on seat. He was beginning to think if his thought was real. She had left already. He motioned further till he got to the bar and met Nora on the floor, drunk too. He bent and carried her up, admist his drunkenness. Then, Nora’s eyes opened slowly, but it was just blurry. “Daniel..” she hit him by the chest and started making love confessions in her unconscious state. It seems it’s in a drunk state one can only know who’s in love with him. Daniel who was also drunk was managing to her utterances as he was making his own too, telling each other about their feelings. Daniel dropped her on their matrimonial bed and switched off the light as he jumped on the bed too. It’s only tomorrow the two would know what’s up. ** ** **
5 Jun 2015 | 04:40
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Chaiiiiiiiiii see life.
5 Jun 2015 | 05:27
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Which kind crush be that sef...A woman that can do that its obvious she will kill someone if she find her guy with such person... See husby wify
5 Jun 2015 | 05:47
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Hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahaahahhahahahhaah lovely couples
5 Jun 2015 | 05:49
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Maybe their drunken state would brinq peace 2 their home tomorrow.......
5 Jun 2015 | 06:09
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Stupid couples.... Anything dat lacks communication is worthless... Which kind woman dat stephanie be sef? Guy wey she jez see nw nw... Abi werey wa lori girl yen ni? Gloria walk fast jae nd break up with dat unbeliever
5 Jun 2015 | 11:32
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una brain no well @dan nd nora
5 Jun 2015 | 16:56
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Oh no, this should not happen, it's just a harmless hug. Y make a big deal out of it? Just y? This is serious and pure misconception. The Lady called Stephanie needs 2 be put in check seriously and ASAP. Shit happens when we try 2 read d others mind. There's no relationship without communication
6 Jun 2015 | 01:48
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Tnk God am finally here. I dey gbadi dz tori. Funny couple. Ride on..........I dey ur back, dey follow yu
6 Jun 2015 | 05:38
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This Stephenie is a beast
6 Jun 2015 | 06:15
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...and yet we say 'shayo is a bastard' but here is shayo at work nd making efforts to bring peace to where non exist.
6 Jun 2015 | 06:31
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chai i love dis
6 Jun 2015 | 06:42
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Dats gud,dey ll kw hw 2 correct dere wrong wen d wakeup in d morning.....
6 Jun 2015 | 06:58
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Dat Steph need 2 hv her head examined. Gloria abeg brk up wit dat Alex nd let him find an unbeliever lik him
6 Jun 2015 | 07:20
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Hmmmnnn since ℓ̊ wasn't invited ℓ̊ don show @somkhid even uuuu knw fit invite me U̶̲̥̅̊ knw try OººOººh Anyways U̶̲̥̅̊ av a nice story here as usual ride on.
6 Jun 2015 | 07:43
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Thanks for the drunken state that u guys found urself atleast it helped u guys to do the right thing (Confessing ur luv and feelings to each other and rounding it with the exploration of ur bodies) Hope u guys wnt go back to ur mind reading by the time morning comes
6 Jun 2015 | 08:53
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Okay sir tanks u for today story..... Wat wil nora say if she found daniel by her side,u dis fool did u tink am a bitch u take advantage of any how u lyk...daniel wil say please try 2 understand me i am wit martin to visit a gal he love i dnt knw she has already hav a crush on me as she set her eyes on me
6 Jun 2015 | 09:01
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Okay i done hear wetin u talk bt i no go cover 4 u again ooo@khola46
6 Jun 2015 | 09:17
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Just de observes
6 Jun 2015 | 10:39
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Chaiiiii so na lik dis de honeymoon tak start. oga ooo next tori
6 Jun 2015 | 10:52
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KHELELE INTERESTING
6 Jun 2015 | 13:02
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Lol LWKMD see crazy couples hohoho *lafn in swahili* lets see how all these things will end...steph yhu no be better person @all
6 Jun 2015 | 15:08
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Second Mr and Mrs smith
6 Jun 2015 | 15:09
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****episode 11***** Daniel rolled from one side to the other, fast asleep. As he was sleeping, he felt something unusual had happened to him. He didn’t know what it really was, his eyes were too heavy that he felt he wouldn’t open them forever. He was sweating profusely even though the air conditioner of the room had been left on earlier in the day. It was already 11pm, his wife and himself were still fast asleep. He closed his eyes more firmly and drove into the dreamland. ** ** ** It was just ten minutes past five in the morning, Nora opened her eyes slowly and tried to get the image of where she was. She opened it at once as she assessed where she was. Matrimonial room? Matrimonial bed? What’s happening! She muttered as her heartbeat increased at once. What happened last night? She wondered as she looked by her left probably to remember what happened. Yes, she was drunk! Who carried her? She questioned herself as she turned her head to the right and saw Daniel by his side. Was she seeing the right thing or her eyes were just deceiving her? She had asked herself as she wiped her face again. What happened? She muttered under her breath as she took away the bed cover and met stains of blood on herself. Did something happen? She squinted her face slightly as shook her head in disbelief. How come? She kept asking herself rhetorical questions as she stood up and picked up her things. She couldn’t even remember what happened the previous night, probably because she was under the influence of the alcohol. She sure didn’t remember she said some incoherent words to Daniel, likewise Daniel too. They were just drunk. She stepped out of the room to her own room. She just had her period done the previous week, could it be that something happened between her and Daniel? She wondered as she sat down on the chair near her standing mirror. Really? She smiled as she giggled. Anyways, she didn’t feel bad about it, at least, that was her husband, not another man. “But what do I do?” She wondered as she stepped into the bathroom to have a warm shower and get her stained clothes washed. Was this the beginning of joy in their lives? She had wondered as she questioned herself. ** ** ** It was six-thirty when Daniel opened his eyes and his eyes darted round the room. He could perceive Nora’s scent. Anyways, was that really important that minute? He had thought as he rushed up the bed. He felt something he couldn’t place his hand on had happened on him. “What happened?” He wondered as he squinted his face. “This doesn’t matter, at least, I’m alive.” He smiled as he glimpsed at the wall clock, it was already few minutes to seven am. He had to leave the house before seven am, wouldn’t he get stucked in traffic? He wondered as he rushed to the bathroom to have his bath. As he stepped into the bathroom, his mind flipped back to what happened last night. He remembered he was drunk and he came inside the house when he met Nora. What happened after? He couldn’t remember as he swooshed out a long breath and began to bath. Just as he began bathing, he noticed he had stains of blood on his lower abdomen and his shorts were stained too. “What’s this?” He wondered with a squinted face. He just hissed. “Being alive is the main thing.” He had thought as he paid little attention to what just happened. That was their first time of sex, he couldn’t really place his hands on what happened to him. “I think more happened after I saw Nora.” He wondered as he rushed inside the bedroom and flipped the wardrobe open. He picked up a crimson blue shirt and black silk tie which he would use on his black fitted trouser. Soon, he dressed up without looking at the surroundings. He didn’t even check the bed before he darted out of the room. I offended her yesterday, how will I show my face? He wondered as he rushed to his car and drove out. Then, Nora was done with the cooking and had served the food. She stepped into the living room and found out that Daniel had gone. “He’s still annoyed with me?” She wondered as she let out air from her mouth. “God, please intervene.” She muttered as she got her wedge shoes too. She had to rush to her place of work. ** ** **
6 Jun 2015 | 15:32
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*****episode 12 ** ** ** Daniel sank into his swivel chair as he got to his office. Everything was still not clear to him, it seemed he had to really remember everything that happened last night! He thought as he bit his finger. Did Nora sleep in that room? He wondered as he swiveled his chair to the left, deep in thought. He was finding it hard to remember he was the one who actually carried her, he couldn’t even remember he spoke to her not to talk of sleeping together. “Who knows if she has forgiven me before? Why did that lady pick up her call just to get thing worse? No! That Stephanie is meant to be hanged!” He hit his hand against the table as he swiveled his chair again, breathing heavily. To him, his brain was really void that he was still concerned that Nora must really be indignant at him. Stephanie picked her call again, why wouldn’t she be angry? He just had the feelings that Nora slept in his room overnight and possibly something happened between them. “I was really out of this world last night.” He muttered under his breath as he closed his eyes for a moment, nothing was still forthcoming! Who knows if Nora forgave me yesterday? Stephanie is a devil!” He exclaimed and his phone buzzed. He stared at the caller for a moment, it was an unknown mobile number. “Who’s this?” He dimmed his eyes as he took a close look at the mobile number again. It wasn’t in any way familiar. He decided to pick it up. “Hello.” He said as he waited for reply. “Hello.” He heard a soft voice on the other end. “Good morning, you’re speaking with Daniel.” He stated quickly. “I know who I’m calling too, Dan. This is Stephanie.” She said. “What! You this devil, I’m just thinking about you and how to start cursing you for destroying my family already!” He shouted. “Keep calm, Daniel. That was just a fair play! You wife shouldn’t take that up as if she’s God.” “Are you out of your mind? What am I even saying? You are out of your life already! See, Nora, be careful!” “Ooh… who’s Nora?” Stephanie asked. He just made a mistake of calling his wife’s name instead of Stephanie’s. He shrugged. “That’s none of your business, I wanted to mention your own name! And wait, how did you manage to get my mobile number, the devil?” He asked. Stephanie laughed for a while. “I get what I want, I never beg for it!” She said to him. Daniel heaved a sigh as he just ended the call and close his eyes for a moment. He was hating Martins for taking him to meet a devil. Only God knew how she got his mobile phone number, he had thought. Did Martins give her? He had wondered. He didn’t even want to think of it again, it was really annoying. ** ** ** Nora rushed back home to tidy up the house. It was lunch time, she had forgotten she had to remove the bed spread for washing. To her, she still didn’t know how she got to the room too, maybe a miracle just happened. But, is Daniel aware of this? She wondered as she took off the bed cover. She wasn’t sure. She had been racking her memory to remember everything that happened last night, but couldn’t remember anything. She had never taken alcohol, maybe the influence of the first time she took his disorganized her system that she hardly could tell what happened at all. She was the accountant of Mandy and Sons Limited, active and calm to all the members of staff of the company. She had never thought her marriage would turn out to be how it already was, Alex and Gloria caused this! She hit her fists together as she remembered the scene of that day again. She had thirty minutes to conclude her washing and rush back to the office. She had been thinking of what to do, but nothing was forthcoming. ** ** ** DANIEL. I’m a man! Sure, why have I been dulling things for too long? Why? I ought to have taken that bold step to talk to Nora! Who even knows if she’s been feeling the same way I’m feeling? Who knows if she was not even annoyed that day? At least, we both made the mistake, we both saw other counterparts and ran into them instantly. She should be able to forgive me, even if I had made that mistake. God, this minute, I want to use it to ask for nothing more than suffering, afflictions, problems and hindrance, help me just pour that four on Stephanie’s road! Now, she’s calling me again, why? What the hell is wrong with her? I told her and she saw for herself that I’m a married man! I think Martins caused this and should be the one to eventually settle this! I really don’t know where she got my mobile number, why would she keeo disturbing me? Why! Hmmn.. maybe before I get home, I’ll try to send Nora a whatsapp message, or probably ping her. ** ** ** Daniel picked up his mobile phone and opened his whatsapp. He could see the chat between hmself and Nora stopped quite long back. He chuckled as he was about sending her the whatsapp message. As he could see vividly, Nora was online and prayed she replied his message instantly. “Nora, dear.” He sent to her as his heart almost skipped a beat. He felt as if he was facing a big challenge as he sent her the message. He started counting, Nora didn’t reply him. It was ten minutes already and he could still see her online. “She’s annoyed!” He wondered. ** ** ** Nora had forgotten she had her whatsapp on. She had been trying to get the account for the company’s last month expenses right. This had been giving her a problem because it seemed a file was missing. She had visited the managing director and Secretary severally for them to check their desks if the file she had been searching for wasn’t with them. Just as she returned back to her seat that minute, she saw the file on her table. She chortled as she clapped her hands together, wondering what miracle that just happened. She never knew it was on her table and she had been going up and down, searching for the file. That had gotten her attention for fourty five minutes that she had forgotten she was online. She just finished balancing the balance and got set to leave. She picked up her phone and dropped it inside her bag. She was really tired already, searching for a file, rushing back home to wash the bed cover. As she stepped out to enter into her car, she saw Alex again. What is Alex doing here? She wondered as she tried to rush into her own car before he would see her. Just then, she heard her name. “Nora.” Alex called her. He caused this problem I’m going through now. She had thought ashe looked at the back and saw him. He was dressed in a light-green buttoned down shirt, tucked into his black loose-fitted trouser. He wasn’t using a necktie, his hair was well combed and he looked handsome in his well polished black pair of shoes. “Good day.” She just waved. “Me? Good day? Are you trying to run away from me?” Alex demanded to know. “Alex, see..” she raised her hand to show him her wedding ring. “I’m married and I wouldn’t want a situation trouble would loom.” “It’s Alex, Nora. I’m just trying to greet you.” “Okay, well enough Alex. We’ve greeted, haven’t we?” “Not in the right way. I’m sorry about what happened the previous day, because of that, I couldn’t get your mobile number.” “What do you want to do with my mobile number? I told you I’m married now and I guess you must be engaged too, Alex.” “Forget engagement! Just give me your mobile phone number.” “I’m sorry bro, I have to go.” She hopped into her car and drove out of the company. I’m now a bro? Alex had thought as he rushed to his own vehicle. I’ll follow you anywhere today! ** ** ** “Even if you are angry, Nora, you have to forgive me today!” Daniel muttered as he grinned out of the plaza. He had bought Nora several gifts and had bought chicken and chips for their consumption too. He had been imagining that it would be great, that day. He dropped everything he bought at the back seat of his car and drove out of the plaza, rushing home. He felt his thoughts had ignited strength in him and would do everything to end the problem between him and his wife. ** ** ** Nora drove into the compound. She never for once knew Alex had been after her, she didn’t even know his type of car, she would have at least suspected. As she waved at the gatekeeper, she walked into the house. Just as she entered, Alex came down from his parked vehicle and knocked at the gate slightly. “I’ve been following her, she said I should follow her. I have to get some documents from the office.” He told the gatekeeper. The security man too never doubted what he said because he looked serious and real. “Okay.” He let him into the house. Nora is enjoying mhen! He smiled as he walked to the main door and knocked slightly. “Just come inside.” He heard Nora’s soft voice and pushed the door open. “Don’t be mad at me..” he quickly said before she would stand up and throw him out. “What’s the meaning of this rubbish! So you followed me, Alex?” She was infuriated already. “Just calm down, Nora.” How do you expect me to calm down when we hugged the other day and my husbands knows you now. If he finds you inside this house, what do you want me to do? You finally want to destroy my home, right?” “Just for a while. I just want to discuss some personal issues with you, Nora. At least I know you are married now and wouldn’t do anything to destroy your marriage.” “You are doing it already! You are!” He took some steps closer to her. “You have to calm down, Nora. Let me speak.” He said. “Sure, speak on. Say whatever you want to say and leave as quick as you can!” She shouted. Just then, Daniel had driven into the house. Her noise had not been able to let her hear Dan’s honks at the gate and didn’t make her know Dan’s car was just driven in. Alex placed his hand on Nora’s head as he wiped down her long weavon, calming her down. “I wouldn’t to anything to destroy you marriage, you know how much I care about you.” Just then, Daniel entered into the house. ** ** **
6 Jun 2015 | 15:35
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Nollywood..
6 Jun 2015 | 16:54
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Haaaa anoda wahala
6 Jun 2015 | 17:34
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Jeez hmmm dis alex is a fool oo.
6 Jun 2015 | 17:40
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Next O
6 Jun 2015 | 17:41
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Haaa this one na original gobe
6 Jun 2015 | 17:52
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Ayakata!
6 Jun 2015 | 18:13
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Yam pepper scatter scatter. I hope Alex knws how to punch oh cos its not gonna be easy for another person home Chaiiiiiiiiii dis one na capital GOBE.
6 Jun 2015 | 18:52
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Gan--gan!!!
6 Jun 2015 | 19:38
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na crious gobe ooo..
