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Etan (Deceit).... by Mr Kiddah

Etan (Deceit).... by Mr Kiddah

By mztarkiddah in 7 Aug 2017 | 08:56
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Etan (Deceit).... by Mr Kiddah



Prologue
This is something i never expected from someone so close to me, now i believe the saying that goes thus "trust nobody " . I trusted the wrong set of people and actually chased off the good ones.
Is it a crime for loving too much and note in this case I'm not referring to the love between a boyfriend and girlfriend, I'm actually referring to.... Hmmm before i bore you with the whole introduction let me explain what happened properly.
7 Aug 2017 | 08:56
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Episode 1. My name is Kelvin, let's stop there for now. (in my apartment with my best friend) Devin has been my best friend since i could not even remember, i guess we became so close due to the fact that our names sounds somehow similar and the fact that his dad and mine both own a multinational company. We had everything at our grasp "girls, money, cars" , name it but devin is a lover boy and doesn't flirt unlike me that can't take my eyes off a beautiful lady unless she gets laid by me. They call me "kelvin the love charm" because no matter what the ladies keep coming. I could remember a day when i and Devin went clubbing after we got bored of boredom, lol weird right but that's the fact. The DJ was on point that night and not to talk of the beautiful girls roaming about up and down. The slim and busty ones, the fat ones, the Ugly ones, the beautiful ones, all of a sudden while i was busy admiring and assessing all the ladies in the club that night i got carried away on sight of a damsel or should i call her an angel because immediately she stepped in all eyes were on her except my bestie that's already drunk due to the fact that he has a girlfriend and doesn't want to cheat on her. She went straight to the vip section and it sounded like a big insult on my personality because i was not in the vip section but that didn't stop me from making an attempt to get closer to her and probably start a conversation with her with the hope of getting her laid. I decided to put my love tactics to work again , i decided to use my 4-4-2 formation (don't mind me, that's how i and devin roll) . I went to the vip section where she was sitted and before i could even utter a word her personal bouncer bounced me off like a bball player, that was the greatest embarrassment I've ever gone through in my life .
7 Aug 2017 | 08:58
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Episode 2 I said to myself i must revenge just as if i knew that fate will bring us back together and.... I and Devin went out as usual but this time we went with Devin's girlfriend even though my own mom has been on my neck to bring a lady home but i kept on telling myself life is too sweet to be in a prison of a lady. We headed to the cinema and immediately I stepped down from my car (range rover sport) I i saw the mystery lady that got me bounced out of the club the other day and i thought to myself this is a big opportunity for me but after what happened the other day in the club fears started evolving within me. I'm no longer that "Kelvin The Love Charm" and because of this I did as if I did not see her and luckily for me Devin did not see her because he was busy playing romeo and Juliet with Julianna (his girlfriend), we just went inside and checked the list of the movies to be shown that day so we picked a romantic one just because Devin and his girlfriend wants that day to be full of romance for them. When we got sitted the unexpected happened..... She sat next to me and sweat started gathering on my face even with the high rate at which AC was working, i was just praying to God that nothing weird should happen today, i was busy ranting about in my mind and all of a sudden her phone fell down and stopped at my feet.. On seeing this i got courage from no where telling me that this is an opportunity for me, soon we got talking after picking up the phone for her. We didn't concentrate on the movie cause we were busy talking about irrelevant things which i was wondering how they surfaced, as i noticed that the movie was about to end not bothering about the two love birds beside me i exchanged contacts with her and it was then i got to know her name "Michelle". Yeah that's the lady that her bouncer bounced me off from the club. *Present Day* I and Michelle had grown to be two love birds that everyone is jealous of and Envy's. *****In My Room With Michelle ***** She was dressed in a ball gown looking seductive and flirting with her eyes, this triggered my body and soul to be lust to get a taste of her cause the least she had given was a hug. I made advances towards her as a sharp guy to kiss her, my lips moving closer to her in a slow motion like nollywood movie before we.....
7 Aug 2017 | 08:59
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U guys did what? b Baby @qeenvick come over here I can't read this new romantic story alone o
7 Aug 2017 | 09:37
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Una did wetin???? @jerrie come nd see this story
7 Aug 2017 | 09:44
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I dey here oo
7 Aug 2017 | 09:52
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Hmm love i am here @fridex bt just that i have to sit on ur laps so that i can concentrate fully
7 Aug 2017 | 10:50
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Haha! @qeenvick oya nau come ♿sit on my lap. After all, na u get ahm. Lol...
7 Aug 2017 | 11:52
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Tnx guys... Support me please, based on say i need ur help... :b:
7 Aug 2017 | 11:56
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Hmm stop jor dnt let others hear us @fridex
7 Aug 2017 | 12:06
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@mztarkiddah base on sey u need my support the gods have Dear4 demanded for 6 episodes of ur story to be posted at once. Failure to do so, u will pay ransom of 6 additional episodes. Haha... OK ma'am @qeenvick
7 Aug 2017 | 12:21
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Honie @freshgirl am here hp i didnt come late :s
7 Aug 2017 | 13:14
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No not @all @jerrie
7 Aug 2017 | 13:35
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Nice start
7 Aug 2017 | 13:57
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Before wetin cum happen
7 Aug 2017 | 14:34
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Right Here On Time
7 Aug 2017 | 15:37
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continu oh
7 Aug 2017 | 16:03
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Ride on... I dey ur bk.
7 Aug 2017 | 16:50
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Proceed Bro
7 Aug 2017 | 18:13
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I must follow this bumpa to bumper
7 Aug 2017 | 18:19
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Ride on..
7 Aug 2017 | 18:43
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And wetin come happen
8 Aug 2017 | 02:33
