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fated 2 love u

fated 2 love u

By holaryinkhar in 11 Jun 2015 | 14:27
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this is a story about a couple that has gone through odds in their relationship
11 Jun 2015 | 14:27
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prologue she couldn't remember y she was hiding in her mom's car but she was feeling cramped she was trying to sit up when she heard a screech her mim just avoided colliding with the accident in front of them then she heard big bang she looked through the window and she saw her aunt unconcious,her uncle almost losing conciousness but beckoning to her mum asking her to save them she ran out shouting for a while after calming down shesaw her mom drivin out without her she shouted after the car but it didn't stop then gbam-BLACKOUT
11 Jun 2015 | 15:05
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Wow........Vhiz would be excitinq and Spectacular.......Ride on dear.......
11 Jun 2015 | 15:56
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@Khola46 @T-Dak Broz abeq make una come call quyz ooo
11 Jun 2015 | 15:58
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mrs jessica wallace was getting anxious on her seat she had to entice investors she had to becime head designe she had to seal her fate in the family.her mother-in-law being the chairwoman,her bro-in-law being the president,her husbad the v.p,her sis-in-law eig a repected designer and director that she had to compte with every time whose design hare perfection.he had to work all day and night to beat her which seldom happens,jessica didnt have time for her dughtr anymore,the grandchild of the family it was the only thing she sad beaten her sis inlaw (jane) pertfectly,the fact that she a concieved before her the greeting f he assistat joled her back to life.after talkin for several minutes with te investors she wa about to entice them wuth shares when her sis and mother inlaw waked in unexectedly she froze.
11 Jun 2015 | 18:31
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joanna wallace was bored,her mum had no time for her,her dad nd uncle were at the company ,er grandma and aunt were out of the house,veng a girl of eight wasnt fun she had no friends,she ad ni siblings,the only person she had talked to except her family was her aunt nephew jacob bradshaw jacob bradshaw was not happy,he was mourning his mom who died a month ago,he hated his dad who remarried today leaving him with his aunt shirley(paternal) when he knew he preferred hs aunt jane ge loved her d he oved going to her house except for the girl thats there thats looks like she s eager to talk to him ana peterson hates her mom cause g as to manage in poverty she hates the shame she always go through cause she comes from a poor household
11 Jun 2015 | 18:44
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guys i wil ave 2use abbre 2 ryt pls undastnd ad pks u guys su coment xo i wil stop rytin if d story isnt intrestin
11 Jun 2015 | 18:49
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and am xori 4 d typin errors
11 Jun 2015 | 19:06
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nyc carry on....but u need to construct and arrange the stori very well,bt can i ask u? are u writing dey stori from ur head or from a script...
12 Jun 2015 | 03:23
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its a true life story
12 Jun 2015 | 05:17
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Ride on........
13 Jun 2015 | 07:46
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u r trying bt it aint gud enaf.....u nid to re-read bfore posting.....itz interesting bt d word constructions r making me lose interest....nyc one though
13 Jun 2015 | 11:03
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k thnks i wil put it al in2 consideration
13 Jun 2015 | 15:46
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ana peterson was nt always selfish falin 4rm grace 2 grass was a chalengin issue 4 an 8 yrs old kid. her fada owned a competitive fashion house bt lost it in a competition against wallshaw(wallace&bradshaw) collaboration. dere wer 3 fashion house in d city wallace,bradshaw & peterson wer d former's competited against d latter after losin his company he was found dead it was ruled out as suicide but ana sumwer in ha mind she always tot it had somtin 2 do wyt oda houses.she always tot abt revenge nd wen a mom got wind of it she advised er against it nd 4 dat reason she hated ha jessica was stuterin,she was struglin 2 ansa d reason she was mitin wyt d investors alone bt she wa abt confesin a lie wen joanna interupted her,she came 2 welcome ha mom,aunt and grandma jessica new dey wud start suspectin ha bt she didnt care all she cared abt was ha position,power and shares in d company
13 Jun 2015 | 16:51
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jake cudnt bliv it it was a heart shaterin news his fada ad an ilegitimate child wyt his new wyf nd she was pregnant wyt anoda baby gis fadsa clearly ad an extramarital affair he cheated on his mom jason joy new no bounds although he was sory 2 his elda bro jacob bt he was tired of bein cald d illegimate son he didnt want his sista 2 b treated lyk a bega he ddnt want people 2 continue tritin his mom lyk a leper
13 Jun 2015 | 17:11
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As intresting as d story shld have been... Its kinda confusing (maybe 2 me alone sha)... Finding it hard 2 link d stories 2geda.... Plus we dnt mind d abbreviations...but pls let d spellings be correct 2 avoid mis-interpretation.... Do not be in a hurry 2 post...alwyz go 2ru it aqain 2 avoid 2 much mistakes....cos its "we" dat complain 4 short nd slow update dat will also complain if d mistakes re enormous...nd pls... Let ur episode be longer dan my comment..... All da same... U re doing a good job...
