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COLOMBIANA(cataleya's revenge)

COLOMBIANA(cataleya's revenge)

By Emmanuel in 9 Nov 2021 | 11:12
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INTRODUCTION
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In the year 2003.
in Bogota,columbia.
A drug lord Don luis sends his enforcer Marco and a gang of armed men to kill his associate called
Fabio Resterepo and his family.Because Fabio has defiled him by trying to leave his criminal life behind.

Fabio gives his 9yrs old daughter,Cataleya
a smart media computer memory card
that contain Don luis
evil business deals.He
also gives her the address of her uncle
Leo,in Chicago,who will take care of her.

After Fabio and his wife Alicia are gunned down.
Cataleya escapes and seeks Asylum at the U.S embassy.She was granted a passage to the U.S.

Cataleya tracks down her uncle in Chicago and asks him to train her as a Killer.


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Anoda story is here o
9 Nov 2021 | 11:12
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STARRING(CAST) ------------------------ Cataleya*** 19yrs old girl,and the major character. Fabio***Cataleya's Dad. Alicia***Cataleya's mom. Leo***Cataleya's uncle. Danny Dellany*** Cataleya's Lover Marco***Don luis major hit man. Don Luis***a drug lord and a gang leader Pepe***Cataleya's Grand pa. AND OTHERS ...........--------------
9 Nov 2021 | 11:24
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9 Nov 2021 | 11:58
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The story will be bad, ride on.
9 Nov 2021 | 18:53
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#waiting
10 Nov 2021 | 02:44
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Episode 1 Cataleya,Cat for short a 9yrs old preety,but with a toughness. sitting at the dining room table.In a well kept,but modest home with windows that look out over the steep hillside. Attending to her notebook. On the window they are half a dozen beautiful orchid plants The rare Cataleya orchid. All around the room are cartons,suitcase. Mom:Cat is your home work finished yet?. Cat:working on it mama her mother left her packing of bags and suitcases and come over to Cat to see what she was doing. she looked into her book and saw a neat drawing of Spider man Mom:you draw beautifully my love. but if you want to be something in life,you have to study. Cat:i also study mama i want to be a superhero Mom:Better to be a doctor or a lawyer. Cat:mama what are all this bags,are we going to uncle Leo Mom:i dont know.just waiting to hear from your father. Cat:ok mama,love youu Mom:love you too Darling. Alicia kiss her forehead before resuming her packing of Suitcases.
10 Nov 2021 | 08:33
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DON LUIS BASE ---------------------- inside Don luis lounge. Cataleya's dad,Don luis,and Marco were sitting. Don luis:i cant believe this.You wanna leave this business after all we have achieve together?. shit! Fabio:why not.? Don luis:because i love you like a brother Fabio:i also love you like my brother Don luis turn to Marco who was puffing a ciggarethe. Don luis:Marco can you believe this guy.? We started this when we were little.....How old were we Fabio Fabio:Ten Don luis:Ten years old bastards stealing apples in the market. After all we've been through.And now we're untop he wants to leave.Damn! Fabio:Luis,i'm gonna be honest with you.I want to start a new business.I mean legit and real one.I wanna open a big boutique.I want to be indipendent,am leaving this shady deals. Don luis:think about all the dough we achieve from this deals Fabio:do you know how many times we should have been dead? Don luis:i dont even wanna count.
10 Nov 2021 | 08:52
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Fabio:neither do i.But you gotta think how lucky we are to be still alive Don luis:yeah,thats right.and what about the future of this thing we built. Fabio:its yours.its not my thing anymore Don:i'm gonna hold you for that. you Bastard,well,am gonna miss you. Fabio:me too,bye Luis And with that,Fabio exits the lounge.Don luis watched him as he leaves.Sighs deeply pours himself some whisky. Don luis:Marco Marco:Boss Don luis:Go kill this mothefucker.He doesn't deserve to leaves.He betrayed me already.Gooo! Marco:your wish Boss ------------------ HOW WAS THE START GUYS. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT
10 Nov 2021 | 09:07
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10 Nov 2021 | 09:10
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hmmmmm......
10 Nov 2021 | 09:13
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dis don luis wicked o freestyle the man make im go find beta business joor #loverboy Andy is with you
10 Nov 2021 | 09:15
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nice start......
10 Nov 2021 | 09:17
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but very short o......
10 Nov 2021 | 09:18
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next episodes please.........
10 Nov 2021 | 09:38
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Ahh just because he wants to quit criminal deals u want to Kill him.... Soo cruel
10 Nov 2021 | 09:40
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Ride on.