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Episode 3. ..... Before we engaged in an unnecessary argument, it's being like that for a while. Being unable to kiss the love of my life talk less of having sexual intercourse with her. I kept on wondering if i was being charmed or what caused it, i can't believe why a whole me "Kelvin the love charm" will stay glued to a lady not to even talk of one messing up my life. Well if you guys think I fell in love with her you're wrong and you're also right.. ***FlashBack*** My dad and devin's have been trying so hard to get this life changing contract with the minister of works but the man wants a share out of the profit but my dad is not willing to succumb to it while devin's dad is ready to go to any length to get it done. To cut the long story short Michelle is the only child of the minister of works. My dad wants me to use her to persuade her to tell her dad to give them the contract in return for nothing. He begged me to love her by force just to get this deal done. *present* I went downstairs in an angry mood and met devin busy dancing to burna's tune titled "rock your body", on seeing me angry and after explaining he decided to go upstairs to beg her but after 30mins i realized none of them had come out of the room so i decided to go and see what was going on. On opening the door without expecting to see anything out of normal i became speechless seeing my best friend and my girlfriend kissing or about to kiss, i was speechless and before i could utter a word they both Bursted into laughter with Michelle saying that "devin i told you he really loves me and can't do without me, imagine he thought we'd actually kiss not knowing we heard his footsteps". I was fooled to believe it was all an act to make me jealous which i mumuly (stupidly)believed... Chai love na strong thing... What happened next? Did they really kiss? Or my mind made it up? Next episode will shed more light on it watch out.
8 Aug 2017 | 11:53
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Are they trying to play a fast one on you?
8 Aug 2017 | 16:44
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Next, mr. Kisser
9 Aug 2017 | 00:46
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i dnt believe what they said
9 Aug 2017 | 04:38
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Is it April 1st??, if not then you have been tricked!
9 Aug 2017 | 06:31
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Next
9 Aug 2017 | 07:41
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Was it just a play or it was real? . . Observing This
9 Aug 2017 | 12:42
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Observing jejely
9 Aug 2017 | 15:44
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following
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9 Aug 2017 | 16:27
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Episode 4 Although i believed what Michelle told me i was still doubting the story because devin will not even make an attempt to kiss any lady talk less of My love, 5days i noticed Devin has started acting strange and even Julianna was complaining about his new lifestyle. I also told her I'm confused, after few weeks he came back to his normal sense but in this case it seems we exchanged our mind and soul. Devin became an uncontrollable flirt while i became the good guy every lady hopes and pray for. During this period i noticed Michelle became free with me, we had started to kiss and gradually move to romance session. I was supposed to be happy but instead i started having this suspicious feelings,what could be the connection between Devin and Michelle new lifestyle. Few weeks later my dad announced to me that they lost the contract and wanted to say something but hanged the phone, i decided to pay him a visit the next day and while i was in the compound i could hear him telling mom that can you believe that Devin's dad was not really emotional about the contract. On hearing this i drove out and on getting home the gateman said Michelle had came to pack her things and dropped a letter for me, after reading the content i realized that she had gone with another man telling me that she was just playing with my feelings. Immediately i placed a call to Devin only to pick up and tell me that bro sorry for the heartbreak Michelle is mine, my Jaws were wide open and refused to close after he had ended the call. Suddenly my phone rang and when i checked the caller i realized it was my dad and without hesitation i picked up only for him to tell me that their is fire on the mountain and when i asked what was wrong he told me Devin's dad had taken over the company. I was left in a state of confusion and like that was all Julianna barged in with a sad face only to tell me that Devin had broken up with her and moved into a new apartment with another lady... What's really good on, i need someone to explain to me or is it that I'm dreaming.
9 Aug 2017 | 16:55
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Still here... Continue
9 Aug 2017 | 17:09
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It is reality dear
10 Aug 2017 | 04:11
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Episode 5 Note: this is actually a true life story, the names have being changed. I didn't make it that long because i didn't want to add lied to it. My world crumbled into thrash, the love of my life nowhere to be found and my so called best friend that's supposed to be my companion right now is no where to be found. Who is to be even trusted in this world, the fact still remains that not everyone you know wishes you the best in life. Most people claim they love you just for their own personal goals and rewards, never trust anybody in life. Everyone will say they love you but only few does, imagine my friend since day one betrayed my love for him just for riches and his dad's benefit. Only God truly loves and please if you have any idea in you never share it out, just make sure you execute it yourself so as to let your success speak for you. My dad died few weeks after being depressed of the whole situation, my mom spent a year under depression. Julianna attempted to commit to suicide but luckily for me i got to her apartment before she could, she actually helped to get back on my feet and also to help me to get a life changing job. I and Julianna later got married gave birth to three children (a boy and two girls), mom died after the birth of our first born who i named after my dad. ..... The End....
10 Aug 2017 | 12:20
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Link to my new story.. https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/love-medicine-ladies-medicine/#post-1056960
10 Aug 2017 | 12:21
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it's really overwhelming
10 Aug 2017 | 12:24
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everyone can tell what he or she has passed tru wit his/her friend.
10 Aug 2017 | 12:28
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thanks for d advice
10 Aug 2017 | 12:30
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Some women can never be trusted!
10 Aug 2017 | 12:46
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Hmmmmm so sad
17 Aug 2017 | 17:20
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Uhm... really touchy! Nice one though.
11 Sep 2017 | 07:27
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