7 Jun 2015 | 09:08
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Hmmmmmmm! Daniel wld definitely go back to his previous life style of mind reading & snobbery of the wife. Alex better come up with a good explanation to what you are doing in another man's home
7 Jun 2015 | 10:47
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u guys should nt forget to cqst ur vote bcause it is ur right as a legal member of coolval just follow dis link www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/coolval22-com-writer-of-the-month-of-may-2015/
7 Jun 2015 | 11:21
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Nice one Keep going..........Next please
7 Jun 2015 | 13:26
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There is fire on the mountain........ Run! Run!! Run!!!
7 Jun 2015 | 15:20
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Confirm nollywood ni o @khola46 ... Alex will jez walk out of d house...nd anoda drama will start... Childish couples
7 Jun 2015 | 15:52
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Come! Gloria never reach where she dey go?
7 Jun 2015 | 15:53
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she dey wait 4 taxi @tenniebenson
7 Jun 2015 | 17:45
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Lobatan
7 Jun 2015 | 18:04
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Which kind trouble b dis na?
7 Jun 2015 | 19:49
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@Tenniebenson Lol... E be like say you don deh eye that Gloria ooo...nah petrol weh too expensive make her trekk, thats why she still deh road....don't worry, Somkhid just hide her for a little time...he will soon put her into the picture.....
8 Jun 2015 | 02:45
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Hi everyone, @somkhid is kinda busy since yesterday dats y he hasn't update. Pls bare wit him, maybe till tommorrow he is gonna find chance for us abeg knw vex@All of us
8 Jun 2015 | 09:28
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@fredman pls just accept d situation d way it is for now okay. I believed something as really popped up that's why he hasn't posted yet okay. @kemkit thanks for that. @somkhid we are awaiting ur arrival. Thanks.
8 Jun 2015 | 19:01
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Am wit @kemkit on diz. Itz not his fault, he tried t update yesterday buh d network was bad. Am sure he ll apologize wen he cums. Plzz don't b annoyed!
8 Jun 2015 | 20:19
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am so sorry for d delay pls bear wit me i will make it up to u guys @kemkit tank u for passing my message.
9 Jun 2015 | 02:31
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****episode 13**** Daniel looked straight as he entered and met Alex’s hand on Nora’s head. What’s this? He widened his eyes as he stepped inside. Nora quickly pushed Alex’s hand away from her head and took some steps backward. “Ooh.. Good evening, Sir.” Alex stretched his hand to exhange handshake with Daniel. Daniel pocketed his hand as he gave him a long look. “Who invited you here?” “I just stretched my hand and I expect you to shake me, Sir.” Alex replied with a question. “You haven’t replied my question, Mr.” Daniel said. Alex shrugged. “Neither have you answered mine, Sir.” Daniel chuckled as he stretched his hand forward and shook him. “So, who brought you here?” He questioned. Nora just stood by a side, her heart was beating fast as she wondered what would happen. “Actually, Nora told me to come along. She told me she would like me to know her house…” He smiled. Daniel gave a faint smile as he nodded. “Really?” He teased. “Sure, that’s it.” “Ooh.. that’s great already. You know here now, can you please leave?” He still smiled. “Really? I.. was I was just about taking my leave when you arrived.” “You may take it properly, now.” He smiled. Alex walked out slowly. Daniel heaved a sigh. Is this true or what? She didn’t even deny it, it automatically means it is the truth! He had thought as he took some steps and began to walk inside the house. Nora was just short of words, she didn’t know the actual thing to do because she was scared already. Should I call him? She thought within herself but found out she had no courage to. She dropped down on the tiled floor and began to cry. ** ** ** It was thirty minutes after, Daniel was still on the mattress, wondering what could have happened. Who knows if that’s the reason she didn’t reply my message on whatsapp? He wondered as he dimmed his eyes and breathed heavily consistently. She didn’t deny, she couldn’t come after me, she must have really invited him! He muttered. He rolled to the other side of the mattress and something dropped in his mind. “Who changed this bed cover?” He had been on it for a while but didn’t even notice it had been changed. “Nora changed it, no one else.” He swooshed out a long breath as he stood up from the mattress to get his shirt off himself. He walked to the wardrobe and noticed some of his dirty clothes had been taken away, probably for laundry. “Nora?” He wondered. Suddenly, he heard a noise. It was from the gate. He motioned to the curtains and pulled it to a side, he could see Nora with the gatekeeper. He began to listen to their conversations. “I said you are sacked!” She shouted. “Please, I don’t know what I have done.” “You won’t know what you have done, Mr man, you won’t!” “Please, Madam. Please.” “Why did you open the gate for that man? Why? You have caused confusion in my house, just leave!” She screamed again, her voice had began to break as if she would cry. Daniel could feel the voice. It seemed she was caught unawares. “Please Madam. He said you work together with him in the same company and you instructed him to come.” “To come where? To my own husband’s house? He doesn’t work in my company, he just used that as a trick! He saw me today and must have traced me down to my house here, I didn’t ask him to come! You’re sacked!” “Madam, please. I never knew, I thought he was real.” “You thought he was real? Then this sack letter too is real! Leave this house!” She exclaimed. Daniel began to link events together. Alex must have followed her, why did he lie? Why couldn’t she oppose him before me? Why didn’t she come after me to tell me what the truth was? “Madam, I beg of you. Who will be opening the gate for you and Oga?” “I can be my husband’s gatekeeper, is it your business? Leave!” Daniel knew the truth already. He picked up his shirt and stormed downstairs. As he got to the living room, he met a key on the floor, exactly where Alex stood when he entered into the house. “Whose key?” He wondered as he picked it up. This doesn’t matter right now.” He muttered as he put it in his pocket. He got outside and walked slowly. “Don’t let me loose my temper, just leave!” She had started crying. “Please Madam, I won’t do it again. I wanted to ask, I thought he was real.” The man too was on his kneels already. “Will you..” As she raised up her hand to dismiss the gatekeeper, she felt that a hand held her hand and another crossed her neck. Daniel was already behind her, crossing his right hand on her neck as he held her firmly. “My love.” He said. Nora felt it was just a dream. No! Nothing but a dream! It can’t be Daniel! Dan what? Daniel? It can’t… she just kept muttering. It is impossible! She kept wondering. “You may go inside your own duty post.” Daniel said to the gatekeeper as he took off his hand and held Nora by her two hands. “I called you my love, but you haven’t replied me, Sweetheart.” He added. Nora just felt she was in another world already. She didn’t know what was happening anymore. She opened her mouth slightly but didn’t know the actual word to come out of it. She was just dumbfounded. “Da… Daniel?” She stuttered as she still wondered if she was seeing the right human being. Daniel chuckled. “So, are you shocked or what exactly should this be called?” “Daniel?” She repeated, this time pointing her index finger at him. “Nora, let’s just go inside. I have a lot to discuss with you.” He smiled faintly. Nora was still in shock. That was the least thing she could ever expect! Daniel? She kept muttering. They took just two steps, on their way inside the living room when the gate was knocked slightly. The two of them halted as they watched the security man rush out of his place to get the gate. “What! You are not wanted here!” The man exclaimed as he peeped through the gate and saw Alex. “I want to pick up my key, I forgot the key to my house here.” “Who cares? You lied the other time, what are you doing here? Please, leave.” “Let me pick up my keys, man!” Alex bashed the gate with pressure. Daniel crossed his hand over Nora’s neck again, then, he smiled. “Get the gate opened.” The security man paused as he heard that. He wondered if it wouldn’t be a crime after opening the gate for the unwanted again. “Sir?” He widened his eyes. “Sure, open it.” Daniel deliberately crossed his hand over Nora for Alex to know he was already fine with his wife. As he stood, he was even boiling because he had caused pandemonium in his house again. “Nonsense!” Alex hissed at the gatekeeper and walked in slowly. Raising his head, he saw Daniel and Nora. He halted instantly. He was shocked, but could he say it? How would it sound to hearing to ask why couple were standing in that manner. Daniel was already indignant as he saw him. He had thought in himself earlier that if he had the chance of seeing him again, he would definitely beat the heaven out of him. He took off his hand from Nora and took steps forward. He was smiling, but deep inside him, he was boiling in anger. “Any problem?” He enquired. “I only forgot my keys.” Alex stuttered as he replied. He was definitely shocked to meet both of them that way, he never knew the two wouldn’t quarrel after his departure. Daniel took another step and turned his fist as he blew Alex mouth angrily. Alex fell down instantly, rolling on the floor. Daniel was still not satisfied, he took some paces near him again and knelt, keeping Alex in between his knees, he continued punching him till Nora quickly came and held him, hugging him from behind. Daniel calmed down instantly, breathing heavily. Thank God he could fulfill his thoughts, he said happily as he dipped his hand into his pocket and threw Alex’s key at him. “Lock that gate immediately you throw him out!” Daniel told the gatekeeper as he walked inside the house with Nora. His hands were already stained with blood. ** ** **
9 Jun 2015 | 02:45
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****episode 14**** Daniel and Nora sat down gently, both staring at each other. Nora grabbed Daniel’s hand and pulled him to the basin to wash his stained hands. “You shouldn’t have beaten him, Daniel.” Daniel chuckled. “Don’t you have any adjective you can use to qualify my noun?” Nora squinted her face. She didn’t understand what Daniel was saying. She shrugged. “What do you mean?” “Must you call me Daniel? We have several adjectives, waiting to be used. For example, why do we have sweetheart, honey, love, baby, mine, my life and many more.” The two laughed. Nora felt that day was one the happiest day of her life so far. “Okay honey, you shouldn’t have beaten him!” She held him by his shoulder. Daniel smiled. “Now you are talking.” He smiled turned into a sudden grin. “If I didn’t beat him, next time he sees you on the way, he will still wait to say hi, but now, he will run, even his shadow will know there’s a problem.” Nora burst into laughter. “Daniel… oh.. sweetheart!” They both laughed again. “Anyways, I have always wondered and pondered on something, baby.” Daniel cleared his throat as he picked up he hand towel and mopped his hand. “What, dear?” “The reason why we both kept each other in dark for so long! Why?” “I don’t know. You’re the one I’m meant to ask because you were the one annoyed with me.” Nora replied. “I wasn’t! Why would I? At least, we made the same mistake, I wouldn’t be angry with you!” “But why didn’t you talk to me? And, if I cook, you won’t eat part of it not to talk of all, likewise.” Daniel chortled. “Honestly, I was always thinking thay you were the one annoyed! Why didn’t you talk to me too? I always visited the food but scared of eating, I always thought you were angry and the food wasn’t meant for me.” Nora smiled. “Okay, that’s the first problem. The second one, Daniel. Who was the lady that picked my call that day?” Daniel laughed. His laughter was prolonged for seconds before he brought himself back to normal. “I was.. I was just flexing that day.” He laughed again. “Flexing? You really went to meet her?” “I’m just joking. Wasn’t it that foolish and I repeat, foolish Martins that called me, telling me he has a crush on a lady, he had talked to the lady but she didn’t give in. So, he begged me to follow him, maybe if the lady could see a good person with him, she would change her mind.” “So?” Daniel chuckled. “Everything turned upside down. The lady started falling for me. When you called, I was surprised to see your mobile number, so, I was afraid to pick. The second time you called, she snatched the phone and ran away to pick up the call.” “Hmmn… Really?” She dimmed her eyes. Daniel smiled. “Sure.” “Okay, that’s all.” “That’s all? I thought you would ask me one last question, or maybe I’m the one to ask the question.” “What?” Nora enquired. “That yesterday night, how did you make your way beside me? Didn’t you know you slept with a guy?” Nora laughed. “I don’t know I got there too. By the way, is the guy not my husband?” Daniel blushed. “Okay, I understand.” He chuckled. “Let me go and prepare dinner, you must be hungry.” Nora said. “No.. no.” Daniel hed her back. “You can’t be cooking alone, love. Why are we two? By the way, I’ve got something we gonna eat before that idiot tried to spoil the day.” Nora chuckled. “What is the thing?” “Let’s go.” He pulled her hand as they went upstairs. ** ** ** Gloria walked to the living room with a tray of soft drink and glass cup. She sat down and glimpse at her sister that was on seat. “How’s your husband, sister?” She enquired. The lady smiled. “We are doing well, dear. How’s Alex too?” She asked. “Urgh.. Aunty Tope..” Gloria just called her name and kept mum. “I know you are a pastor and you will be able to shed more light on this matter. I have been thinking on removing his engagement ring, ma’am. I’m not ready to marry him.” She replied as she served Tope the drink. Tope was her immediate elder sister, married already and still hoping for the fruit of the womb. She was a pastor, just like her husband also. “Why would you do that? I thought you have prayed and you told me God confirmed Alex for you?” “Sister, I only said that then because I was in haste to get married. I didn’t know Jesus, I wasn’t a perfect Christian then, sister.” She said and paused for a while. “As a christian that I am now, I can’t enter into that marriage and be regretting it at the end.” She replied. “My sister, what exactly is wrong?” “Alex is not walking in God’s way! He’s a sinner, my sister. Though, I know I have no right to call him a sinner, but this, I’m sure he is.” She replied. “I only told you God confirmed Alex for me then, it was because I thought I was ageing and I needed to get married soon, I was thinking that no one would marry an old cargo if I grew older than that. I never knew I took the wrong step.” “My sister, choosing in life is one of the most vital things in the life of youths! The bible told us in the book of Proverbs chapter 16 verse 3, Commit thy works unto the Lord, and thy thoughts shall be established. If you don’t give him to go- ahead to work in your life, how do you expect him to work? You have to leave everything to him to solve!” “But, I even thought I really heard God’s voice concering Alex then, now I know it was what I was thinking that spoke to me. Now I know Alex is not for me. He drinks, he doesn’t go to church! He never believed there’s God.” “That kind of man is not for you, Gloria. Marriage is like a home that two people enters, and immediately you enter, the door will be shut and you won’t be able to get out. It is written in the Holy Bible that divorcing is a sin, if you marry him and later divorce, God would ask you where you kept you eyes when choosing him. This is the best time to let go of Alex.” “Thank you, sister.” “Nowadays, peope don’t know what courtship means again, dear. It is actually the time the two lovers will rub minds together, when you’ll be able to tell your spouse-to-be what you want and what you don’t! If all that are not sorted out and confirmed to be sorted out, there’ll be a problem in the marriage. Marriage is essential because any man you marry will be the one you’ll be with forever. Remember Proverbs 25:28, a man without self control I like a city broken into and left without walls. If you marry a man who’s not cultured, who’s not in God, who has been patching the relationship, the marriage will collapse.” Gloria heaved a sigh. ** ** ** Daniel already stood by the mirror, holding his neck tie as he called on Nora. “Come and do your job.” He smiled. “You’re troublesome, Daniel. Don’t tell me you can’t knot a tie.” “You’re the one I want, no one else. Not even myself, dear.” He grinned. Nora collected the tie and knoted it as he put it on Daniel, standing so close to him as she helped him to dress up. Daniel was just smiling, when last did he enjoy that? “Are we good to go?” “Sure.” Nora nodded. They have eaten an were set for their various places of work immediately. “You don’t have to pick your key, I’ll be the one to drop you off at work, I’ll come around to carry you likewise.” He told her. “You don’t need to stress yourself, Daniel. I can do all these.” She smiled. “If you annoy me, I will carry you from ths place to my car.” He chuckled. “Okay, let’s go.” She grinned. Both rushed down the stairs and hopped inside the vehicle. It had been nice since they made up. Daniel pulled out of the house and slotted an audio compact disc into the CD player, listening to shout to the lord by Don Moen. The journey continued until a car started running after them, Daniel never knew, he loved the music so much that he had engulfed himself in it. Shortly, the car caught up with them. Two hefty guys came down from the vehicle. They really knew what they doing because it was a quiet arena where no car passing that minute. Daniel whined down to question why he was blocked, then he was shot by the head. He collapsed instantly. The guys went on to Nora and grabbed her. They threw her into the vehicle and sped off, leaving Daniel’s body in the car.