10 Nov 2021 | 10:15
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Pls make the story alittle longer??
11 Nov 2021 | 01:04
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@fb-elijahdaniel ok i will try,its just that i have tight shedule
11 Nov 2021 | 01:14
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Thanks buddy ? @actionreader
11 Nov 2021 | 01:29
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Episode 2 Fabio car comes to a screeching halt's. He come's out of his car.Saw his armed bodyguards at the front of the house with their rifle,ready to blow up any intruder.Fabio waved at them and run upstairs. Cat is still at the dining table,when she hears the screeching of tires,the fast footsteps outside. Fabio burst in.His wife sees his tension filled face. Mom:Fabio? Fabio:we've got ten minutes.(Panting) His wife started panicking. Mom:Cataleya,go park! Cat:i'm packed mama Cataleya is strangely calm,just sits at the table.watching as Fabio shifted the family picture frame and took out a small chip hidden inside the picture frame. Fabio:listen to me darling.Just incase of anything.This...... (He holds the chip up). This is your passport. Do understand?. She nodes.He places the chip in her hand. take's out a card from his pocket. Fabio:you find yourself alone?. you go to the address on this card.show it to the man at the gate. Cat:ok papa
11 Nov 2021 | 01:36
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OUTSIDE FABIO'S HOME ------------------------ As Fabio bodyguards keep a sharp lookout. two S.U.V's came rolling down the street.Their fingers were on the trigger. ready to shoot any intruder that want to take Fabio's life. The two S.U.V rolled up.The blackout window rolled down and Marco and his men came out. Marco:Hola.we want to see Fabio. Bodyguard:He's not home. Marco:mind if we wait? Bodyguard:your time. FAST FORWAD(FABIO ROOM). ------------------------------ Fabio removes a medal from around his neck,drapes it over Cat. Fabio:and this, will keep you safe. Cat looks down at the medal. on it was an imprint of a flower. Fabio:thats a Cataleya orchid.it comes from one place on earth. our place.my mother, your grandmother used to grow them.i would wake up to the sight of them.the smell of them.it reminds us of who we are. He kisses her forehead.His wife appear at the doorway with two suitcases. Mom:i'm ready.
11 Nov 2021 | 01:54
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FAST FORWAD OUTSIDE FABIO HOME ------------------------------ (Marco on a phone call with Don luis) Marco:they said he's not home yet (He listens.) Marco:ok.Ok He hangs up.puts his phone back in his pocket.walks up to Fabio mens. Marco:change of plans He pulls out his gun, shoots them point blank. FAST TO FABIO ROOM --------------------- As they were about to exit the house through a rear door, the shots ring out. the saw Marco and his mens heading to the room they are. Fabio:Back.back! He pushes his family back inside. Fabio run to the window and sees his men on the loosing end of a gun battle. Fabio:Too late,get ready. The mother drops the suitcases and runs to the rear room. Fabio comes to the unnaturaly calm Cataleya. Fabio:i love you very much Cat:i love you too papa His wife run into the room toting two big assault rifles.she tosses one to Fabio. Both of them take up shooting position.
11 Nov 2021 | 02:12
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Cataleya sit at the dining table watching. facing the front door, hands gripping their rifles,sweats dripping down their faces, chest beating.the couples stood waiting. ready to blow anyone that comes through the door. But they never get the chance. BBBBRRRRAAAAKKK!!! Machine gun fire shatters the window on both side of the room,tearing into their bodies before they even get one shot off. Cataleya watches in tears,mute,shocked as her parents bodies are riddled with heavy caliber rounds making them twitch and fell down lifelessly.Their blood splattering across the room.
11 Nov 2021 | 02:24
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11 Nov 2021 | 02:50
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@fb-ayodeji2
11 Nov 2021 | 02:52
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oh my god take heart Cat
11 Nov 2021 | 05:06
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hmmmmm.......
11 Nov 2021 | 10:49
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following closely.........
11 Nov 2021 | 10:50
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next episodes please...........