14 Jun 2015 | 14:09
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characters
14 Jun 2015 | 15:17
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am sorry dis came late characters joanna wallace-protagonist a young girl who is d heir of a big fashion house but ist er memory due 2 amnesia jacob bradshaw- protoganist anna 1st love d heir 2 bradshaw fashion home ana peterson- antagonist d heir 2 a collapsed fashion home adopted daughter of the bradshaw fashion home jason bradshaw- antagonist heir 2 bradshaw fashion house jake's younger brother jessica wallace-joanna's mom john-anna's dad joe-anna's uncle jane-anna's aunty jesse bradshaw-jake's dad carrie bradshaw-jake's stepmom jason's mom jacinta bradshaw-jake's and jason's sister shirley bradshaw-jesse's sister lola peterson-ana's mom
14 Jun 2015 | 16:08
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14 Jun 2015 | 18:04
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14 Jun 2015 | 18:09
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Thanks 4 the invitation. @T-dak
14 Jun 2015 | 18:12
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@donpaschalo
14 Jun 2015 | 19:45
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you are welcome @joseph
14 Jun 2015 | 19:48
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14 Jun 2015 | 20:02
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@T-DAK, u no dey fall my hand. Thanks as I take my seat.
15 Jun 2015 | 03:00
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Wow...ur making me feel special by d notifications @T-DAK..i rili did appreciated al
15 Jun 2015 | 07:36
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Thanks T-Dak
15 Jun 2015 | 09:27
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hav nt understand dis story,pls put am wel.am here already @T-DAK tankz
15 Jun 2015 | 11:23
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@T-DAK tnx 4 d invite, u re a Darlinq. @holaryinkhar, 9ice artery work. Thou' Tennie had earlier st8ts d nids 2 inprov on d error(s) in typinq, & d shortnex of ur stowie. Anywyz, b4 postinq any of ur stowie, t8k ur tim 2 read in btw lines wen typinq, make we 4 no lost on top d mata o!
15 Jun 2015 | 20:08
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kk i wil try am sory itz bcus ave neva rote a story b4
16 Jun 2015 | 05:06
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@holaryinkhar dear. Just take your time to post the write up okay. We are always ready to read.
17 Jun 2015 | 07:04
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Welldone
17 Jun 2015 | 18:02
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carrie was hapy finaly she had done i after living as a mistrex for 10 years she had done it she is goin to giv her children a father the person she has to wory about is jake wat can she do to make the boy 4get his mom wat can she do to fil secure when the dead still sims to be living in the house there's a trace of bella jake's mom everywhere in the house then she decided to burn everything beloging to her so has to imbibe fear in jake not to mess with her but unfortunately as she was about burning it jake entered with shirley she had to hide it not wanting shirley to become cross with her since she didn't like her but fortunately for her she headed into her room to sleep so she had time to burn it she had lit the match when she saw jake loking at her as if he saw a ghost jake couldnt believe his eyes his new mom was burning litle left of his mom memory he beged but she didnt listen he watched them burn to ashes when it remained a few he left ran to his aunt place he couldnnt fil until he was hit by somtin
19 Jun 2015 | 12:16
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Getting clearer....