9 Jun 2015 | 02:50
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what become of nora and daniel stay tuned for d next episode
9 Jun 2015 | 02:51
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They are finally ßack 2qether........ Hmmm viz beatinq u jex meted out to Alex hope it won't skyroqate to a danqerous battle ooo
9 Jun 2015 | 03:03
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what the hell is that ? i think alex is behind that hope Dan wil nt die sha
9 Jun 2015 | 05:15
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O ma God. maybe alex handiwork
9 Jun 2015 | 05:16
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This Alex is really something else.
9 Jun 2015 | 05:48
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OººOººh God he must not die Alex is after dis ℓ̊ knw!!!
9 Jun 2015 | 06:55
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OMG! Hope nothing happens to daniel
9 Jun 2015 | 08:59
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Daniel is nt supposed 2 die o, is it nw dat hapines has come back 2 dere house? Daniel and nora must live
9 Jun 2015 | 09:59
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Those guys were sent by alex. I pray daniel lives! Sure we ll buh dnt kip us waiting sha!!!!
9 Jun 2015 | 10:31
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Dat must nt b ....da devil iz a liar
9 Jun 2015 | 11:13
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Hymmmmm infact Alex is just a devil of himself as Gloria said
9 Jun 2015 | 12:28
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Thank God that the both of you finally came back together. Since you both now know what caused the breach & hitch experienced so far, den work & ensure that it doesn't repeat again. Daniel musn't die. I strongly know Alex is behind this unfortunate event. Gloria u took the right decision. Alex is just a monster
9 Jun 2015 | 17:22
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whaaaat???
9 Jun 2015 | 18:29
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Why are you people suspecting Alex??? Thats how we human believe in things, any coincidence action before incidence will be the one to held responsible..... What of the lady that pick the call when Nora called?? What if someone is just dreaming??? Been rascal doesn't mean someone is evil.....been gentle doesn't mean someone is saint...Alex might be innocent..... Sometimes what we tought of might be the wrong way...All what just happen might be a dream....
10 Jun 2015 | 03:00
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Actually, if it was Stephanie that's behind the attack, Daniel wouldn't have been shot cuz she's crushing on him. Its Alex that'll do that - he lost Nora before and has found her again, and Gloria is close to breaking up with him. He definitely doesn't want to lose them at a time. He sure does want to deal with Daniel for beating him up at his place. Its definitely not a dream.
10 Jun 2015 | 03:53
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MAN where d u get all this nice stories? U are the best writer
10 Jun 2015 | 04:19
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May God save Daniel
10 Jun 2015 | 05:20
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****episode 15***** Daniel pulled out of the house and slotted an audio compact disc into the CD player, listening to shout to the lord by Don Moen . The journey continued until a car started running after them, Daniel never knew, he loved the music so much that he had engulfed himself in it. Shortly, the car caught up with them. Two hefty guys came down from the vehicle. They really knew what they doing because it was a quiet arena where no car passing that minute. Daniel whined down to question why he was blocked, then he was shot by the head. He collapsed instantly. The guys went on to Nora and grabbed her. They threw her into the vehicle and sped off, leaving Daniel’s body in the car. ** ** ** Gloria stepped out of her house. She had just finished praying after she had dressed up for her place of work. Her soul had been lifted by her sister’s words that she heard the day before and had made up her mind to let go of Alex. She had even been brewing if she should just delete his mobile number away from her mobile phone. She had been hating herself for going into a relationship with someone God never approved for her. God, bring the right man! She had been muttering around the house till even that morning. As she stopped to pick up a cab, a car screeched to halt beside her. She moved backward as she took some steps to her left, wondering if the vehicle had probably stopped to get something around. She stood akimbo, expecting a cab until a young man came down from the vehicle. “Hello.” He waved at her. She looked by her left to see the fellow who just waved. She bowed as she greeted back. “Good morning.” She said. The guy slammed the door of his vehicle as he wiped his mouth and pocketed his car key. He was about six feet and two inches tall, dressed his black suit with a low cut hairstyle. He was handsome, had a nice redolence even in his pair of black and shining Italian shoes. “I waited for you, dear.” He said. Is this one a Christian? Gloria wondered as she assesed him. Does it even matter? Bible said in Isaiah that we shouldn’t judge, who am I to assume things already? But wait, why did he even stop because me? “Me?” She dimmed her eyes as she asked, transferring her pure black leather back to her right hand. “Yes. I’m David.” He stretched his hand for a handshake. He’s a Christian, but he’s dressed as if he’s off to office? Who’s asking him all these? “That’s nice.” She just gave a faint smile. “I’m sorry, but I’ve stopped to get you to your destination.” David said. Does he know my destination? Gloria wondered. “You’re funny.” She chuckled. “You don’t know my destination and you’ve talked as If you know where I’m off to.” David chuckled too as he wiped his face. “I’m Makinde David, I came to Maverick Companies yesterday concerning the contract…” “Ooh…” Gloria remembered him then. He came to their company the previous day but she didn’t even see him, she only heard that Makinde David came around to see the Director of the company. Gloria just started working with Maverick Companies that supplied building materials to sites and companies where they were needed. “But I didn’t see you, yesterday, Sir.” She smiled. “You were busy writing, but I actually saw you as I was about to leave your company.” He smiled. “Thanks for recognizing me again.” She smiled too. “We don’t need all these here, I’m off to your company again, can I just drop you off?” He raised his brows and shoulders, in quest to know if she’d agree. “Urgh…” Gloria smiled. She wasn’t so comfortable with the offer, but at least she knew him already now. “Alright.” She nodded. David walked to the passenger’s seat and got the door open. “You can sit down.” He smiled. Opening the door for a lady to sit, hmmn… I hope you just want to drop me off and that’s all. “Thanks.” She grinned as she sat down and David closed the door gently. He hopped into the car and kicked the engine. ** ** ** It was the birthday of Daniel’s mother. He had sent her text messages and called her before he left the house that day. Daniel had also promised that he would check on his mother with his wife, Nora after work that day. The evil guys had taken Nora away already while a car halted behind Daniel’s car. The car had honked severally for Daniel to leave the way, the driver never knew something had happened. The driver got down out of indignance to challenge Daniel when he met a shot dead body in the vehicle. He shivered instantly, trembling with fear as he rushed back to his vehicle and kicked the engine. As he was about to speed off, he marched on the brake again and wondered if he could help. Firstly, he was afraid if it was a set up to get someone. He knew what the world had turned into already, setting people up in various ways just to get their valuables. Secondly, how sure was he that he wouldn’t be referred to as the murderer? He shook his head in disagreement to try his assistance, but felt it would be unkind of him, by the way, his conscience wouldn’t give him peace. He got down and walked slowly to the car again, shivering as he held Daniel’s wrist to feel his pulse. “He’s no longer breathing.” He muttered. Dropping his hand, he saw his mobile phone on the penguin hole of the car and picked it up. He checked the last person he called and found Best Mother. He quickly dialed the mobile number. “Hello. There’s a problem. Could you come to Grace Road, along Best Way Companies?” He enquired as he paused for a moment. “Just come first, but there’s a problem.” He said and ended the call, still wondering if he wouldn’t get into trouble. “This man’s dead.” He said again. ** ** ** “You haven’t told me your name, my sister.” David said as he drove on. “Sorry, I’m Gloria.” She replied. “That’s a great name! Sister Gloria.” He grinned. “Seeing you, you must also be a good Christian.” He said. “Sure, I am a Christian.” She nodded. “You?” “Abegii.. I am just David, I don’t believe in either Jesus or Allah. There’s no God, don’t let us just decieve ourselves.” “No, Mr. David, you’re wrong. There’s God! A living one!” Gloria affirmed. David chuckled. “I know you’ll start battling with me, but, there’s one question I use to defeat everyone who believes in God’s existence.” He smiled. “So? You can ask me and let’s see if I’ll be defeated too.” She faced him. “Have you ever seen your God before, I mean face to face now?” He asked. Gloria chuckled. “So, who are those you usually ask this question that can defeat you? I have seen him severally and even you!” She said with passion. “Don’t trick me, even if you have seen him before, I have never! A God I can’t see doesn’t exist!” “You definitely have seen him before, but you never knew you saw him.” “You are just beating about the bush, sister.” “The book of Exodus 25:8 says, let them construct a sanctuary for Me, that I may dwell among them. Firstly, when you prepare your heart to see God, you will. Now, God is not who you can see physically, but deep inside you, when you build a sanctuary for him, you’ll feel his absolute presence!” “So, before I see your God, I have to build a sanctuary? I hope your company will supply me with materials.” He laughed. “The sanctuary the Bible’s talking about is your heart! What is a church? You are a church! That’s it, the building in which we are worshipping God is not the church, it is just a building! We people worshiping inside the building are the church! So, it’s your heart God needs, not a building!” “Hmmn..” ” Matthew 5:8 says blessed are the pure in heart, for they shall see God. When you make up your heart, you will see him in various dimensions!” She spoke with passion as she continued, “the book of Jeremiah 29:13 also says you will seek Me and find Me when you search for Me with all your heart. So, how do you expect yourself to see God when you are not in right terms with him? How can we be fighting with you and you’ll decide to award our company with a multimillionaire project? That’s just what it means! Proverbs 6 also said can you be in sin and ask for grace to abound? You can’t fighting with God, you can’t be against him and ever want him to reveal himself!” David sighed. “Gloria, no one has ever quoted this much to me. Na you write Bible? But honestly, you just hit me with words.” “This is not about hitting you with words. You shall knw the truth and the truth shall set you free, that’s all.” “If I now want to experience God’s presence what do I do?” David asked. “Just surrender all to him, let him guide you, then you’ll know that you’re seeing him! Then you’ll know he’s not a dead God because he will be speaking to you.” “Gloria..” David just called her name softly. “I’m a great sinner. I’m absolutely sure your God can never accept me!” He shook his head. Gloria smiled. “That’s wrong. My God loves sinners but just distastes sins, that’s it. If you confess those sins and start walking in his way, you’ll really know of his existence.” “I want to know more about this man.” He said. Gloria smiled. Thank you for this soul, Lord. She thought within herself. “Can I have your mobile number?” She asked as she brought out her mobile phone. “Sure.” David grabbed the phone and punched in his mobile number. ** ** **
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*****episode 16***** University Teaching Hospital. Daniel’s mother got to the scene of the incident almost immediately and met his son. She had almost fainted when the driver who saw Daniel helped her and promised to take her and Daniel to the hospital as quick as possible, who knows if miracle could still happen? The woman had been crying since she saw Daniel. Someone who she spoke to in the morning, would he just die like that? She kept wondering. She had been in the reception with the man, still crying when the Doctor attending to Daniel walked out, holding his stethoscope in his right hand. “May I ask, who are you to the patient?” He asked Daniel’s mother and the man. “I’m his mother, what’s wrong with my son!” She grabbed the Doctor. “What of you, Sir?” The Doctor asked the man. “I only saw his body and contacted his mother, I don’t know him.” He replied. “I’m sorry, but we tried our best. The young man is dead.” The Doctor said. Daniel’s mother went down instantly. ** ** ** Alex laughed aloud. “Hope you guys are sure you killed that fool for me?” He asked as his laughter turned to a sudden frown. “We shot him by the head, Alex. Even if he’s crawling, he’s supoosed to be in either hell fire or heaven by now.” Alex laughed again. “That kind of person can never make heaven. I’m sure he’s burning in hell presently.” The guys laughed. “What of the balance, guy?” One of the guys asked. “I know you love money so much.” He grinned as he handed over an envelope to one of the guys. “Thanks for the neat job.” He said. “You definitely know what we are good at, Alex.” The guy laughed. “So, what do you intend to do with the chick you asked us to bring?” One of the guys asked. “If she won’t marry me easily, she will marry me by fire by thunder!” He chuckled. “Alex!” They hailed him. “You should get going, guys. Let me attend to her.” He shook them again as he walked into the house. He had sent the guys to help him eliminate Daniel and bring Nora to him. He had promised himself he would deal with Daniel after he had gotten the beating of his life from him the day before. “Dreams coming true.” He jubilated as he walked inside. He had locked Nora up in a room. “If you won’t love me easily, you’ll love me by force!” ** ** ** “Doctor, please tell me it’s a lie!” The woman screamed. “Please keep calm. I know I ought to be telling you this in the office and probably I shouldn’t have told you directly, but, I just have to.” He said. “So, the guy is finally dead?” The man asked as he buried his hands in his palms, crying too.” “I’m sorry.” The Doctor replied. “I’m so sorry, madam. Please I have to leave.” The man dashed out of the hospital. He wouldn’t want to suffer for what he didn’t do. “Please see me in my office, Ma.” The Doctor said. Daniel’s mother was just weeping as she sat on the floor. The Doctor himself wasn’t sure she heard he just spoke. “Please, right now.” The Doctor lead the way. Daniel’s mother managed to stand up. She didn’t even know she wasn’t in her wrapper any longer, she was in her black underskirt, her scarf had also removed while she was rolling on the floor weeping. She entered into the office and sat down as the Doctor had told her. ** ** **
10 Jun 2015 | 07:03
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10 Jun 2015 | 07:04
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aeya . I knew its Alex hand work. but come to think of it o, some guys stupid sha. u day kill because of girl. upon how girls plenty rich 4 Nigeria. make u come coolval22.com make u com see girls. I mean sweet babes like @tenniebenson and others. oga o . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . abeg ride on
10 Jun 2015 | 07:44
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Pls dont Jill US dit suspe nse
10 Jun 2015 | 08:36
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God pls daniel must not die
10 Jun 2015 | 09:35
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Eyah........Alex is jex heartless and senseless...... Wad a painful death.....R.I.P Danny....... How happie i would be if vhiz traumatic eventz turnz out 2 be a mere dreaM.....chei!
10 Jun 2015 | 09:36
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his nt dead
10 Jun 2015 | 09:42
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i'm guessing daniel is nt dead...d doc lied
10 Jun 2015 | 09:54
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Is Daniel reaLly dead? I hope not. Wat abt Nora? Who is behind dis? Gloria I hope dis is d man 4 u
10 Jun 2015 | 10:02
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Hmmmm I cnt comment yet
10 Jun 2015 | 10:10
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Am sure Daniel isn't dead, d doctor was just trying to b profesional. Lord save Nora nd Dave
10 Jun 2015 | 10:18
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Dat must nt b oooo jst a dream
10 Jun 2015 | 10:19
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Daniel is nt dead n i blve nora wil escape
10 Jun 2015 | 10:58
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Welldone@Gloria
10 Jun 2015 | 11:01
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I knw! I knw! It was alex handi-work. Dan plz wake up, u can't die!!!!!
10 Jun 2015 | 11:59
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Hmmm first tym of reading but sounds interesting
10 Jun 2015 | 13:17
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Hmmm alex daniel ghost wil hunt you if truely he is dead bt i dnt see wrong in daniel to beat alex bcux he wanted to spoil his home.
10 Jun 2015 | 15:54
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Y d suspense
10 Jun 2015 | 16:29
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Another soul won for God. Heaven us surely rejoicing at this moment but I just hope this David of a guy isn't on mission to lead you astray. Just wish Daniel & Nora pulls out of this problem alive and together again
10 Jun 2015 | 16:45
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Haaaa Daniel Dead, I Thought He Was The Story Teller Where Did U Get This Story Then I Like Daniel, I Like Daniel! I Like Him! I Wil Use My Powers To Raise HIM
10 Jun 2015 | 16:52
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OººOººh David cnt die like dis nah Seems there a̶̲̥̅̊я̲̅ε̲̣̣̣̥ two davids(confused)
10 Jun 2015 | 18:09
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Maybe he's (Daniel) in coma
11 Jun 2015 | 01:32
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Heiiewooo Alex is very heartless...so Unfortunate for Nora,@the beginning of their bliss,tragedy happened..Daniel can't die oh jare...what happens next pls?
11 Jun 2015 | 03:23
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Daniel is not dead. The doctor just said it to protect Dannys life from another attack . Alex is gonna regret at the long run. That I know!
11 Jun 2015 | 04:31
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yeye alex ur soul is already burning while u are still alive
11 Jun 2015 | 13:31
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Just like that? I don't believe it.