11 Nov 2021 | 10:52
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Episode3 And then...... Silence.Silence so complete.Absence of sound.Cat just sits in her chair sulking. The door burst's open Marco and his men storm into the room. Their assault weapons trained on the only living thing in the room. Marco:You Kitchen!. You bedroom.You the back!. The gunmen scatter. Marco had his inquistive eyes on Cataleya. One of the gunmen jams a gun to her head. She does not move a muscle.Does not blink the gunman crack the gun and was about pulling the trigger. Marco:Hey!,what are you doing?. The other gunmen were busy tearing the house apart.Looking for the smart memory card. Gunman:Don luis said kill everyone!. Marco:He said no names. Gunman:she would remeber us. He is about to pull the trigger. Marco:Hey! the gunman stops. Marco:She's a kid Gunman:so what? Marco:what the heck! do you mean so what?. You take a kid,teach them,they have values Gunman:i couldnt even get ten bucks for her in the street. The gunman cracks the gun and was about pulling the trigger
12 Nov 2021 | 00:29
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Marco:Are you stupid or what? Here!. Marco hand's him some cash. Marco:here is twenty assholes.Go do your job. The gunman took the money and went and join the others in ripping the house apart,looking for the memory card. Marco calmly goes to the fridge,take a bottle of water, cracks the cap.And drink from it.He sits opposite Cataleya on the dining table. Marco:(softly) remember me Cataleya? she shake her head Marco:i was at your confirmation.my name is Marco,and i was a very good friend of your dad.I know this terrible for you to see All this while,his men are searching. frisking the bodies of the dead couples,even tearing the heels of their shoe. But they cant find the memory card,It was with Cataleya. Marco:some things are too complicated for a kid to understand.This is one of them.But am gonna make it simple for you to understand.
12 Nov 2021 | 00:46
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Marco:You know who Don luis is? Cat responds nodding her head. Her hands slip to under the table to feel if the dining knife was there.She hides it there. Marco:of course you do.He was your father best friend.He's like an uncle to you.You know he has been good to your family?. Again Cat nodes. Marco:this house.The food you eat,the clothes you wear.Even your school fees.All this comes from Don luis.You know that?. Cat nodes. Marco:but when someone is good to you and you are not good to them.Then bad things happen. Things like...... He pointed to the dead couples. Cataleya looks from the bodies of her dead parents.And looked back at Marco No emotion in her eyes.
12 Nov 2021 | 00:58
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Marco:good.Your father had something that belongs to Don luis.A little thing.No bigger than...... He holds up his thumbnail. ''Do you know what am talking about?.'' Cat nodes She gripes the knife handle. Marco:well,if you give it to me,Don luis will be very grateful,he will make sure you are clothed,feed,and sent to the very best school.But if you dont give it to him.He will be unhappy,and you see what happen when he's not happy Yes?. Cat nodes Marco:you are a smart girl,and in this life,smart girls get everything they want. What do you want. Cat raises the knife from under the table. ready to drive it to Marco hand. Marco:if you give me the little thing.i promised to give you anything you want. What do you want Cataleya.just tell me.
12 Nov 2021 | 01:36
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in a flash,the knife is whiped out and buried into Marco's open palm. Driven with such force the knife pierces through the back of his hands And sticks to the table.pinned his hand. Marco want to scream but they is so much pain.He opens his mouth,but nothing comes out. Cat:(in his ears) To kill Don luis!. Marco:AAARRGGHHH!! The men look up,but before they can react. Cataleya races past them. Marco:Get herrr! He yelled in pain. A huge one came rushing at Cataleya. but she kicked him on his Groins. A skinny one want to grabbed her,but she lowered her head. Took a stool from the floor and smashed it on his head.He staggers back! ------------ ------------ ------------ ------------ T.B.C
12 Nov 2021 | 01:49
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12 Nov 2021 | 01:52
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Hmmmm that small girl get mind walahi. Ride on.
12 Nov 2021 | 06:59
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Episode 4 TRACKS ON CATALEYA As she runs through the rooms of the house,she sprint to the bathroom. One foot on the W.C sit.She sprint onto the ledge of the very small bathroom window. As she looks back,she sees the gunmen in hot pursuit.And she jumps,head first. Barely squeezing her small frame through the tiny bathroom window. And she drop....... Six feet down,onto a ledge That is just beneath the window. she flattens against the wall. IN THE BATHROOM One of the gunmen comes to the window. But his huge body cannot fit through the window.He looks out of the window and saw Cataleya holding onto the pillar of the zinc. BBBBRRRRAAAAKKK!!! The man shoot furiously at Cataleya. but too late for him as a tough Cataleya jumps and landed another storey building,she hold onto the window. Cataleya looks down at her palm at the small memory card her father gave her. pop the memory card in her mouth. swallows it She leaps over the small divide between her house and the next roof,and takes off running.