19 Jun 2015 | 12:26
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joanna was not happy with her mom she didnt come to her school when she promised to come.she had to be appealed to wit pizza she loved pizza she was waiting outside for the pizza delivery when the delivery guy's bike hit someone thank god he's not hurt when the person stood up it was no one other than jake she wasnt surprised he was here he surely came to see his aunt but she was rather hurt that there was no pizza for her anymore jake didnt feel pain he apologised to the biker he was shocked to see her standing outside he saw she was angry about the pizza he didnt mind her and went inside she yelled at him for wasting her pizza he just said sorry and went on in and he greeted the workers and one of them told him his aunt wasnt around he turned to go and he saw her standing there she said she was going to report him to her mom and the word mom made tears drop from his eyes until he felt her say she was sorry about his mom being dead she shouldnt have mentioned the word mom atall she could do was apologise
19 Jun 2015 | 12:42
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joanna didnt know what to say or do other than apologise to him she knew his mom was dead and she shouldnt have said that to remedy the situation she took him inside and gave him water to calm him down he said he was sorry and would get her another pizza they went to a pizza shop and bought one peperoni she urged him to eat with her when the server came with their bill he found out he had no money and begged the waiter to let him call his aunt but she refused and said he should pay withhis wristwatch he couldnt part with it. it was a token from his mom he asked anna if she had any money but she had none so he had no chioce than to part with it and he left with anna to her home he bade her goodbye and left she searched her room and found money she went to the pizza shop to retrieve his watch on getting home it started to rain he was dranched when he saw someone waiting outside with an umbrella it was his new brother jason he accepted the umbrella and started to walk in when he said he had something tomorrow
19 Jun 2015 | 13:03
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ok na... getting interesting
19 Jun 2015 | 19:05
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nyc one@horlayinka. Tanks@tdak for nt inviting me bt i am here already.
20 Jun 2015 | 17:21
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Tenx @T-DAK Dis will be interesting
20 Jun 2015 | 20:20
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chapter 3 D nxt aftanun jake was sitin remincin on his tym wyt his mom and he began to shed tears he felt a hand wipe his tears away he looked up amd saw his step bro jake he quickly composed himself and asked what he was doing there he said he had something to give him it turns out it was his mom hat cuz she was a lover of hats he didn't know how to thank him cuz he was overwhelmed maybe his step brother was cool afterall he thanked him. jason was happy he couldnt believe his brother was thanking him he sat with him and they chated he learnt alot about him how he hates eggs cuz thats what his mom went to buy for him before having an accident.they became friends and did things together they even slept in the same room and he told mom to stop cooking eggs. jason went to see his aunt jane the next day he told her about carrie and she told him not to worry that she will always be there for him as he was going he saw anna she gave him his wristwatch back and he thank her he promised her pizza the next sunday
21 Jun 2015 | 15:57
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tonia wallace the chairwoman called her sons and their wives and told them the criteria for the competition which is a cloth material sort of an accessory which is almost extinct since the maker are all dead john was not feeling happy this was not the reason he married jessica she was not treating joanna well she doesn't seem to have time for her daughter.he has decided to leave the country with her and joanna whether she likes.it or not jessica couldn't believe what john was proposing when she was so close to acquiring the company she declined she was more surprised when he brought out devioce papers she was angry she burst out and lashed her.husband with words threatening him of leaving him with joanna unaware that joanna is listening in and making her sad.she cryed all night
21 Jun 2015 | 16:31
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Family problem ... Shey na Jason or Jake
21 Jun 2015 | 18:27
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it was getting dark she was wondering who could be calling all the same jane picked up the phone,her assistant told her the material has been found somewhere in a village.she told her she will be there in a jiffy but unknown to her jessica had overheard,when she was on way to see her brother off at the airport.she quickly contacted her assistant and asked him to see her brother off and she went in to take her purse and went into her car she sensed something was amiss but she waved the feeling off and went in.joanna was going to her parents room to give her a lucky purse she had given her dad and jake when she saw her mom hurrying somewhere with her bag she thought her mom was going leaving her she went into her moms car and snuck in,she saw her mom fidgetting but she couldn't say why she slept off it was getting dark,john was thinking about his life with jessica there's no one to tell his plight his brother john although childless was happy with his wife he was devastated
22 Jun 2015 | 05:41
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jane was coming from the village she had gotten the material she couldn't let jessica have the company she was going to misuse its she was thinking about all this that she didn't see the jeep heading towards her she heard a bang.the last thing she heard was her hubby calling her name joanna didn't remember why she was hiding but she was feeling cramped she tried to sit up when she heard a a screech her mom just avoided getting into an accident she looked out and saw her aunt unconcious and her uncle beckoning to her mom to help them but her mom just opened the car door and picked something that resembled a piece of cloth she saw her uncle breath his last and she ran out of the car yelling then she saw her mom looking at her dead uncle and ran into the car fidgetting and she drove off without her she screamed after her and then bang -Blackout
22 Jun 2015 | 06:47
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Dis is a serious Case.