11 Jun 2015 | 13:33
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am sorry for d delay i will update first tin in d morning
11 Jun 2015 | 16:52
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pls we nid d nxt episode,daniel jst cnt die lky dat
11 Jun 2015 | 17:12
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*****episode 17****** ALEX BUSTLED THROUGH THE OAK DOOR, he put on a smile as he entered into the room he had kept Nora. He looked so happy that he had conquered Daniel and at last had Nora to himself. “Nora.” He called out as he sat by the edge of the mattress. Nora opened her heavy eyes, earlier, her nose had been stuffed with chloroform to make her sleep. She had been in shock, shouting and crying because of Daniel. She had disturbed the atmosphere of the car until the guys made her sleep by force. As she opened her eyes, tears rolled down her face again. Even while she was asleep, tears were still rolling down her face. It was indeed a big shock to her, she never expected what happened within a minute. Still wondering, she remembered he was shot by the head and her head jacked up instantly. “Are you now awake?” Alex enquired from her, his smile suddenly changed to a grin. Nora looked into the face of Alex and dimmed her eyes, struggling to see him properly. “Alex!” She exclaimed. Alex whisked to his feet as he laughed. “This is me, dear.” “What!” She exclaimed again. “You’re the one!” She stretched her index finger as she quickly knelt on the bed. “Alex!” She shouted again. “What’s happening now? Nora, you’re here with me now, let’s forget everything!” “Are you out of your mind? Alex where’s my husband? Where’s Daniel? Where have you kept him! Alex!” She began to cry. “Can you see now, this guy is making you cry now, I can’t withstand seeing tears in your face!” “It seems you’re crazy, Alex! What have you done to Daniel?” She questioned. “Just take life so easy, Nora. Let the sleeping dog lie..” Nora interrupted. “What’s the meaning of this! You kidnapped me? Where’s Daniel? Where’s my husband? I hate you, Alex!” She shouted. Alex stood akimbo with a frown on his face. “What on earth is your problem, Nora. It’s been a while, you know what happened back then, don’t you? We didn’t separate, I was flown abroad for treatment, only for me to return and hear that you’re with another guy. I still care a lot for you, dear.” Nora hissed. “Where’s Daniel?” Alex chuckled. “I have said it earlier, Nora. If you won’t accept me easily and happily, you’ll accept me forcefully!” “Alex! Let go of me!” Nora screamed. “Stop shouting because no one’s here to save you. Don’t beat about the bush because you’re mine already, Nora.” “No! Daniel! He was shot! Where’s Daniel? They shot my husband, Where’s Daniel?” “One thing is that even if Daniel took tricycle, he would have gotten to hell fire by now, dear. If you don’t know what that means, my love, Daniel’s gone already.” Nora froze. ** ** ** Daniel’s mother ran out of Doctor’s office, crying profusely. She had picked up her phone so as to call her other daughter and get all those who needed to know. She was out of control already, crying and wiping her tears almost immediately. There was something different about her character that minute, she was shivering and panicking as if if she got all the necessary people informed, Daniel would come back to life. The nurses in the hospital too even knew that a man just died due to Dan’s mum’s attitude. Soon, she rushed back into the hospital, wiping her tears as she rushed to the Doctor again. ** ** ** Gloria marched to her seat as she got to the office and placed her head on her two hands that had been placed on each other. She prayed for some minutes before she dropped her bag down beside herself and switched on her electronic system. She had directed David inside to see the director while she started her own work for the day. She didn’t know, but she could feel a twinge of happiness in her mind. She had been longing to win a soul for God, but she didn’t know how she would approach anyone she met. At least, heaven was happy over the soul and over herself who just won one soul into the kingdom. “Thank God.” She didn’t know when she closed her eyes and said the phrase. Resting her back on the chair, she swiveled the chair as she began to think of how she started preaching to David. Suddenly, her mind deviated, she wasn’t thinking about how she preached to David again, she began to think about David himself. He was tall, light in complexion, handsome and cool. Though, he was an unbeliever but she had preached to him already and he had confessed God as his saviour. God… she just beamed. Is it David? She just chuckled as she swiveled the chair again. Is he the one? She wondered as she closed her eyes for a moment. God, please let me know soon. She muttered with a sincere heart. Suddenly she opened her eyes and met David before her. His hands were on the table and his body, drifted forward as if he was looking at her face closely. Gloria’s heart lost a beat as she saw him. Has he heard my utterances? She wondered as she sat up and David stood upright. “You are muttering incoherent words, Gloria.” He smiled. Gloria didn’t want to believe that David didn’t hear all she had said. “Incoherent?” She raised her brows. “Sure.” David raised his shoulders with a smile. “I’m here just to appreciate you for your lecture today..” She cut in, “I’m not a lecturer, what you have to do next is simply to start attending church services.” “Sure, I have started.” He laughed as he pressed some buttons on his iPad and passed it to Gloria. “Please punch in the address of your church.” He said. Gloria smiled. ** ** **
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****episode 18**** “I’m Alex! He stole you away from me because I travelled, Nora.” “Alex, let me go!” Nora screamed. “I have told you earlier, Nora. If you scream from now till tomorrow, no fucking body will hear you!” “Alex leave me! I hate you! Where’s Daniel?” She cried. “I can’t leave you, Nora. You’re the air I’m breathing, you’re the sweat I’m sweating, you’re the shadow following me, I can’t…” He hardly finished his false confessions when Nora landed a slap on his cheeks. Alex held on to his cheeks quickly while Nora climbed on the mattress as fast as she could, if she could run out of the house. Alex followed and grabbed her even before she could leave the room. He pushed her to the mattress as he bounced on her and started beating her up. ** ** ** David had driven down to his own place of work as he thudded down his chair and swiveled to the right, thinking. He had been a man of great enjoyment, a fornicator, a drunkard and many more to his memory. “No one..” He just said silently as he shook his head. He had been engulfed in thought, wondering as if no one had ever preached to him. He could remember when one of his friends was having his wedding and the Pastor mounted on the pulpit to preach the gospel, he had thought all the young man of God would say would just be concerning love, warnings in marriage, but he was shocked to have heard him preaching about eternity. He carried his iPad and walked out of the Auditorium. In his heart, he had concluded within himself that no one could convince him to Christ at all! How did Gloria manage to hook his heart! He had been wondering. He just opened his lasy drawer and brought out a big book, new, dusty and dirty. He had kept it there for so long and that’d be his first time of getting hold of it. It was his Bible. ** ** ** Alex slammed the door as he walked out angrily to wash his blood-stained hands. He had beaten Nora to the extent that she bled through her nose and mouth. Nora was on the floor, in pain as she bled. She was crying profusely, not because of the way she was beaten, but because she couldn’t boast that Daniel was still alive. Who would save her from the hands of evil Michael? She had been wondering as she rolled in her blood and tears. Is Daniel still alive? She had wonderedas she cried more. She remembered he was shot by the head and he collapsed immediately. A person shot by the head can’t live again! That has to do with the brain, from the brain to the heart! Is Daniel really gone? She continued wailing in pain and tears. She never knew how she was taken into the room, she never knew her phone had falled under the mattress when she was thrown to the bed as she was taken into the room in an unconscious state. She had been wondering on how she could just leave Alex’s hands and go to see her husband. Her heart was shattered. ** ** ** EVENING. Daniel’s mother was seated in the living room. As she heard the honk of her daughter, she rushed to the curtains and pushed them to a side to know if she was really the one. As soon as she saw her, she went to her seat and burst into tears. She hadn’t been crying, maybe seeing her made her to start crying again. Soon, the lady walked inside the house slowly and met her crying. “Mum, what’s wrong?” Her handbag slipped off her hand as she rushed to meet her mother. “Daniel’s really gone.” She replied admist tears. She had been up and doing concerning Daniel since morning, so, she couldn’t even call any of her children to know.” “Daniel’s what? Where did he go to?” She asked, not wanting to think of another word synonymous to ‘go‘. “My son was shot! Daniel… he was..” she continued weeping. “No..” She screamed aloud. “No mum! No! I still saw him on Sunday with his wife, mum! I still saw Nora and we spoke together! No! Mum, no!” Daniel’s mother wiped her tears as she held on to her daughter and quickly hugged her. “Stop all these!” She said. “No!” She wriggled out the hug as she rushed out of the house without even carrying her handbag. It was still hard to belief. As the woman was crying, she picked up her phone and called the Doctor. The whole family had been in tears since morning. ** ** ** The next morning. “Where’s Nora!” Tonia exclaimed as they were all set to visit the hospital. “We’ve been trying to get her since yesterday, Tonia.” Daniel’s mother replied. “I met her handbag inside the car, so I have been wondering if Daniel was shot and Nora was taken away.” She added. “Nora too? But who’s this person who did all these?” She wanted to start crying again. “No one should cry anymore!” Daniel’s Father said from behind. His little brother, Michael was leaning against the wall, crying too as they got set to check out the hospital. “They just killed him that way?” Michael wiped his tears. “Dear, shouldn’t we get the police force involved in this? Shouldn’t we get them involved in those who murdered Daniel and where Nora was taken to?” His father asked. Dan’s mother hurtled a gaze at him and shook her head. “Not now!” She exclaimed. “How do we get to the root of the matter then?” He asked. “Just leave everything to me.” She replied. “Let’s go.” She added as she led the way. ••••••
12 Jun 2015 | 03:18
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Hmmm,wat a wicked world we r livin in....
12 Jun 2015 | 03:51
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hmmm d guy no fit die like DAT na
12 Jun 2015 | 05:23
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eyah(crying). Am sure Dan's mum wil do sumtin has she has said... i dnt even knw an interesting story is goin on. Somkhid, mor mb to ya fone
12 Jun 2015 | 06:49
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Wad a World of wickedness and Brutality...Alex u're claiminq Nora is ya everitin den why beatinq her??? Nora how i wish i could help....Am alxo happiE 4 Gloria 2.....
12 Jun 2015 | 07:23
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OººOººh God is he really dead???? Alex, so beatings a̶̲̥̅̊я̲̅ε̲̣̣̣̥ anoda way of showing love? Buh wait OººOººh a̶̲̥̅̊я̲̅ε̲̣̣̣̥ d̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ two ℓ̊ mean (Daniel) jux wondering
12 Jun 2015 | 08:00
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This Alex is an animal, i think he shd mt Stephanie, they are meant for each other if only he's not sentenced to death for attempted murder.
12 Jun 2015 | 10:59
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Hmmm whats daniel's mom up to?
12 Jun 2015 | 12:29
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Hmmm so sorry 4 nora bt alex must pay 4 this.
12 Jun 2015 | 12:34
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I knw d@ a miracle is about 2 happen.
12 Jun 2015 | 16:54
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AAAAAAH
13 Jun 2015 | 03:40
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Lol..... I've just lost interest in this story...not because of the emotions there, but because it has already shows how it would end...its predictable....there is nothing like suspense there anymore because it wasn't like many stories hadn't been like this..... . . But its interesting. Weldone.....
13 Jun 2015 | 03:55
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Alex Is A Beast
13 Jun 2015 | 06:17
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Alex is really a devils incarnate. Kidnapping a lady to marry her. Where has that ever happened on a democratic dispensation of this our time. Alex, just waste ur time chasing.
13 Jun 2015 | 06:20
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Dan is not dead,he can't just die! Sowie Nora! Alex...............
13 Jun 2015 | 07:13
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Dan's mum gotta involve a native doctor(babalawo) into diz matter
13 Jun 2015 | 09:48
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***episode 19&20 HER EYES WERE AS RED AS THE BLAZE OF FIRE. No other proof could show that she had been on the soft bed, crying overnight. She was not after her problems but after Daniel. She had often questioned herself, wondering is he really dead? If only she could get a quick and correct response that he was alive, her mind would be at rest. Why would disaster strike at the time the two began to get along? Her heart hadn’t stopped saying prayers for Daniel as she laid on the bed. It had been hours that she’s been seated without blinking an eyelid. She had shouted Alex’s name continuously but it seemed the criminal was not around. Where could he have gone overnight? Who could tell if he was around and was just pretending to be absent? She could feel pain all over herself, Alex was really a bastard! **** Daniel’s parents and siblings walked into the Hospital slowly, their eyes; darting round the reception as they shuffled to a seat. “Let’s go on ahead to see the Doctor.” Daniel’s mother told the frustrated man on seat. His ears still couldn’t believe that Daniel was really gone, he really wished to see the corpse of his son before giving up on him. The two went on ahead as they left Tonia and her brother on seat, telling them they’d be right back. As they walked on, Daniel’s mother drifted closer to the father and they began to discuss. Soon, they got to the Doctor’s office and knocked softly. The two walked inside the office immediately they got the go-ahead to come inside. “How are you doing, Doctor?” Dan’s father enquired as he sat down. “Good day, Sir.” The Doctor stood up as he protracted his hand for handshake. “Good day, Doctor. What of my son?” The man quickly asked. The Doctor hurtled a gaze at Dan’s mother, probably wondering maybe she hadn’t told the man that Daniel was gone already. He raised his brows as and his shoulders together. “Your son, Sir….” The Doctor paused. He wanted to continue but it was obvious that he didn’t know what really he was meant to say that minute. He looked at Daniel’s mother and back to the man who just questioned him. “Can you show me my son’s corpse?” He asked. “Urgh… em.. as a Doctor, Sir, I think you shouldn’t see that type of thing this moment..” He hardly finished the sentence before glimpsing at Dan’s mother again, raising his brows. Daniel’s mother cleared her throat. “See, we don’t need all this! If you go on ahead to see his corpse now, it will cause you nothing but more trouble. Do you want me to start crying again?” The man burst into tears. “So my Daniel is really gone? And you said I shouldn’t involve the police? Did you just say that? I must get to the root of this matter! I must get whosoever killed my son and took his wife away! I will! He exclaimed. The Doctor let out air from his nostrils forcefully as he sat down. “Please Sir, could you please sit and listen to what I wish to tell you, Sir. It might calm your spirit and make you know that we need no vengeance presently.” “WE?” He repeated as he sat slowly. “When did you become a member of my family?” “Please, Sir. Could you just listen to me?” “Okay, speak on..” He sniffled as he wiped his face. **** Alex flipped the door open as he gazed at Nora. “My dear.” He walked in, unbalanced and dirty. Nora sat up. He looked like a fellow who was drunk. Could he have gone to a bar? She wondered. But that was of little concern, if he was really drunk, she was ready to take the risk involved in running away from him that day. “Won’t you speak to me?” Nora looked at him with pity and disgust. She was only pitying him for how he would look after he would be caught with his fellow evil doers, she wondered how a person could be so heartless and at the end expecting her to marry him. It sounded so stupid to her. She smiled. “Welcome sweetheart, I have been longing to see you.” She said. “Really? I’m back now and I’m all yours.” He grinned. He threw himself on the mattress, as Nora glimpsed at the door. It wasn’t locked. He might still be under the influence of the alcohol. “Where did you now go to? I missed you.” “I only went to play with my friends, I’m back now.” He replied slowly. He had laid on the bed and his two eyes were closing up . “Should I help you cook something?” She asked him. NOON. David dropped down from his vehicle and raised his head up, reading the bold letters of the company’s name; MAVERICK COMPANIES. He beamed as he tucked his hands in his pocket and dropped his head down, checking his pair of well- polished black shoes. One mistake he knew he made was that he didn’t get Gloria’s mobile number before he left the other day. Anyways, he collected her church address and didn’t know when they’d be having service. “She should be able to take lunch with me.” He had thought as he took his first step into the company with a smile. Thank God he came at the right time, it was during the break of the company. “Hey!” He grinned as he saw her on seat, punching on some buttons on her handheld. Gloria raised her head and saw him. “Wao!” She grinned too. “Good afternoon, Mr David.” David chuckled. “How are you doing?” He asked. “I’m great as usual, and you?” She asked. “Enjoying God!” He winked with a flash of grin. “I never knew you’d come around. We are on break presently, would you like to wait for the boss for one hour?” She enquired. “Ohh.. so bad of me! Please sit down.” She quickly said as she showed him to a seat. David grinned again as he sat down. “I didn’t come for the boss, Gloria.” He didn’t come for the boss, so who? She wondered. “Really?” She widened her eyes. “Sure. I came to invite you to a lunch with me, so you can tell me more about God, your Church and most especially how I can contact you when I need help.” “Help? From me?” She questioned. “About my spiritual life.” He replied. “What about your spiritual life?” “I need you to recommend books and… you know?” He shrugged. Gloria chuckled. “It is very simple, Sir. You can pick up your Bible and the Holy Spirit will speak to you, I don’t have anything to add.” “Hmmn…” He cleared his throat and scratched his head. “Just to help me.” Gloria smiled. “Alright, no problem.” “So can you follow me to that eatery where we can take lunch, so you can discuss with me a bit?” David said, thinking in his heart that he had a great approach of cajoling. Gloria just curved her lips into a faint smile, she liked him at least. She had been wondering how she could preach to a soul and he accepted Jesus that same day. But I hope it’s not too early? She had wondered in her heart, thinking if it wouldn’t be early for her to start following David. Though, he was already converted and it seemed he wanted to know more about the saviour he just gave his life to. “Alright..” She drawled, putting on the expression as if she was just going because she had to recommend books and preach to him. She was already slipping into the ocean of love too. “Thanks, God bless you.” David said smiling. Gloria also gave a warm smile as she grabbed her handbag. ** ** ** Nora froze at the same spot immediately she heard Alex’s blusterous voice. Alex never slept? She had thought within herself as she still stood at the point as if the voice was like an adhesive that had tied her down. As she stood, millions of thoughts ran through her troubled mind. She was fed up and didn’t even know what next she was meant to do. “I only made you go through a test to know if truly you want me, but now I see that you are ready to run away and expose me, right?” Nora turned around and looked at him with her swollen and oily face. “You are crazy, Alex!” She exclaimed. “That’s because of the strong love I have for you, Nora. No other guy can ever love you this way! Not even Daniel!” Nora gave a soft chuckle as she moved her wrists by her waist, standing akimbo. “Yes, I am a hundred percent sure that Daniel can never love me this way.” She said as she took a slight pause. “What did I say? Good you even know!” “Only a daft person won’t know my husband can never raise his hands on me! You are an animal, just in human form, Alex. I never knew you could change this much!” Alex became umbrageous again as he arose from the mattress. ** ** ** A month later… It was already a month. Weeks had rolled into weeks and it was on Sunday morning. Tonia walked to her window and pulled the drapes to a side, wondering where Nora could be. At first, she had been thinking that Nora flee when Daniel was shot, but there is something that still looked confusing in the matter that made her parents finalized that she should return to Nigeria and search for Nora by all means. Daniel’s family moved to America, a week after they cleared themselves from the hospital. They have been there for weeks but it seemed something unusual was showing forth that made the family finalized that Tonia should come and try all she could so as to get Nora and probably bring her to America too. Who knows if she even ran away or if she was taken away by those who shot Daniel? Now, no one to shed more light, not even Daniel! You can never understand him! How do I start my investigation now? She wondered as she let out air from her nostrils and sat on the soft bed. The ray of the sun shadowed into the big room where she was. She didn’t like how dark it was earlier, the electric power had been taken and she had no choice but to open the window. She sighed again as she laid on the mattress this time. She knew her mother could call her any moment and ask if she had seen Nora at all. She just returned the day before and had been called severally as if she knew where she was. “God, please help me, help Nora wherever she is and that Daniel! I’m tired of crying and searching all around.” She mumbled. ** ** ** Even though it was a month already, Nora was still in the room locked up. She had been trying her best to hold her head up, if not, she would have killed herself long back. She had cried that she felt she had no tear left in her eyes any longer. Her faith that she had tried to keep up had gradually degraded that she already had it in mind that Daniel was really gone. Sometimes, it would look like a dream to her whenever she remembered that Daniel was really gone. She had also refused to give her body to Alex, neither her heart, which had resulted into different maltreatments. She was on the bed, still thinking when she felt a change in her system suddenly and rushed to her feet. She had been feeling feverish for some days, but there was no one to tell that to. She picked a race to the bathroom as she went to vomit. She hoped it was only fever and nothing more. ***
14 Jun 2015 | 03:46
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the tread of coolval writer and member of the months closes 2day so vote for ur choice 2day follow dis link https://www.coolval.com/ Vforum/topic/coolval22- com-writer-of-the-month- of-may-2015/
14 Jun 2015 | 04:20
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dat is d result of dat drunk day i tink u knw...nora may god free u frm alex d devil
14 Jun 2015 | 05:16
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Dis lyf sha,Nora has gotten pregnant dat gud,cos i kw is 4 daniel,welldone @somhkid
14 Jun 2015 | 05:25
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Nora is pregnant with Daniel's child. Maybe that will make Alex leave her alone.