13 Nov 2021 | 00:54
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ON THE GUNMAN He sees cat heading off across the roof. out in open,exposed, vulnerable.He lifts his gun to shoot. The gun muzzle was slammed up,peppers the ceiling with bullets. The gunman turns and saw Marco,holding his bloody rag wrapped hand. ''We need her alive.'' Marco shouted into the gunman ears. FAVELA ESTATE'S Cataleya leaps frome one rooftop to another shunning down a drain pipe onto another roof.The gunmen managed to jump down from window of Cat's home. start to sprint across the roof in hot pursuit. ON CAT She drops down to another roof,this one filled with a vegetable patch,were an old man is gardening. FAVELA ESTATE'S Marco exits Cat house wrapping his bloody hand tightly with a piece of his shirt. ''Go! Go! Go!.'' He orders four more gunmen who have just zoomed up on motorcycles.They take up in different directions,looking for Cataleya.
13 Nov 2021 | 01:22
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ON CAT As she come off the last rooftop,down into a small alley. She sprints across to a small door.She kicks at the door which gives away and she enters........ AN OPEN COURTYARD A half dozen of women are doing laundry. they took up to the sight of a little girl in a blood splattered school uniform. They do not say a word to Cat. She runs through a small gate on the far side of the Couryard, opens it,and disappear ON THE GUNMEN They enter the laundry yard.The women pointed at the way Cataleya took to them.They started dashing towards that way........
13 Nov 2021 | 01:35
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Colombiana would be posted every three-3 days. #Bear with me. @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek come and commet o @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul
13 Nov 2021 | 01:38
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That smalli is a star ?⭐ walahi. Ride on , that 3 days interval is too much nah guy.
13 Nov 2021 | 09:10
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Cataleya is a superstar girl with special skills from her Dad.
13 Nov 2021 | 11:49
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Dis tori suspense is too much for three- three days update . @fb-wfwurld show dey here o
13 Nov 2021 | 13:25
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Episode 5 ON CAT She races down a steep hill in the crowded favela streets She saw people boarding the midnight train going to America She quickly sneak into the train. The gunmen appear running to catch up with the train.But too Late for them as the train started moving. ''You son of a bitches!,you d let the kid go just like that!.'' Marco said to them furiously. ''She outsmart us'' they chorused. ''Fuck y'all,let's go back to Don luis.'' He said, and they both enter their S.U.V and Speed away. ON CAT. The train come to stop and Cataleya sneak's out, she stands at the edge of the busy street and looks around.She is in the heart of the city. Where tall office buildings compete with graceful,classical mansions. in the distance she saw the hill sides, covered with the twinkling lights. AMERICAN EMBASSY Two army men stand guard.cataleya to them.
14 Nov 2021 | 22:29
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''excuse me!'' cat said drawing the attention. Then army men looks down to Cataleya in a Bedraggled,covered in soot and bloody school uniform. Holding out the card her father gave her. FAST FORWAD EMBASSY OFFICE The american looks at the card Cat gave to the army,hands it to another american. American:and you said you have something for us? he turned to cat who nod, yes American:may i see it? Cataleya takes a beat.put's her fingers down her throat.And throw up all over the man desk. American:oh geez!... Cat put her hand into her throw up,and took the memory card and hands it to the man.the man take out an handkerchief and takes it from her. He insert the memory into his computer. CLOSE ON COMPUTER SCREEN Facts,figures,names, dates,a wealth of info scrolls down. American:where did get this.? Cat:my papa. American:and where is your papa? Cat:dead!. American:did he tell you what this is.? Cat:yes...My passport
14 Nov 2021 | 22:54
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The next morning,the American embassy took Cataleya to the airport to take the morning flight to chicago where she would stay with her uncle.they assigned a juniour agent to go with her to make sure she is safe. They arrived chicago at exactly eight o'clock. Cataleya would look for his uncle from there. ''Hey kiddo,we part ways from here.Hope you know your uncle's address.'' The agent asked her ''yeah,thank you sir'' the man walks away Cataleya started searching for her uncle location. OFFICE (NIGHT). Cataleya enters an office were three women were working on a computers. Looks like any other business office.At the sight of Cat,the women get up and exit closing the door behind them. Cat is left alone. She looks around the office where the sound of a door opening behind hers. She turns to see Leo who approaches her scrutinizing her.
14 Nov 2021 | 23:11
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Leo:cataleya? Cat:uncle Leo Leo covers his mouth, seems shocked. Leo:i thought you were all....... Cataleya stands struck still.Leo lifts her up in his arms, crushes her to his chest.Cat remain motionless for a moment. And then. For the first time. emotions real emotions,washes across her faces.her lower lips begin to shake. Tears welled up in her eyes.She burst's into tears. Leo:you are safe now All the emotions,the fear,the anger that she has,keep locked away deep inside her. Leo:you are safe now. ............. .............. @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @individual @eneh @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek come and commet o @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago
14 Nov 2021 | 23:24
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New episode here @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul
14 Nov 2021 | 23:31
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The action just started...