23 Jun 2015 | 05:28
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Because of cloth material you kill someone and not ordinary person but your in-law
23 Jun 2015 | 07:05
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this is how the family crashes from crisis dat rises
24 Jun 2015 | 18:15
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Observing
27 Jun 2015 | 19:34
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ana was dumbfounded they were on their way to her mom's hometown the bank had sold their house to pay for the loan her father owed them she was angry crying her mom was petting her when she heard a bang her mom had hit a person she couldn't believe she had hit a person she was struggling with the fact that her daughter would never accept their situation and now she had hit a person she opened the door of the truck and got out the truck and her parents house in her hometown was the only thing she owned now she looked up and saw a little girl like anna's age on the floor she was wonderingw what she was doing there when the girl woke up she heard someone call her mom she look up expectin to see ana but saw thegirl instead jake was pleased his little brother was cool they were talking about his guilt in his mom's death unknown to him his father heard what he they said about his mom later he called his son and told him it wasn't his fault his mom died it was the first time since his mom death that they talked
30 Jun 2015 | 04:50
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Hmmmmmm. Solving the riddles
4 Jul 2015 | 21:01
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Thanks t-dak
5 Jul 2015 | 20:45
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jake was happyhe talked to his dad but he was angry that jason broke his promise of keeping it a secret feeling betrayed he spoiled the toys given to him by jason and threw it in the bin unknown to him he was seen by jason and the latter got angry at dinner told his mom to start preparing egg that was how the friendship they had became sour meanwhile at the wallace home they got the call of the accident on getting to the hospital they found out joe was dead and that only jane survived the accident she grieved and refused to be consoled she couldnt believe her husband is dead then she remembered the last word she heard was her hubby calling jessica to help her she then asked jessica why she didn't help them but jessicadenied being there and lied that she was seeing her brother off at the airport she was discharged and told to go home but jane was unable to live with the guilt of causing her husband death that she chose to run away but she called jake and told him she was sorry and won't be able to keep promise
9 Jul 2015 | 06:21
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she later went to her husband grave and bade him goodbyeshe left having no idea where she was going it was after jane left they discovered joanna was missing an employee said she saw her entering jessica's car but she said she wasn't in her car all the same they filed a missing person report around the airport when they didn't find her jessica knew it was her fault her daughter is missing but she blamed it on jane accusing her of kidnapping her daughter she was made the company's president while her husband left the job and took to painting when they remembered joanna loved to paint and they organised a drawing and painting competition in hopes she will participate jake didn't understand why his aunt said goodbye but was not curios for long when he got to play with joanna and he got the news she was missing and his aunt alleged to have kidnapped her he went home and saw his stepmom in labour he called for an ambulance and called his dad although he didn't like her he was happy about his baby sister
9 Jul 2015 | 06:40
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looks like the story is not intresting enough so i think am gonna stop writing
12 Jul 2015 | 12:30
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No it nice pls continue I really gbadun am
14 Jul 2015 | 06:47
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hummm, sounds like a korean drama av watched.
20 Jul 2015 | 17:39
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Sounds like a korean fran av watched
20 Jul 2015 | 17:41
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