14 Jun 2015 | 05:34
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Nice story. Wow Nora is pregnant 4 her husband
14 Jun 2015 | 05:47
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Oyun Ni
14 Jun 2015 | 05:47
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Bye bye daniel ,...nora plz take heart plz,....nore don get belle ooo
14 Jun 2015 | 06:27
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So Daniel eventually died. RIP 2 d dead. God will c U thru Nora and as 4 d heartless Alex, karma will visit him soonest.
14 Jun 2015 | 06:46
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Alright! Nora pregnant 4 her husband, Alex finally gone mad, Gloria moving on wit her life in a gud way, Daniel..... Nt sure he is dead. Nxt
14 Jun 2015 | 06:49
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Hope alex wont do anything to daniel's baby
14 Jun 2015 | 07:41
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Hmm, seems its all coming to an end.
14 Jun 2015 | 07:49
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am sure dave's very much alive... Nora is really suffering God intervene o make dat foolish Alex no blow d foetus out of her belly.
14 Jun 2015 | 10:40
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Dan isn't dead n d doc doesn't wnt 2 tel d parents so dat d news wn't gt 2 Alex
14 Jun 2015 | 13:31
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may God help Dan & Nora
14 Jun 2015 | 14:51
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I dont like predictable stories...its like watching nollywood movies... If Daniel had died...it would av giving a new twist 2 d story..nd it will take d readers off d hook of thinking dis or dat.... But evrything is pointing 2 d fact dat he is not dead...nd dan's parents took dan abroad nd nw dey want nora 2 come over nd meet her hubby.... Datz wat will happen...only if u want 2 change d story ryt nw
14 Jun 2015 | 15:09
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So daniel is gone anyway nora wil born junior daniel
14 Jun 2015 | 16:16
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She don chop belle full. make dat wicked devil of Alex no tamper wit dat baby boy ooo
14 Jun 2015 | 19:18
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MY POWERS DIDNT WORK? MAY BE MERLIN WIL HELP ME! I WANNA RAISE DANIEL
15 Jun 2015 | 03:28
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second daniel on d way,serously i hv been tinking 2wards dat direction tennie bt on a second thought u ask questions,y must it be tonia alona alone dat will come looking 4 nora?
15 Jun 2015 | 03:39
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****episode 21**** DAVID prayed his mind would just be inured to Gloria’s love as they were going on. He had started feeling some unusual feelings deep inside him as the two had been together discussing. Even though they were talking about God’s word, he didn’t feel bored as gospel usually dull his spirit before. He was short of words, not knowing what exactly to say to Gloria again and didn’t want them to part ways that minute. He was feeling some sweet sensations as both were just discussing together. “What other thing do you think a man can do to his enemy? I mean another thing one can do to someone who’s not good?” It wasn’t as if he didn’t know the answer to the question he had asked, he only wanted them to keep discussing. Gloria just chuckled. “Em.. I am quite sure you know the answer to this question you are asking me, Mr. David.” Gloria said. David smiled. “If I tell you I know nothing, I’m just lying. I only want to know more, at least it is not a sin to keep knowing more, is it?” “It is not good to keep malice. It is not good to have enemies. It is good to always settle disputes between you and whoever you think you are not in right terms with.” She paused for a while and continued. “ Always make sure you change everyone who needs a change.” She concluded. As soon as she completed her statement, her conscience pricked her instantly. She titledher head and began to think of why her mind wasn’t at rest after she had spoken to David. Alex? She had asked herself as she wondered what had made her heart not to be at peace. “Hmmn.. you inspire me…” David smiled. Gloria was already lost in thought as David was speaking. She had been searching her heart if she was not guilty of what she had just told David. I never cared to win his soul more than I did! I just left him. I think I should give this a trial again bbefore I give up on him. God knows I have never given up on him, but I think God wants him to have a last chance.. she was soliloquizing to herself as David noticed she was far from their seat. “Hello?” He called out as he waved his right hand. She quickly turned her face to his direction and smiled. “Sorry, I was thinking about something.” She said. Dave, don’t dull! This is an opportunity to know more about her, give it a try! David had heard in his heart as he looked at her closely. “Thinking about that guy, right?” He winked with a grin. Gloria chuckled. “A guy? That is not me.” She said. Maybe she wasn’t even thinking about any guy. She must be a single lady, I am sure. It will be awkward if I just ask her that way… let me whine her more. “Keep deceiving us, at least you will soon share the invitation card for the wedding ceremony.” Gloria laughed. “Honestly…” She was short of words. ** ** ** Nora laid on the mattress, pale and tired. She reassured herself that it wouldn’t be what she was thinking of, she was definitely sure. Rolling to the other side of the mattress, she grabbed a small towel by the drawer and cleaned her soft glabrous skinned face. She exhaled deeply as she dropped the towel and remembered Daniel again. She hated to remember him. It was already a part of her that she couldn’t give away but it was always tough to withhold the tears once Daniel was been remembered. Tears rolled down her cheeks again as she remembered him. Series of questions flowed through her completely troubled mind, she started asking herself again if Daniel was alive. He was shot by the head! She recalled again as she tweaked her runny nose and reached for the towel again. Nora had always expected a kind of miracle or the other but she hadn’t seen any yet, she just wished God could touch the heart of Alex and just let her leave. She had always pondered why someone who claimed he loved her could lock her up in a room and be enjoying his own life out there. He wasn’t like that when they were still together, could it be the incident of that day that had turned his brain upside down? Letting out air from her nostrils, she pictured how Daniel was shot by the head again and how she was carried to the vehicle. Wouldn’t people say when he was shot, his wife ran away? Or won’t they say it is even his wife that is responsible for his death? No! Daniel! She sobbed. ** ** ** Tonia had been up and doing since, driving around the city if miracle would let her see Nora. She felt that was weird, but she had no choice. She was just coming from the station to lodge the complaint about the missing Tonia and Daniel that was shot dead. According to the I.P.O, he had told her they would start work on the case as soon as they could. She had dropped the details needed- pictures, mobile phone number and many more. She had no choice, it was her brother’s doing. She got off the track, tired already. She had been driving for thirty minutes now without seeing the Tonia in question. She had been praying in her heart for miracle but nothing was coming forth. An annoying life! ** ** ** Gloria whisked to her feet. “I think we should get going.” She said to David. David was shocked. He never knew she would stand up to tell him that. I’m I that boring? He questioned himself in his heart. “Are you bored?” He was forced to ask. “No.” Gloria shook her head instantly and smiled. “I’m sorry of my sudden reaction, I’m just remembering that I have to do some things now.” She said to David. David cleaned his mouth. “Really? Are you really serious?” He asked again. “Sure. I have to see someone, please.” She said. “Lunch time is almost over, won’t you return back to the office?” He asked with concern. “I don’t even know yet. I really have to see this person and clear my guilty conscience.” She said, looking away. She couldn’t place her hands on why her zeal to see him arose to that stage. “Alright, I think this is a very important thing then, do you mind me taking you there?” David enquired. Gloria nodded quickly. “Sure.” David smiled as he stood up. “Off we go.” He stretched his hand forth by the way, telling her to lead the way. Both walked out and hopped into the vehicle as they sped off, it was off to Alex’s house. The gate was locked up. Alex must have gone to his place of work, Gloria had thought as she shook the gate. She placed her hear by the gate if she would hear sounds of either television set or Alex himself, but all was quiet. She knocked on the gate again and stood akimbo. David was just looking at her, wondering what she was doing there. “I don’t think the fellow is around.” “….help me!” Gloria heard a faint voice screaming from inside the house. Help me? She repeated as she looked back at David who was looking at her from the car. She felt she hadn’t heard the right thing and called on David. “Please come.” She said as she placed her ear near the gate again. “Help me.” She heard the voice again. This time, David was just coming down from his car, walking slowly, he got beside her and tapped her before she knew she had travelled out that vicinity, already thinking of what must be happening inside the house. “Can you hear that?” He asked David. David contorted his mouth and shook his head. “No.” He replied. She hissed softly and pulled him closer to hear the voice screaming inside the house. “Someone needs help, can you hear now?” She asked. “Oooh.. a lady is shouting there. I think something is happening inside the house. Can we call the police?” David asked, scared already. “Where is this place?” He quickly asked again. “Just leave that for now. I don’t think we should call the police. I was thinking of you, jumping the fence to save… you know?” “Huh?” David frowned. “I know we haven’t talked up to that point, but let me let you know now, Sister Gloria. I am the first and the last born of our family, so you hate me this much? You want me to die just like that?” Gloria scratched her head. “Something is not working fine inside this house and before anything so bad happens, you can jump in while I try to get the officers.” Gloria added. “Oooh.. now I see that you don’t even like me..!” David smiled and took steps backward. “Alright, how can we contact the officers within a twinkle of an eye?” She asked. “I really don’t know too, but I have a friend I can call who can help us out. But before then, can’t you just let us go and stay somewhere? What if the owner of the house comes out or is driving in?” “Why are you a great coward? And you call yourself a man? Nothing will happen to all those who trust in God.” “Urgh.. Okay oh, I just know the bible also quoted that we should be wise and not foolish.” “This isn’t an act of foolishness, just… I mean just call on that friend of yours to help us out!” David swooshed out a long breath from his nostrils, he was already sweating. Nora was still screaming for help inside the house. Alex had just left his office. He was on his way back home. The traffic was already building up on carrila road and he was rushing so as to get home as quick as possible. He hated traffic and heat so much that he could pay someone off to get him off the traffic instantly. He peeped out of the window as his vehicle shifted forward, following the bus at his front. “I now rule my world!” He muttered, remembering that he had Nora with him already. “Daniel who is a problem is already gone, I now have the chance to do anyhow to my newly acquired property!” He laughed aloud. Soon, he got to a junction by the right and just trafficated, speeding off on the free road. He was almost at home. ** ** **
15 Jun 2015 | 04:07
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****episode 22***** episode 21and 22 are dedicated to all my fans following dis tread “I just don’t want us to remain here, Gloria. It is dangerous.” Gloria pulled in her lips and snapped her fingers. “Alright, let’s go and find somewhere to stay, who can tell if the house owner is on his way?” “Exactly.” David’s wish finally came true as he hopped into the car with Gloria and drove on. As he drove on, Alex’s car was also on it’s way and both just passed beside each other, unknowingly. “That’s Alex!” Gloria said as they moved on. “Alex? The owner of the house, right?” He enquired. “Sure.” Gloria replied. David’s phone was just glued to his ear, at last his friend picked up the call and he started explaining all he needed. …Story continues.
15 Jun 2015 | 04:10
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nice one @somkhid waitin for d next
15 Jun 2015 | 05:22
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Great!
15 Jun 2015 | 06:09
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I did nt tink daniel's realy dead jare
15 Jun 2015 | 07:00
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Waoooooowwww.....Alex! Ur Doom is near
15 Jun 2015 | 08:46
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nxt pls
15 Jun 2015 | 10:46
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i js hope/pray dat dey get dat Alex n punish him wela
15 Jun 2015 | 11:04
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Yeah ... hope he wouldn't get away with that...
15 Jun 2015 | 11:29
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hmmmmmmmmmmm Hope say he no see una oh.
15 Jun 2015 | 11:33
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nyc 1..... alex ur goin down
15 Jun 2015 | 12:08
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Haaa somkhid this last episode is too small oooo Pls next
15 Jun 2015 | 12:33
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Alex is doom already. Nora keep praying ur freedom is near.
15 Jun 2015 | 14:08
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@ last Nora ll be freed
15 Jun 2015 | 17:08
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We r waitin 2 see,wat happend....