14 Nov 2021 | 23:52
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Coolvalers no wan make dis tori move fast were una dey @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @individual @eneh @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek come and commet o @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul
16 Nov 2021 | 07:13
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Smart child with smart brain. Ride on.
16 Nov 2021 | 10:25
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Now i don enter
16 Nov 2021 | 13:19
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The Cat don dey deprived of milk
16 Nov 2021 | 13:20
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All i see is tears of revenge
16 Nov 2021 | 13:21
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episodes too short.!
20 Nov 2021 | 02:29
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its beginning to catch up with me!
20 Nov 2021 | 02:41
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interesting!
20 Nov 2021 | 03:31
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CHICAGO-MORNING The sun peaks over the horizon,spreading the fog infused light coming off lake michigan across the sleeping city. CLOSE ON-BEDROOM The ray of sunlight washes across Cat's sleeping face.she wokes slowly.Her eyes open after a long sleep. For a moment,she doesnt remember where she is. She look around the clean,orderly bedroom as she gathers her thoughts. Her eyes move around the room. It is a boy's room. FAST FORWAD KITCHEN Leo sits reading the financial section of the morning paper. An elderly woman a granny fills his coffee cup. A noise turns both of them to the doorway Cat:good morning uncle Leo,morning grand ma. Leo:morning Cataleya Granny:come sit.i 'll make you some eggs. She carress her face,kisses her forehead. Granny:you have your mother beautiful eyes dont be scared.this is your home. Slowly,hesitantly,Cat makes her way across the kitchen to the table,she sits opposites Leo.
21 Nov 2021 | 08:05
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Leo:when was the last time you slept? Cat:i dont know.A long time ago Leo:well,a growing body needs sleep. When i was your age,i would sleep half the day.I dont know if it helped with the growing,but i was well rested for whatever comes after. Cat:whose room did i wake up from? Leo:my son.Your cousin Cat:where is he? Leo:He's dead Cat:killed? Leo:yes Cat:by who? Leo:no one is still alive. Granny comes over and puts a plate of eggs in front of her. As she begins to eat the food. Leo holds up the page of the drawing. Leo:you are very talented.Is this what you want to be? An artist? Cat:No,i used to want to be like Lara.A super agent. Leo:Not anymore? chewing,Cat shakes her head. Leo:And now? Cat:i want to be a killer. She kepts shoveling food in her mouth. Leo looks up at his mother who crosses a suprise look. Cat finishes the last mouthful of pizza and looks up at Leo. Cat:can you help? Leo:sure
21 Nov 2021 | 08:44
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NEXT DAY-(STREET) Leo walks down the street with Cataleya. He is carrying a kids book bag. Leo:the good news is that your father bought you your life with what he gave you The bad news is Don luis was playing the bad sides and has disapeared. You tore down everything he spent years on with that little chip.It's something he will never forget in his grave. Cat:Are you trying to scare me? Leo:i am trying to educate you. FAST FORWAD (MONEY BEING COUNTED) PRINCIPAL OFFICE Principal:Normally we dont accept students in the middle of Academy year,but under the circumstances,losing her parents in that tragic way..... Cat looks out of the window,saying nothing Principal:Here! He hands a list of over to Cat who keep looking out the window. Principal:these are the school supplies you 'll need. Leo takes them. Leo:she's still in a bit of shock. Principal:ofcourse,seeyou on monday Cataleya,such a preety name. She doesnt even mind them.Just looking out of the window.
21 Nov 2021 | 09:05
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OUTSIDE SCHOOL STREET Leo walks along with Cataleya,reading the list of supplies. Cat's mind is far away from him. Leo:we 'll get all this stuff,then go over to this place i know down maxwell street for some hotdogs you like hotdogs? He looks down,sees no Cataleya,looks back to see Her walking in the opposite direction. Leo:Hey! Cat keeps going. Leo:Hey! He hurries,catches up with her. Leo:where you going? Cat:i 've already been to school. i told you what i want to be.you dont want to help me.fine.i 'll do it myself. She walks off.Leo grabs her. Leo:chica.Any idiot can be a killer.Look! Leo draws a 357 mangnum pistol from his shoulder holster,and empties the entire bullets into the front of a car coming down the street. The car summersault off the road.Smashes a fire hydrant,crashes through a plate glass window of a shop across the street. Leo holster his gun. Leo:saw what i just did?
21 Nov 2021 | 09:24
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Leo:you want me to teach you to be a killer No problem.i 'll teach you.but you 'll be dead in five years. Cat nodes, agreeing Leo:if you want to be a killer and survive, you have to be a smart one.You have to know things besides pulling a trigger.you have to know how the world works.How people think.You got to learn to be psychological. That i cannot teach you,unless you learn the basics at school Got it? Cat glares at him Leo:Now what's it gonna be? He holds the gun in one hand and the school bag in the other hand. Cataleya hesitates for a moment.and Takes the school bag from Leo. They started walking away quickly to dodge the upcoming police men blowing their siren.As they put a distance between the chaos. Cat:But i still want to be a killer. Leo:Hey kid,dont stresss yourself.Okay. Finish your high school first.I promised to teach you.Got it? Cat:yeah Leo:we cool? Cat:sure,yeah Leo:fantastic! They both heads home T.B.C
21 Nov 2021 | 09:43
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GUYS,PLEASE BEAR WITH THE BAD UPDATES. NA SCHOOL LECTURES DEY CAUSE AM @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @fb-horlaebofin @eneh @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul @fb-peaceegwuatu @flowkray @fb-itzkaptainsnazy
21 Nov 2021 | 09:51
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Okay o , try guy.
21 Nov 2021 | 17:10
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Oya next oo
23 Nov 2021 | 02:11
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Wire me more
23 Nov 2021 | 02:12
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Nice one next
28 Nov 2021 | 02:41
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Episode 6 SIDE STREET ____________ A police cruiser sits on a quiet street right off a wider avenue. there is no traffic either way. INSIDE INTERIOUR POLICE CRUISER. ________________ Two cops are sitting, peeling back the wrap on their burgers. Cop1:So then i suggest, y'know, we buy some time to nab the assasin. Cop2:it's a whole heck of time wasting trying to apprehend the fucking assasin without success. As they nibble and talk,they pay scant attention to a set of headlights coming up the road. Cop1:even the F.B.I ain't having any progress. The lights come closer...... Cop2:what the fvck is this car tryna do The lights shone right into their car. Cop1:am suprised! Only then,when the lights are directly on them,the cops turn to see the car heading right towards their front end. Cops:What the..... CRASH!!!!!! The front end of the cops car gets damages By the impact. Glass shatters,metal crunches,air bag explodes.
29 Nov 2021 | 07:18
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ANGLE ON THE OTHER CAR ______________________ The driver opens. A vodka bottle fall out And a moment later, Two legs emerge from the car.Two very long legs.Very shapely legs legs that never ends. in a very high heels, A very short mini skirt her face is framed by a mane of wild hair covering her face. She came out,looks into the windshield of the cruiser.Then looks at the stunned cops and says in the most sweetly drunk voice... Lady:Oops..... The cops cant believe this. They regain their wits and bolt out of the car Cop1:Thats all you have to say? Oops? And she starts to laugh. The Cops look at each other perplexed. She kepts laughing. The cops get pissed. Cop1:Funny? ....She keeps laughing Cop1:wanna laugh you crazy bitch? i'll give you something to laugh about. And even when they slam her to the hood of their car.Jam her hands behind her back and slap the cuffs on. She keeps laughing and laughing.
29 Nov 2021 | 07:40
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On her chest was a very familiar medal on a chain. Hangs between her exposed cleavage. A medal engraved with the name CATALEYA ORCHID. IT IS CATALEYA,NOW A GROWN UP ................. FAST FORWAD POLICE STATION _________________ A quiet night in the small station. Cataleya stands infront of the booking desk. A surveillance camera over the desk records everything. Cat keeps her head down,her face obscure the camera with her mane of hair. As the sergent goes through her purse.... Sergent:No license, No registration,No ID except a library card. well miss.... He read the library card. Sergent:Valarie Philips in addition to all that. You are being charged with D.U.I,destruction of police property, driving the wrong way on a two street..... Cat:is that all? Sergent:unless you can think of anything else you should be charged with. Cat:(Tipsy) wearing of panties? The sergent and the other cops gave her a long look. Their eyes all go to her very short skirt.
29 Nov 2021 | 08:00
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Sergent:that's not a crime Cat:Thank goodness... As she was talking. She throws up on the sergent's desk. Sergent:oh geez! Take her in back,lock her up,put a coffe in with her.Let her sleep off,we 'll book her tomorrow. The two cops drag her out. The other two cops on duty lean over to try and get a look up her very long legs and her very short skirt. T.B.C ______________ _________________ _____________________ Who else is thinking what Cat is upto with the police. is she really drunk get to know in the Next epis.