15 Jun 2015 | 18:13
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****episode 23***** Alex was moving his head, dancing to the beat of the music he was listening to. He halted the car and came down slowly, whistling as he approached the gate. He unlocked the gate and heard Nora’s shouts inside the house, screaming for help. He chuckled and walked back into his car to drive in. He parked the vehicle and came down to lock up his gate before he finally went inside the house to face Nora for shouting. He had unbuttoned his shirt and headed to Nora’s room to deal with her for shouting. What if people had heard her shouts? This girl is just insane! He had said as he pushed the door to her room open and rested his back on the door after he locked it up. He was looking at her, his eyes were already transmitting what he had in his mind, ANGER! He bit his lips and stared at her. Nora was already by the edge of the mattress, her heart was beating as fast as it could, she was so afraid she had been thinking Alex would just kill her that day. “You want people to know, is that not it?” He took a step forward as he questioned her. “Alex.” She called the name softly as she stretched forth her hand, telling him to stop coming closer. “You can bash me for all I care… That is if you have the strength to do that.” He laughed and continued, “do you want to destroy this deal? Do you?” He grabbed her hand suddenly. “Alex!” Nora screamed as she tried to wriggle her hand away from his. Daniel laughed and let go of her hand. “I think I should forgive you this one more time, darling.” He grinned. “Mercy won’t be available the next time you try this shit with me. I’m Alex! I’m in control.” As tired as Nora was, she sprung to her feet suddenly. ** ** ** “The guy has entered now, Gloria. Who knows what he would be doing to the poor lady now? Who knows?” David lamented. “At least your friend said the police officers are now on their way, all will be fine soon.” Gloria replied. David let out air from his nostrils as he tilted his head. “I never knew such people still exist in this world, I never knew.” He hardly finished speaking when his phone rang. It was his friend, the police officer. “Dave, I’m calling to tell you our guys are on the way. Besides, it seems the case you just reported was reported to us some hours back. A lady is in search of her brother’s wife who was kidnapped. Let’s hope that’d be the person we’ve been searching for too.” David smiled. “Thanks, friend. We are surely expectant.” ** ** ** Tonia dropped down on the sofa. She began to wonder why everything was like that. Who could have shot Daniel and went away with his wife? That can’t be any other person but someone who is either in love with Daniel or his wife. “No.” She cautioned herself. Someone who’s in love with someone won’t shoot him. Even if that situation must happen, not in the head where he or she knew he could die instantly. That means the person is possibly in love with Nora and not Daniel. “No news yet!” She clenched her fingers. “When will she be found? She’s the only person that can make the situation on ground better for everyone. She wiped her tears as she remembered Daniel. “Dan.” She said softly. ** ** ** “If you’ll kill me today, I don’t care but I wish to know some things, Dan.” Nora exclaimed. “Dan? Can you see that you’re being mistaken? Am I Dan?” Alex smiled. “You must be crazy for saying that! I am no longer afraid of you, boy. All I’m after is that you have killed the child’s father, let the child live!” “Child.” Alex repeated as he squinted his face as he began to ponder on what she had just said. “What did you just say? How do… do you mean?” “You already, know. Don’t you? By the way, before you kill me, I wish to know why you killed him. I never knew you to be animal before! Thanks be to God that we got separated, I would have been married to an animal who have no value for a lady, not for God or for mankind.” “Nora!” Alex shouted, rolling his fist. “Kill me! I seriously care less! All I want is for my baby to live and by the way, in the hands of sensible and God- fearing human being, not you!” “You’re already carrying his baby, right?” He began to laugh. “I said I want to marry you and you are already carrying his baby. How will I have my way? The baby has to go and will surely go.” He laughed again. “Even your grandparents can’t stop this kid from coming into this world. Even none of your generation, Alex. You fool!” “Nora! I now see that you really wish to die.” He took some steps closer and slapped her so hard that she fell on the mattress. He started beating her up until he found out that she had fainted. He just hissed and walked out of the room, leaving the door unlocked. ** ** ** David had driven the car near to Alex’s house again. He and Gloria had felt the police officer were meant to be closer to them now and grab whom they ought to jail. He looked at Gloria every minute, wondering if he was safe. If not for Gloria who had told him to drive back to Alex’s place, he had already parked his car, awaiting the police from where he could not be found. Soon, the police’s vehicle came around and the two got down from the car and rushed forward to meet the policemen. “Are you Mr. David?” One of them had asked as they saw David. “Sure.” He stretched forth his hand to exchange a handshake. His friend must have told the policemen about him, definitely. The officer shook his hand. “Is this the house?” He glimpsed at the building and back at David. “Yes, this is the house.” Gloria cut in. “Alright.” The man replied and looked back at the other officers. “Guys!” He called out as they motioned towards the gate. It was locked. “Locked.” The officer said to his guys as he signaled to one of them that climbed over the fence. It was so quick and silent that only a person who might be expecting them would notice. The officer opened the gate slowly while other officers came in slowly. David and Gloria just stood together and were looking at them. The policemen motioned further, walking stealthily till they got to the main entrance of the house. One of them just pressed down the door handle and luckily, the door was open! He waved his hand at them, signaling that the door was open. Then, they began to walk in. ** ** ** Alex had taken off his clothes. He was clad in only his singlet and boxer shorts when he walked out of the room to the living room. He picked up the remote control of the television and had his seat as he tuned the television. He had been thinking of what exactly to do with Nora since she told him she was pregnant. He didn’t want to kill her, but didn’t know how long it would take for him to make preparations for the two of them to travel out of the country. “She must surely be mine! By the time I am through with all these, she will at the end love me. At least, there is no Daniel anywhere again, let’s see if she won’t dance to the tune of my music at the end!” He laughed aloud. “Freeze, don’t move.” He heard next. He gazed at the television set with his bulgy eyes fully open, probably wondering if the noise came from the movie he was seeing or all was already dawning on him. “No>” He turned his head and saw guns, already pointing at him. “No.” He repeated. “This is a yes, Sir.” An officer stepped forward with a leaflet of foolscap sheet and unfolded it. “This is our search warrant, we are here to search your house.” He displayed the paper before him before he looked at the men and tilted his head, moving in the direction of inside the house. “Search, guys.” “There’s nothing to search in this house! This is illegal! You can’t just come to someone’s house with a sheet of paper and request to see the what is in the house. I won’t take this!” He kept shouting at the top of his voice. “Please, Sir. I’ll just advice you to remain quiet because whatever you say here…” “-will be used against me, right?” He concluded the sentence as he stared at the officer and back to the ones who were already on their ways to search inside the house. “No.” He screamed again. “We found here!” A voice was heard from a room suddenly. “Shit!” He hit his left fist in his right palm. Looking forward, they brought Nora out of the room, bleeding already. “You’re under arrest.” The officer said as the brought the handcuffs forward. Truly, it has dawned on him. ….story continues
16 Jun 2015 | 07:35
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nyc wok @somkhid. Wen Gloria & Nora see eachother, dey wud recognised themselves. I dey gbadun ur wok bro
16 Jun 2015 | 07:46
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Waoooow! Glad at d turn of event. Alex now u ll dance t d tune of ya crime!!!!! Nice work dearie
16 Jun 2015 | 07:52
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How will Gloria feel when she hear Daniel is dead...she will hate Alex more ..lol
16 Jun 2015 | 08:53
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Hymmmm Alex i pity u alot. And i think Nora would deny u being put to jail
16 Jun 2015 | 10:00
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No oooooo!!!!! Daniel can't be dead. Something or someone must have saved him somehow, anyhow. He can't die like dat na
16 Jun 2015 | 10:16
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Its quite unfunate that finally u have be arested nw u wil dance to the police tune which is jail.**Idiot**
16 Jun 2015 | 10:23
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Alex u will suffer in jail u dis hrtless man. Nora tank gloria ooo bc na her spirit lead her to preach dave dat make her remember dat she is keeping malice wit foolish Alex. . . . Somkhid roll on as i take my pap nd garri.
16 Jun 2015 | 10:58
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Thank God dat Nora is now freed. That's one big of an achievement
16 Jun 2015 | 11:17
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The end of d wicked is always disastrous
16 Jun 2015 | 11:22
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Gben Gben
16 Jun 2015 | 11:38
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Hmmnn@Mray ℓ̊ pray she doesn't loose †ђε̲̣̣̣̥ pregnancy Nice work
16 Jun 2015 | 12:10
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@Kemkit, wat I do ooooooooo
16 Jun 2015 | 12:21
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Wooow just looking forward to Alex's arrest
16 Jun 2015 | 12:44
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thnk God ooo
16 Jun 2015 | 13:13
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ALEX!!!!!!!!!!!.!.
16 Jun 2015 | 19:18
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I wonder aw u can force some1 2 love u... Impossicant...if na me sef..na me go give u rat poison... No be only dat one..i go come pour acid 4 ur body come dey stab u continuosly
16 Jun 2015 | 20:19
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No rest for d wicked... Everyday plans evil, but one day.... Gloria ur mind dey ok
16 Jun 2015 | 22:06
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Datz gud 4 [email protected] work bro. next plz
17 Jun 2015 | 02:54
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****episode 24**** Nora was carried by two policemen. She was already weak that she couldn’t stand on her own that minute. The leader of the police officers around had made a call through, requesting for an ambulance as Alex was being taken away. David and Gloria were still outside, awaiting the policemen to bring him out, cuffed as he had been cuffed already. As soon as Gloria set her eyes on him, she felt bad and pitied him. “Alex, despite all I have tried! Despite all the words of God I shared with you, I never knew you’d end it this way. I tried all my best to bring you to the line of Christ, I preached to you, I told you about God but your life never changed!” “Can someone who’s preaching to the other to change be the one who invited the policemen to come and arrest the one she has been preaching to?” Alex questioned her. Gloria wiped her tears. “Sure. I saved a life now, at least. No, I even saved two lives. I saved the life of the young lady in there and yours! If I never called the policemen, you might have killed that lady inside that house and you have added to your sins. I did pray to God to change your hardened heart, but as God is trying to change you, you have never been ready!” “Officer, aren’t we going anymore? I have spent enough time out here.” Alex said to one of the officers. “Alex.” Gloria paused for a while. “I am not crying because you were caught by the police force, I am only crying because if you continue like this, there will be a day you’d want to open your eyes and you won’t, a day you want to stand, but you can’t. If you don’t know, it is from the earth you’ll start suffering for the evil things you have done. Notwithstanding, God still loves you.” She turned around and walked to David’s car to lean against. Alex was just quiet. He was touched by her last statement. He was pushed along into the car and was taken away. ** ** ** Nora was already lying on the hospital bed. She opened her heavy eyes and spotted Gloria, right beside her. The face looked so much familiar but she couldn’t remember where exactly she saw the face. She dimmed her eyes and gave her a second look but she still couldn’t remember where she knew her. “You’re awake now? Has the pains gone down?” Gloria asked her quickly. Nora nodded with a smile. “I am Gloria, I am not sure if you know me, but I have seen your face before.” Gloria said. “Sure, I have seen you before, but can’t actually fathom where exactly.” Gloria smiled. “Probably at Esmak Plaza, where I met your husband and where you met Alex that day.” Gloria reminded her. “Oooh…” Nora smiled. “That’s true.” Gloria laughed. She stood and crossed her hands. “How are you now? Hope the pains are not much?” She enquired. “Not really. I never knew you were a Doctor.” She continued smiling. “Doctor?” Gloria laughed. “I am not a Doctor.” She replied. Nora was surprised. What is she now doing here? She wondered. “I was the one knocking at Alex’s door then, when you were shouting for help. I had to invite the officers who helped you out.” “What? Really?” Nora tried to sit up. Gloria took some steps forward quickly. “No, you don’t have to! You really have to get some rest, sister.” Nora smiled broadly. Tears had formed on her eyes already as she heard that it was Gloria’s work. “I’m forever grateful to you… em.. please I need to remember your name.” “I’m Gloria.” She grinned as she spoke. Nora chuckled. “Thanks so much, God will bless you.” She added. “Amen.” “But, why did you do that? At least Alex is your Fiancé, or am I wrong?” “Even if he were to be, I’d still have done what I did. He was hurting you, wasn’t he? How will he be doing that and I won’t be able to rescue you?” Nora didn’t even know what more to say, she just kept quiet for a while before she could speak again. “I am really grateful, Gloria.” “It’s nothing, Nora. But how’s Daniel now? I haven’t seen him. How do we contact him?” Gloria enquired. There was a brief silence. Nora began to cry as Gloria asked her the questions. “Daniel was shot dead the day I was kidnapped. He was shot by his forehead and I was taken away. Daniel is.. he is gone..” “No… He is alive!” Tonia bustled in. …story continues…
17 Jun 2015 | 03:10
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Awwwwwww!! I knw he's not dead! Wc Tonia, u cum on tym. Oya explain t us wat apn t daniel
17 Jun 2015 | 05:36
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@Tenniebenson, dat one too much nw... lngst tym. I knw Dan is alive 4rm d onset. I thank God 4 all of u
17 Jun 2015 | 05:48
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nice one thumb up @somkhid
17 Jun 2015 | 06:52
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Woooow i knew he is still alive
17 Jun 2015 | 06:57
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i knw say daniel no die .....nyc story
17 Jun 2015 | 07:46
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Ehen dan is alive! Dancing galala....
17 Jun 2015 | 08:55
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Nx pls
17 Jun 2015 | 09:09
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How many episode remain...i can't wait to know what happen to Dan
17 Jun 2015 | 09:15
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Thank God 4 Gloria
17 Jun 2015 | 09:32
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ThankGod Daniel is stil alive
17 Jun 2015 | 09:47
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O tnk God dan didn't die n also tnks 2 u @d writer,interestin
17 Jun 2015 | 10:20
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Great...... Sure Alex is the only person 2 lose out.....Dan an Nora,,David and Gloria.....To God be the Glory.....
17 Jun 2015 | 11:33
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Tonia tell us wat happened 2 Dan, I really wanna knw
17 Jun 2015 | 12:48
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@Damsel oh... Really? But Alex deserves more dan what i said na... Na real life dem go shoot person 4 head he no go die??? Abeg i need 2 experiment it on some1... @Somkhid re u available? I don knw sey na nollywood movie i dey read...
17 Jun 2015 | 12:52
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explanation pls
17 Jun 2015 | 13:01
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How wil dat b
17 Jun 2015 | 13:34
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@tenniebenson nawa ooo u want to use me for experiment dnt u knw dat it is a rare case for someone to survive tat kind of situation?