29 Nov 2021 | 08:09
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Am sorry for the delayed update HERE WE ARE DROP UR COMMENTS @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @fb-horlaebofin @eneh @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul @fb-peaceegwuatu @flowkray @fb-valchinonso
29 Nov 2021 | 08:14
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am with u following
29 Nov 2021 | 11:11
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Next
30 Nov 2021 | 02:54
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It's not enough
30 Nov 2021 | 02:55
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@fb-jessicaduru yes the story is a movie titled colombiana its on youtube,you will love it if u watch it. I carved the story from the movie @ollydy we're here
2 Dec 2021 | 08:35
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Love dis man
3 Dec 2021 | 09:33
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Ride on man
3 Dec 2021 | 09:37
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Episode 7 POLICE STATION (NIGHT) ___________________ Three black S.U.V's with black out window came rolling up the station. the doors open and a dozen U.S MARSHALS jump out. out of them comes a handcuffed,kevlar wearing hard as nails Mafia type. Gennaro Rizzo. The Marshals surround him,gun bristling on the look out for any danger. and they hustle him the door of the station. INT.POLICE STATION ___________________ The station doors slam open.Marshals barge in. The head Marshal approaches the suprised sergent on the desk. Marshal:U.s Marshal warren. We have Gennaro Rizzo here on overnight. Sergent:Who? Marshal:Rizzo.The mafia guy.They didnt notify you? He rifles through some papers.Finds one Sergent:Here we go. says here you're not expected untill tomorrow. Marshal:Never expect the expected sergent. (To his men) secure this place!
3 Dec 2021 | 12:11
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INT.CELL BLOCK The marshals come down the cell block checking everything out. They pass Cataleya in her cell,her long legs and short skirts slow down their walking pace. After a long look.They move on. INT.SECURE CELL ________________ Rizzo is pushed into a cell.The door is slammed and locked. Marshal:one man here two more outside the front door.Everyone else on the perimeter in teams of two He hands them a thermos bottles. Marshal:it's a caffeine kinda night fellas. Eyes open.Kay? INT.CELL BLOCK ___________________ A lone cop passes Cataleya's cell. As soon as he is gone....... ON CATALEYA ________________ Cat's eyes snap open. She sit's up moves with the efficiency and determination of someone who has not take a drop of Alcohol She takes a spoon from the coffee cup left for her. Reaches into her mane of hair and extractr a small pin. she inserts the pin into the keyhole of the door. Jiggles it.The door pops open.
3 Dec 2021 | 12:28
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Cat exits the cell takes a broom leaning in the corner. Keeping her eyes on the camera above the door.She slides along the wall untill she is just under the camera She uses the broom handle to tilt the camera up just a bit. INT.SECURITY MONITORING ROOM ----------------------------- A cop sits infront of the various monitors. He does not notice that one of the camera has been tilt up. INT.CELL BLOCK -------------------------- Cat,under the camera unlocks the second door. slips out. INT.HALL _____________ Cat comes into a hall were several vending machines lean against the wall. On the far side is a door marked ELECTRICAL. She is about to head for it when she hears a door opens at the far end of the hall. ------------------- ---------------------- ------------------------- SHOW IS COMING UP!!! T.B.C
3 Dec 2021 | 12:44
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Please i need your comments it motivate me to update faster. @fb-davidjohn @fb-samsamuel1 @comblesscock @kunleabiodun30gmail-com @fb-bello-idrisadeiza-okevere @fb-horlaebofin @eneh @fb-oluwabukolamarvelous @maths @paddy2x @afamboniface @celestine1 @georgekanganji @coolval222-2 @fb-khingmelframe @royalgold @fb-elijahdaniel @fb-damilareadeniran @orry-function @fb-lifeofguy @realwit @fb-lyon @fb-itzevysmart @iamtaofeek @ladyg @fb-famous @fb-wfwurld @olamibobo @fb-ezekielbymark @fb-hsdanieljago @grace @esthy @prosperyeboahgmail-com @jessyjenny @philanderboy @graylaw @fb-jessicaduru @freshood @olumlam @youngben @fb-hassanjosiah @fb-oluwadunsinpaul @fb-winnerjohn @ollydy @fb-peaceegwuatu @flowkray
3 Dec 2021 | 12:50
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No be small show
3 Dec 2021 | 15:15
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great story man more ink
3 Dec 2021 | 16:55
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Next please
4 Dec 2021 | 18:25
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following.....
5 Dec 2021 | 01:13
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Following although I arrived late. Next please
5 Dec 2021 | 17:35
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Not enough
7 Dec 2021 | 04:07
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Guys i will be stop updating for a while. Maybe till next week i need to read some stories on coolval. Please bear.Till monday #LoverboyLoveyouAll
7 Dec 2021 | 10:39
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Hmm
8 Dec 2021 | 05:33
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Next nah
11 Dec 2021 | 02:58
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Vibe killer
11 Dec 2021 | 02:58
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@philanderboy school tins i dey exam mood next week unfailingly
11 Dec 2021 | 04:44
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Episode 8 ANGLE ON THE DOOR At the far end of the Hall. A cop comes in, Looks down the hall where Cat was standing he sees only the vending machines. he heads right to the machines. ANGLE ON THE SIDE OF THE MACHINE. Cat is pressed hard against the flat surface, inches from the cop. Cat hanged there until she hears the door shut on the far end of the hall. She crosses quickly to the door across the way, and enter. CLOSE ON UTILITY BOX(IN ELECTRICAL ROOM) Cat stands on a narrow shelf, undoes the last screws on a vent in the ceiling with a screw driver from the tools board on the wall. she opens the electrical control panel on the wall, studies it for a moment,finds the switch she is looking for, then turns to the wall of tools,pluck some wires, Cat sets to work on a rigged mechanism with the items. when she is finished. she tugs at the waist band on her mini skirt and little by little she stretches a thin colored lectard suit over her whole body.
14 Dec 2021 | 02:25
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she takes a small plastic vial,fills it with some water from the tap and sets it just so above the device she has constructed. The device is hooked to the switch she selected. A small weight hangs from the bottom of the wire. She sets the water container over the spoon from her cell the water begins to drip at a times. she closes the panel door. She sets her digital watch. She hoist herself up to the ceiling. And she is gone. AIR DUCTS She landed inside the grate,Cat takes one of the buttons of her blouse and presses the top of it. the button becomes a pin light. She clasps it between her teeth and start to crawl on her stomach pulling herself along by her elbows and her wriggling hips and knees. The lights still between her teeth. TRACK WITH CAT As she moves through the maze of ducts. on the way,she peers through the grates in each ceiling,down into one cell or the order. Catching views of inmates asleep as she passes over them.
14 Dec 2021 | 02:43
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Still moving untill she comes to a ventilation fan blocking her way. The fan blades go round and round. Cat looks at her watch looks at the fan. ELECTRICAL PANEL On the rigged device. the water has almost filled the spoon,one more drop.on more drop. CLOSE ON CAT LOOKING HER WATCH the digital counter goes from 4 to 3 to 2 to 1........ ELECTRICAL PANEL The last drop of water drips into the spoon. the spoon tips, tugging on the wire, the wire trips the switch,the whole device comes apart, the seprate pieces fell to the floor. AiR DUCTS The fan stops.the blades slow. Cat face brighten with smiles. POLICE STATION The sergent at the desk hears the ventilation system go off. Sergent:Hey Doyle! He calls to one of the other cops on duty. Sergent:go take a look at the breaker on the ventilation system. will ya? Doyle moves off. AIR DUCTS Cat watches the blades of the vent fan slow. she starts to move herself through the narrow space between the now stilled blades.
14 Dec 2021 | 03:02
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ELECTRICAL ROOM Doyle enters the room. opens the electrical panel. the spoon,the weight, the wire all fall to the floor. Doyle looks at them curiously for a moment. AIR DUCTS Cat is halfway through the fan blades ELECTRICAL ROOM Doyle finds the switch that correspond to the ventilation system AIR DUCTS Cat's neck passes through the fan blades ELECTRICAL ROOM Doyle hits the switch. AIR DUCTS Cat is just through when the blades start moving.she make it to the other side in time. Cat:pheew! that was so close. This dickheads switch it on again.I still find my way. BATHROOM Cat drops down into a bathroom. looks at her watch. Cat:gosh!,time is ticking. gotta delete this Rizzo of a guy. CELL Rizzo is asleep in his cell. the marshal on duty finishes his coffe. looks at Rizzo.Then walks over to the door at the end of the wall. The door buzzes open the Cop passes through.
14 Dec 2021 | 03:17
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BATHROOM The cop pushes the bathroom door open and enters He finishes peeing,zip himself up. Turns right into a devastating reverse wheel kick. HALL Cat drag the unconsious cop and hides his body at the back of bathroom door She takes his gun and walk away. CELL Rizzo is half asleep when a barrel of a gun taps him on the head. He opens his eyes slowly to..... Cat:shiiii.Unbutton your shirt. Rizzo:what.....? Cat:Now Rizzo looks over to where the uncoscious cop is on the floor. He does as he is told. Rizzo:who the hell are you? Cat:Not room service She pumps four bullets into his head. . . . . . T.B.C
14 Dec 2021 | 03:27
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Bring it on. Next please
14 Dec 2021 | 08:44
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*Next please
14 Dec 2021 | 13:19
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