17 Jun 2015 | 14:35
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I said it, dat nore wil be free n dat dan is alive. Kudos somkid
17 Jun 2015 | 15:20
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Nice work @somkhid
17 Jun 2015 | 20:13
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Lol @Somkhid na love na... U knw u can only try dat with some1 u love...datz why i want 2 use u 4 d experiment... Who knws? U might be lucky too o
18 Jun 2015 | 01:54
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EEEEH? DANIEL ALIVE? I AM STILL POWERFUL
18 Jun 2015 | 02:37
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****episode 25**** Daniel is what? Nora thought within herself instantly. “Sister Tonia.” She quickly arose from the bed as she saw her. “Dear Nora, how are you today?” Tonia flashed her teeth before her, grinning. “Daniel… Daniel? Where is Daniel? Alive?” “Just take it easy, dear. He’s alive but… He’s not fine.” Nora’s eyes formed tears already. “Where’s Daniel? Where’s he?” She was panting. “Not here in Nigeria. He’s currently under treatment but the gunshot wound has affected his fore brain which controls speech and movement.” She told her sadly. “Anyways, that’s an issue for another day. How are you doing? What did that beast do to you?” She quickly asked her. “When will I see Daniel?” She was still more concerned about Daniel than any other discussion. “Can’t he talk again? Can’t he walk again? Tell me something.” She began to cry. “Dear, you have to be fine as I have said. Just get well, there’s more to be discussed.” “Sister Tonia.” Gloria called her, smiling. She looked beside her and saw Gloria. She couldn’t remember where exactly she knew the face, but it was so familiar. “Em.. sorry, I’m trying to remember you, ma.” She smiled. “Wow! This is Gloria. The one who got lost many years back.” Gloria said. Gloria tried to remember as she dimmed her eyes. “Gloria… You!” She exclaimed. She could now remember her vividly. She was the one Daniel was in love with before she got lost. “How are you?” She moved closer with a glowing face. “I’m doing great.” She grinned. “Wow! You just got missing like that? That’s a story for another day. But what are you doing here? Where’s the lady that the officers told me that helped them to locate Nora?” She looked around. “She’s the one, Sis. She was the one who saved me from Alex’s den.” “Do you guys know each other? By the way, who is this goat called Alex?” “We got to know each other through Daniel. Alex is her fiancé.” “No, he was. We dissolved everything long time back.” Tonia clapped her hands together. “I am still in the dark. That means Gloria have met Daniel already, right?” Gloria chuckled. “A funo, he was. We dissolved everything long time back.” Tonia clapped her hands together. “I am still in the dark. That means Gloria have met Daniel already, right?” Gloria chuckled. “A funny day, it was.” Nora smiled too. “They have met. They actually met a day to our wedding.” She explained. Tonia swooshed out a long breath from her nostrils. “Anyways, we’ll talk about all that later. I’m just happy everyone’s back together.” “So, Daniel?” Nora asked Tonia again. Tonia smiled. “Take a rest, dear.” ** ** ** *.SEVEN MONTHS LATER.* ALEX. If I had known, wouldn’t I have believed in God? Wouldn’t I have given him the wheel of my life to drive? I never read the Bible, but getting here, Bibles were distributed to us. It is better for those who are outside the prison to start reading the Bible so that they won’t read it when they eventually get to the prison. No one is here to teach me now about Christ before I start knowing him. I wish I followed Gloria to Church when she was calling me. I wish I never lived my life in a reckless way. What even planted that evil thought of killing Daniel in my mind? What actually prompted me to kidnap Nora? I thought I was in love, but that was lust! I never loved God, how could I have loved any other person better. As I have read in Matthew, Loving God is the greatest commandment which even hangs all the prophets. If I never loved God, could I have loved either Gloria or Nora better? Certainly No! It pays to listen when one have the chance to listen! It pays to live one’s life as if one would die tomorrow! Prison is not a good place for one to be. It is even better to be here than the hell fire I read in the Bible. The description alone, according to John the beloved that wrote the book of Revelations frightened me. How can fire be burning a soul and you’ll be in the eternal pain without suffering? If I get another chance, I’ll live my life for no one else, but God! ** ** ** Daniel was already in Nigeria, but still struggling with his speech. His utterances weren’t clear like before and he still couldn’t walk on his feet. All thanks to God and the wheelchair that had been supporting him. Nora had never taken a break! She was always running up and down even in her condition just to make sure Daniel was fine. She could read the passion on his face whenever they were together. Sometimes, she’d cry her eyes out, wondering if her husband would be able to talk like a normal human again, if he would be able to walk on his feet again. Though the Doctors that operated him abroad had told them he would still be fine, so far he was with his loved ones who would care for him. But it was seven months already! He still couldn’t talk or walk! Though, he was getting better day by day, but she expected him to be whole already. For how long! ** ** ** It was a cool Saturday evening. The breeze was blowing softly by the side of the beach and there were lovers and families around the beach who might have to have a view and enjoy their lives like David and Gloria. The two were under the shed with a drink with each of them. David had told Gloria earlier that he would like to take her to somewhere where she would love to go to She really loved it, from all indications. She had been smiling and drinking with David for a while now as both of kept running conversations on their secondary school life. “I just wish that time can just come back!” Gloria had said severally. “Indeed one of the best moments of one’s life. A moment you’ll think it’s tough and after that time, you’d just want that time to come back to life. Honestly those teachers were bombs then! I can never forget the English our economics teach spoke when I was in Senior Secondary School Two; she was like – ‘if you don’t pay your tax, it is an offend.’” They both burst into laughter. “That’s hilarious!” She passed her comment. “I just can’t forget. Because when she said it, I couldn’t hold back my laughter, not knowing that the woman knew she just committed a blunder. She caught one of us laughing and dealt with the guy. She was now telling the guy to look at me, that I never laughed at her.” “But you actually did. May God forgive you.” “Honestly, not easy at all. I didn’t laugh at teachers’ blunders but that was too much! I couldn’t resist the laughter!” “May God just forgive you.” They continued gisting for hours until Gloria said it was high time they left. “Before we leave, Gloria. I want to ask you one question.” “What question?” She faced him. David smiled. “I’ll be right back.” He stood up and left hurriedly. ** ** ** Alex had just finished preaching to some of his mates while they were cutting down bushes in the prison. He was now being called Pastor by even warders in charge of them. Since he knew what the truth was, he had been preaching the gospel to everyone he met. He had learnt humility to even prisoners younger than him. He had promised himself that the twenty years he was meant to use in the prison, would be to God’s glory and service if he was still alive. He was already a role model of many prisoners already, letting peace reign in everything they did in the prison there. He was surely a great testimony of God’s change. ** ** ** David walked back briskly, sweating profusely. “Let’s get going.” He said to her. “I thought you said you wish to ask me one question, why the sudden change of heart?” She wondered. “You’ll get the question very soon. Let’s just get going, ma.” He smiled. Gloria chuckled. “Alright, Sir.” She stood up and they got going already. As they got to where they parked the car, David opened the door for her to enter and crossed to the driver’s seat after shutting the door. As Gloria entered, she could see a white teddy bear hanging in front of her with red inscriptions on it – “Will you marry me?” David just entered and pretended as if he knew nothing. Gloria had smiled as she saw the teddy bear. At least it was there she sat while they were coming, there was nothing of such there. It must be that was what he just came around to do when he told her he would be right back the other time. “When did you get this teddy?” Gloria asked David, smiling. Dave chuckled. “I bought it for you. You can just take it with you.” “Honestly, you’re funny.” She smiled and detached the teddy bear. ** ** ** …Story Continues.. The final episode of this story
18 Jun 2015 | 08:09
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@tenniebenson u did not lyk me at all,dea is God the finale episode loading 2%
18 Jun 2015 | 08:11
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Next plssss
18 Jun 2015 | 09:03
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Hmm daniel is alive...oya tonia tell us ao it happen
18 Jun 2015 | 12:20
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Ans me,will u marry me........ @Somkhid u ar really tryin bro just kip it up.......final episode loading 37%. Pls did anybody hear 4rm @khola46?
18 Jun 2015 | 12:38
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Wow......Alex has learnt his lessons in a very hard way..... Gloria would definitely be a very happy woman cos she has a God-fearinq man as a husband...... Tank God Daniel no die.....as far as there's lyf there's hope jare Eh pizzaro and who self?
18 Jun 2015 | 12:41
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@VibratingWind I deh here deh have fun in the land of ghost readers..Thanks so much Bro............I'm grateful...
18 Jun 2015 | 13:21
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U didnt mention abt nora pregnancy again,ki lo happen?
18 Jun 2015 | 13:47
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nice one
18 Jun 2015 | 14:00
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Wow ALEX pastor.dats 9ice
18 Jun 2015 | 15:23
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Hmmmm<>na wa 4 dis alex ooo, na nau he com dey read bible dey preach sef....god help daniel.,.d story wl end happily...kudos bro
18 Jun 2015 | 16:08
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LOADING? I LIKE UR STORIES MAN BUT U DIDNT TEL ME WHERE THEY COME FROM " OOOH i AM sorry general Chere" No Problem Cari On
18 Jun 2015 | 16:32
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Lolzzz.. I love u pass love sef @somkhid ... Shey 2% neva reach?
18 Jun 2015 | 20:04
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oh no... Alex! Na so life be
18 Jun 2015 | 20:35
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Welcm@khola46
19 Jun 2015 | 01:58
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@chisco no mind me,na now i jus see am o
19 Jun 2015 | 08:50
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finale episode loading 76%
19 Jun 2015 | 14:47
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next bros
20 Jun 2015 | 05:18
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Final episode never reach 100%
20 Jun 2015 | 17:43
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Haha which kind speed dial somkhid dey use? Ur own hour glass tym never do? Abi d grand finale chop snail?
20 Jun 2015 | 20:13
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THE LONG EXPECTED FINALE Gloria walked into her aunt’s place slowly. David had dropped her off at her place but she wished to see her aunt that day. A soon as she was sure David was gone, she stopped a cab as quick as she could and hurried on. She was very happy about the proposal, on the other hand, she wasn’t sure if the answer she could give him. Though it was over seven months they met already, did that mean they were real good and fit to go? She took her seat and waited for her aunt who had told her to come inside the living room from inside. Soon, the woman stepped out in a gown, smiling. “Gloria dear.” “Aunty, I am here again oh. Good evening, ma.” She greeted. “How are you? You even look radiant.” She grinned and sat down beside her. “Thanks for the compliments. How has been the Church, ma?” She nodded. “God has been working out his ways. What brought you this evening, Gloria.” She smiled. “I already told you about the friend I have..” “David?” Pastor interrupted. Gloria nodded. “He proposed to me this evening, ma.” She informed. “Wow!” She clapped her hands together with joy written all over her face. “I’m really happy, Gloria.” She rubbed her shoulder. “Thanks a lot, ma.” She tilted her head, smiling. “You are highly welcome. So you came to tell me that, is that not?” She questioned. “Yes. But what really brought me is my approach. How do I really know if this guy won’t turnout like Alex?” Pastor chuckled. “Dear Sister, first of all, you also shouldn’t have that mentality that all guys are the same, they actually are not. It’s just the same way as ladies, as we have good ones, we also have horrible ones too. Fingers are not equal. Back to what you asked, you said the guy was an unbeliever, am I right?” She nodded in replying her. “How far has he grown spiritually?” She enquired. “He attends my church and he’s been wonderful. He has even been added to the sub-brothers coordinators because of his great spiritual growth. He attends almost all the programs in church and he’s been great.” “So pleased to hear that, really pleased. So, if he has grown so well, he has a high percentage of you. I have told you, a lady cannot just say ‘yes’ to a guy without going back to God and asking God if he’s really the one. If you had done that for Alex, God would have shown you a long time back, but you wasted the time. Dear, all you just have to do is to go back to God and keep asking.” “How do I get convinced?” She enquired, squinting her eyes. “You can hear from God, can’t you? God can send you messages anyhow he feels like! It might be when you are reading the Bible, you might just see someone who would come and meet you and tell you God sent him or her to you for confirmation. Dear, anything can happen.” She explained. Gloria was relieved. “Thanks so much, ma. God bless you.” ** ** ** Daniel had gotten better to an extent that he had been trying to walk slowly. Though, he was still unbalance with his walking steps, but he was also giving it everything it takes through the help of Nora. Tonia had parked her vehicle outside the gate and knocked. The newly employed gatekeeper hurried on to the gate and got it unlocked. He knew her already, she was always coming around to check on Daniel. “Nora, dear how are you?” She opened her arms for a hug as she entered. “I am doing good, sister. Hope everything’s fine too?” “Sure.” She nodded. “How’s Daniel?” She enquired. Nora pointed. “That’s him over there. He’s getting better.” Tonia walked on to the bar side to check on Daniel who was sitting on his wheel chair there. “Brother, how are you?” She enquired. He nodded. “I’m actually better.” He said slowly, so he could be heard because his speech wasn’t clear yet. “Good, dear. Have you now eaten?” “Help me thank Nora, my sister.. She has been.. been taking ca..re of .. of me..” He finally landed. “That’s nothing. If she doesn’t take care of you, who will? You’re her husband and she’s doing her part. That’s what love actually means.” Daniel smiled. “Your husband?” “He is fine. He sent his greetings, he had to go for our landlords’ meeting.” “Okay.” ** ** ** Two Months Later. It was in the morning, 8 am when Daniel heard a loud scream from the Kitchen. He was just lying down on the couch in the living room when he was overwhelmed by the noise. He sat up as quick as he could and walked to the Kitchen. He could already walk on his own and his speech had gotten a whole better. All thanks to God and Nora who had been helping him exercise himself and always speaking to him so he could be replying and getting better day by day. “What is it, Nora.” She was already in labour. “Daniel..” She cried out, holding on to the cabinet. “Sorry, Nora.” He crossed her hand over his neck and they began to walk to the car slowly till he got her into the car. “Will I be the one to drive?” He wondered. “Sure, I have gotten well to that extent, even if not, I am expecting my child, nothing can happen.” He assured himself. He walked inside the house briskly to get the bag of the baby. He could notice everything was changing even more, about him. He could walk better already. “I am back, stop this noise, all is well, Nora.” He said plainly. Nora who was in labour pain, glimpsed at him to really confirm if he was the one who really spoke without skipping. He wasn’t so perfect before, but he could speak well now! “Dan, can you drive?” She quickly asked, her face had turned sour already. “Sure, Nora.” He hopped into the vehicle and drove off. ** ** ** Gloria was excited. She didn’t know if she should just put a call across to David or she should go and meet him. She had prayed as much as she could, fasted as much as she wanted and had the unchanging feeling that she wasn’t treading on the wrong path. She knew if David was a wrong man, she would have seen several signs pointing against the two of them, but lines has been falling in pleasant places for the past two months. She was convinced enough to reply him, at least she had taken two months to pray because of all she had heard about choosing life partners. It is a life contract and sin to come out of it. “Dave?” She said as she was sure he had picked up his call. “How are you doing?” She enquired, sipping from the cup of drink before her in the living room. “I am just good. I have been swimming since morning, but now getting prepared for this evening’s meeting in Church.” He replied her. “I am calling just to reply what you told me.. two months back.” She paused for a while. David’s heart skipped a beat. “I’m giving you.. a yes!” She finally let out. David screamed. “I am coming over right now, Gloria!” He shouted on. Gloria wiped the tears that had formed in her eyes and grinned. “Thank you, Lord.” ** ** ** Daniel had already called his parents and Tonia to come over to the hospital he had dropped Nora. He hardly took his seat since Nora was taken into the labour room. He had been praying and had been walking to and fro. Daniel’s heartbeat had been racing for a while now. It was already thirty minutes in the labour room, when would he hear what he really wanted to hear? When! As he turned his head towards the door, he saw his parents and Tonia. “Welcome.” He walked to them briskly. “Wow! Daniel, are you really the one? You can now walk normally?” Tonia was shocked. She was still at his place a week before. Though, he could walk, but it wasn’t as perfect as it had turned out to be. “I am the one.” “Where is she?” His father asked, walking to a seat. “She’s already inside the..” “Mr. Daniel.” He heard from behind. Alas! It was the Doctor. “Doctor..” He hurried on, shivering. “Sorry, we took too late. Why didn’t she come for ante natal care?” The Doctor enquired. “She was busy with me, I was shot by my head and it really caused a lot of havoc.” He explained. The Doctor smiled. “If she had came for it, we would have known that she would be giving birth to a set of twins. Anyways, congratulations.” He stretched forth his hand for a handshake. Daniel screamed. Tonia who had been hearing all of that also screamed aloud, happiness filled everywhere. Even nurses were smiling. “Twins?” He asked again, gripping the Doctor. “Sure.” “Can I see my wife and my children now?” “No. The nurses will tell you when you can do that. They are busy cleaning them up.” He explained. “The Doc!” He shouted for joy. He could see his parents also laughing happily. He couldn’t help but demonstrate how happy he was by grinning around the hospital. Soon, he was called to go in and see his wife. He saw Nora and their two baby boys, smiling to him. “At last, MY WIFE AND I and my two kids!” He exclaimed. Joy overflowed. ** ** ** David had rushed over to Gloria’s place within a twinkle of an eye. He was smiling broadly as he approached Gloria inside the house. “Good evening.. sorry, good morning.” He held on to her hand. “Welcome. Good morning, Dave.” “I got your call, but it seemed I didn’t hear you well, that’s why I have come. Gloria, do you really mean this?” Gloria smiled faintly. “Yeah.” “Just go and dress up.. we’ve got to go out and catch some fun.” He said, very excited. “Where do we go now?” Just then, her phone beeped. As she reached for it, it was Tonia who called to break to her- the good news. “What! Which hospital?” She quickly enquired. David was already scared as he heard the name of the hospital. “I am coming over now!” “What’s happening, Gloria?” He quickly asked. “I finally found the best place for us to go.” “Where?” David asked. “Hospital.” She rushed in to change her clothing. “Hospital?” ** ** ** Dave and Gloria walked into the hospital slowly as they requested to see Nora who just delivered. The nurse described the way to the ward for them and they walked on. They entered and saw the reality itself. “Wow!” Gloria exclaimed. “I am really wowed!” “Gloria.” Nora called out, grinning. “Congratulations!” She moved closer and gave her a hug. Daniel was happy to see her around again. She also did come to check on him when he was still on the sick bed. “Thanks, Gloria.” “Congratulations, Daniel.” She stretched forth her hand for a handshake. “At least, there is brotherly and sisterly hug..” He chuckled as he drew her closer and just hugged her. “Thanks so much for your help towards my family. My God will bless you!” He said. “You’re welcome, Daniel.” “Gloria! Mr. David, welcome.” Tonia greeted. “Ooh.. Mr Dave, thanks for coming around. Sorry I hugged Gloria, that was just a brotherly hug.” They all laughed. “Wow.. Now my wife and I!” Daniel went beside Nora again, just looking into her eyes. “My wife and I too.” David stepped forward as he gripped Gloria’s hand. “Here’s my own wife too, don’t spite us.” Daniel’s father laughed as he grabbed his own wife too. “Where’s my own husband now?” Tonia said as they all burst into laughter. “You can rent my boys till your husband is back.” Daniel teased her. “Thanks, how much do we pay?” She teased him. “Absolutely free.” They all laughed again. ** ** ** *.THE END.* Know these: Communication is the life of a relationship, Prayer is the key to read God’s heart, Marriage is a life contract, once signed only death and separate because divorce is a sin unto God, unless the spouse should venture into adultery. So, think twice and prepare! Whenever you miss it, you can go back to God for the forgiveness of your sins! GLORY BE TO GOD………………………………………………………………..STAY TUNED FOR MY NEXT STORY THE LONG EXPECTED FINALE Gloria walked into her aunt’s place slowly. David had dropped her off at her place but she wished to see her aunt that day. A soon as she was sure David was gone, she stopped a cab as quick as she could and hurried on. She was very happy about the proposal, on the other hand, she wasn’t sure if the answer she could give him. Though it was over seven months they met already, did that mean they were real good and fit to go? She took her seat and waited for her aunt who had told her to come inside the living room from inside. Soon, the woman stepped out in a gown, smiling. “Gloria dear.” “Aunty, I am here again oh. Good evening, ma.” She greeted. “How are you? You even look radiant.” She grinned and sat down beside her. “Thanks for the compliments. How has been the Church, ma?” She nodded. “God has been working out his ways. What brought you this evening, Gloria.” She smiled. “I already told you about the friend I have..” “David?” Pastor interrupted. Gloria nodded. “He proposed to me this evening, ma.” She informed. “Wow!” She clapped her hands together with joy written all over her face. “I’m really happy, Gloria.” She rubbed her shoulder. “Thanks a lot, ma.” She tilted her head, smiling. “You are highly welcome. So you came to tell me that, is that not?” She questioned. “Yes. But what really brought me is my approach. How do I really know if this guy won’t turnout like Alex?” Pastor chuckled. “Dear Sister, first of all, you also shouldn’t have that mentality that all guys are the same, they actually are not. It’s just the same way as ladies, as we have good ones, we also have horrible ones too. Fingers are not equal. Back to what you asked, you said the guy was an unbeliever, am I right?” She nodded in replying her. “How far has he grown spiritually?” She enquired. “He attends my church and he’s been wonderful. He has even been added to the sub-brothers coordinators because of his great spiritual growth. He attends almost all the programs in church and he’s been great.” “So pleased to hear that, really pleased. So, if he has grown so well, he has a high percentage of you. I have told you, a lady cannot just say ‘yes’ to a guy without going back to God and asking God if he’s really the one. If you had done that for Alex, God would have shown you a long time back, but you wasted the time. Dear, all you just have to do is to go back to God and keep asking.” “How do I get convinced?” She enquired, squinting her eyes. “You can hear from God, can’t you? God can send you messages anyhow he feels like! It might be when you are reading the Bible, you might just see someone who would come and meet you and tell you God sent him or her to you for confirmation. Dear, anything can happen.” She explained. Gloria was relieved. “Thanks so much, ma. God bless you.” ** ** ** Daniel had gotten better to an extent that he had been trying to walk slowly. Though, he was still unbalance with his walking steps, but he was also giving it everything it takes through the help of Nora. Tonia had parked her vehicle outside the gate and knocked. The newly employed gatekeeper hurried on to the gate and got it unlocked. He knew her already, she was always coming around to check on Daniel. “Nora, dear how are you?” She opened her arms for a hug as she entered. “I am doing good, sister. Hope everything’s fine too?” “Sure.” She nodded. “How’s Daniel?” She enquired. Nora pointed. “That’s him over there. He’s getting better.” Tonia walked on to the bar side to check on Daniel who was sitting on his wheel chair there. “Brother, how are you?” She enquired. He nodded. “I’m actually better.” He said slowly, so he could be heard because his speech wasn’t clear yet. “Good, dear. Have you now eaten?” “Help me thank Nora, my sister.. She has been.. been taking ca..re of .. of me..” He finally landed. “That’s nothing. If she doesn’t take care of you, who will? You’re her husband and she’s doing her part. That’s what love actually means.” Daniel smiled. “Your husband?” “He is fine. He sent his greetings, he had to go for our landlords’ meeting.” “Okay.” ** ** ** Two Months Later. It was in the morning, 8 am when Daniel heard a loud scream from the Kitchen. He was just lying down on the couch in the living room when he was overwhelmed by the noise. He sat up as quick as he could and walked to the Kitchen. He could already walk on his own and his speech had gotten a whole better. All thanks to God and Nora who had been helping him exercise himself and always speaking to him so he could be replying and getting better day by day. “What is it, Nora.” She was already in labour. “Daniel..” She cried out, holding on to the cabinet. “Sorry, Nora.” He crossed her hand over his neck and they began to walk to the car slowly till he got her into the car. “Will I be the one to drive?” He wondered. “Sure, I have gotten well to that extent, even if not, I am expecting my child, nothing can happen.” He assured himself. He walked inside the house briskly to get the bag of the baby. He could notice everything was changing even more, about him. He could walk better already. “I am back, stop this noise, all is well, Nora.” He said plainly. Nora who was in labour pain, glimpsed at him to really confirm if he was the one who really spoke without skipping. He wasn’t so perfect before, but he could speak well now! “Dan, can you drive?” She quickly asked, her face had turned sour already. “Sure, Nora.” He hopped into the vehicle and drove off. ** ** ** Gloria was excited. She didn’t know if she should just put a call across to David or she should go and meet him. She had prayed as much as she could, fasted as much as she wanted and had the unchanging feeling that she wasn’t treading on the wrong path. She knew if David was a wrong man, she would have seen several signs pointing against the two of them, but lines has been falling in pleasant places for the past two months. She was convinced enough to reply him, at least she had taken two months to pray because of all she had heard about choosing life partners. It is a life contract and sin to come out of it. “Dave?” She said as she was sure he had picked up his call. “How are you doing?” She enquired, sipping from the cup of drink before her in the living room. “I am just good. I have been swimming since morning, but now getting prepared for this evening’s meeting in Church.” He replied her. “I am calling just to reply what you told me.. two months back.” She paused for a while. David’s heart skipped a beat. “I’m giving you.. a yes!” She finally let out. David screamed. “I am coming over right now, Gloria!” He shouted on. Gloria wiped the tears that had formed in her eyes and grinned. “Thank you, Lord.” ** ** ** Daniel had already called his parents and Tonia to come over to the hospital he had dropped Nora. He hardly took his seat since Nora was taken into the labour room. He had been praying and had been walking to and fro. Daniel’s heartbeat had been racing for a while now. It was already thirty minutes in the labour room, when would he hear what he really wanted to hear? When! As he turned his head towards the door, he saw his parents and Tonia. “Welcome.” He walked to them briskly. “Wow! Daniel, are you really the one? You can now walk normally?” Tonia was shocked. She was still at his place a week before. Though, he could walk, but it wasn’t as perfect as it had turned out to be. “I am the one.” “Where is she?” His father asked, walking to a seat. “She’s already inside the..” “Mr. Daniel.” He heard from behind. Alas! It was the Doctor. “Doctor..” He hurried on, shivering. “Sorry, we took too late. Why didn’t she come for ante natal care?” The Doctor enquired. “She was busy with me, I was shot by my head and it really caused a lot of havoc.” He explained. The Doctor smiled. “If she had came for it, we would have known that she would be giving birth to a set of twins. Anyways, congratulations.” He stretched forth his hand for a handshake. Daniel screamed. Tonia who had been hearing all of that also screamed aloud, happiness filled everywhere. Even nurses were smiling. “Twins?” He asked again, gripping the Doctor. “Sure.” “Can I see my wife and my children now?” “No. The nurses will tell you when you can do that. They are busy cleaning them up.” He explained. “The Doc!” He shouted for joy. He could see his parents also laughing happily. He couldn’t help but demonstrate how happy he was by grinning around the hospital. Soon, he was called to go in and see his wife. He saw Nora and their two baby boys, smiling to him. “At last, MY WIFE AND I and my two kids!” He exclaimed. Joy overflowed. ** ** ** David had rushed over to Gloria’s place within a twinkle of an eye. He was smiling broadly as he approached Gloria inside the house. “Good evening.. sorry, good morning.” He held on to her hand. “Welcome. Good morning, Dave.” “I got your call, but it seemed I didn’t hear you well, that’s why I have come. Gloria, do you really mean this?” Gloria smiled faintly. “Yeah.” “Just go and dress up.. we’ve got to go out and catch some fun.” He said, very excited. “Where do we go now?” Just then, her phone beeped. As she reached for it, it was Tonia who called to break to her- the good news. “What! Which hospital?” She quickly enquired. David was already scared as he heard the name of the hospital. “I am coming over now!” “What’s happening, Gloria?” He quickly asked. “I finally found the best place for us to go.” “Where?” David asked. “Hospital.” She rushed in to change her clothing. “Hospital?” ** ** ** Dave and Gloria walked into the hospital slowly as they requested to see Nora who just delivered. The nurse described the way to the ward for them and they walked on. They entered and saw the reality itself. “Wow!” Gloria exclaimed. “I am really wowed!” “Gloria.” Nora called out, grinning. “Congratulations!” She moved closer and gave her a hug. Daniel was happy to see her around again. She also did come to check on him when he was still on the sick bed. “Thanks, Gloria.” “Congratulations, Daniel.” She stretched forth her hand for a handshake. “At least, there is brotherly and sisterly hug..” He chuckled as he drew her closer and just hugged her. “Thanks so much for your help towards my family. My God will bless you!” He said. “You’re welcome, Daniel.” “Gloria! Mr. David, welcome.” Tonia greeted. “Ooh.. Mr Dave, thanks for coming around. Sorry I hugged Gloria, that was just a brotherly hug.” They all laughed. “Wow.. Now my wife and I!” Daniel went beside Nora again, just looking into her eyes. “My wife and I too.” David stepped forward as he gripped Gloria’s hand. “Here’s my own wife too, don’t spite us.” Daniel’s father laughed as he grabbed his own wife too. “Where’s my own husband now?” Tonia said as they all burst into laughter. “You can rent my boys till your husband is back.” Daniel teased her. “Thanks, how much do we pay?” She teased him. “Absolutely free.” They all laughed again. ** ** ** *.THE END.* Know these: Communication is the life of a relationship, Prayer is the key to read God’s heart, Marriage is a life contract, once signed only death and separate because divorce is a sin unto God, unless the spouse should venture into adultery. So, think twice and prepare! Whenever you miss it, you can go back to God for the forgiveness of your sins! GLORY BE TO GOD………………………………………………………………..STAY TUNED FOR MY NEXT STORY
21 Jun 2015 | 06:16
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AM SORRY FOR THE DELAY SOMETHING CAME UP THAT DELAYED MY UPDATE…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..I WILL POST A NEW STORY VERY SOON
21 Jun 2015 | 06:21
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God is wonderful. am happy 4 all of dem. Chai! my husband is nt around also
21 Jun 2015 | 06:52
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Glory be to God
21 Jun 2015 | 06:54
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glory be to God,@somkhid u ar d best here expectin anoder won
21 Jun 2015 | 07:23
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Nyc ending,more grease 2 ur elbow@somkhid
21 Jun 2015 | 07:28
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Wow nice story bro
21 Jun 2015 | 08:06
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This story is wow, keep it up mehn
21 Jun 2015 | 08:55
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thumb up @somkhid. Really my wife and i
21 Jun 2015 | 09:27
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Wonderful story........Thank God it all ended well 4 everybody...... Wonderful presentation @Somkhid more wisdom 2 ya.....expectinq ya new story as soon as possible.....
21 Jun 2015 | 09:50
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Wat an happy ending. Nice stowie. Mur kerosene t ya stove.....................Waiting 4 d next
21 Jun 2015 | 14:02
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KAMORA CENTURY
21 Jun 2015 | 17:25
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Nice story so far
21 Jun 2015 | 18:44
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@T-DAK Thanks for the invite.... Thank God I ended it with you.... @Author(Temitope Daniel) More water to your plant.... @Somkhid More more gas to your cooker....
21 Jun 2015 | 19:22
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Nice story @somkid love it.
21 Jun 2015 | 21:46
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Ok ok ok... I no quick read am.. Na busy tinz... @Somkhid make sure u call me personally 2 any of ur new stories so dat i can follow up...
23 Jun 2015 | 16:04
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Woow...wot a happy ending...u ar a gr8t [email protected] ur next stowi
24 Jun 2015 | 06:39
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follow dis tread for my ongoing story www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/the-guardians-fight-for-power/
24 Jun 2015 | 08:19
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Weldone smokekid...(*wink*) Tank God 4 all of dem.
25 Jun 2015 | 05:44
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Cool story. Really really nice. Waiting for my husband o, so I can say 'My husband and I.' lol
25 Jun 2015 | 06:04
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Baba ibeji congratulatons. @Somkhid wat a lovely story
26 Jun 2015 | 17:49
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nice story & thumps up to temitope daniel ..more ink to ur pen!
27 Jun 2015 | 03:05
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hmm. Life has so many ways of teaching ua lesson, it either in the good part or the other way. Life brings us together to achieve somethings. Who knows if Gloria wasn't missing then maybe their weeding won't be successful, another thing can even happen. Over it all God is the master planner of all things. Congrats to the both couples. @somhkid nice one here again. One Orange for u
28 Jun 2015 | 11:36
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Neva knew ds story wil b ds interestn cuz i almost skipped readin it
30 Jun 2015 | 11:56
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Am hpy i 4lowd 2 d vry end.. nuf lessons learnt here. mre ink 2 ur biro man. nyc 1
13 Jul 2015 | 16:19
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Wow!! Nice story
25 Jul 2015 | 22:42
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Very interestinq story here.....itz me sir prince @somkhid
27 Jul 2015 | 18:11
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I finally got to read this wow... I leant a lot from this @somkid nice job here I think I just find a mentor you.
11 Nov 2015 | 04:18
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interesting story bro
27 Nov 2015 | 06:56
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Woww! So interestinggg!
18 Dec 2015 | 02:55
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Wow ave learnt alot frm dis story thump up
5 Jan 2016 | 02:33
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17 Jan 2016 | 14:04
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am so happy everything ended this way......where is this my wife, oya come and stand here {MY WIFE & I} lolz
16 Mar 2016 | 10:28
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I really enjoyd this story!!!...GOD works marvelously
4 Apr 2016 | 20:16
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What! This is serious.
1 May 2016 | 13:12
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I am now feeling relax....ride on
1 May 2016 | 15:48
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Nice story
18 Jul 2016 | 07:54
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God saved you
19 Jul 2016 | 05:56
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Nise one from a g reat writer
19 Jul 2016 | 05:57
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Kudos
19 Jul 2016 | 05:58
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You will have to go for gloria bcos of such coecidence that happened was for a purpose
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